An interesting chapter though it didn't really give me a satisfactory conclusion to the story.

That was fun. I loved the meeting. I could hear Malfoy's sneer.

Loving Luna and Nev! :)

'Pull the tribble?'*snort* hehehehe.... I loved your chapter, honey - nice ending too!

Hopefully Severus heeds Luna's warning. Loved his confrontation with Neville too. But what a cliffie you've left us with!

Luna somehow made the most sense.

This was well done, as were all of the chapters.  I can't help but feel like this story wanted to be a bit longer.  I liked a lot of things that were going on here, and would have liked to know more.  But, you are confined by the rules of the challenge.  Despite that, really enjoyed the story.

Thanks, kizzy! Always happy to read your offerings.

A return to the difficult vignette style of writing.

well done, you have nicely tied the story. you had a very hard task and you have dealt with it beautifully. great writing, and congrats on a work well done.

I really had to laugh when I envisioned how she wriggled around - but when she fell, the grin froze on my face.
Thank god the right wizard was there to distract those dumbwits.

Wow! He rescued her AND complimented her all in one fell swoop! No wonder she's reeling. A compliment from Snape is bound to set your head spinning even faster than Doxycide. Now all she has to do is convince Harry, Ron and the Order. No sweat!

i love the twists of this chapter!  well done.

you know, i always wondered why harry didn't just shoot voldemort :-P

I'm truly wondering how this is going to end. And well done for the prompt words, they were hard to use.

I love a knight in tarnished armour Severus.

A very interesting chapter.

Hmm... the plot thickens.

Neville is such an interesting character here.

Good chapter, Ani! :)

Yes, she now knows that he's still on their side! Only, why did he let them have the guns? It's that making things harder on the Order, not easier?  Not exactly helping?  Oh, I can't wait to read the ending!

really well done, good continuation of the story

awesome, what a cliffie. really well done, made the story come alive

well done, nicely written story

great start to a story, well done