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Their Death-Marked Love
_Levicorpus_328 Reviews | 7.33/10 (328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 229 Favorites )
Sixteen-year-old Hermione Granger has come back to school for her sixth year, having acquired a few curves and a few more worries over the summer. But in Potions class, the Amortentia potion makes her realize an unusual desire. When the scent continues to crop up in her daily life, especially when she is helping Professor Snape after class, life takes a turn for confusion…
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"... a perfect love story."
"...pure brilliance from start to finish!"
"Beautiful and charming..."
"one of the best pieces of fanfic ever written..."
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Captivation and Obsession: All done! The story has been reccomended at The_New_Library on livejournal.com, a great resource for finding lesser-known fics!
Stay tuned for “To Be Or Not To Be”, a chaptered Sev/Hermione fic.
Reviews for Their Death-Marked Love
LOVED IT!!!! BRILLIANT!!!! I wonder what will happen next? Just where might all that lead? Oh and please don't hurt poor Severus - we all love him :)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I have come to love him too ;)Thank you so much for reading! Stay tuned for better content...
poor tortured Severus. I loved this chapter. I love all your chapters. I can't wait to read more of this story. I love it.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it. You have some great material coming your way (if I do say so myself)
Damn Jasmine! Damn fungus beer! (Beurk! That sounds so wretched...) Will he remember what happened? Will she still wear Jasmine?? LOL!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I thopught so too, ick. I almost imagined the scent and then ran to the bathroom to smell my own jasmine perfume (yes, the idea came from me.....)
Had a slip into third person, there.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Oh really? Thanks. I'll be sure to check that.
Oh boy, I surely wasn't expecting that drunken almost-seduction; but I sure did like it. Whew! Great job with this chapter.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thank you! *bows*
So I guess what happened between Hermione and Severus last chapter really did take place, yes? The poor guy needs a good snog. Did Hermione leave without her tie and shirt?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Last chapter was a dream, sadly. But yes, she left without her shirt in this one. Keep reading!
Awwww just a hint of lemon, but what a smell. LOL grate chapter.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thank you! Now that I'm back in the rhythm you'll have more updates!
OHHH are you telling us that sizzeling kiss was a dream??!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
unfortunately! I'm glad you thought it was sizzling... ;)
hmm... reading through your back catalogue finally! loved this immensely, your writing is so descriptive. thanks!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks,
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it worth 5 stars!
I loved this story! I had started reading it on Mugglenet, but when there wasn't another chapter up and you said that it was on here I was so happy! I can't wait until I get the chance to read more of your stories! Excellent story!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow! This totally made my day!And I haven't told anyone this yet, but maybe you'd like to know that I'm writing a new Snape/Hermione right now. Keep an eye out!
Black-Hearted-Greasy-Bastard-Git-Of-The-Dungeons! She'll fix his arse!
I think I would have just summoned a sober-up potion and then stayed!
Severus is sooo cute when he argues with himself-or anyone else!
I was shocked at his complement. It should be compliment....books for Defense against the Dark Arts. Against should be capitalized....defense against the dark arts should be capitalized....strength than he seemed to posses. Posses should be possess. He leaned in to my ear, still holding my hand and muttered, “Be careful next time,” In to should be into, "Be careful next time," should have a period at the end instead of a comma and shouldn't be another paragraph. It should still be part of the paragraph above it.“Too much emphasis on the prefix,”should have a period at the end of it, not a comma.“Miss Granger,” I silently... There should be a period since he wasn't continuing what he started to say.I encouraged him to continue, should have a period at the end, not a comma.You repeated the same mistakes throughout the whole chapter. I won't copy and past all of it. Just letting you know that maybe it wouldn't be a bad idea to revise the story or to use a beta in the future.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Gee, thanks.
It's really and truly over? This was such a great story, I'm going to miss it.
The peek at the Snapes' life together is really sweet, but it's so sad at the same time that Remus was actively pinning over Hermione for basically twelve years. (Poor little wolfie.)
I'll be looking forward to your next fic.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Yep. I can't believe it!!And I look forward to more of your great reviews!
Beautiful and charming.
A beautiful finish to such a compelling tale. I really loved and enjoyed reading this stoy. I can't wait for the next one!
I know I should have left comments before this - but this story is so well written it' spulling me along. But WTF? Jugson can Apparate but Snape can't? somethings fishy here....
A great ending to one of the best pieces of fanfic ever written.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow. Thank you!!
A perfect ending to a perfect love story. I thoroughly enjoyed the ride. Thank you.
From start to finish.............pure brilliance!
The epilogue, however, was simply beautiful.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow, thanks so much!!! I put my soul into this story!!
I am so happy you gave us the happy ending! I'll look for your next story.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks! It should be up soon *crosses fingers*
Perfect! Enough said.
Having the Epilogue from Remus's point of view was lovely. And I hope he found his own true love.
Thank you very much for this story. I really enjoyed reading it and I love your writing style. I'm looking forward to reading your other works.