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Their Death-Marked Love
_Levicorpus_328 Reviews | 7.33/10 (328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 229 Favorites )
Sixteen-year-old Hermione Granger has come back to school for her sixth year, having acquired a few curves and a few more worries over the summer. But in Potions class, the Amortentia potion makes her realize an unusual desire. When the scent continues to crop up in her daily life, especially when she is helping Professor Snape after class, life takes a turn for confusion…
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Reviews for Their Death-Marked Love
oh no the sh** is about to hit the fan
oh no this chapter is so sad
This story gets better and better
oh to be young and in lust hehe
I'm so glad they are working everything out
Oh my what was that?
I'm surprised he didn't have something to say about her shorter skirt.
If she had a free period why didn't she stay and make him admit how he truly feels? Unless he had a class coming in any minute.
I can understand why she felt the need to leave. I just know he would wake up and regret everything. Oh but it would have been so worth it.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Guilt, I'd imagine. Fear, ethics. hermione has always been big on the rules.
It so figures it was a dream, it was to good to be true at least just yet.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
yes, well... your fair share of "real" action is in store. =)
You just keep telling yourself that you don't want to take her on top of your desk, Severus. One day you might believe it. lol
I'm sorry did he say it was too small or not short enough. Lol This story is so hot.
For being so intelligent, he sure isn't much of a long range planner. Then again, I wonder if he didn't expect to survive the Unbreakable Vow--thinking that either Dumbledore or the failure to complete it would kill him.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
War gets people into a strange mentality, especially in Severus's case. He has so much stress in his life, he is on the verge of cracking at any moment. So that would leave room for some fumbles. But how much can you really plan out? There are too many variables.
I'm guessing he never had to brew a contraceptive potion for a significant other before and just paged to the first one he could easily brew, never reading the dosage directions for it. Why do I think his reaction is not going to be favorable?
Wow, that had to be the worst case of morning after blues I've ever heard of. Not that both of them didn't rush right in despite knowing better.
BRAVO!!!!!!lol i still find the age difference freaky but thats ok.... it wouldnt be a good story without it!!!!!!!!!!i think snape would be a little more ... er... mean... ecspecially to his family... and when did his family relize she was actually 18 and were her parents ok with the age difference?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks! :)Well the freaky age difference.... I began this story as an experiment to test my ability to write something I was initially opposed to. But then I got used to it.
Response from xXRon_luverXx (Reviewer)
Cool!!! when is the next one comeing???
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Next chapter? when my beta's done with it (hopefully soon.) Next story? Within the month I believe.
Response from xXRon_luverXx (Reviewer)
awsome ill be sure to keep reading the rest of this story... and ill check out ur other stories too maybe... tehe fred and george lol
Lovely! At least they get to have a bit of happiness. :-D
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
A bit...
Thats some awesome magic. It brought Severus to the birth of his child. I wonder how long he will be able to stay.
wow, I'm so happy they got married. I know this story may not have a happy ending, but at least they confirmed they loved each other!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I know, I'm so traditional (like the true ending of this story) That I had to make it that way.
Loved it!
The proposal scene was so sweet!
Ron's part was funny. I liked how Harry's objection was that he thought she should be with Ron, and he came in during the middle of her rant about how insane that idea was. Yet Ron was completely fine with it, until he realized Remus wasn't the groom. And Hermione's response: “Ron, why would I do something like—”, she was completely oblvious...
I felt bad for Remus though, what with her having no clue (that he still wanted to be the groom), and then him having to play the part of Best Man to Severus who actually was Hermione's groom. He's such a good guy.
Loved the dress and the ceremony, though the part about "this display of inter-house unity" made me go 'Aha! the pastor is Albus in disguise!' 'No, wait. He's really dead in this one, dang it.'
I'm guessing at some point over their week-long engagement, they let Madam Snape and Perseus in on the minor detail of Hermione's true age. Considering the fact that they and Hermione's parents were present, I think somebody would've noticed if she looked ten years off of (what they thought was) her true age!
Can't wait for the next update!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks!! I thought the proposal was too mushy, but then again sev has changed quite a bit since we first met him!!Yeah, and in the Remus department, he just doesn't have enough... shall we say, "oomph" for Hermione. I modeled her after myself in that way. I need a man with some fire! Adventure! He's a bit short of the rugged manhood I require for my romance heroes. ;) Snape on the other hand.... =)Yeah, i was re-reading before I posted and I thought to myself, "somebody'll catch that.... I'll just leave it unaddressed." I can't wait to see your next review!! I really hope that once I start getting my new story up you'll review on that one. It's a little more dark, a lot of Severus, mystery, intrigue, secret love.... all the good stuff. ;)
As with the rest of this story I Love this Chapter.Thanks for the update its made my birthday.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Birthday?? Happy biiiiirthday to yooooouuuuuuuuu! Thanks for the review!!
Response from savine_snape (Reviewer)
Thank-youI really have fallen in love with the way you portray Severus and Hermione in this story. Looking forward to the next update.Maz
wow bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going!!!!!!! i might die if you dont!!!!!!!!!!!*sniffle* i love how snape is still so careing of Hermione and everything even thought hey have been away for so long... i still find it slightly desturbing of the age difference but hey.. the heart wants what the heart wants lol
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Gosh, thank you!! Personally I have lost a little faith in this story when I compared it with the one I am writing now.... *wink, wink*
wow for not haveing read the seventh book yet you came really close!!!!!!! lol
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks! I got into thinking like Jo. =)
HAHA wait i thought he died in the last one JK about my last review lol srry...
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Oh, well that explains it!
ok just wanted to say.... Snape died in the 7th book not the 6th he died like a year after Dumbledore.... just saying but i still liked it lol
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
wait... what? This is taking place during sixth year.