This chapter's not as bad as you seem to think. I'm glad they were able to make up so quickly from their fight. Nice job!~Jen

Aww...that was a really sweeet chapter. I loved the interaction between the two of them. ~Jen

Wow! What a perfect moment for the baby to come...nice idea. I liked that Severus was brought to the place of his child's birth as well...cool idea. Wonderful job.~Jen

Great touching chapter. I really liked the emotional aspect in this chapter.~Jen

Very nice. I really like that Remus is looking out for Hermione; it's very sweet. Good job.~Jen

Aww...poor Hermione so much trama. I really enjoy all the dynamics you put into this story...wonderful job so far.~Jen

I really love this story! I read the first three chapters on Mugglenet, but when you said you wouldn't post anymore on there I was sad. I only joined this website to read this fic. I love how you manage to keep Snape in character until the end. I can't wait to read more of your stories. :D

Really, really great story. Worth staying up late and reading. I enjoyed your plot. I wish you had delved a little more into how Severus was absolved of his crime against Dumbledore, but I truly enjoyed the romance between Hermione and Snape and Remus' realization. Bravo!

really really great read!! Keep em coming and nice hit on the way DH came out! Sure your not a seer? lol

I laughed a lot at his skirt comment. lol. I like it.

I enjoyed this story a great deal, all the dramas and pain turned out to be well worth the time spent. Great job!

I need to go and feed my son his diner, but I don't want to move before reading it... 

It is very much Snape-ish to ask any student from any house their whereabout with his obvious knowledge of the fact. Parents/ teachers do that to make a point-- you are not doing what you are supposed to be doing, I do. I often asked them, "where are you and where is your food/ home work etc?" It is very effective when asked calmly. So yes, Snape would definitely say something like that.

Hi, I am currently enjoying your story very much.

“There you are!” shouted a voice behind them. I turned to see Ron clambering through the portrait hole; 

 --- I think in here it should be "us", instead of "them", seeing it was from her pov, I hope you don't mind my saying.

First, when he asked her to marry him, I cryed.  That was truly romantic.  Next, Remus is taking this whole wedding very well.  Maybe too well.  lol.  And last but not least, Ron, he is so clueless sometimes.  This story rocks.  Thanks for writing it.

I wonder what Remus really is feeling towards Hermione and now that Severus is back at least for now , what is Remus or Severus going to do able Remus' feelings?

Is it really bad to love someone too much and is it possible to love someone too much?

Is it really bad to love someone too much and is it possible to love someone too much?

Is it really bad to love someone too much and is it possible to love someone too much?

This is a very deep chapter

that is just like Molly

I thought that everyone said she was the smartest witch of their time, now that she found some love what did that just go out the door

at least she isn't going to hide it any longer.  but how is everybody going to react?

I love how you go by both of their points of views.

the feeling of guilt sucks sometimes

ok so Ron acted like a girl lol and Harry sweet sweet Harry is trying to understand,  what is she going to do?