Alvean and the Werecat
Chapter 14 of 20
Celestial MelodyRiana learns something about her new friend.
ReviewedAlvean and the Werecat
Fabian chuckled unconcernedly and sat silently down beside Riana, thrusting his unshaken hand deep into his pocket and pulling out something that looked like licorice. He poked one licorice stick into his mouth, pointed teeth gleaming. Riana leaned closer, staring at his fangs ... fascinated.
Pretending not to notice her gaze, Fabian offered Riana a piece of licorice. She drew back quickly, shaking her head vehemently. "I ... I can't; wh-what is that?"
Fabian's feline mouth turned up at the corners, but he also looked slightly confused. "It's all right," he said, his voice a low, pleasant-sounding growl, "it's good. Licorice Wand, ya know."
Looking down in shame, Riana spoke again, "I can't eat it. I don't want to eat it," she corrected. She spoke in a quiet yet rough undertone as she lifted her chin, daring Fabian to question her.
Fabian, however, merely looked at her, curiosity shining from his yellow eyes. He cocked a shaggy, tawny eyebrow and twisted his mouth to the side, the Licorice Wand shifting with the movement of his red mouth. Under his inquisitive, bizarre stare, Riana lost her momentary bravery and cast a sullen look toward the dirty floor. She immediately wished she hadn't. Seeing where her thin hand lay on the wood floor, she gasped in disgust and hurriedly moved it away from a rat skeleton-ridden owl pellet.
If Fabian noticed, he didn't mention it; he was too busy staring at the tips of his fingers, picking lazily under the nails with claw-like precision while the Licorice Wand dangled from his mouth. "Suit ya self," he said, ceasing his nail-cleaning, shrugging carelessly, and returning the proffered Licorice Wand to his pocket. He sighed deeply and sucked on his Licorice Wand for a minute and then turned his yellow cat's eyes on Riana.
"So ya want to know what I am?"
At the sound of his proud and amused voice, Riana's gaze snapped up to Fabian's face. "I ... I meant who you are," Riana stuttered, then added quietly, "and what, of course." She finished her excuses lamely, looking up at Fabian from under a fringe of dark eyelashes.
At her hesitant confession, Fabian laughed out loud and leaned languidly backwards onto a nearby cage, which promptly slid out from behind him, its furry occupant hissing angrily. Fabian's eyes flew open in surprise, and sitting bolt upright, he cast a derisive glance back toward the cat who stared at him in silent fury. Shrugging again, Fabian turned back to Riana, licked his licorice-smeared lips, shifted the Wand to the opposite corner of his mouth, and leaned forward confidentially.
"Well, I'm a werecat...born not made. And I've been followin' ya all day. I'm down the hall from ya at the Leaky Cauldron, room number three." He grinned insolently and cocked his head to one side, his bizarre stare measuring Riana up and down as if waiting for her reply.
Riana gasped, "Oh! You're the one who was talking in his sleep." She narrowed her eyes and stared at him, daring him to contradict her.
Instead, he smiled. "Yeah, I do that from time to time. Drives me mum insane. I'll disappear in the middle of the night...cats don't sleep at night, even werecats...and she'll come upstairs to me room, checkin' on me ... as usual, and I'm not there!" At this, Fabian chuckled merrily, his mouth open, pointed teeth clearly visible. "But they can't do anythin' about it ... and dad, he doesn't really care, as long as I don't terrorize Muggles and get caught. Though I got to admit, it's rather fun scarin' those idiots ... especially the kiddies."
Fabian had a melodious Irish accent that sounded very pleasant to Riana's ears, and she smirked slightly as Fabian reached up a coarse hand and comfortably scratched behind his ear. Riana was beginning to like him, oddly enough. He made her feel happy ... accepted. Yet he also had a vindictive edge to him that she couldn't quite puzzle out. In a word, he was intriguing.
Fabian didn't seem to (or chose not to) notice her contemplation. "So ... Riana, what's your tale? All I know is that ya cry, sometimes, in the mornin's, and that ya wear black and grey ... never anythin' else."
Riana tilted her chin up and stared down its pointy length at Fabian, searching his tanned face as if to test its truthful interest. When he simply looked at her, Licorice Wand stuck comically in his mouth, she pulled in her bottom lip, grinned a little and began to tell her history.
Riana told Fabian everything, starting with the fact that she didn't know who her real parents were. She then related her adventure of the past week, starting two days ago when she'd received her acceptance letter to her present stay at the Leaky Cauldron.
When she related her midnight escape, he sucked in his breath, nearly choking on his Licorice Wand, and coughed, finally managing a weak, "Wicked," his merry eyes shining appreciatively.
Riana blushed slightly at his obvious admiration and found herself smiling and laughing, truly enjoying being alive for the first time since ... since when? She could not remember another moment in her life when this had happened.
"Then ya don't really know who your parents are? Do ya think ya are wizard-born?" Fabian asked, with a hint of suspicion no doubt stemming from his penchant for teasing Muggles. His words slurred together as the Licorice Wand shrunk quickly in his mouth.
Riana shook her head. "I don't for sure if I'm wizard-born. As for my parents ... I met somebody today who, I think, knew who they are ... or were. But he didn't tell me anything," she finished sullenly.
Fabian gazed at her with concern in his crazy eyes. "I'll tell ya what," he said. "Why don't we stick together for the rest of the day and I'll show ya Diagon Alley. Sound like a plan?" He stuck out his callused hand for the second time since he'd met Riana.
Pursing her thin lips, Riana lowered her eyelids over her slanted eyes, hardly daring to believe that she might have a friend. Opening the silvery grey orbs, she saw Fabian still looking at her speculatively.
Nodding slightly, Riana replied, "It's a plan," and reached out her own tiny hand to shake hands with the werecat. His palm felt smooth and rough, all at the same time, and smiling hugely ... pointed teeth and all, Fabian effortlessly leapt to his feet, hoisting Riana's slight body along with him.
"All right!" He exclaimed loudly, with barely contained excitement, "Now that we're here, I suppose we might as well get our animals. Rain's stopped outside." He indicated the cloudy day, dropping Riana's bony fingers, and turning around, looking at the owls, speaking over his shoulder, "I want an owl. I mean, there's your own personal mail-carrier right there and they're intelligent, too. Plus, they scare Muggles to death if ya send messages durin' the day," he added with an amused grin. "Oh, that, and it wouldn't feel quite right buyin' a member of me own family," he continued, glancing toward the cages of cats.
Riana stared at Fabian's back. Mail-carrier? she thought confusedly.
"But ya, I suppose, want a cat," he turned back, flashing a smile in Riana's direction, "and since ya can't have me, I suggest you try one of the kittens ... they'll be easier to train. We grown cats have bad habits." He chuckled, stressing the word 'bad' and, baring his fangs, mimicked a crouching cat. Riana shrank back involuntarily at Fabian's fierce mien. He chuckled at her discomfort, but it was a companionable snicker, not a cruel one.
Riana narrowed her eyes and stuck out her tongue, turning her back on him and walking quickly to the wire cage filled with kittens. Despite her saucy manner, however, Riana was thrilled to have met Fabian, and her face was wreathed in a smile, stretching it into tight smile lines.
The little, sleeping kitten was the one she eventually chose, and she cuddled the tiny creature to her emaciated frame as it slept on. "I ..." she hesitated momentarily then plunged ahead, murmuring softly in the kitten's ear. "I love you, you darling thing. You're so sweet, so warm ... what do you want to be called?" She glanced toward Fabian who was browsing through the cages filled with owls and then returned her gaze to the fluffy, grey-haired Persian in her arms. Recalling a name she'd wandered across in Why I Didn't Die When the Augurey Cried, she rubbed a stick-thin finger on the kitten's velvety nose and whispered, "I'll call you Alvean."
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A few minutes later, the two stood at the front desk, waiting for the witch who was fetching feed from the storeroom in the back. Fabian had ended up with a nip on the finger from a particularly vindictive barn owl that he'd tried to tease with a half-eaten rat. It was this owl that he chose, laughing merrily at Riana's raised eyebrow. "It's more of a challenge this way," he explained. "Now I have to get the big idiot to like me."
The two were amiably chatting now as they paid the skinny witch for their pets, a few days' supply of dead rats, and a cloth sack full of kitten food, and ambled out of the menagerie. Fabian told Riana about one of his escapades during which he'd appeared on the windowsill of a young Muggle boy during the night and transformed quickly into human form, then back to werecat, scaring the toddler half to death.
"I don't really hurt them," Fabian admitted, hauling his giant, domed birdcage quite easily for such a small boy and grinning as the bird beat its angry wings against the bars of the cage, finally settling down on its perch and glowering angrily with round, yellow eyes. "But I do like to have some fun. Fabian raised the cage to eye-level, speaking to the owl as it clicked its sharp beak and stuffed its fluffy head under its large, brown wing. "Well, Bevil," he said, "now ya have to work with me ... despite this wicked nip here." He showed the owl his bleeding finger. The owl glared fiercely at him and snapped, causing Fabian to jump back. However, he continued to swing the cage breezily as he and Riana emerged from the shop into the muddy alley lane.
Riana couldn't figure out why she liked Fabian so much. No, scratch that, she couldn't figure out why she liked him at all. He was the oddest combination of humor and vindictive obsession that she'd ever met. Mind you, she really hadn't had the pleasure of meeting anyone with whom she really got along. Fabian seemed to traverse all those obstacles.
"Fabian, I ... I don't have all my school things yet, and..." Here, Riana shifted her kitten to one hand and slid the other deep into her trouser's pocket, groping for her school supplies list. "So do you think we should go get those now? Or wait until tomorrow ... you will still be here tomorrow?" She asked anxiously. She really did enjoy being around Fabian. He was such a happy, self-satisfied person that it made her happy to be alive, as well.
Fabian glanced at Riana, his laughing eyes taking in her worried expression. He nudged her bony shoulder with his arm and replied, "Of course I'll be here. We're stayin' 'til it's time to go to Hogwarts, and ya can meet me parents when we get back to the Leaky Cauldron. So ya don't need to look so worried. Or..." He glanced at her roguishly before continuing, "...is it because you'll be missing me cuddly self?" He shot a grin at Riana as her mouth and eyes snapped open in shock. Then, as she realized what he'd said and sprang toward him, Fabian whooped loudly, sidestepping a cuff from Riana's petite, ineffective fist and dashed off down the muddy Alley, kicking mud in every direction. Riana jerked up her pointed chin and followed, scampering after her new friend.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Serpent in the Moonlight
33 Reviews | 7.45/10 Average
It was all incredibly well-written. So does Riana get help to deal with her anorexia? Did you adopt the plot in another more well-read FF because we readers here aren't doing your authoring justice in reviewing? I think it's just that the traffic isn't high, but it will come! Is the completed FF posted in another HP portal?
Love your pace. And the OCs. Too bad I wouldn't have come across this story if not for the random FF spinner.
I have been reading your story avidly since the beginning. Good work, though I wish the girl would eat!
Wow ... a much longer chapter! I have about thirty seconds to review, so I'll just say that that was great, and I can't wait till they get to Hogwarts. I'm glad Fabian will be looking out for her!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, I know ... it was very long. I'm not too fond of it, actually, so I'm going to rewrite it and then resubmit it. I'm glad you enjoyed it though. Your reviews, as always, truly encourage me! :-)I, too, cannot WAIT until they get to Hogwarts ... it's been too long. :-PThanks again!~Julia~
Ooh ... what an unusual idea! I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what happened in that chapter. Does Leanne know that Riana is at the Leaky Cauldron now?I thoroughly enjoyed your writing in that chapter, particularly this : "Carefully ignoring the prone figure frozen on the bed, Riana’s evading gaze hurriedly glanced at the floor where the broken glass from the photograph mixed with the fibers of pink carpet, creating a sparkling mélange of color as it was touched by the pinpricks of moonlight from the room’s open windows."Really lovely. Well done! :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks for your complimentary review, :). I'm so pleased that you are still enjoying the story.
I'm so glad, too, that you liked the idea for this chapter--it has been the one that most people have complaints against. Some feel it's too vague, others don't understand the point. However, rest assured that there is, indeed, significance in that blue book with the bronze writing. Hee!
I believe that the way in which I wrote it explains why most people find a hard time enjoying it, :-S. This chapter was very similar to my one-shot, "The Ultimate Trust" in that it was very image-oriented and had less of a storyline. Most people don't like that. But I'm thrilled that you tapped into that. Kudos to you for being observant! :P
And about Leanne, yes, she knows that Riana is alive, anyway. But she doesn't know--and I believe I can tell you this without ruining anything--that Riana is at the Leaky Cauldron. There are other things, though, that she does know...Hee! But I won't say what they are.
My utmost thanks, again, for your endlessly wonderful reviews. They truly encourage me. :)
~Julia~
how strange...very interesting...
more. :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks for R&R-ing. I hope you enjoyed it. :) More should be around soon... but no rushing, eh? We want the next chapter to be good, too. :P Hee!
~Julia~
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
i want to say rush, but i know you're right. take it slow. make it good. (as i know you will.)thank u!
Really nice chapter. I love the way Fabian is having a positive effect on her ... he's good for her.Your writing is getting more and more fluid ... keep it up!And ... can't wait to find out who her parents are! More ... and SOON!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you, as always, for your lovely comments. This was one of my more ... eloquent chapters, I suppose you could say, hee! Just kidding... but, really, I'm grateful to you for your kind words.
I, too, am glad that Riana now has Fabian. He's not perfect, but I love him to death. :)
And... I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit longer to truly know who Riana's parents are. *pulls face* There are aspects of her history that I wouldn't want an eleven-year-old to know. So, years must pass until she finds out the Truth. *giggles and points at the capital T*
Anyway, thanks so much for your comment and I'm going to go and read/review the newest chapter in "Where My Future Lies." :)
~Julia~
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
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Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
swoons and faints*. YEARS??? We have to wait for YEARS until we find out the Truth (capital T!)???Cruel! Intriguing, though! :) Gosh ... and I thought I was cruel for stringing things along!Gotta go read your new chappie now!BTW: I was slightly incorrect about the inventor of the entrail-expelling curse. It was Urquhart Rackharrow, chapter 22 of OotP.
riana and fabian are so cute together! this mystery about her parents is fascinating. (and i can't wait to see what fabian thinks is 'real fun')
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much for your review. :) I'm so glad that you are enjoying Riana and Fabian's time together.
The mystery, yes... that will all be revealed in good time. I'm so glad you're intrigued; your enthusiasm truly encourages me.
Fabian... well, not this next chapter, but the one after that... that will show a bit of Fabian's definition of 'real' fun. :P Not all... but then, Riana's not a werecat either. Thus, she wouldn't be able to accompany him on his nighttime jaunts, more's the pity. :(
Thank you again, though, for your lovely review. I love getting them.
~Julia~
Wonderful! Well written, as always, and Padma Patil is a most welcome addition!There is only one thing I would like to point out, and it is not something you could be exptected to know if you haven't been to Britain. I live in Ireland, lived in England for two years, and make many trips to London/Scotland. Biscuits with gravy (especially the white kind) are an entirely American phenomenon, and would never be found in any pubs/restaurants/diners in Europe. They simply don't exist here. Gravy here is runny and brown, made from meat stock, and biscuits here are what you refer to as cookies.I went to the U.S for the first time in January, and came across 'biscuits with gravy' ... and was very puzzled indeed! There are so many differences between our cultures and U.K/U.S English ... it's quite mind-boggling!Okay ... rambling finished now! Anyway, as I said, I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter, and look forward to the next! Well done! :)
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you for your lovely comments and also for your con. crit. Those comments really help me, I wish I could get more of them, hee! But I will change it right away!
I had no idea that "biscuits" weren't available with (American) gravy. *gasp* It seems to be a main staple on restaurant/cafe' menus here in America.
Again, thank you ever so much for R&R-ing as well as for the correction. :)
~Julia~
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
You're very welcome! If I had to write a fic set in the U.S, I would be completely lost as regards many things, such as food.I see so many Americanisms creeping into HP fics. A very common one is 'pinkie' ... a word never used here. We simply call it a 'little finger'.Having said that, my beta (who is American) is forever finding Irishisms in my work. Even between England and Ireland there are so many differences in phrases and sayings.Can't what for chapter 12!
Response from little beloved (Reviewer)
Can't what for chapter 12!!!???Can't wait for chapter 12, obviously! ;)
i love your descriptions of the books! ~~Or so she thought…~~ that has me interested indeed...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks very much,
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
! :) It really encourages me that you like the story and find it intriguing. I enjoyed writing the descriptions of the books very much.
And you shall see ... what "~~Or so she thought...~~" meant. Oh, yes ... you shall certainly see. :)
~Julia~
Well done, well written and you obviously have done your homework with all those books ... lots from Fantastic Beasts and Where To Find Them etc ... I'm looking forward to her meeting students and getting some dialogue going!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Why thank you, :). Yes, if there's one thing I can do ... it's my homework. *grimaces slightly* Although homework for HP is much better than homework for ... anything else. :)
There will be plenty of dialogue in the following chapters, however there is so much background to cover that the first chapters are rather limited in dialogue. Never fear! There are great things to come.
Thanks so much for R&R-ing.
~Julia~
great intro to diagon alley!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much. I love writing about Gringotts because it is such an amazing place! Me and my "dusty balustrades," *sigh*
Hee! Thanks again for R&R-ing.
~Julia~
Another good chapter :) Am getting imaptient for her to meet some witches/wizards now, though!Keep up the good work!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you for your review. I assume you've just started reading the story? :)
And there will soon be contact with witches and wizards, hee! :) Chapter after next, I believe...
Again, thanks so much for your review--it was very encouraging!
~Julia~
riana's anorexia seems to be getting worse, poor girl. it'll be interesting to see how that affects her at Hogwarts.
I never would have thought old Tom could make a smoothie! haha...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Well, thank you, :). Personally, that wasn't my favorite chappie, however, I'm glad that you are still sensing Riana's conflict.
Tom is very talented, hee! The only problem is that he doesn't want anybody to see that, *shiftily looks left and right*
Thank you so much for R&Ring.
~Julia~
This is such an interesting story. I'm so glad to have discovered it! Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much! :) I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story. I didn't want it to be run-of-the-mill, which has caused a smidge of trouble when getting it validated on other sites! Hee! (Something about 'delicate issues...') :P
However, I'm very glad that you have found my story and the next chapter is in queue, so it should be up soon.
~Julia~
What a very different and interesting story! I'm so glad you reviewed mine, or I might not have discovered this!Well written and intriguing ... reading on now!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad I reviewed yours, too, or I might not have ever found it! (That's slightly confusing, but you get the picture, hee!)
Thank you, again, for your kind comments.
~Julia~
Nice start, i like it, please continue soon!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much for your review! It encourages me ever so much that you like my story! :)
The next chapter is in queue, so it should be up soon.
~Julia~
And ... I'm so looking forward to her upcoming journey to Hogwarts!!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, thank you very much! I'm sorry that it was such a short chapter, but I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! :)
~Julia~
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Short chapters are nice ... and sometimes they are essential. As in this case; it was a pivotal point. Now, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
omg...parseltongue. riana is a very complex character! (and definitely a true slytherin?) great job
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you find her interesting. The last thing in the world that I wanted to do was create a "Mary Sue." :) Considering, however, that she's her own person, that wasn't too difficult at all! Thanks for R & R - ing ... I really appreciate it!
~Julia~
Yes, Riana will definitely be sorted into Slytherin. You captured Leanne's feelings very well. Being a mom myself I could feel her desperation. You really have a way of capturing feelings in your writing. I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Hehe, how'd you guess? I'm kidding... yes, I did want her to be in Slytherin. We always hear such bad things about the Slytherins and I wanted to look at the whole "magic" situation from a 'Snake's' position. :)
Thank you very much for your kind review!
~Julia~
Yes, I should be assigned detention with Professor Snape for not reviewing until now. You really have created suspense with this chapter. I loved the detail, her search for the key. It reminded me of similar personal pursuits. But the end, with her mom coming into the kitchen and her trying to look normal, like she wasn't up to anything... well, I could feel my heart thumping in my chest as if I were a teenager again and was definitely up to something. Well done!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Wow. What great praise! :) Thanks very much for your kindness. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And it's fine that you haven't reviewed 'till now... you've read them, at least. :)
Again, thanks very, very much!
~Julia~
oh i just love it when u post another chapter!
the story is coming along so very nicely. keep it up!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thanks very much for R&R-ing. *smiles*
I'm so glad you like the story. :) Also, Riana will soon get to Hogwarts, just stick with her, please. The story is taking its own precious time, but I think it will turn out all right ... at least I hope so, hee! :)
~Julia~
Ooooh! Urquhart! Wasn't he that entrail-expelling curse chappie?And yay! His Mum's Irish. Gosh, it looks like this is going to be a seriously long story! Any idea how many chapters?Enjoying ... as always!
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Hmm.. not sure about the "entrail-expelling" but he was the captain of Slytherin Quidditch team at one point. :)
I love Favel (plus her name is so fun!) She was a pleasure to write, even though she is a very minor character ... at this point. Hee!
About the length, hmm, well... I really don't know how long it's going to be. *laughs uneasily* I was going to try and make it 30 chapters, however, the length of some of the chapters is so short. I simply ended where I felt a cliffhanger would do well. They just happened. I'm sure you know what I mean. :)
Now, though, I'm thinking that I may do volumes of Riana's life. You know, Serpent in the Moonlight: Volume One. This one details her first year. Serpent in the Moonlight: Volume Two... and so on and so forth. A bit like the HP books, but not. There's just so much information about her that I want to share and she can't discover everything in her first year ... that much knowledge would kill her, poor thing. :( Honestly, I have some ghastly stuff planned for her in the future. I'm so mean. Hee! *snickers evilly*
Anyway, that was a really long post. *sigh* I should have just said "Thank You," except that I love getting your reviews and your feedback. Talking to much again... must go. Thanks so much!
~Julia~
so there's still pureblood-mania so long after the HP events? that's intriguing. i'm eager to learn the missing history there. fabian's character is getting more and more complex...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Oh, as long as there are purebloods, there will be pureblood mania. :) I'm glad you are intrigued by Fabian's character ... the last thing in the world I wanted to do was make him "flat." *cough Ron & Hermione cough cough* Hee! Just kidding... only in canon, not in fanon. :D
I love getting your reviews! :) Thanks so very, very much.
~Julia~
great byplay between riana and fabian. he seems like he'll be good for her with his friendly nature and everything. if only he could convince her to eat a licorice wand...
Response from Celestial Melody (Author of Serpent in the Moonlight)
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments. I do plan to continue Fabian as a foil to Riana ... if only he could get her to eat that Licorice Wand, hee! :)
~Julia~