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Potions Under Duress Your Secret Love
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Your Secret Love

1: The Beginning

2: The First Suspect

3: Ron's Assignment

4: The Second Suspect

5: The Third Suspect

6: When Obsessions Collide

7: The Rose Garden

8: Not So Secret Anymore

9: Can You Love Me

Your Secret Love

ancientgirl

116 Reviews   |   116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 89 Favorites )

Humor Romance Potions Under Duress 11,569 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

*COMPLETE* Professor Snape has a secret admirer. The only problem is, everyone seems to be a suspect.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Chapter 2: The First Suspect

Chapter 3: Ron's Assignment

Chapter 4: The Second Suspect

Chapter 5: The Third Suspect

Chapter 6: When Obsessions Collide

Chapter 7: The Rose Garden

Chapter 8: Not So Secret Anymore

Chapter 9: Can You Love Me


About ancientgirl

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ancientgirl

Member Since 2005  |  28 Stories  |  Favorited by 403  |  269 Reviews Written  |  1,741 Review Responses

Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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10/10

Alexa Potion

Ooh, it truly seems that Ron is very brave Gryffindor because he has enough courage to burst in the serpent's domain!

I waited all the time when Ron was in the Severus' rooms that Severus could suddenly come in, I thought that which one of them will run first? 

Sealed Hehehehe! "You mean to tell me you like women?" I start to laugh every time when I think that!! It would be perfect if Severus would said that 'Are you sure?', its so hilarious!!Sealed

What will Hermione do for next?

I think that Severus will afraid for next that Neville would be the secret admirer! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, yep, Neville is next.

Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

Oh god! I better than Trelawney!! I think I faint!!Sealed

9/10

Alexa Potion

 Laughing Hehehe! It was so funny that Severus started to panic when he thought Ron send the Love letter to him!!Laughing    I can even see Severus' horror!!

Aha, so Hermione is the secret admirer! Oh, by the way I liked the sentence "to snag their old potions professor", I wish that I could that too! Wink

I agree that the Potions master wouldn't believe that Hermione is honest if she blurts her feelings for him suddenly, Severus would call her 'silly little girl' and walk away.

What a mission Ron have to do! To catch Severus' handkerchief, if Severus catchs Ron in red handed he would eat him alive!! Does Ron succeed in this mission?  

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, wouldn't you cringe if you thought Ron was in love with you?Yeah, no doubt Severus would not believe her or be nasty to her if she just came right out and said it.  I think he appreciates subtleness, or stealth.

Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

Well, I'm not sure I would cringe if Ron would be in love with me but that depend's what kind a bloke he is!!

8/10

Alexa Potion

Story seemed to be a little depressing in the beginning in the Severus POV but I understand that because he is a quit sour man. I liked how you reunited the Golden Trio back for Hogwarts and YES! Draco is back, but is he still an annoying ferret boy?

A letter from Severus' secret admirer was surprisingly forwarded but its allways so easy to write your own feelings anonymously for someone who isn't never been easy to make a contact. I liked that much. And that kiss spell!! WOW! That was very clever invention! How did you invent that?

I expexted that Severus will blast the love letter and so it seemed to happen. It was very unlikely to Severus that he would keep that letter and cherish it!

What will this Secret Admirer to so for next? And who it is? 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, I thought bringing back the kids would be a kick.  And they will of course add to the story.I'm glad you liked the kiss spell.  Many a time I would love to have done that myself.

Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

Me too!!

10/10

pickles

I think in this chapter my favorite line is "A drunk lemon drop junkie.".  too funny..  yes I believe everyone needs a drink... Its 9:30 am here but it has to be 5 o'clock somewhere.. lolInnocent

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Believe me, if I was on vacation and didn't have to work, I would sooooo be hitting it right now.  It's the holidays!  We need to drink and be drunk, I mean merry!I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  I'll have more up soon. 

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

Wink

0/10

ladyofthemasque

You'd better have more, please, soon!  ~LotmP.S.  ...Why is Severus only being plagued by *male* suspects??  It's beginning to make me wonder about his deep-down-secretly-hidden-inside orientation, if he keeps suspecting men!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, unfortunately its a matter of wrong place wrong time when it comes to his suspects.I'll have more tomorrow.  Thanks for reading.

10/10

MagicAlly

"I can still get the Dementor’s Kiss"  Hysterical !  Didn't see that one coming at all, absolutely brilliant.  You can keep this up forever.Wink

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, its bad enough, he's think's his ex students are after him, but Dumbledore too? 

Response from MagicAlly (Reviewer)

I know how he feels.  Where you guys keep getting Sev on the "Which HP character are you most sexually compatible with", I keep getting Dumbledore <squick>.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yikes!  LOL, you've got guts.  I sure as hell wouldn't admit that.

10/10

Satai Delenn

OMG! LMFAO! As soon as Neville mentioned the ring I thought, "OH NO! OH NO! OH GODS, NO! POOR NEVILLE!!!!" lol.Great chapter Ancientgirl!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you liked it.  I knew when I began writing this that Neville HAD to be a suspect.  I'll have another one up tomorrow morning.  Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

10/10

pickles

I like this story a lot..  I like when authors make up something new for the Potterverse...  Its fun to see how close they come to jkr. 

When I read book 6 (still not happy with it) a lot of things popped out.  I would tell hubby that was like one part in fanfic and so on..  He did the same thing too..  It makes one wonder when she's peeping about if she's not using some of their ideas..

Great story waiting for more.  Patty 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Oh I agree with you on the fanfic stuff in the books.  I felt like maybe JKR was reading fanfic while she wrote that book.  There is so much in it that looks like it came out of fanfic.  But that's cool, because it makes you think she at least knows what people like.I'm glad you are enjoying this story so far.  I'll have another chapter up tomorrow morning.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

EXCELLENT

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

hahha! good chapter! I like the Whispering Wings. Neat!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you liked the chapter and the Whispering Wings.  Thanks for taking the time to read it.

0/10

Titania Snape

Well, is there more?  I like the story!  Live long and prosper, Titania.  P.S. Neville ~snicker~

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yep, there's more.  I'll have another chapter up tomorrow morning.  Thanks for taking the time to read this.

10/10

MagicAlly

Another great close call, I can't wait to see what happens if he thinks it's Draco or even Harry.  Brilliant as always.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, Neville was the last person he'd want as his secret love.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

10/10

Mama Weasley

Well, that was close! Poor Ron; even if he didn't get caught, he nearly had a heart attack! I love the premise for this story, and eagerly await the next chapter.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you are enjoying this so far.  I'm working on getting the next chapter as I write this response. I hope you enjoy that one as well.

10/10

Satai Delenn

[quote] “You mean to tell me you like women?” asked Severus. “What’s that supposed to mean?” answered Ron, clearly offended at the unmentioned accusation. “Of course I bloody like women.”‘He thought I was a tosser? Does everyone think that?’ Ron wondered to himself the entire way. [/quote]LMAO! That was hilarious! Couldn't stop laughing!Definitely looking forward to the next update!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thank you.  Knowing that this story is making people laugh is a wonderful thing.  I had hoped to bring a smile to people's faces with this.  I'll have more probably tomorrow.

0/10

DarkLove

Great Chapter! I think Ron did quite well. At least Snape doesn't suspect him anymore. I await more. Thank you.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yes, Ron actually got what he went there for and got away with his balls intact.  I'll have another chapter up soon.  thanks for reading.

10/10

MagicAlly

Jeez that was close.  What's next?  Great chapter, can't wait for the next installment.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Ron barely got out of there with his life, that's for sure.  I'll have another chapter up probably tomorrow morning.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

I'm intrigued, and wish to know why Hermione needed two kerchiefs.  More, please!  ~Lotm

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Eh, Hermione just wanted something to keep near her of his.  But they will be mentioned before the story is finished.  I'm glad you are enjoying this so far.  I'll have more in the morning.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

hahha... kitchens! yeah, right! I could just see the berk stammering and looking guilty! lol Love Snape's relief when Ron said he liked women haha!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Poor Ron wasn't too quick on his feet in that instance was he?  There will be more moments of relief for poor Sev before all is over and done with. Glad you are enjoying this.

0/10

DarkLove

well I knew it! I knew Hermione was his secret love. I can't wait for more, esspecially now that I'm curious as to why she needs a personal item of his. I look forward to future chapters.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, yes I'm an open book.  About the only ship I like is SS/HG and LM/HG (if its well written).  I'll have more tomorrow.

10/10

GinnyW

Hagrid happily told him it was very shiny and asked him what kind of shampoo he used. Oh man, this is hillarious! Poor Severus. Is he going to catch Weasley rummaging through his drawers I wonder? LOL!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Well Severus will catch Ron, but not in his rooms.  I'll have another chapter up tomorrow.  I'm glad you are enjoying this.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I agree about the Draco and the others being friends thing. Muahaha... I laughed so hard when Snape looked up and saw Ron staring. ahahaha! I'm really enjoying this!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I swear I've been writing this and the entire time laughing because I can just see it happening in my head.I'm glad you are enjoying this. I'll have another chapter up tomorrow morning.

10/10

pickles

good chapter.  glad to see the whole crew is working together for hermione to get her "true love"...  poor snape will end up in a padded cell.. lol  waiting for more.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, he's going to be quite traumatized.  I'll have more up Saturday morning.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

10/10

pickles

good beginning

9/10

Kismet

*snicker*  Poor guy, thinking Ron has a crush on him.  I imagine it'll just get worse if he finds Ron rummaging around in his drawers.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

It will get worse, most certainly.  Thanks for reading.

10/10

MagicAlly

'Oh sweet Circe, no', LOL marvelous touch.  Can't wait to see what's in store next.  Brilliant.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

It gets worse for poor Sev.  I'll have another chapter up tomorrow.  Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you are enjoying this so far.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

O.o Intriguing start! More, please! ~Lotm

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed this beginning.  I'm getting ready to post the next chapter.  I hope you enjoy that as well.

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