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Defamation of Character
Looneyluna248 Reviews | 6.67/10 (248 Ratings, 0 Likes, 116 Favorites )
Realizing that the characters of the romance novels his students read in his class are based on himself and other members of the Hogwarts' staff, Severus Snape sets out to find the author.
Hermione Granger is a freelance journalist and part-time romance novelist. Her romance series is a smashing success. As she pens the latest addition in the series, a dark, mysterious stranger lays claim to the vacation villa and her heart.
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I'm a married with two children (my son and husband.) At first I thought my older sister and brother were crazy, talking about Harry Potter. Then I was bitten by the bug, er...wolf. Without reading any of the books, I watched all of the movies. POA left me with so many questions that I broke down and read the books. I've been hooked ever since. I started out looking for Remus fanfiction and was dragged kicking and screaming into the SS/HG ship. I'm currently working on my second SS/HG fic.
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Wow, I'm realy impressed. Harry finally in all of fandom caught Severus. This is the very first time I saw that happen. Keep writing I don't want withdrawel. lolo
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
He he! Well, seeing as Harry is an Auror now, I should hope that he could catch the "bad guy." As for withdrawal... I hope I caught you before you suffered. I am happy to report that the next chapter is up. Enjoy!
Oh my! I'm in tenterhooks on this one. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Hi there! Get off those hooks! Sounds painful ;) The next chapter is up, if that helps.
How is Snape going to get out of this one, i have no idea. If Dumbledore is brought into this mess, we'll be in for a ride. Hermione's 'de-virginized' state can be easily proven... that makes Snape's goose thoroughly cooked. I'm eager to see the next chapter, keep up the good work! Cheers!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
With a little help from his friends... la la la la la. Sorry, I couldn't resist humming that Beatle's song. Anyway, Severus is already "out of it." He's been caught in the lie and his scheme has blown up in his face. Only time (21/2 years to be exact) will tell. Your eagerness to see the next chapter has been rewarded. It has been validated. Happy reading!
No! Damn that Harry! Grrr... I would much prefer to see Snape stun and obliviate Ginny and Harry and let his revenge against Hermione finish, so that he can come back later and sweep her off her feet.
And oh boy, Dumbledore will have a field day with this!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, Harry does have horrible timing. As much as I wanted to, I wouldn't let Snape get away with his plan for revenge. As for him sweeping Hermione off her feet... it will be some time before he is able to do that. Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter is up.
Oh My, We're in trouble now......
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, the sh*t has definitely hit the fan :)
Funny as always. Harry really knows how to screw the pooch in regards to Snape doesn't he? I really feel sorry for Snape. He is so in trouble. Can't wait for more chapters.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
I find it interesting that everyone is blaming Harry when they should be blaming Snape. He he! Snape crossed so many ethical lines that it is almost absurd. Yes, he did it for reasons that he obviously hasn't identifyied yet. Albus realizes how Snape feels. So does the reader...at least, I hope they do at this point. Anyway, the wait for more chapters is over. The next chapter is up. Thanks for reviewing.
Oh, dear. No more pre-written chapters. Oh, dear. With Snape stunned and basically arrested, the antidote gone and no immediate chance of release for Hermione. Oh, dear. This is pure torture on your part. Somehow I doubt a Headache Potion would work in her case. Snape really messed this one up. Monumentally.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, Severus messed up big time. Hermione will pull through though! Eventually, the antidote will be brewed again and administered, but will Hermione be able to forgive him? Of course she will, only after he grovels though ;) Next chapter is up. And the chapter after that has gone through the betas so it should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Harry has destroyed the antidote! I concur with Ginny's assessment of Harry's character. Poor Hermione will remain in trouble.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yep! Harry destoryed the antidote. Don't be too harsh on Harry. He's only trying to protect the ones he loves. As for Hermione remaining in trouble... Nah. She's a smart one. She'll figure things out in time.
Harry is such a prat sometimes, he just killed any chance of hermione getting an antidote soon, didn't he? lovely chapter, can't wait for me.
Response from wilder0511 (Reviewer)
I seem to have left the or out of more, lol "can't wait for more"
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, he did. Don't be too harsh on Harry. He thought he was protecting Hermione. As usual, he thought the worst of Severus and overreacted. Wait no longer! The next chapter is up. Enjoy!
Looking forward to finding out how you mean to untangle all this mess.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
(Giggle) I do enjoy a tangled mess. As for how I am going to untangle it... you will have to read to figure that out :) Thanks for reviewing.
i"m laughing so hard. A great story. You might try to find a better word for orifice or rephrase the sentances. It's sounds dreadfully clinical and not at all sexy to me.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Sigh! I know. I cringe whenever I revert to using the word "orifice" to refer to a body part. No matter how hard I try, I just can't use the four-letter words to describe a woman's body parts. LOL! I can use the four-letter words for a man's parts. I don't have a problem with that. Okay, I am removing orifice and suckle from my thesarus for sexy words. He he!
I'm laughing so hard. A great story, but the orifice references are less than romantic to my mind.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
He he! See other comment.
Hee hee, I love it, she's really getting to him isn't she?! Great chapter!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, she is. Thanks for reviewing.
I cannot wait till she finds out who he really is! Great chapter, really well done.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
It will take some time before she realizes who he is. Rest assured, Hemione's intelligence shall prevail!
One: Harry is completley clueless.Two: Severus is in some deep trouble.Three: Enjoying it! ;-)
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
You are right on all counts. Thanks for reviewing.
lol Well, that went about as smoothly as 'Sever Simon's' crooked teeth! Can't wait to see how he manages the mess he's created.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Thanks! He's got his work cut out for him.
Okay... :-) I've gotta see how he gets out of this one! haha great story.?
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
It will take some time for him to wiggle out of this one. Thanks for reivewing.
Oh, the horror! Poor Severus.Sneakly bloke, he is. Am curious as to his next move, be it wrong or right...
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Well, one thing is for sure. Severus normally makes the wrong move. His moral compass is about as reliable as a Neville Longbottom's Potion-making abilities.
"Severus fell out of his chair..."*snorts*Such blatant tongue-in-cheek humour! Well done!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Thanks!
Uh oh! Paradise just collided with the know-it-all's logic. I pity Severus, he's going to have a hell of a time getting out of this one. Liars eventually get caught. How will Hermione react when she understands the subterfuge? Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Yes, Snape got caught in a very careless lie. As for Hermione's reaction, I like to think that she is a forgiving individual, as long as the person who is doing to apologizing is sincere...
Severus' lies were good, just not good enough. Man do I feel sorry for him once both Hermione and Harry get their wands on him. I never thought of Severus as stupid before, but he definately is in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Ahh! Severus isn't stupid. He's just confused. Love does that to the best of us. (Giggle) Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter is up.
Ooh, evil cliffie, and so many opportunities for totally screwing with things. Poor Hermione. Fancy not having any idea at all of the wonderful night that they shared. But Severus is playing dangerous games. And now that Ginny and Harry have arrived on the scene I can imagine a little bit more disaster heading their way.
Brilliant part. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
You can blame the evil cliffie on my sitcom mentality. Yes, things have been left wide open on purpose. Thanks for reviewing. The next chapter has been validated. Happy reading.
Yay! At last! The chapter was worth the wait. I must say, though, that I don't see why Severus would invent such a bad lie to Hermione. Anyway, I want to see how they will sort this out! Keep the chapters coming please!
And the betas did a great work as always!
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Thank you! Well, Severus was desperate and horny. He he... Thank you for the compliment to my beloved beta readers. They are so special to me.
Well, What a right mess this is.
Response from Looneyluna (Author of Defamation of Character)
Thanks! I try :)