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Denial
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Five years after the fall of Voldemort, Hermione and Severus receive unhappy news.
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What a wonderful story! loved it. :)
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks so much,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. :)I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully I'll have another story for you in the future. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks so much,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. :)I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully I'll have another story for you in the future. LB x
Dear little beloved. So once again we've reached the end. And once again you've brought me to tears with this beautiful epilogue. Thank you so much for bringing this story back to TPP. I will love it forever. I very much look forward to reading your future stories. Keep writing ... please.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you so much, Contessa, for all of your kind and encouraging reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed it all over again, and I hope I'll have a new one for you soon. Hugs, LB xxx
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you so much, Contessa, for all of your kind and encouraging reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed it all over again, and I hope I'll have a new one for you soon. Hugs, LB xxx
Such a sweet ending, especially because of the sad twist. I really like that Severus is allowed a romance without turning too fluffy. It is a very difficult balance, and you did it superbly. I'm looking forward to reading more from you, both original, published fiction and the fanfictions you find time for.All the best in your endeavours!
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Thank you so much, Clara. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! And you'll be glad to know that the main character in one of my original fics is called Clara! Many thanks, LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you so much, Clara. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! And you'll be glad to know that the main character in one of my original fics is called Clara! Many thanks, LB x
I loved Denial much more this time around. You have really grown as an author, and it shows in the corrections you made. I'm looking forward to anything else you put out.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you very, very much for all of your reviews, df. :) You are very kind, and I hope you'll have more from me soon. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thank you very, very much for all of your reviews, df. :) You are very kind, and I hope you'll have more from me soon. LB x
A wonderful ending, it was a nice touch having Theo attend the wedding, maybe he's growing up at last. Thank you for reposting this it was a joy to read.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes, I think Theo IS growing up. :) Many thanks for all of your reviews, mick. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Yes, I think Theo IS growing up. :) Many thanks for all of your reviews, mick. LB x
Thank you for that wonderful end. It was very satisfying to 'know' what happens once they cleared the air and accepted one another flaws and all. I'm sure Severus will make a fine father.
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I'm certain he will. :) Thank you very much for all your lovely reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
I'm certain he will. :) Thank you very much for all your lovely reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. I'm glad you enjoyed it! LB x
Beautifully ended and thank you (again) for re-posting this story! Hope the ideas bouncing about come to fruitition and work out for you!
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Thanks for all your reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. :) Hopefully I'll have another story for you soon. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Thanks for all your reviews,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
. :) Hopefully I'll have another story for you soon. LB x
Well, I laughed, I cried, I raged at a stupid law and the people who just want to live near each other and be happy. I didn't think I'd stick with this one, but I couldn't help but come back and see how they got along. Thanks for a great story.
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Thank you,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
, and I'm glad you stuck with it. :) They got there in the end. Many thanks for your reviews, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. LB x
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Thank you,
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
, and I'm glad you stuck with it. :) They got there in the end. Many thanks for your reviews, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. LB x
This chapter was like a roller coaster ride I laughed I cried But most important I felt the love. I'm so glad you have reposted this story it is one of the best I have read. Looking forward to what ever you will write.
You should send it out as a short story it is that good.
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Aw, JH, thank you so much. Your reviews have been so kind and I've enjoyed them all. I'm really glad you enjoyed Denial, and I hope I'll be back with more soon. Many, many thanks. LB x
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
Aw, JH, thank you so much. Your reviews have been so kind and I've enjoyed them all. I'm really glad you enjoyed Denial, and I hope I'll be back with more soon. Many, many thanks. LB x
That was a perfect, hopeful end to what's been a wonderfully plotted, paced and executed story. I can only hope that some day you might choose to write more of this pairing, as you do it so very well. Thank you.
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My dear
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
, your reviews have been a joy to read. I'm sorry to only get around to responding to you now. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully you will have more from me soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. LB x
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My dear
Response from little beloved (Author of Denial)
, your reviews have been a joy to read. I'm sorry to only get around to responding to you now. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and hopefully you will have more from me soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. LB x
Lovely chapter, lovely story. Having been in Hermione's situation myself some years ago, I must say that the way you drew the scene emotionally was so accurate. Waiting for the epilogue, but sad that this story is ending.
Heartrendingly beautiful, Little Beloved! I love how Severus says all the right things... Thank you for this chapter!
I don't remember a single thing that happens in the epilogue, but this scene at St. Mungo's is one that has stayed with me since the first time I read it.
You've handled a delicate subject very well, and the way Hermione (and probably Severus) is feeling is spot on. It is such a relief that she doesn't turn him away, because even if she didn't realize it, she needed him to share in her grief. And the way he explains his change of heart about children and life in general was perfect.
What I love the most, perhaps, is the sense of relief, and freedom, and hope that springs amidst such a desolate situation. Well, that, and the way he proposes. Best one ever.
I will be sad to see this come to a close. It has been a terribly fun ride.
Oh dear, I'd smack Hermione, but I remember pregnancy. Guess that isn't going to be a problem much longer, poor thing.
Wow, Sev went about that all wrong. Hooray for Lance!
Oh...! That was heart-wrenching and lovely all at once. I hope the epilogue sees them happy, with a huge brood of children, but personally I'd be happy to see it end here, so full of hope.
I've really enjoyed this story - thank you so much for deciding to repost!
bravo bravo!! Even better second time round!
Every bit as gut-wrenching and spirit lifting as I remembered! I was sad that they lost their baby, but there will be more children for these two incredible people to love and raise and love some more.
The scene in St Mungo's when Severus told Hermione how she had changed his life and his desires made me teary eyed. I can't wait to enjoy the epilogue... I don't recall every little detail about it, but I do remember that it was everything I could have wished for!
Thank you so very much for reposting Denial. It will always be one of my all time favorites.
Hugs, Beth
What do you mean it's the last chapter? Sounds like just the beginning.
Bittersweet and well written. A job well-done my dear. I eagerly await the epilogue. Now let me go get a tissue....
Yes! that they got together, but so very, terribly sad that she lost the child.
Aww, that was the best proposal ever! :)
*sniff* this was so moving, and so bittersweet. so well written - and...nearly over....I may cry a little bit more just knowing that the end of this wonderful story is near.
Please, please, please write more!
How heartbreaking to have lost the baby, but how wonderful to see Severus finally start to open up, to embrace rather than repress his emotions. Lovely scene between the two of them.
Every bit as beautiful, bittersweet and nerve-wracking as I remembered. So well handled and such a beautiful proposal. He chose his words very well, indeed.
Looking forward to re-reading the epilogue.
I love how Padma protected Hermione and that Severus took Lance's advice - again! That scene at St Mungo's was perfection.