whoooo, what a good start!

Such a teaser chapter and excellent. Hope to read more soon.Truly

Fun idea! I love reading something that is new. I look forward to reading more.

HEE-HAW!!!!!  Go Hermoine Go!!!!

hello dear! I know when you posted this I had to read it quickly, so coming back now it's like reading it for the first time.  I really liked how you wrapped it all up. The Molly/Ginny interaction early on was lol. And I can't remember reading a "depressed Snape" before (even if it was just in the diary), but it does actually fit with him, so that was interesting. And your ending was optimistic and funny. Well done on getting it finished! Jen

Hot!!!  I appreciate your descriptions of the amourous scenes!  I really liked the story line as well .... very unique.


Thanks for your talent!


:)

excellent and well done.Truly

Oh this was a wonderful and entertaining story! I kept on yelling at my computer screen for Hermione to just give in, which she did in the end. Thank you so very much for writing this tale.Cheers, Sonia :)

What an ending! Fantastic!

*chuckles* a troll! Nice touch.

 I'm glad everything worked out for them in the end. Three cheers for perseverence!

Very nice.  I think it finishes well even without the epilogue--although that doesn't detract from the enjoyment.  Good job and thanks for the fun read.

Well done, my dear!  Well done!  I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end!

Ahh!  Nice ending!  I envy Hermione in a way... she gets to be inspired while he gives her a 'tongue lashing'! (Pun intended) Who wouldn't want to have Sevvie as their live-in muse?  Great story! Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

I Loved it!

I'm sorry to see it end though.

Do you have any plans for a sequel or another fic of any *cough* Severus/Hermione *cough* kind? ^_~

I'd really like to see more of your work.

^_^

This story never bogged down, and I never lost track of the plot. It was delightful, and now I get to read it though complete! Thank you.

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!  What a lovely ending!  I enjoyed this very much.  Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful ending to a great story! Thanks for the ride!

Author’s Notes: Dang it! I swear the story is complete. I had to split the last chapter into two because it was just too big. Please accept my apologies for the delay. Son started school, and my hands are pitching a fit because I’ve been typing too much. Who knew second grade homework was going to be so difficult? Thanks to all who have left reviews. Words cannot express my appreciation.Now see, lol, we know the truth. You just LOVE leaving us with cliffies! Lol.Seriously though, we all know how real life can intrude on what we WANT to do, lol.I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

He couldn’t believe what he was hearing. Was Minerva actually sanctioning a union between himself and Hermione? Would he finally realize the dreams that had haunted him for the past five months, two weeks, three days, sixteen hours, and some odd minutes? Had the Fates finally smiled upon him?LMAO! This so completely made me think of Love Actually, lol. Was this your intent?I am really loving this story!

omgggggg..... this is most delicious, you evil witch ;) it's like a drug :D please write more soon! i hope i can write like you someday. gosh, that feeling when Snape kisses Hermione's neck! *swoon*

Still a great chapter.  Don't overwork your hands!

I've missed a few chapters and for that I apologize.  This has been a joy to read.  I've loved how the "relationship" has unfolded and to know that Severus is SO close..... hehe well that's just icing!!  Yes, it's amazing what teachers have even the youngest of classes doing these days.  Having a second and fourth grader this year you KNOW I totally sympathize with you! Can't wait for more. ^.^

this was a really good chapter!I love that hermionie got her insperation back.

Very lemony. Well done. I love Minerva matchmaking.Truly

Oh you crazy woman, actually giving license to point out mistakes! See below! [What you wrote, what I suggest.]If the opportunity had presented itself, she wouldn’t put up with his high-handed manhandling. Instead, she would be the one in control. Closing her eyes, she envisioned him tied that the large, bed that would be forever ingrained upon her memory.  ['she envisioned him tied TO that large bed'... ]He mumbled a quick response and started cutting his sausage. He speared a piece and started to lift it to his mouth when he glanced toward the entrance. “What is she doing here?” he asked, already know the answer to the ridiculous question.   [You need to add 'ing' to 'already knowING]"Yes," he replied softly, leaning foreword to look past Albus and Minerva. "I arrived this morning.”   [Forward, not foreword.]Her heart sank. There was no other way to describe. No amount of prose could do the sensation justice. Though she could feel the pounding in her chest, it felt like it was in her stomach.  [After the word 'describe'... it would read better if you added the word 'it'. AND maybe make that period a comma and connect it to 'no amount of prose...']Severus made quick work of her skirt, Vanishing it with a flick of his wand.  [Capital V]Suggestion: 'She looked utterly ruined. Decadence incarnate.'  [The word 'ruined'... I've looked it up, tried to wiggle it with synonyms, it just doesn't work. A newly naked woman laying in wait for her first time lover is not 'ruined' (yet). Corny it may be, but, since it IS Christmas, how about something about her being an unwrapped present?   'Decadence incarnate' is cool.]

Yea! They are finally on the right tract!