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When The Present Turns Into The Future
ancientgirl256 Reviews | 5.13/10 (256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )
*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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this story ignited my anxiety and involved me in the story. atagirl! also thanks for the epilogue.s... i love it since they were so thorough.
great ending.. i have been happy, sad & laughing my head at some things, these last couple of chapies: voldie as a gnone ( task assigned from hagrid).., birth of g/l's twins, etc..
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I always try to put a little bit of everything in my stories. I personally never liked reading stories that were only dramatic. I've always preferred putting a little humor, just to break the mood up a little.
love the mystery surrounding the severus! great that lucius notice something wrong & albus saw something. everyone will notice after awhile the different in severus..
An interesting story!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I hope you like it.
Best Tom fate ever!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks! I thought it was well deserved.
That was dark and a bit disturbing. Laughed my f-ing ass off at the end chapters. The gnome had me absolutely rolling, and Hagrid's revenge was the best. Side-splitting funny. Nicely done.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
There were some dark moments in this, but I tried to make sure it worked well within the spirit of the story.Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
uh, would they reall act that way toward voldemort now even if he is in a gnomes body? what of azkaban at the least?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
He's not as scary as a gnome, not to mention, he's got no power.
ah ha you didnt put voldemort into ron like i feared. i thought after all that ron would now have to be killed. but a gnome. how amusing-but scary.
ooooolucius speaks directly to voldemort. nice.
amused at all the staff asking severus for stuff.
alas, another common thing- hermione parents are conviently killed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yes, I did go there.
“My God, Lucius, he’s inside of me.” ooooh how will they all act now.
oh no voldemort is getting weaker. i wanted more interation from him with hermione.
oh yes i forgot to mention how i like lucius noticing things are amiss and his dark mark returning. good that lucius is playing it cool- i wonder what else will he do.
okay i gess voldemort doenst recognize who hermione was. hmm it will be interesting to see how they both approach her and how hermione takes it.
ah cool, it looks like you might do something about the diary/ginny connection.
okay the lucius/ginny thing isnt going to sit well with me but ill try to deal. yup, thought draco was gunna go gay as he often does in ss/hg fics where he is friendly. how does draco deal with his father being with someone younger than him? and i guess itll be both severus and riddle in the body then.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I actually really got into pairing up Lucius and Ginny. For some reason, I felt it worked. Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy it further.
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh awesome. totally didnt see that coming. awesome plan riddle. no wonder it was harder to recognize hermione (though i understand what 10 years can o at that age period). is this partial reson why hermine ound him more attractive?
super cool. looking more foward to this fic now.
Makes sense. I seem to recall that when Voldemort showed up at the MInistry in book 5, he couldn't possess Harry for long because Harry was full of love. or was that harry was still protected by his mother's magic? but I think it was love. Dumbledore always said it was a magic Voldemort underestimated.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I think it was Harry full of love.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I think it was Harry full of love.
I'm glad Lucius is there to notice the difference! This is a much different story than I exected, but it's different-good. I am quite pleased with it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I like using Lucius as a good guy in my stories. I wanted him to be one of the few who actually would notice something different.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I like using Lucius as a good guy in my stories. I wanted him to be one of the few who actually would notice something different.
OK, you got me! that was a surprize! Looking forward to reading the rest of this. the Weasley line was funny. a ptity about him, though.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you like it so far. This was one of my favorite stories to write. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you like it so far. This was one of my favorite stories to write. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
good beginning. need to finish this another day
Good ending - I loved the way you brought about the marriage proposal from Severus to Hermione and then it happened just on the moment. I laughed when Voldie got eatten by the snake - poetic justice I would say. Good read -I throughly enjoyed.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thank you for reading to the end. I appreciate you taking the time to do so and for leaving me reviews. I though the snake was also poetic justice. LOL, poor Voldegnome was just too far gone though.
Well the make up scene was so tender and sensual but also sexy. I loved what Hagrid did to Voldie and then Albus told him that Hagrid had lied and Voldie screaming no - that was priceless.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, more evidence that Hagrid is quite possible the spawn of Satan.
From Destruction and lashing out to material that was pricelessly funny. I could see Hermione in my mind's eye blowing the room apart and it would have been a cleansing experience for her. Hagrid shoving Voldie up the butt - that was hysterical. I loved especially the line where Voldie says to himself Hagrids got the all fooled - he is the spawn of satan - I laughed my head off.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I liked toying with the idea of everyone thinking Hagrid is this quiet nice fellow, but deep down inside he's got this dark side. LOL.