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When The Present Turns Into The Future
ancientgirl256 Reviews | 5.13/10 (256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )
*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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well I was wrong it seems, Voldemort's soul isn't repelled by Severus's attraction to Hermione. I guess Hermione will soon get on an emotional roller-coaster what with Severus being once himself and another time Voldemort. I wonder how long it will take for someone to understand what's happening. I hope you'll be able to post at the end of the week.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
No, Voldemort is only repelled to a certain degree. He has no problem messing with her.I've got Chapter 6 already at my beta's doorstep. I'll post that hopefully by Friday. And yes, someone is starting to notice.
Very disturbing and some how I don't see LM willing to share his wife
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
No way is he going to share his wife.
please hurry and kill Voldemort he is so gross
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm trying I'm trying.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
good. here is a tip my friend gave about writing smut if you don't have anyone buy a very hot erotic romance book and read it cover to cover. here is two you might like captivated and fascinated. both books have four very hot and sexy stories by the best 4 in my witers.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, I'm at this moment actually reading a pretty steamy scene in one of my friends paranormal romance novels. I'll try writing some lemons in this story, but only if it serves any purpose in the plot. As it stands now, I will probably be doing at least one and maybe two.Thanks for the suggestions.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
cool what is the name of your friend's novel.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm not sure actuallly. She gave it to me and outlined the smutty parts, so um...I've sort of just been reading those.*hangs head in shame*
I can not believe I missed 3 chapter updates. I haven't been very well. Still, you must have being writing night and day.Very clever ancientgirl, I was not expecting that. I cannot wait to find out, how you are going to get Severus out of this particular situation.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Oh, I hope you're better. Seeing as you are on the net you must be feeling okay.Yeah, I get into these writing moods, so I have to take advantage. And um...I can't wait to see how I'm going to get Severus out of this either. I have no clue as to how I'm going to do it yet, but I'll figure it out.Thanks for reading.
Glad someone is picking up on it... would hate to set him free without anyone the wiser. I do hope he doesn't mess Snapes life up too badly though. Thank you for writing and I look forward to more :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yes, I thought Lucius would have to be the first to notice, since they had known each other personally in the past more than most of the others. It won't be pretty at one point, but I don't think you have to worry about this being too angst ridden. Thank you for reviewing. I'll have more up this week.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooh this is going to be goooddd!! Cant wait for upcoming chapters!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I've got more coming this week. Hang on to your seat.
What a great time I am having with this story! Nice concept and the Voldemort subplot is intriguing -- a little scary/worrisome -- but I trust that no lasting harm will come to Severus so I willing continue on this ride. Also I am really interested in the Lucius/Ginny angle. You have piqued my interest. Have you thought about doing a separate story covering their courtship? I think that may have some potential. Well I look forwad to the rest of this one. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm very happy to hear that you like this. I wasn't sure how this story would be recieved, but it seems that so far its going well. I've always been interested in the angle of Severus being controlled in some fashion within himself and not even know it. I don't know if you've read any of my other stories, but if you haven't just know that I'm a happy ending sort of person. At least where fanfic is concerned. And I'm also glad to hear you are enjoying the Lucius/Ginny angle. I began writing them into my stories because I wanted Severus and Hermione to have another couple in their same age range to socialize with. I think they are an interesting couple to write and have considered writing a story about them. I may do that in the future.Thanks for taking the time to read this and let me know your thoughts. I appreciate it.
i loved it...it's interesting how you put Voldemort in there and have him sort of take over Severus at times
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you enjoyed this. Voldemort will be doing quite a bit of taking over in the chapters to come. Thanks for taking the time to review.
I hope they do watch him closely before too much damage is done. This is really nerve wracking and suspenseful and brilliantly written. Really looking forwards to the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. Thanks for keeping up with it.LOL, it's nerve wracking for me too. I've been writing chapter 5 here at the office. I've been lucky so far in that I'm able to write every day with no real block to slow me down.Hopefully I can finish chapter 5 when I get home and start on 6. I may be able to post 5 before the end of the week.
I wonder if Severus's attraction to Hermione could help to keep Voldemort's soul at bay ?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Funny you should say that, you'll see in the next chapter what I mean.Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Wonderful chapter! I like how Voldemort is slowly coming around. And Ron's outburst...LOL! I'm glad Lucius is picking up on some of this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yes, its not going to take Voldemort long to go back and forth. And it made sense to make Lucius the one to begin to see something odd. I couldn't help doing that to Ron, it was too much fun.Thanks for reading!
Oooo...excellent chapter. And Yay!!! Harry/Draco! LOL!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Well Ginny was taken, so I needed to pair Harry and Draco with someone, LOL.
My thoughts were true! But Severus is strong, and he will defeat Voldy!... Won't he? No! Don't tell me! I think Lucius/Ginny is a bit strange... but I can imagine it lol.Please update!~Sarah
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yep it sure is Voldy in there. I know Lucius/Ginny is odd, but I remember when I first began reading fanfic, I thought Severus/Hermione was odd. I hope you warm up to the idea though. They are interesting to write.
i hope everyone finds out soon that Voldemort is in severus body before someone gets hurt.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Without telling you much, I will say that Lucius is the first to begin seeing somethind odd going on with Severus.Thanks for keeping up with this. I'm hoping to have another chapter up some time at the beginning of next week.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
lets hope voldemort gets out of severus before severus and hermione make love.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Um...no comment.
This is so creepy, I love it! There is endless scope here with the two personalities. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Oh yes, I'm really looking forward to this one. I'm glad the creep factor is high. Thanks!
you didn't left us in the dark about the other inhabitant of Severus's body but it doesn't make it less spooky nonetheless. I suppose that was what you were aiming for ?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what you are asking. I've made it pretty obvious in this chapter who Severus is sharing his body with.
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
sorry if I wasn't clear enough but English isn't my language and sometimes my sentences get mixed up. I wanted to say that to know who occupies Snape's body doesn't lessen the suspense of your story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Ah, yes I'm sorry, I just wasn't sure if you were still in the dark as to who was in there.I figured that since people now know I still have to make it creepy, which of course will be fun to do. I can make Severus as nasty as I want, because it really won't be him.Thank you for taking the time to review, and forgive me if I offened you. Your English is fine, LOL, I'm at work and if I had taken the time to read it better I might have understood better.
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
I assure you no offense was done.
I hope you're going to ship Ginny here w/Lucius (or Draco). Love to see her w/a Malfoy. Besides, Lucius is a widower & all. . . .
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yes that's what I'm working towards. I like putting older Ginny with Lucius. I've done that my last two stories and I like the that I can write their relationship just a little different than Severus' and Hermione's.
hmmm.... Severus waking from a 10-year coma sounded simple enough until your EVILLL cliffie here. . . nice to see the Malfoys on the Order's side. Please update--am liking this story!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yep, things are never that simple for Severus. I like putting the Malfoy's on the good guys side. They're just too damned good looking to be evil.
Loving this part, “Good lord, Neville Longbottom isn’t the Minister of Magic, is he? I may just go back to sleep for another ten years if he is.”LOL!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, you didn't like the "Weasley has lost some of his faculties? How did anyone even notice?" I thought for sure that one would get a laugh. But I think I've got people a bit freaked over that last line.
Response from whimbley (Reviewer)
Hee! The Weasly part had me in stiches too. I guess I just wasn't expecting the Longbottom part. Thanks for the laughs!
SO.... are you trying to say that Snape is someone else? Maybe Voldemort? If thats the case.. then how does he have all the memories of Draco, Harry, Ron, and Hermione in school? Seemed to have all of Snape's memories based on this thoughts.
Confusing.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Nope, its Severus. He just has some company right now.
if you can say this He looked at his flaccid penis and cocked his head; he was large, very large. then you should be able to writer some good smut. lol
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, its when I get another character involved that I have problems. But, I'm trying, I'm trying.I'm going to attempt it again in this story at some point. I figure maybe if I just keep at it, I'll improve with each attempt.At least, thats what I'm hoping.Thanks for the encouragement!
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
like i told you before just think about what you do with your loved one and you will be find.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'll really have to use my imagination because I haven't had a "loved" one in a pretty long while.I've got a few chapters to go before then so I'll psych myself up.Um...not psych myself up the way you might be thinking though.
You have always inspired me. Your writing is just so good, with a amazing benefit. It gives back a glow, an enjoyment at reading some wonderful reading.t today, I shake my head in wonder. How do you come up, with these so individual plots?I had appointments today. But during a break I read with anticipation, your new chapter. Confusing, but such death. After cooking the family meal and cleaning up. I came back on line. Chapter 2...Is just stunning. The story moves, in such a way, that you are instantly drawn to feeling so sorry for Severus (you notice I cannot type Snape!).He is so hurting. The world lived why he just stagnated.For a brain power of that ability...Snape was bewildered, and upset for the years he has undiscovered.I think a new life beckons! The question is. will he take and accept him.Absolutely brilliant. Wonderful, look forward to more.Best wishesEileen.
You have always inspired me. Your writing is just so good, with a amazing benefit. It gives back a glow, an enjoyment at reading some wonderful reading.t today, I shake my head in wonder. How do you come up, with these so individual plots?I had appointments today. But during a break I read with anticipation, your new chapter. Confusing, but such depth. After cooking the family meal and cleaning up. I came back on line. Chapter 2...Is just stunning. The story moves, in such a way, that you are instantly drawn to feeling so sorry for Severus (you notice I cannot type Snape!).He is so hurting. The world lived why he just stagnated.For a brain power of that ability...Snape was bewildered, and upset for the years he has undiscovered.I think a new life beckons! The question is. will he take and accept him.Absolutely brilliant. Wonderful, look forward to more.Best wishesEileen.
You have always inspired me. Your writing is just so good, with a amazing benefit. It gives back a glow, an enjoyment at reading some wonderful reading.t today, I shake my head in wonder. How do you come up, with these so individual plots?I had appointments today. But during a break I read with anticipation, your new chapter. Confusing, but such death. After cooking the family meal and cleaning up. I came back on line. Chapter 2...Is just stunning. The story moves, in such a way, that you are instantly drawn to feeling so sorry for Severus (you notice I cannot type Snape!).He is so hurting. The world lived why he just stagnated.For a brain power of that ability...Snape was bewildered, and upset for the years he has undiscovered.I think a new life beckons! The question is. will he take and accept him.Absolutely brilliant. Wonderful, look forward to more.Best wishesEileen.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Hey, thank you for the lovely review. I'm sorry if I confused you in the first chapter. I'm hoping that chapter 3 will help though. I know that the end of chapter 2 might have been one of those "huh?" moments for some people, but all will be explained.I do feel sorry for Severus. He's a very sad character. Someone who life has turned its back on. It's as though he lives to just be trampled on. I always try to be good to him in my stories. He's going to have quite a time with this one, but as usual, I will be adding some humor here along with some romance and drama. You know, for a while now I've tried to write things that I haven't seen written before. It's just so hard to come up with something original, but I keep trying and I'm very happy that you are enjoying this so far.You brought a very big smile to my face. Thank you!I started writing chapter 3 today, so I'm hoping that I will have something ready to post at the very least by this weekend.
Hey, I love you stories, and so far I love this one too, please update soon. I'm a bit confused by the last sentence though, and I hope that my thouughts are not true...... But then I suppose that it would be a Voldy type thing to do..... Keep posting!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Hey, thanks. I'm happy to know that you enjoy my stories. Sorry to confuse you, but the twist has been officially added. I should have the next chapter up by the end of the week hopefully. Things will be explained then as to what's going on here.