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When The Present Turns Into The Future
ancientgirl256 Reviews | 5.13/10 (256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )
*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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LOL I was so worried for a moment there, but that is a brilliant twist to this delightful story...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thank you. I briefly thought of getting Voldemort into Ron's body and finding out its not fun being Ron. But I think being a gnome will very interesting for him.
*falls over laughing* Im glad he didnt get to Ron though =/Cant wait for upcoming chapters!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you liked the chapter.I just couldn't do that to Ron though. I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon.
LMAO!!!! It was great!!! I loved it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks! LOL, he's about as scary right now as a newborn babe.
hahahahahahaha, lol, love it! hehe, you've cheered me up :) I've had such a crap, depressing week, and you've made me laf :) Love it, update soon please!~ Sarah x
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm so glad I was able to make you laugh. I know that when I'm having a shitty day a good laugh from a fic helps me go on.I should have more up soon hopefully.Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
omfg...that was too damn funny....you had me crying and now i am almost pissing myself...voldemort a gnome...the worst thing he could do is just up and kick someone in the knee...on a serious note though...sev and hermione need to go through some lemons so the hermione can face that it is not voldemort and that she can be intimate with sev again...oh please...this is just not a cry from a pervy reader...lol...this is a cry from a pervy freak...lmao...just kidding...i so love this story...i hate to see it close...what are you going to do next story...keep up the good work...take care
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, I figured the only damage he can do is to the plants in professor Sprouts garden.I'm very happy you enjoyed this chapter and have stuck with the story. I would like to have some lemons for Severus and Hermione, simply because I feel that they need to establish some kind of intimacy again now that Voldemort no longer is occupying Severus' body.Hopefully I can get over my usual smut hurdle and write something nice for you guys.
Oh I was so hoping that's where he would go. was afraid that he would have gone into ginny's baby. now is he stuck in this body and can't get out. waiting for more hopefully soon. p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'd originally thought of leaving him in Ron's body, but Ron's been through so much, I couldn't do that to him. Now, I wonder who will agree to watch over Voldegnome?I'll have more soon.Thanks for reading.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
your too much... "Voldegnome"
Crookshanks????
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, you know, I haven't even thought about Crooks. Hmm...interesting.
*bwaaaaaahhhhaaaaaahahhhhha* ROTFLMAO!! That is poetic justice!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad you liked it. I'll have more on Voldemort's plight next chapter.
Absolutely Brilliant! What a laugh. I can't stop giggling.Well done. May I also say thanks for your review. It cheered me up. Best wishes.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I'm glad I gave you a laugh. I originally thought of making him a puppy or something, but I think a gnome is a better punishment. Your welcome my friend. Don't let stupid people bring you down. I find many times its people who don't have a creative bone in their body who leave horrible reviews.If they think they can do better, let them.You keep writing what you like.
Haa Haa Haa! Old Mouldy Wart as a Gnome! Hilarity on toast that is! Good grief, your tales are getting more twisted as they progress. Brilliant work and may I offer a large lump of Honeydukes Best to your muse as an incentive for the next update? Blessings : ) X
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
My must will not turn away any sweets. He's got quite a sweet tooth.LOL, I'm glad you liked the chapter. I think being a gnome is a fate worse than death for Voldy.
Merlin's Hairy @$$hole, indeed! I love it. Gave me a chuckle; pre-coffee even.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
A pre-coffee chuckle is quite an accomplishment. I'm glad you liked it!
Voldemort needs to die you need to kill him.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I've actually got a fate worse than death for him planned. I think you'll find it interesting.I've already got the next chapter written. I'll most probably be posting it either late tonight or early tomorrow morning.Thanks for keeping up with this.
woo hoo excellent chapter. when is the next update. don't think i can hold to the cliff that long.. p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks!I'm going to begin the next chapter hopefully this evening. I'm shooting for a Friday or Saturday posting, if all goes well.
ooga booga... well thats good... ACTUALLY THATS REALLY REALLY BAD... O.O hmmm I wonder if he'll kill him on site or just wait and have his own little devious plan for lucius... but bouts of anger are hard to control... or are they
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Hmm...maybe so, maybe no.
Great strory so far..I like the way its going..
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.I appreciate you taking the time to review.
ARrrrrrghhh!!! *bangs head against desk*
The suspense, woman, the suspense!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Sorry! I'm going to start a new chapter tonight though. With any luck, I'll have it done by the end of the week.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)
Peh, you're not THAT sorry!!
:o)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
LOL, well yes you're right.
Wow, loved this chapter! I feel sorry for Hermione, finding out that Severus willmost likely end up dead, if he can't fight Voldemorts soul. I love your plot, the way you make everything ok and happy, then all of a sudden something happens to turn life completely upside down, it's a great strategy.Love it!~Sarah x
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Hey Sarah! Thanks for the comments. I really began this story thinking it would be happy with some humor, but as I kept writing I began to think "what if?"I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Thoroughly enjoyable, as usual.
One small nitpick (I'm a translator and a proofreader, I can't help it): "ortografia" is spell as in spelling bee. I think "hechizo" is the word you're looking for.
Which is why my job is still safe from translation software ;-)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Aha! I knew that wasn't right, but I didn't have anybody to ask and I wasn't about to call my dad! Thanks so much for your help! I'm going to change it now.
oh oh oh....my god girl...this is getting so good...come on sev....fight that bugger...please oh please don't let it be voldemort that faces hermione...and for safety's sake please let old lucey be there where she talks to sev...oh i just love this story...have a good day...great update btw...until next time, take care
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Hey, I'm glad you liked the chapter.I've got a few things going on at once here, but I'm hoping to get things rolling in the next chapter.Hang on this might get bumpy.
Ancientgirl, great chapter. I can't wait to see how we get Vodie out of Sev's body and not kill him in hte process. I know you won't kill him off, will you? More Please!!!!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Well I've got something planned, I just hope I can get it down the way I see it in my head.Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
Thrilling white knuckle ride of a fic going on here! Go Lucius! I love how the characters are working together. LOL ; )
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Leave it to Lucius to take control.I absolutely adore writing him.I'm glad you are still keeping up with this.
Straight to the point. Love it. Thank you for a new chapter. waiting for more. p
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
I see Lucius as the type of person who doesn't beat around the bush when he wants to know something.I'm glad you liked the chapter. The next chapter should be coming this week sometime.
Oh, just when we think that we're about to get some answers! Grrrrr! :D
Nice chapter. It's interesting (and important, I think) to see the emotional road that Hermione is taking during this time as well. Reconciling her attacker and her lover... poor thing.
Thanks for updating!~Gin
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.I've already begun the next chapter, so the next update will have some answers.I also wanted to give a bit of information on Hermione. She's smart enough to know that what happened to her wasn't something her lover did. She wants to help Severus, knowing he deserves to be finally free of Voldemort and knowing that unless he is, neither of them will ever be happy.
Do you realise how much danger you have put my Lucius in? I know how much danger Severus is in. But now you are putting my Lucius up against so much evil.Your muse is amazing. I have always shook my head at some of your plots. Believing always wrongly that you have tied yourself into to many knots, to escape from.I know the genius of ancientgirl will twist the story to come out. However, I am now completely confused how you are going to do it.Best wishes to a genius...who should write a orginal book. I would queue to read it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
You're making me blush, but you put a great big smile on my face.Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I started this story with no plot, and as I've written, it's sort of come at me here and there.Lucius isn't a very patient man, and right now he wants to know what they are all dealing with. He is putting himself at risk, but for now he's safe. Thanks so much for keeping up with this.And about writing an original book? I've got a few notes and a story line for a couple of things. I may start working on that when I finish this fic, then just write shorter fics.
Ya, what is going on here Voldymort!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yeah, leave it to Lucius to be direct.
Oh CRAP! Talk about a ballsy move there! *suffers at the cliffie*
Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)
Yeah, Voldemort did say after all that Lucius was a man of action.Thanks for reading. I'm hoping to update soon. I don't like leaving cliffies out there too long.
Response from HogwartsHoney (Reviewer)
Damn right!! *grins* There's only so much stress people can take!!!