What is a Pureblood?
Chapter 15 of 20
Celestial MelodyRiana is introduced to Fabian's mother and yet another fascinating aspect of wizard society.
ReviewedWhat is a Pureblood?
The following days were the happiest that Riana had experienced up until this point in her life. During the daytime, she and Fabian wandered all around Diagon Alley, visiting various shops and retrieving the rest of their school supplies.
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The afternoon that they got their animals, Riana and Fabian had decided to return to the Leaky Cauldron and save the rest of their shopping for the days left 'til September the first. There was plenty of time, and Riana was completely content to spend the rest of summer vacation in Diagon Alley with Fabian..
What it is, Riana had thought, trailing along the alley, I'm sure I don't know. But everything was so extraordinary and unexpected, she was quite happy to take him at his word. Arriving back at the gateway to the Leaky Cauldron, Riana had reached into her purple purse and was in the process of drawing forth her new wand, when Fabian placed a restraining hand on her arm. She glanced up defensively into his smirking face.
His eyes twinkled. "I wouldn't do that, if I were ya," he muttered, sitting down on a nearby curb and pulling Riana down beside him. "Ya aren't a fully qualified witch yet, so it won't work for ya." He indicated the wall. "Besides, I've already tried." Chuckling, he pulled out his own wand, an eight inch, whippy wand. "Juniper," he told Riana, "with me own fur in it."
He then laughed loudly at Riana's shocked expression and swished his wand lazily. "This wand's been commissioned since I was born; the wood is me Celtic tree, and when I was born, when they discovered I was a werecat,"...another chuckle..."they yanked out, well, 'kay, they cut a lock of me hair and sent it to ol' Ollivander." Fabian smiled, looking at his wand fondly. "Sometimes I love bein' a pureblood."
Confused, Riana opened her mouth to ask what a 'pureblood' was, but Fabian cut her off as he continued his leisurely chatter.
"Anyway, regardless, we can't open the wall 'til..." He was cut off as the red brick wall suddenly formed its doorway, and a pale, willowy witch with tousled brown hair came storming out of it ... murder written plainly on her face.
She swept up to Fabian, who jumped cheekily to his feet. "Mum! How good of ya to open the wall for us. This is Riana, met her today, definitely a future Slytherin." He grinned back at Riana, who tilted her head to the side and glared at him. A future 'What'?
"Anyway, we'll just be goin'," he said, stalling for time as he signaled behind his back for Riana to sneak through the doorway. Riana ignored his unspoken pleas and simply rose to her feet, backbone cracking wearily. She stared at Fabian, standing impudently, feet spread wide, in front of his mother. She felt curious to know what kind of woman his mother was...she soon found out.
"Where were ya?" The witch howled, her Irish brogue thickening in her fury. "Ya father and I woke up this mornin' and ya weren't there ... again! I have told ya time and again, that ya are not allowed to leave your room, the house, anywhere without our permission! Ya are only eleven, son. What did ya think you were doin'? Explain ya self!" Fabian's mother stood, her slipper-clad foot tapping the wet, cobblestone pavement irritably. The fearsome scowl on her face made her petite frame terribly frightening, and her green eyes glittered venomously as her son stepped back and placed a friendly, muscular arm around Riana's thin, bony shoulders.
"Mum," he spoke with careful deliberation, "as I said before, this is Riana, and she's a few rooms down the hall from us. I wanted to get some shoppin' done before ya and dad woke up." Fabian lied with born skill, covering for Riana's sobbing that morning smoothly. He indicated the large, brown, barn owl in the birdcage and informed his mother, "That's Bevil. Bought him this mornin'. Nasty little devil, aren't ya?" This last he directed to the huffy owl.
His mother's eyes narrowed as she glared at the owl and her rebellious son, but suddenly, as if seeing Riana for the first time, Fabian's mother's glittering green eyes swept over her, and obviously meeting with her approval, she approached Riana gracefully, offering her smooth, manicured hand. "I'm so pleased to meet ya, Riana. I don't know if my son has told ya"...this was said with a furious glare in Fabian's direction ... he pretended not to notice..."but our name is Urquhart."
Riana looked toward Fabian, who was now watching his mother and Riana with an impish grin on his tanned face. He bowed with an exceedingly fancy flourish as Riana turned back to Fabian's mother.
"Pleased to meet you, Mrs. Urquhart." Her thin lips stumbled over forming the strange surname.
"Please. I'm Favel." Fabian's mother's lilting accent was distracted as she released Riana's bone-thin hand. Riana nodded ever so slightly as Favel turned away from her and swirled toward Fabian in a blur of emerald green cloak.
Seizing her son's chin, she tilted up his laughing face, narrowing her glittering green eyes. "Don't ya ever scare us like that again!" she hissed. Thus saying, she cast a final glare back at Fabian and flounced through the doorway back into the Leaky Cauldron.
Riana glanced, wide-eyed, at Fabian and let out a long, relieved, pent-up sigh; she was a little frightened of Favel and this she wasn't ashamed to admit...the tiny witch was forbidding. However, one look at Fabian, who was bent double, laughing raucously, assuaged her fears, and she smiled too.
"Ha, ha, ha! That ... was so..." more laughter, "funny!" Fabian whooped with hilarity and bowed again. "Our name is Urquhart..." he drawled, drawing out the surname pretentiously. "Honestly, ya'd think they ruled the world with the way they go on and on about bein' purebloods. Mind, if I weren't a pureblood, I'd have somethin' to say about it. I like bein' one, but they," he gestured toward the Leaky Cauldron into which his mother had disappeared, "flaunt it like it's the most important thin' in the world." He yawned lazily. "It ain't."
Riana stopped laughing. This expression was one of the many that she did not know; it had popped up before in conversation with Fabian, and Riana seized her chance to discover what it was. "What's a pureblood, Fabian?"
He stopped laughing at once and turned his yellow eyes on her seriously. "Ya don't know?"
Riana shook her head.
"Well," Fabian began, but then he stopped as the wall leading back to the Leaky Cauldron began to close. "Quick!" he shouted, leaping to his feet. "Back through the doorway. We'll talk about it inside," he called over his shoulder as he grabbed the birdcage and ran through the fast-closing wall.
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The young witch and wizard walked quietly back into the dimly lit Leaky Cauldron, avoiding the pointed, emerald glare from Favel Urquhart who sat sipping a beverage at the bar, and shuffled up the rickety staircase, Bevil's cage bumping along each step accompanied by an indignant squawk from its occupant at each bang. Reaching the top, Fabian scurried down the dusty hallway with Riana close on his heels, her hands supporting the sleeping form of Alvean.
Fabian opened the door to room number three and disappeared inside. Riana was left standing nervously at the door and heard him shouting, "Shut it, ya dumb bird!" in a rather threatening yet jovial voice as several heavy objects crashed to the floor to the cacophony of irate owl hoots and screeches. He emerged from the room seconds later, holding a battered box in his hands.
"What's that?" Riana asked, indicating the box, but Fabian waved her question airily aside, questioning her instead.
"Let's go put Alvean in your room, 'kay?" Riana assented and they walked five doors down as she transferred Alvean to one hand and fished the room key out of her pocket with the other. She unlocked the door and pulled it open as she and Fabian entered the room. He smiled in indulgent humor at the heaps of clothing that lay covering the bed and tumbling messily out of the suitcases.
Alvean was still sleeping soundly, and Riana handed her reluctantly to Fabian, whose yellow eyes glinted mischievously, as she dumped the contents of one suitcase onto her bed and crammed an old bath robe in the bottom of the now-empty suitcase. She held out her skeletal hands for Alvean and gently placed the sleeping kitten in the suitcase with the lid propped open. Looking down at the small animal, Riana felt an odd emotion shining out of her slanted, grey eyes, and she quickly looked away from Alvean in order to stem the unknown feelings. She then walked to the bed, motioning to Fabian, who was standing balanced on one foot, gazing around her room, his mysterious box clutched under his arm.
"So," Riana began, plopping down on the bed, "what's a pureblood?" Fabian followed suit, jumping cat-like onto Riana's pillow before answering.
"A pureblood is a witch or wizard whose ancestors have always been magical. That's like me family, the Urquharts. And that's like the Zabinis and the Malfoys and a few others. Of course, there aren't that many, because we would've all died out a long," he yawned in the middle of his sentence, pointed fangs gleaming, "time ago ... if nobody had married Muggles." He pulled a face. "I couldn't stand bein' related to a Muggle, they're inferior," he grinned wickedly, "and so much fun to scare. But, really, about the pureblood obsession, it's a stupid thing to be proud of. I don't pay much attention to it, anyway." He looked at Riana, his weird eyes sparkling in the gloom of the musty room.
If you don't pay attention to it, why mention it? Riana looked warily at Fabian. Yes, she liked him. But what was he hiding? There had to be so much more to this boy who was so merry and yet so deceitful. She resigned herself to discovering Fabian's nature. Why was he like this?
Riana shifted her eyes to the floor where Alvean's suitcase lay. The kitten was still sleeping peacefully and Riana felt a touch of fear. What if Alvean never wakes up? Realizing, however, that this was entirely ridiculous and, too, that Fabian was waiting for her to comment, she opened her mouth slightly and questioned Fabian further. "Who are the Zabinis and the Malfoys?"
Fabian looked at her, surprised, as if this was the question he least expected her to ask. "They're just some friends of my father...just people. Purebloods, of course. You'll meet them soon enough. They're all right, I guess. Scorpius's not bad, and Hyacinth is a brat, but they're okay." He gave a throaty chuckle. "Just wait three more days and ya can form ya own opinions."
Riana sat, knees propped up under her chin, her mind working rapidly. How much about this world of wizardry did she not understand? How would she know how to conduct herself at Hogwarts? And what if they expected magic on her first day? Her anxious musings were cut short, however, by the sound of Fabian's questioning voice. She looked at him, silver eyes narrowed to slits. "What?"
"I said, how 'bout a game of wizard chess?" With this, he whipped the top of the box he'd brought from his room and scattered chess pieces across the bed. He grinned and removed the chess board from the wooden box. "Well, what about it?"
Riana leaned closer, spellbound. One of the pawns gave an almighty scream as it was rapped smartly on the head by the enemy queen's scepter. Her eyes glistened eagerly. "Absolutely."
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33 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
It was all incredibly well-written. So does Riana get help to deal with her anorexia? Did you adopt the plot in another more well-read FF because we readers here aren't doing your authoring justice in reviewing? I think it's just that the traffic isn't high, but it will come! Is the completed FF posted in another HP portal?
Love your pace. And the OCs. Too bad I wouldn't have come across this story if not for the random FF spinner.
I have been reading your story avidly since the beginning. Good work, though I wish the girl would eat!
Wow ... a much longer chapter! I have about thirty seconds to review, so I'll just say that that was great, and I can't wait till they get to Hogwarts. I'm glad Fabian will be looking out for her!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, I know ... it was very long. I'm not too fond of it, actually, so I'm going to rewrite it and then resubmit it. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. Your reviews, as always, truly encourage me! :-)I, too, cannot WAIT until they get to Hogwarts ... it's been too long. :-PThanks again!~Julia~
Ooh ... what an unusual idea! I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what happened in that chapter. Does Leanne know that Riana is at the Leaky Cauldron now?I thoroughly enjoyed your writing in that chapter, particularly this : "Carefully ignoring the prone figure frozen on the bed, Riana’s evading gaze hurriedly glanced at the floor where the broken glass from the photograph mixed with the fibers of pink carpet, creating a sparkling mélange of color as it was touched by the pinpricks of moonlight from the room’s open windows."Really lovely. Well done! :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks for your complimentary review, :). I'm so pleased that you are still enjoying the story.
I'm so glad, too, that you liked the idea for this chapter--it has been the one that most people have complaints against. Some feel it's too vague, others don't understand the point. However, rest assured that there is, indeed, significance in that blue book with the bronze writing. Hee!
I believe that the way in which I wrote it explains why most people find a hard time enjoying it, :-S. This chapter was very similar to my one-shot, "The Ultimate Trust" in that it was very image-oriented and had less of a storyline. Most people don't like that. But I'm thrilled that you tapped into that. Kudos to you for being observant! :P
And about Leanne, yes, she knows that Riana is alive, anyway. But she doesn't know--and I believe I can tell you this without ruining anything--that Riana is at the Leaky Cauldron. There are other things, though, that she does know...Hee! But I won't say what they are.
My utmost thanks, again, for your endlessly wonderful reviews. They truly encourage me. :)
~Julia~
how strange...very interesting...
more. :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks for R&R-ing. I hope you enjoyed it. :) More should be around soon... but no rushing, eh? We want the next chapter to be good, too. :P Hee!
~Julia~
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
i want to say rush, but i know you're right. take it slow. make it good. (as i know you will.)thank u!
Really nice chapter. I love the way Fabian is having a positive effect on her ... he's good for her.Your writing is getting more and more fluid ... keep it up!And ... can't wait to find out who her parents are! More ... and SOON!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you, as always, for your lovely comments. This was one of my more ... eloquent chapters, I suppose you could say, hee! Just kidding... but, really, I'm grateful to you for your kind words.
I, too, am glad that Riana now has Fabian. He's not perfect, but I love him to death. :)
And... I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit longer to truly know who Riana's parents are. *pulls face* There are aspects of her history that I wouldn't want an eleven-year-old to know. So, years must pass until she finds out the Truth. *giggles and points at the capital T*
Anyway, thanks so much for your comment and I'm going to go and read/review the newest chapter in "Where My Future Lies." :)
~Julia~
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
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Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
swoons and faints*. YEARS??? We have to wait for YEARS until we find out the Truth (capital T!)???Cruel! Intriguing, though! :) Gosh ... and I thought I was cruel for stringing things along!Gotta go read your new chappie now!BTW: I was slightly incorrect about the inventor of the entrail-expelling curse. It was Urquhart Rackharrow, chapter 22 of OotP.
riana and fabian are so cute together! this mystery about her parents is fascinating. (and i can't wait to see what fabian thinks is 'real fun')
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much for your review. :) I'm so glad that you are enjoying Riana and Fabian's time together.
The mystery, yes... that will all be revealed in good time. I'm so glad you're intrigued; your enthusiasm truly encourages me.
Fabian... well, not this next chapter, but the one after that... that will show a bit of Fabian's definition of 'real' fun. :P Not all... but then, Riana's not a werecat either. Thus, she wouldn't be able to accompany him on his nighttime jaunts, more's the pity. :(
Thank you again, though, for your lovely review. I love getting them.
~Julia~
Wonderful! Well written, as always, and Padma Patil is a most welcome addition!There is only one thing I would like to point out, and it is not something you could be exptected to know if you haven't been to Britain. I live in Ireland, lived in England for two years, and make many trips to London/Scotland. Biscuits with gravy (especially the white kind) are an entirely American phenomenon, and would never be found in any pubs/restaurants/diners in Europe. They simply don't exist here. Gravy here is runny and brown, made from meat stock, and biscuits here are what you refer to as cookies.I went to the U.S for the first time in January, and came across 'biscuits with gravy' ... and was very puzzled indeed! There are so many differences between our cultures and U.K/U.S English ... it's quite mind-boggling!Okay ... rambling finished now! Anyway, as I said, I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter, and look forward to the next! Well done! :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you for your lovely comments and also for your con. crit. Those comments really help me, I wish I could get more of them, hee! But I will change it right away!
I had no idea that "biscuits" weren't available with (American) gravy. *gasp* It seems to be a main staple on restaurant/cafe' menus here in America.
Again, thank you ever so much for R&R-ing as well as for the correction. :)
~Julia~
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
You're very welcome! If I had to write a fic set in the U.S, I would be completely lost as regards many things, such as food.I see so many Americanisms creeping into HP fics. A very common one is 'pinkie' ... a word never used here. We simply call it a 'little finger'.Having said that, my beta (who is American) is forever finding Irishisms in my work. Even between England and Ireland there are so many differences in phrases and sayings.Can't what for chapter 12!
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
Can't what for chapter 12!!!???Can't wait for chapter 12, obviously! ;)
i love your descriptions of the books! ~~Or so she thought…~~ that has me interested indeed...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks very much,
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
! :) It really encourages me that you like the story and find it intriguing. I enjoyed writing the descriptions of the books very much.
And you shall see ... what "~~Or so she thought...~~" meant. Oh, yes ... you shall certainly see. :)
~Julia~
Well done, well written and you obviously have done your homework with all those books ... lots from Fantastic Beasts and Where To Find Them etc ... I'm looking forward to her meeting students and getting some dialogue going!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Why thank you, :). Yes, if there's one thing I can do ... it's my homework. *grimaces slightly* Although homework for HP is much better than homework for ... anything else. :)
There will be plenty of dialogue in the following chapters, however there is so much background to cover that the first chapters are rather limited in dialogue. Never fear! There are great things to come.
Thanks so much for R&R-ing.
~Julia~
great intro to diagon alley!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much. I love writing about Gringotts because it is such an amazing place! Me and my "dusty balustrades," *sigh*
Hee! Thanks again for R&R-ing.
~Julia~
Another good chapter :) Am getting imaptient for her to meet some witches/wizards now, though!Keep up the good work!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you for your review. I assume you've just started reading the story? :)
And there will soon be contact with witches and wizards, hee! :) Chapter after next, I believe...
Again, thanks so much for your review--it was very encouraging!
~Julia~
riana's anorexia seems to be getting worse, poor girl. it'll be interesting to see how that affects her at Hogwarts.
I never would have thought old Tom could make a smoothie! haha...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Well, thank you, :). Personally, that wasn't my favorite chappie, however, I'm glad that you are still sensing Riana's conflict.
Tom is very talented, hee! The only problem is that he doesn't want anybody to see that, *shiftily looks left and right*
Thank you so much for R&Ring.
~Julia~
This is such an interesting story. I'm so glad to have discovered it! Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much! :) I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story. I didn't want it to be run-of-the-mill, which has caused a smidge of trouble when getting it validated on other sites! Hee! (Something about 'delicate issues...') :P
However, I'm very glad that you have found my story and the next chapter is in queue, so it should be up soon.
~Julia~
What a very different and interesting story! I'm so glad you reviewed mine, or I might not have discovered this!Well written and intriguing ... reading on now!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad I reviewed yours, too, or I might not have ever found it! (That's slightly confusing, but you get the picture, hee!)
Thank you, again, for your kind comments.
~Julia~
Nice start, i like it, please continue soon!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much for your review! It encourages me ever so much that you like my story! :)
The next chapter is in queue, so it should be up soon.
~Julia~
And ... I'm so looking forward to her upcoming journey to Hogwarts!!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, thank you very much! I'm sorry that it was such a short chapter, but I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! :)
~Julia~
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Short chapters are nice ... and sometimes they are essential. As in this case; it was a pivotal point. Now, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
omg...parseltongue. riana is a very complex character! (and definitely a true slytherin?) great job
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you find her interesting. The last thing in the world that I wanted to do was create a "Mary Sue." :) Considering, however, that she's her own person, that wasn't too difficult at all! Thanks for R & R - ing ... I really appreciate it!
~Julia~
Yes, Riana will definitely be sorted into Slytherin. You captured Leanne's feelings very well. Being a mom myself I could feel her desperation. You really have a way of capturing feelings in your writing. I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Hehe, how'd you guess? I'm kidding... yes, I did want her to be in Slytherin. We always hear such bad things about the Slytherins and I wanted to look at the whole "magic" situation from a 'Snake's' position. :)
Thank you very much for your kind review!
~Julia~
Yes, I should be assigned detention with Professor Snape for not reviewing until now. You really have created suspense with this chapter. I loved the detail, her search for the key. It reminded me of similar personal pursuits. But the end, with her mom coming into the kitchen and her trying to look normal, like she wasn't up to anything... well, I could feel my heart thumping in my chest as if I were a teenager again and was definitely up to something. Well done!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Wow. What great praise! :) Thanks very much for your kindness. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And it's fine that you haven't reviewed 'till now... you've read them, at least. :)
Again, thanks very, very much!
~Julia~
oh i just love it when u post another chapter!
the story is coming along so very nicely. keep it up!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks very much for R&R-ing. *smiles*
I'm so glad you like the story. :) Also, Riana will soon get to Hogwarts, just stick with her, please. The story is taking its own precious time, but I think it will turn out all right ... at least I hope so, hee! :)
~Julia~
Ooooh! Urquhart! Wasn't he that entrail-expelling curse chappie?And yay! His Mum's Irish. Gosh, it looks like this is going to be a seriously long story! Any idea how many chapters?Enjoying ... as always!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Hmm.. not sure about the "entrail-expelling" but he was the captain of Slytherin Quidditch team at one point. :)
I love Favel (plus her name is so fun!) She was a pleasure to write, even though she is a very minor character ... at this point. Hee!
About the length, hmm, well... I really don't know how long it's going to be. *laughs uneasily* I was going to try and make it 30 chapters, however, the length of some of the chapters is so short. I simply ended where I felt a cliffhanger would do well. They just happened. I'm sure you know what I mean. :)
Now, though, I'm thinking that I may do volumes of Riana's life. You know, Serpent in the Moonlight: Volume One. This one details her first year. Serpent in the Moonlight: Volume Two... and so on and so forth. A bit like the HP books, but not. There's just so much information about her that I want to share and she can't discover everything in her first year ... that much knowledge would kill her, poor thing. :( Honestly, I have some ghastly stuff planned for her in the future. I'm so mean. Hee! *snickers evilly*
Anyway, that was a really long post. *sigh* I should have just said "Thank You," except that I love getting your reviews and your feedback. Talking to much again... must go. Thanks so much!
~Julia~
so there's still pureblood-mania so long after the HP events? that's intriguing. i'm eager to learn the missing history there. fabian's character is getting more and more complex...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, as long as there are purebloods, there will be pureblood mania. :) I'm glad you are intrigued by Fabian's character ... the last thing in the world I wanted to do was make him "flat." *cough Ron & Hermione cough cough* Hee! Just kidding... only in canon, not in fanon. :D
I love getting your reviews! :) Thanks so very, very much.
~Julia~
great byplay between riana and fabian. he seems like he'll be good for her with his friendly nature and everything. if only he could convince her to eat a licorice wand...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments. I do plan to continue Fabian as a foil to Riana ... if only he could get her to eat that Licorice Wand, hee! :)
~Julia~