Whoa... I'm leaving a review simply because this is different from the others. Worth to review for...

Interesting dream of Trelawney's. Maybe Luna will figure out that there was a bit of truth in between the snake lopping.

Interesting... Leave it to Luna to be able to enter people's dreams.  Trelawney's dream was funny.  I'd expect nothing normal from her.  This is a fun story.  I'm never sure where it is going to go each week, but you have tied previous chapters together nicely with this one.

Professor Trelawney can only predict the future when she's totally unaware of what she's doing! Dreams or in-a-trance prophecies and she's on the money. Awake, she's useless! I love Luna as a dream-walker and her accidentally causing Hermione's dream of a past life regression. Poor Luna is bound to be trumatized before this is all over!

So everything in this story is dreams? Everything? Wow.

Luna on peyote is a scary thought.

So it's now tying together. The guns are back again. :) Thanks for the new chapter.

Well, now it's starting to come together a little.  I'm glad to see Luna figure into things.

Still a good mystery, since I don't know where this story is going.  Loved Luna puking on Trelawney's shoes.

Love Sybill's dream/vision. :)

i'm very interested to see where this story goes.

i have to say, the idea of the bone-dissolving charm is rather gruesome to connect with luna - she always seemed a bit innocent to me, so it is rather shocking.  i suppose it's life during wartime having its effect on people.

very interesting chapter.  i liked how you delineated the commonality of all the misery, and the irony that instead of the elixir of life, he'd invented death made easy.

How exciting.  I always felt bad that book seven didn't dwell enough on what was going on at the school while HRH were about their dreadful business.  Thanks for filling in the gaps.

I really like how you've pictured Neville.
Good work.

I'm glad you've somewhat manage to connect the first two chapter together because they were a bit confusing. I do hope you lot know where you're going because I'm following, and I'd hate to lose my path.

Oooh good for Luna, terrible times occasionally call for ruthlessness.  A very interesting chapter.  this story runs its own original path.  I like it.Nice to see Neville here, not a character we see a lot of in cannon.

I like how each chapter focuses on a different character, leaving the reader to wonder how it will all connect.  I like seeing how the change in Neville took place and some of the "connections" are becoming more apparent.

Your use of imagery and travelling from consciousness to consciousness was very interesting.  I'm curious to see how it all ties in with the first chapter.

It was interesting to see so many different POVs in this chapter, a wider glimpse into such an interesting time at Hogwarts.  I'm curious as to the decision to have Ginny in the first person (unless it's not actually Ginny, of course), but I liked all the insights.Bone dissolving charm.  And she's using "Stupefy" in the duels, lol.  You don't want to mess with Gin.  :DA wee correction.  I believe it should be "reply to an old friend's query" with an apostrophe in there.I'm interested to see what happens with Hermione's possibly-prophetic dreams and the silence of the Death Eaters.  Looking forward to more.  ^_^

I'm not sure I know what to think of this story.  I liked chapter one, but I don't know what to think about chapter two or this chapter.  I guess I'll have to keep reading to see where it all goes.

Wow. I love where this story is going. This chapter was really very good. I really liked the Neville interaction.

This chapter was great for moving things along. I can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena

I really love the use of the Galleons. Neville is really growing up and its good that Hermione is encouraging his as well.  I laughed when he stood up to GInny, but her reminiss about it was good.

I like the premis of this. Great update x

That was deep, mate. Well done. :)

Author's Response: thank you, someone who appreciated the chapter on its own