Muahahaha! I love it.

Lol, it wasn't that bad, besides it amused me to see Sevie poo grovel.  See you next chapter!

I enjoy your writing. Thank you for an update. 

     I have been reading fanfiction for a few months now, which, I believe, allows me to feel comfortable to say that you write very well <--no sarcasm intended at all.  For instance, your work does not appear to be rushed, and then, in turn, full of spelling, verbal tense, or details of the story type errors which, believe me, becomes rather tiresome to read through - trying to decifer what the author was trying to convey in meaning.  <--Which shows me that you care enough to have pride in your craft, which is greatly appreciated.     I'm an avid reader of books and such , and when I come across an error in a book, I find myself reaching for an ink pen to change spelling and grammatical errors, incorrect facts, character names, etc. to the disgust of my hubby and mother-in-law,  (like I care what they think, LOL).  I figure if someone believes the work worthy enough to be put into print onto paper and placed on the market in bookstores and such, why the heck can't they catch and correct such things before wasting our resources (printing materials, consumer's income and precious time -- sheesh).  Ok, I'm off my soap box now, LOL.       Well done, keep up the good work.  I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.  Best Wishes! 

Holy cow!  My heart is racing, my breathing is labored, my face is split into a huge grin...WOW!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.;-D

Oh, this is getting good. Love the twisting of canon. You're doing this very well. Hope to read more soon. :)

Shal 

I don't know why but I thought there would be only 8 chapters. So I 'm very glad there's some others. I only hope ther are many many others cause I love your story.

I love the stroy!!! Its fab!!! :)

great story.

waiting for more. 

And, as it has become my custom, I leave a worshiping review :) Great chapter! And just where might it be leading (wink)?

love it!!update soon!

Great scenes. I really enjoy when Severus and Hermione get to spend time together that isn't necessarily sexual. Being able to sleep together without sex is something that I think both would find important, if only to simply reassure each other of the trust in the relationship. Great job!

awwww, how sweet!  How refreshing to see a man take charge of the necessities too....LOLO

Amazing! Ive been reading this on mugglenet. More soon please! x

I just love this story. The end of each chapter leaves one in desperate want to read more!Sorry, but I think I found a mistake. "something about her furrowed brow and set jaw were extremely foreboding. ". I think it's something was forboding. Forgive me if I'm wrong :)

Yay! Go Hermione!!! Ohmygods, am so totally happy right now, you are the best!

Lemonslemonslemons!!  Time for them to drink lemonade

Woo, they were cutting it a bit close there!  What a hot and intriguing story.  I look forward to reading more.

WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT THERE! Arrrggghh! :D

Wow I love the way tings are heating up!  Very interesting and fun to read as well.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter.

loveee it. update soon!

LOL!  Old dog, indeed!  Cute story, can't wait to see what happens next.  More buttons get undone?  *waggles brows*

Whoa!!  things are getting kind of HOT here, *heh*  But lemony proceedings would be better if he wasn't drunk.

Stay, stay, stay - GO BACK!!!! Ugh, I so would have stayed! Is there a new chapter soon?? I'm totally addicted!

Perfect, waiting frantically for more