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Their Death-Marked Love
_Levicorpus_328 Reviews | 7.33/10 (328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 229 Favorites )
Sixteen-year-old Hermione Granger has come back to school for her sixth year, having acquired a few curves and a few more worries over the summer. But in Potions class, the Amortentia potion makes her realize an unusual desire. When the scent continues to crop up in her daily life, especially when she is helping Professor Snape after class, life takes a turn for confusion…
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Captivation and Obsession: All done! The story has been reccomended at The_New_Library on livejournal.com, a great resource for finding lesser-known fics!
Stay tuned for “To Be Or Not To Be”, a chaptered Sev/Hermione fic.
Reviews for Their Death-Marked Love
awww I love the baby moniter idea. Did Severus make Hermione look older, or something else with that potion?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
he made her older. And thanks!! I wrote this so long ago, my writing has changed a lot and now I wonder when I get these reviews, "what was I thinking?" (but in a mostly good way!!)
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Are you doing any new work? Do you mind sharing a little bit of your experiances with writing? I'm working on my first 'real story' I did one drabble and co-authored a one shot. I love getting advice from more experianced authors!
Wow. How is Severus going to explain her absence? Snape Family is definitely interesting!
I'm not really envying Hermione for that visit, although it seems to have gone well enough so far. :-) I'm looking forward to more!
Still loving it!
So, Severus' brother is the touchy-feely sort, and his mother is very stiff until she has a few drinks in her.
Wonder what Severus would say if he knew Remus was the one watching his daughter......or if he caught Remus and Hermione sitting together on her bed......hopefully she has the sense not to feed Juliet in front of him, that'd make Severus blow his top for sure...
Also wonder if Remus has noticed and what he thinks of her 'new look'?
It's a good thing Juliet is calming down so quickly, Hermione can only spend so much time 'in the bathroom' before the Snapes'll get suspicious...
Looking forward to the next!
I love this story and can't wait to see more
I LOVE your story. AMAZING!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
thanks!!
Wow. I've seen the story in the recently updated list before and just haven't gotten around to reading it until today...Boy, am I sorry about that. This story is fantastic. I can't wait for the next update. :)
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks for hopping on board! I'm happy to have you!
Oh boy now to meet the family. Good luck with that. And what did Severus want Charlie to get? Don't leave us hanging too long please.
Things are "getting exciting"? :-D I thought they already were!
I wonder what Remus is playing at - it was one thing to try and make a move when Hermione seemed to be all alone, but with Snape back and Hermione obviously not minding his company... hmm.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I leave you to ponder.... this whole thing is turning out to be a big trust game.
awwwww he's bringing her home to meet the family.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
yeah! I love it. The idea was inspired by 'eileen snape' being a character option when submitting the story, actually.
I wonder what errand Severus send Charlie on. And what convinced Molly that he was on their 'side', was it just seeing him with Hermione, or did something else happen that we didn't see?
Severus seems to feel very threatened by Remus, but then again, considering what he witnessed when he arrived at Grimmauld Place, you can't really blame him for it. Hermione doesn't seem to have picked up on it though, beacuse she isn't acting any differently with Remus than she normally would. She's apparently oblivious to her effects on both men.
Hermione did bring up the age difference, but is she really okay with being introduced to the Snapes (basically her future in-laws, if they all survive) while under an aging potion? I can see this becoming an issue later...although, if Severus was seen with (or rumored to have been in the company of) Harry Potter's best friend, and it got back to Voldemort, that would not turn out well for either of them...
I'm looking forward to the next!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I love how much you read into it! Well, when writing Hermione I drew very much from myself. So her obliviousness (is that a word? probably not...) is not necesarily as it seems. She is continuing to act the way she does so she will see how things unfold, I'd say.Snape is very confident with his place with Voldemort, and seems to trust that it won't get back to him that Snape is with Hermione. We'll see...I'll be out of town for a week, so you'll have to wait for the next chapter! So keep speculating until then!-_Levicorpus_
Again a great chapter! I hope he isn't leaving her.
Oh no this isn't going where I think it's going is it?. Please not another DH ending for Snape.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
keep reading....
Ooo! Please tell me there's going to be more!! I just hope everybody else can learn to trust him. And if not that, believe him.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
There will be!!
I like how you handeled that chapter and you read J.K.R.'s mind. I just hope Severus has a better ending in your story than hers.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much! I did a lot of thinking about it. Well, consider the title... quite ominous.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Oh no!!!
I love Romeo and Juliet but please oh please don't end this story like so. Your story is awesome
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Aw! Thanks! I really loved incorperating Romeo and Juliet. I was reading it during the early stages of writing this story and I thought it would work so well.
I liked your addition but, isn't Legilimecy a non-verbal spell? I love how you gave them real challenges and depth through out the story.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Well I do recall there being speech, but I could be wrong.And there's more to come, so sit tight!
A great update!!!
When I read this part:
“I—” I took a shaky breath. It was now or never. “I’m going to tell you what happened that night in June.” She gave a soft, exhausted smile. She began to pat my chest, and I started to speak as quietly as I could so as to not wake the sleeping babe.
My mind immediately went: she falls asleep before he finished, and he has no idea how much she heard. Thanks for not being that cruel to Severus. They got to have a touching family moment instead.
The last line though:
“I love you too, dear.” I stood and strode to the door. “Perhaps a bit too much.”
begs the question: Where the heck is he going, he's not going to leave her (to go back into hiding) while she's asleep, is he? *whimpers*
Good job on your guess for Severus' motivation. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Oh, Hermione is far too knowledge thirsty to fall asleep! And as for where he's going.... anywhere you want for now. it'll be explained in the next chapter. =) Thanks for the kick-arse review!
I loved the nice, warm, gentle chapter - but I can't very well imagine it continuing quite this pleasantly!
great story!is it finished?
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That is what my head wrote whilst I was crying on my keyboard and pounding my poor, beleagured forehead on the poor, beleagured letters.
But I really like your story. It Llamas. I mean pwns. Oops. *edited out* I hope that worked. If it did, this won't make any sense. If it didn't, then this whole review is gone to the llamas. I mean dogs! *edited again* Well. There goes the well-planned review. *sigh* I really like how you did Snape, and though the teenage-pregnancy-by-a-teacher/older person has already been done, I think this was a very well-executed version. Lovely. I shall most definitely be following this very carefully.
Katie
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That is what my head wrote whilst I was crying on my keyboard and pounding my poor, beleagured forehead on the poor, beleagured letters.
But I really like your story. It Llamas. I mean pwns. Oops. *edited out* I hope that worked. If it did, this won't make any sense. If it didn't, then this whole review is gone to the llamas. I mean dogs! *edited again* Well. There goes the well-planned review. *sigh* I really like how you did Snape, and though the teenage-pregnancy-by-a-teacher/older person has already been done, I think this was a very well-executed version. Lovely. I shall most definitely be following this very carefully.
Katie
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much!
Is this all? Will there be more? If so, please update soon!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
i really would like to update but my beta hasn't been answering my emails... we'll see what happens.
I can't wait to read more, keep up the good work ^^