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Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One - What In Me Is Dark

3: Chapter Two - No Light, But Rather Darkness Visible

4: Chapter Three - Justify the Ways of God to Men

5: Chapter Four - And Out of Good Still to Finds Means of Evil

6: Chapter Five - Awake, Arise, or Be Forever Fallen

7: Chapter Six - Before Mine Eyes in Opposition Sits

8: Chapter Seven - To Reign is Worth Ambition, Though in Hell

9: Chapter Eight - Ease Would Recant Vows Made in Pain

10: Chapter Nine - Execute Their Airy Purposes

11: Chapter Ten - Amidst the Noise of Endless Wars

12: Chapter Eleven - Of Providence, Foreknowledge, Will, and Fate (Part 1)

13: Chapter Eleven - Of Providence, Foreknowledge, Will, and Fate (Part 2)

14: Chapter Twelve - Conscience Wakes Despair, Wakes the Bitter Memory

15: Chapter Thirteen - And Courage Never to Submit or Yeild

16: Chapter Fourteen - The Palpable Obscure

17: Chapter Fifteen - Where Rest Can Never Dwell, Hope Never Comes (Part 1)

18: Chapter Fifteen - Where Rest Can Never Dwell, Hope Never Comes (Part 2)

19: Chapter Sixteen - To Be Weak is Miserable

20: Chapter Seventeen - On the Perilous Edge of Battle

21: Chapter Eighteen - Of What He Was, What Is, and What Must be Worse.

22: Chapter Nineteen - Moping Melancholy and Moon-Struck Madness

23: Chapter Twenty - Think Only What Concerns Thee and Thy Being

24: Chapter Twenty One - The Torturing Hour Call Us to Penance (Part 1)

25: Chapter Twenty One - The Torturing Hour Call Us to Penance (Part 2)

26: Chapter Twenty Two - These Troublesome Disguises Which We Wear

27: Chapter Twenty Three - Those Thoughts That Wander Through Eternity

28: Chapter Twenty Four - Which, If Not Victory, Is Yet Revenge

29: Chapter Twenty Five - Confusion Worse Confounded

30: Chapter Twenty Six - The Hell Within Him

31: Chapter Twenty Seven - Their Fatal Hands No Second Stroke Intend (Part 1)

32: Chapter Twenty Seven - Their Fatal Hands No Second Stroke Intend (Part 2)

33: Chapter Twenty Eight - The Rising World of Waters Dark and Deep

34: Chapter Twenty Nine - His Red Right Hand (Part 1)

35: Chapter Twenty Nine - His Red Right Hand (Part 2)

36: Chapter Thirty - Farewell Remorse; Evil, Be Thou My Good (Part 1)

Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy

Battle of Lissa

196 Reviews   |   196 Ratings, 0 Likes, 260 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Potions Under Duress 215,199 Words 36 Chapters WIP
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lavender Brown Luna Lovegood Pansy Parkinson Remus Lupin Severus Snape Sirius Black Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Walden Macnair Peter Pettigrew Bill Weasley Charlie Weasley Ginevra Weasley Molly Weasley Ronald Weasley Albus Dumbledore Lucius Malfoy Minerva McGonagall Nymphadora Tonks Antonin Dolohov Bellatrix Lestrange Blaise Zabini Godric Gryffindor Gregory Goyle Padma Patil Seamus Finnegan Draco Malfoy Original Character Gellert Grindelwald Neville Longbottom Fenrir Greyback Parvati Patil Crookshanks Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Fred Weasley George Weasley Lily (Evans) Potter

With the climax of the next great battle drawing near, the key players who have the ability to halt or bring about potential destruction take center stage, as they always have in every great war since time began. And Dumbledore knew all this, but not when it truly mattered. Eventual SS/HG. Alternate Universe, HBP death disregarded.
2007 OWL Awards Nominee: Fire & Ice Category (SS/HG), Romance Category, Angst Category, and A/U Category.
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2008 TNL Awards Winner for Best SS/HG AU Category

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Chapters (36)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One - What In Me Is Dark

Chapter 3: Chapter Two - No Light, But Rather Darkness Visible

Chapter 4: Chapter Three - Justify the Ways of God to Men

Chapter 5: Chapter Four - And Out of Good Still to Finds Means of Evil

Chapter 6: Chapter Five - Awake, Arise, or Be Forever Fallen

Chapter 7: Chapter Six - Before Mine Eyes in Opposition Sits

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven - To Reign is Worth Ambition, Though in Hell

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight - Ease Would Recant Vows Made in Pain

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine - Execute Their Airy Purposes

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten - Amidst the Noise of Endless Wars

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven - Of Providence, Foreknowledge, Will, and Fate (Part 1)

Chapter 13: Chapter Eleven - Of Providence, Foreknowledge, Will, and Fate (Part 2)

Chapter 14: Chapter Twelve - Conscience Wakes Despair, Wakes the Bitter Memory

Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen - And Courage Never to Submit or Yeild

Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen - The Palpable Obscure

Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen - Where Rest Can Never Dwell, Hope Never Comes (Part 1)

Chapter 18: Chapter Fifteen - Where Rest Can Never Dwell, Hope Never Comes (Part 2)

Chapter 19: Chapter Sixteen - To Be Weak is Miserable

Chapter 20: Chapter Seventeen - On the Perilous Edge of Battle

Chapter 21: Chapter Eighteen - Of What He Was, What Is, and What Must be Worse.

Chapter 22: Chapter Nineteen - Moping Melancholy and Moon-Struck Madness

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty - Think Only What Concerns Thee and Thy Being

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty One - The Torturing Hour Call Us to Penance (Part 1)

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty One - The Torturing Hour Call Us to Penance (Part 2)

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty Two - These Troublesome Disguises Which We Wear

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Three - Those Thoughts That Wander Through Eternity

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Four - Which, If Not Victory, Is Yet Revenge

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Five - Confusion Worse Confounded

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Six - The Hell Within Him

Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Seven - Their Fatal Hands No Second Stroke Intend (Part 1)

Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Seven - Their Fatal Hands No Second Stroke Intend (Part 2)

Chapter 33: Chapter Twenty Eight - The Rising World of Waters Dark and Deep

Chapter 34: Chapter Twenty Nine - His Red Right Hand (Part 1)

Chapter 35: Chapter Twenty Nine - His Red Right Hand (Part 2)

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty - Farewell Remorse; Evil, Be Thou My Good (Part 1)


About Battle of Lissa

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Battle of Lissa

Member Since 2007  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 141  |  65 Reviews Written  |  765 Review Responses




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Student at California State University of Los Angeles. Currently studying Law and Society Sociology and Criminology while hovering in graduation limbo.

I enjoy writing simple poetry about love, life, and betrayal; either about myself or those closest to me. 
Notice! December 2, 2010:
This site is amazing. The numerous reviews and reads I have received here has been beyond humbling. However as I have gotten older, RL has taken main priority to reading and writing fanfic. Any tiny fraction of personal time I am able to indulge myself has been spent in the fandom, but I must admit it had been dwindling more and more. I will NEVER abandon anything I have begun, and attempt to finish my WIPs every day. However, like many authors, I have made the mistake of submitting my work to more archives than I am capable of maintaining with the care that is due them. If I am able and time willing, I might continue to update my fics here, but my main priority lies elsewhere. MODERATED ARCHIVES ARE A BLESSING AND NECESSARY FOR QUALITY FIC. I stand by that. Unfortunately submitting my fics to various moderated archives means more time necessary to edit the various mistakes each individual archives will find in my work. My fics will continue to be updated at Ashwinder and Potter Place Archives, anywhere else will have to take a back seat. This is my problem and I take full responsibility. Thank you for reading, reccing, voting, and reviewing my fics on The Petulant Poetess!

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Reviews for Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy

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10/10

Nessa

An update!! Woow!!Naughty Hermione! (I like hehe) I look forward to the update.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

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Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Very happy you are still enjoying this story! The next chapter is completed and will be up as soon as it is edited. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

livvy6

Yeah! I love updates, and this was great! Hot Dog! We got to see Foreplay:Severus and Hermione style. And naughty Hermione! But what woman has not ever been curious about how guys they like or love wank?Thank you!!! Eagerly waiting for the next part! And thanks for mentioning me. Aw, shucks! I'm blushing :)Livvy

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Glad you like it! The next chapter is being edited and on its way. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

Akoya8

I just finished rereading the entire story so far!  What a rush of emotions, I swear, there are very few stories that have the ability to make me feel bipolar.  It was good to refresh my memory on everything that's happened so far.  And I agree with Hermione, I don't think that the baby is Harry's.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

This story can make you go 0__o !

And I am very excited to hear that you enjoyed it enough to reread! Thank you for the reads and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

This story can make you go 0__o !

And I am very excited to hear that you enjoyed it enough to reread! Thank you for the reads and review!

10/10

color

Goodness!  Hermione's preconditioning to abuse is quite well-established.  I wonder when Severus will learn about it, and whether he will change his behavior toward, and treatment of, Hermione accordingly.  She certainly knows what behaviors and actions will illicit anger and abuse, and just can't seem to stop herself.  I wonder how much self-hatred she has, and whether Severus will be able to resist her egging him on once he realizes her victim mentality.  If he is able to do this, I wonder if that self-control will extend to him curtailing his enjoyment of egging on others.  You've done an excellent job in portraying all of this!  A little scary, but extremely well done.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

'Hermione's preconditioning to abuse is quite well-established.'~Unfortunately, yes. I also tried to give a slight hint for that with the memory of her drunken father (when Snape had entered her mind). Don't want to explain to much, or else I'd be giving things away, but this SS/HG are obviously unhealthy but perfectly matched...

Very glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter won't be long in coming. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from color (Reviewer)

Yeah, I caught the hint you gave in Hermione's memory, and was rather surprised that Severus didn't pick up on it.  I wonder if he had too much on his mind, or whether he experienced so much abuse as a child that he's now desensitized to it.  Fascinating read.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

'Hermione's preconditioning to abuse is quite well-established.'~Unfortunately, yes. I also tried to give a slight hint for that with the memory of her drunken father (when Snape had entered her mind). Don't want to explain to much, or else I'd be giving things away, but this SS/HG are obviously unhealthy but perfectly matched...

Very glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter won't be long in coming. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from color (Reviewer)

Yeah, I caught the hint you gave in Hermione's memory, and was rather surprised that Severus didn't pick up on it.  I wonder if he had too much on his mind, or whether he experienced so much abuse as a child that he's now desensitized to it.  Fascinating read.  I look forward to the next chapter!

10/10

color

Ah, ha!  I think I know where you're going with the Lavendar situation... or at least I'm having fun guessing.  Possibility #1:  Before Lavendar gets Harry to marry her, someone performs a paternity spell.  I doubt you'll take this option, although I would seriously enjoy seeing it played out.  Possibility #2:  Lavendar does marry Harry, has the baby--obvious to everyone it's not Harry's--Harry is stuck with her and heart-broken over Ginny, but the reason why Harry broke up with Ginny in the first place comes back into play.  If it's #2, I think Lavendar will get killed.  Hum.  So much for blind ambition.  Love it!  I also enjoyed how Severus called Hermione on her hypocrisy.  That girl certainly needs to be brought down a few pegs.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I think Severus enjoyed it as well. I actually have a few scenarios myself on how the Lavender/Harry thing will play out. Thank you for yours! I love it when readers try to predict what will happen. We'll just have to see where the story takes me. Thanks for read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I think Severus enjoyed it as well. I actually have a few scenarios myself on how the Lavender/Harry thing will play out. Thank you for yours! I love it when readers try to predict what will happen. We'll just have to see where the story takes me. Thanks for read and review!

0/10

Terab

Great story!!!  It's been awhile since I read this, so had to re-read the last few chapters again.  Never been a Lavendar fan and now I HATE her.  PLEASE tell me it's not Harry's baby and instead her quickie she had early on??  Poor Ginny...  Love that Severus and Hermione are together, but hate how docile she is.  Looking forward to reading a new chapter soon.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Hermione is young, and a student, so I don't think she has fully come into her own yet. Especially when she has a lover like Snape. Like other readers, I can understand your frustration with her beindg 'docile'. Anyways, very happy you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Hermione is young, and a student, so I don't think she has fully come into her own yet. Especially when she has a lover like Snape. Like other readers, I can understand your frustration with her beindg 'docile'. Anyways, very happy you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the read and review!

0/10

sunny33

I foresee a lot of sneaking around at Grimmauld Place

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

You foresee it... because you WANT to see it! haha. Next chapter won't be long in coming. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

You foresee it... because you WANT to see it! haha. Next chapter won't be long in coming. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

sinbad

Very exciting, I hope Hermione is right about Lavender and Harry finds out before it's too late!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I doubt Hermione has fully washed her hands of Harry and Lav lav. But we'll see! Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I doubt Hermione has fully washed her hands of Harry and Lav lav. But we'll see! Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Hermione just got a lesson on how wrong arrogant self-righteousness can be.You captured Hermione perfectly in rant mode.Poor Harry.  He wants a family desperately.  He just may have got it from the wrong girl.Sirius, Snape, and Hermione living at Grimmauld Place?  There's a wrecking crew!Good job.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

It is a wrecking crew, but I bet you're as excited as I am about it! Muah ha ha.... Thanks for the read and review, hun!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

It is a wrecking crew, but I bet you're as excited as I am about it! Muah ha ha.... Thanks for the read and review, hun!

10/10

portugal_faro

This story is so well written, I had to leave a review to tell you how much I am enjoying it. Many thanks 

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

And I must tell you how happy I am to hear that you are enjoying it. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

And I must tell you how happy I am to hear that you are enjoying it. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

brier rose

I just can't express how much i adore this story. Every time you update I reread the story from the beginning. It is amazing!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

From the beginning! That's wonderful to hear. I'm very excited that you are still enjoying this story so much. Thank you for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

From the beginning! That's wonderful to hear. I'm very excited that you are still enjoying this story so much. Thank you for the read and review!

9/10

sinbad

I think the chapter was good, it is a good lead in for the next chapter.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Thanks! The next chapter should be coming shortly. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Thanks! The next chapter should be coming shortly. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

sbrande

I am one of the judges judging the Dark Fics over at TNL of which you are a nominee. I am only supposed to read 3-4 ch's of each fic and then make my assessment based on the writing style of each piece, characterisation, et cetc. However, I have continued to read this wonderful story as it became apparent to me that this tale was intriguing with all of its plots and sub-plots happening.WELL DONE!I shall be continuing to follow this story as it progresses and just wanted to let you know that you are doing a marvellous job so far. Keep up the great work.Love Sonia :)

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Thank you! =) I'm excited that you liked it enough to read on. And thank you for volunteering your free time and being part of the crew that is making the TNL awards possible!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Thank you! =) I'm excited that you liked it enough to read on. And thank you for volunteering your free time and being part of the crew that is making the TNL awards possible!

10/10

emmeline33

I think I've said this before, but I really, really like your characterization of Snape.  You strike a balance with him that I find lacking in a lot of fanfic, and certainly in canon.  I appreciate the fact that you've not allowed Hermione to single-handedly turn him to a puddle of pink goo, although he has much more depth and ambiguity than in canon.  Very well written.  You certainly deserved your nominations at TNL!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I am extremely pleased to hear that you are still enjoying this Snape. I think Snape can be romantic(in his own way) and melt-worthy without turning into a love-struck puff. I'm glad this came across in the reading. Very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I am extremely pleased to hear that you are still enjoying this Snape. I think Snape can be romantic(in his own way) and melt-worthy without turning into a love-struck puff. I'm glad this came across in the reading. Very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

jbean74

I love this fic.  And I love you...  MOOOOORE!!!!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Aww... thank you! And thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Aww... thank you! And thanks for the read and review!

0/10

sunny33

Sirius needs to go, he is becoming a bloody nuisance!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

ARGH, I know! I enjoy writing him as the butt of Snape's jokes, but I fear I am making him a bit to hysterical. Anyways, thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

ARGH, I know! I enjoy writing him as the butt of Snape's jokes, but I fear I am making him a bit to hysterical. Anyways, thanks for the read and review!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Tied to the bed, eh?  Add that to the To Do list.A nice relief from the angst of the last few chapters.  Very nice to see Sirius get the emotional equivalent of a kick in the pants.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Trust me, I have many... er... activities on the Severus/Hermione to do list! This story is very much angst, but I also want our favorite pair to enjoy being with each other. Happy you like it. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Trust me, I have many... er... activities on the Severus/Hermione to do list! This story is very much angst, but I also want our favorite pair to enjoy being with each other. Happy you like it. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

Akoya8

Okay, I have a few requests to make.  First, kill Sirius, the man should have had the presence of mind to stay dead after his fall in the MOM.  Second, kill the Dark Lord, and castrate Macnair, and do unspeakable acts to the rest of the Death Eaters (bar Severus).  It's great to have another chapter up, I missed reading your story!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I make no promises on who I will kill off, but yes... heads needs to start rolling... lol The 'character death' warning isn't there for nothing! Very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and review!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I make no promises on who I will kill off, but yes... heads needs to start rolling... lol The 'character death' warning isn't there for nothing! Very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

CordyAngelSeer

Okay, um, yeah, this is freaking fabulous.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

lol Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

lol Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

sunny33

Sirius is not a happy camper... tough!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

He certainly isn't! Thanks for the read and review!

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter, I loved the remorseful, tender Severus.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Very excited that you enjoyed it! Thank you for your continuous reads and reviews!

9/10

CharmedForce

Hahaha! Hermione's line about being tied to the bed was perfect! I can totally picture the look on her face when she said it too... and the look on Severus' face.

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I think Snape's sarcasm is rubbing off on her a bit. Very happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the read and review!

9/10

sassy19

a facinating and stunning story.. Severus is rather puzzling and intriging

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

Severus is the character I am enjoying writing the most in this story. I'm very happy that you liked it! Thank you for the read and review!

9/10

CharmedForce

I think the pug is particularly appropriate... though a bit mean-spirited. XD Not that there really is anything wrong with being mean. Too much. This was a darker chapter and I think you wrote it well. There was a lot of emotion built up, and insight into Hermione's thoughts and fears. Well done!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

More of Hermione's thoughts and fears to come! Next chapter being beta'ed as we speak. Thank you for the read and review!

10/10

emmeline33

This is a very grown-up version of the Harry Potter story, full of the conflict and angst which must surely have existed behind the facades created for children.  I appreciate that enormously about this story.  I also like your portrayal of Hermione and Severus' relationship.  Many times, these student/teacher stories seem as if Severus is just waiting to pet kittens and smell flowers, while Hermione is preternaturally strong.  Your story keeps in perspective the nature of Severus' work, his conflict as a man, and Hermione's youth and rather unequal position in the relationship.  Very good!

Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy)

I am very much enjoying writing Hermione and Severus' relationship as the teacher/student relationship that it is. I don't always see Severus as a bastard nor do I always see Hermione as the bossy know it all. Maybe if they were together a couple years down the road things would be very different, but they aren't here. Severus has authority over her as a professor, and it's unrealistic for that NOT to affect their relationship. This is probably one of the reasons that teacher/student stories aren't popular anymore, because many readers now (who have been in the ship for years) want a strong and 'take charge' Hermione.I enjoy that aspect of her personality as well, but I also love these dark and depressing stories =P. So I am very, very happy that you are enjoying these aspects to my story! Thanks for the read and review!

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