VERY interesting.

Hey, Kizzy!  It's such a shame you had to stop there.  What an interesting way to end this fic.  Well done!  Much Love ~ Brena

An interesting story overall.  Very different. 

I liek that this is starting to get all tied together.  Off to the next chapter.

what an interesting way to end this! definitely wasn't expecting that! well done!

I liked the way you wrapped this up. This certainly leaves room for a sequel, perhaps. Very nicely written.

Interesting twist.

Loved this - Luna being a dreamwalker is original and refreshing. Nice twist.

Interesting.

I loved this. The idea of Hermione experienced past life experiences connected to the current contraband problems is very cool.

I am intrigued! Very nicely done, I am eager to see where this goes.

Bless Luna for giving Snape that warning! If people listened to her, the world would be a much nicer place. Poor Snape was walking a tightrope that entire last year. It's wonderful to see some of what could have been going on at Hogwarts during that year!

AUGH! It's unkind to stop here!  There's more to tell!  I liked the way Severus exposed Slughorn, yet again and disposed of the guns.  I hope all ends well after this...

Wow - reading the scene at Malfoy Manor was just like cracking open one of the original novels.  That doesn't happen very often in fanfic.  Great job - I enjoyed this chapter immensely.

I'm a little confused ... Hermione went into the shop under cover of Harry's Invisibility Cloak, but in this chapter she's hiding behind curtains, almost spotted, and then seen by Snape.  What happened to the cloak?

Other than being distracted by that throughout the chapter, I enjoyed the plot advancement here.  Well done!

Oooh - what an awesome cliffhanger!  I shall have to nickname you Scheherazade! Wonderful job of tying the threads together. I am enjoying this story so much more than some of the others.  Well done!

well, at least the situation with the guns was resolved.  it is rather open-ended, though, and does seem to beg for more.  i understand the difficulty of working within the word-limit - i used nearly all 2000 of the allowable words and could have used a few 100 more.  but i still have more questions than answers.  for instance, with the galleon in his possession, do they maintain some sort of future correspondence?  but this was a very unique and interesting story, overall.

This story really begges for more chapters to resolve all the mysteries your team has introduced.
You managed to tie up all loose ends regarding the guns, which was the main theme of the story.
Your Luna was great, btw.

This has left me wanting more and feeling as though not enough is resolved--but given that we're partway through Deathly Hallows, I don't suppose that's surprising.

I'm not sure I totally buy that that Neville would have pulled the coin out in Severus's presence (as opposed to the Neville from first year, say, who was a bit foolish about lots of things), but perhaps he was clever enough to realize that Severus's presence in the room means he has to be on the right side...?  I shall hope so, anyway.

I was pleased to see the follow-up of getting Severus to have the antidote--I firmly believe that actually happened, lol--and I loved that Hermione's first instinct when confronted with proper grammar on the Galleon is to assume that Severus has it.  :D  (The specification of which Hermione she was was also highly amusing.)

Glad to see Voldemort's bigotry working against him, lol.

Thanks for sharing.  ^_^

It's always a pleasure to read anything you write, kizzy! :)

Mission accomplished, mystery solved, and with the angsty aplomb readers expect from Kizzy.  Now the light has one less obstacle standing in their path of victory over Voldemort.  Snape will sleep a bit easier.  So well done and with beautiful style!

I'm sory to say I am a bit disappointe. I expected more than just this simple ending. This was gettting interesting and should be developped in more longer story. There are great plot lines to be explored.

At least Severus has Hermione on his side through all of this. And Luna. I guess she just knows he's a good guy. Great job wrapping everything up.

Ooh, very interesting! I liked the descriptions of Luna and her dream walking.  And the vision in the Headmaster's office was inspired!  :-)

What an interesting glimpse into life during the Horcrux search.  I enjoyed the focus on Neville and Ginny.