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When The Present Turns Into The Future
ancientgirl256 Reviews | 5.13/10 (256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )
*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?
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Poetic justice - I would say. Little Gnome Voldie.... LOL. I loved how they referred to him being a little terror even as a Gnome. He bit Ron's crotch - oh that would have been funny to witness. I cannot wait to see what Hagrid does to him. Well at least, Hermione and Severus are going to try again - what a chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks. I hope you like the ending of this. Hagrid does his best to make Voldegnome's little life miserable.
He jumped into a body of a Gnome - that is funny. You had me really going and thinking that it was Ron that he entered. I was holding my breath while reading the last bit. Well at least now, Severus and Hermione can be together. This was priceless.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Voldemort being a gnome is the least I could have done.
Oh no - no cure for the curse - what will they do and now Voldemort will find out that Lucius is a spy too - this is getting so pivotal - I cannot wait to see how you write them out of this mess.
Severus screwed up by getting to emotional in the previous chapter and now Voldemort is at the surface. What a conversation with Lucius. I know he wants to kill him but what will he do - must read on - good work.
You left me so wondering by this chapter - will Voldemort have more tolerance because Severus did and I wonder how Lucius knew that it was not Voldemort (he asked about the cream but what prompted him to.)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Lucius asked him for the cream to see if it was really Severus or not. If Severus questioned him then he'd know it was him, if he agreed and gave him the answer he got in this chapter then he'd know it was Voldemort. Voldemort, not knowing what Severus may have given him would just agree to anything.
Well, Draco was the voice of reason with Harry - I am glad he will not press her sometimes something like this is not something you want to talk about. Each person deals with it in their own way. I wonder since Voldemort possessed Severus while he was asleep - will he do it again? Good chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you are still reading this. That means you find it interesting. I hated what happened to Hermione, but it was a way to make things progress and I think an interesting way to have the truth finally come out. They will get past this, no worries. It wasn't Severus who did those things to her, so she's a smart enough woman to realize that.
Well Voldie screwed up did he not - now the whole order is coming together to figure out a way to get rid of him. Hermione knows that it was not Severus but this will forever change them. I hope they find a way past it.
What Voldemort did to Hermione was horrendous to say the least. I am glad you wrote her escape from him. Severus realizing that Voldemort is inside him and Lucius showing his mark - I hope that by this they will get him out of Severus.
Well - it looks like Voldie has decided to off Hermione in order to take over Severus. I can not wait to see what you do to stop him. Good chapter.
Oh no - Voldie is realizing more that things have changed. Lucius thinks it is the curse - Albus sensed something and even the bird knew something was amiss - I do hope they figure it out soon before Voldie takes over Severus for good.
Oh crap - Voldemort wanting Hermione as a dalliance and possible to hurt her while Severus would want to maybe pursue her - this is going to get confusing and dangerous for Hermione really quickly.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I found when I originally posted this, some people got confused as to when was it Severus and when was it Voldemort. I think if you read carefully it's pretty easy to know. I don't think you'll have a problem here.Hermione is certainly going to have to be careful here.
Lucius is quick on the uptake and at least someone has noticed something is wrong. What will they all do to Severus when the find out - will they try to cure him or just kill him to stop the Dark Lord. Good chapter.
Well Severus is there and so is Voldemort - this is interesting - I have never read this tale in fanfiction and I love a good original concept. I cannot wait to see who pieces it together and figures out he has Voldemort's soul in him.
Oh crap - who is in him - this is scary. I just about fell out of my chair at this cliffie - I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Good first chapter - I am guessing that when he said he knows - he was referring to Voldemort... that being the reason for his current state. I loved how he woke up for a minute and thought how pretty was the woman in the room - Hermione I loved this way in which you described her.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yes, he's thinking he's talking to Dumbledore just after he was found after the meeting.Thanks for reviewing. I hope you enjoy this.
LOL you called him Voldegnome too ( I hadn't read the last bit when I christened him that. Brilliant story!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, see it seemed to be the most appropriate thing to call him.Thank you for taking the time to read this through. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Oh dear I'm almost feeling sorry for Voldegnome now....no, just kidding! :)
Always knew Voldie was full of shit!
Best Voldegnome gets to like sitting by a pond and fishing...oh that's right, that's Muggle gnomes hehe :)
Can they AK Voldegnome quick and get him out of the way once and for all... please?
Arrghh, leave Lucius alone Voldie!
Go Lucius! I love your Lucius, much nicer than the old one!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, thanks. I wish JKR would have given him a bit more of a personality instead of just making him just plain mean.
I thought the "thing" was a code-word LOL
I like Harry and Draco as a couple, it is easy to believe, all that passion between them as teenagers LOL
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I've never been into Harry/Draco as a pairing, but it seemed to work here.
great chapter, Hermione will no doubt get past the rape as she knows Severus was not in control, but it will take time, just as well as she needs to stay away for a while anyway.