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Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament Ripple Effect
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Ripple Effect

1: SlytherinLaurel - Asteroid Beater

2: oohdear - Comet Chaser

3: JTBJAB - Meteroid Beater

4: carley9 - Moon Chaser

5: blue_paris - Gravity Keeper

6: Anijade - Black Hole Chaser

7: kizzy7 - Supernova Seeker

Ripple Effect

Jupiter

214 Reviews   |   214 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Action/Adventure Alternate Universe Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament 10,638 Words 7 Chapters Complete
Horace Slughorn Severus Snape Hermione Granger Neville Longbottom Luna Lovegood Sibyll Trelawney Avery (Death Eater) Harry Potter Ronald Weasley

Snape discovers Slughorn selling counterfeit ingredients and goes to pay him a little visit.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: SlytherinLaurel - Asteroid Beater

Chapter 2: oohdear - Comet Chaser

Chapter 3: JTBJAB - Meteroid Beater

Chapter 4: carley9 - Moon Chaser

Chapter 5: blue_paris - Gravity Keeper

Chapter 6: Anijade - Black Hole Chaser

Chapter 7: kizzy7 - Supernova Seeker


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0/10

mock_turtle

Hermione went through a past life regression?  fascinating!

and Luna is a dreamwalker!  this is so interesting!

0/10

pookah

Trelawney!  I bet it's her.  otherwise, if she were on the good side, she wouldn't be telling the headmaster about Luna-- UNLESS she has him pegged for a good guy becasue of her divinations.  Hmm, i just worked both sides of the Trelawney theory. 

Anyway, good chapter!

0/10

pookah

very interesting.  the mystery chapter is explained (also the bottle-cap necklace, LOL).  I love stories featuring reincarnation since i am a believer.    And the dreams were great. 

8/10

jessajohns

Nice cliffie.

10/10

Clairvoyant

You put me on the edge of my seat.  Great chapter!

10/10

makaem

so who is about to enter? Neat chapter.

10/10

neelix

blimey - it's very intruiging!

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Rose of the West

It wasn't clear in the beginning of the chapter that Hermione had the invisibility cloak.  I was led to believe that the DE who was aiming at her must have been a really bad shot.  Then you mentioned the cloak later and I realized the DE must have been aiming at something else entirely.

At any rate, it will be interesting to see who comes out of the fireplace.  I suspect it will be someone we think is a friend.

10/10

ClayPotter

Yes, I always felt that Muggle technology combined with Wizarding talents could be the best (or in this case perhaps the worst) of both worlds.

Interesting plot twist.

0/10

sunny33

She'd better get herself some good old Muggle ballistics  kits. :)

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beaweasley2

Oh, Avery is the one who wanted the guns, but what an ebil cliffie!  We were jsut about to see who was behind the Death Eater's getting them - well, we know that the Dark Lord wanted them, planned this apparently.  My two guesses, either Lucius Malfoy or Severus Snape, judging by Hermione's reaction.

10/10

HBAR

Interesting how a group so anti-muggle would be willing to use their technology... even if it is effective.  Does their leader know?  I don't have a clue where this story is going (that's not meant in a bad way)!

0/10

debjunk

Now who could that be?

10/10

MoreThanSirius

You, dear author, win the Evil Cliffie Award for this week! You led us right up to the edge and dangled us over beautifully. Well done!

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phoenix writing

I like Hermione's creative use of the word "borrow". ;)

A bit of clarification: Was the gunman just practicing and not actually aiming at Hermione?  I thought at first that he was actually attacking her, but he seems to have had no notion of being followed or anything...

I can totally imagine a bunch of the Death Eaters being against the Muggle weapons; that was well written.

Nice cliffie; I'm curious to see who's masterminding the introduction of Muggle weaponry.  ^_^

0/10

LadyTuesday

Nice start to the fic.  I'll be interested to see where this goes ...

0/10

Elizabeth

Is it Voldy himself? Or Slughorn? Maybe Snape. I bet it's Snape.

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blue artemis

Nice cliffie.

10/10

MuseAmusant

I love the idea of having Luna using elements of Native American mysticism, even if the thought of Luna on peyote is rather scary.


This was an excellent chapter, I enjoyed it very much!

10/10

MuseAmusant

Now I'm dying to know who the mysterious new arrival is, though I have my suspicions.


At any rate, what an EVIL CLIFFIE you've gifted us with... well done!

10/10

Amita

Credit for a difficult way of telling a story. 

10/10

Amita

Still maintaining the vignette sytle.

10/10

Amita

Adventuresome story for a team effort.

0/10

BrenaMarie

Hey carley! Great job with chapter 4! Everything seems to be coming together nicely! I loved Trelawney's dream! I can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena

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phoenix writing

What a dream-vision for Trelawney to be having, LOL.  Am hoping that Severus does hear about it from Trelawney, though (er, at least a censored version), and decides to keep the antidote on the interior. ;)

"If you had been a dream-walker, you would have known that forcibly bringing someone back to their body could end up with you having puke on your shoes!"

^ LOL  Nice to see Luna with a little more snark in her to go with all that dreaminess. ;)

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