The First Suspect
Chapter 2 of 9
ancientgirlSeverus spots what he believes to be his secret love, much to his dismay.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR.
Thank you to June for all of her help with this story.
The first suspect
A week had passed since Severus received his note. For the most part he tried not to think on it very much, but every once in a while he found himself looking around, wondering if he was indeed being watched.
He sat at the High Table, while looking around the room full of students eating and talking. As Severus scanned the room, he came to a pair of blue eyes staring straight at him. Ron Weasley was looking at him from a small table alongside the wall, where the interns sat. After their eyes met for several seconds, Ron dropped his head suddenly and continued eating.
‘Oh sweet Circe, no,’ thought Severus in a panic. He looked away and down at his plate. After surveying the food on his plate for the tenth time he raised his eyes — luckily his hair strategically fell over them — and looked in Weasley’s direction. Again the boy was staring at him. Severus put his hand over his forehead, as though to shield himself from the redhead’s intense scrutiny.
‘This has to be a dream. No, nightmare. Maybe I have something on my robes, or my hair doesn’t look right,’ Severus briefly thought, certain that there had to be another reason why Weasley was looking at him, other than him being his secret love. Severus looked down at his robes, and they were fine. He even went so far as to ask Hagrid if there was anything wrong with his hair. Hagrid happily told him it was very shiny and asked him what kind of shampoo he used. After promising the Gamekeeper his own batch of shampoo, Severus went back to his plate, wishing to every god he could think of that it wasn’t Weasley who had sent him that note.
At the interns’ table, there was some plotting going on.
“Hermione, are you sure about this? I mean, of all the people to fall in love with, you had to fall in love with Snape?” asked Ron, who was once again looking Snape’s way.
“Ron, stop looking at him. He’s going to become suspicious,” snapped Hermione.
“I don’t see why you just don’t tell him you fancy him,” said Draco.
Harry looked at him in disbelief.
“Are you mad? She can’t do that,” countered Harry.
“Harry’s right. He’ll never believe me if I just come right out and say it,” said Hermione.
“Well, not to mention he’d probably try to embarrass you by telling you you’re just a stupid little girl,” Ron said as he stuffed a biscuit in his mouth.
“Thank you, Ronald.” Hermione swatted him across the arm and continued with her note-taking. “Can you please swallow so that I can explain to you what you have to do?”
Ron rolled his eyes and swallowed. The last thing he wanted was to be drawn into Hermione’s plan to snag their old potions professor. He couldn’t begin to see what she saw in the man. But if she wanted the git, then as her friend he had to help.
“Bloody hell, Hermione. Can I at least finish my lunch?” Ron looked at Hermione, who was now scowling at him. “Right then, what do I do?”
She smiled and handed him the small parchment, which he read.
“Are you mad?” he yelled as he slightly moved away from her.
“Quiet.” She shushed him and moved closer to him.
“Calm down, Ron.” said Neville.
“Calm down? Do you know what she wants me to do? She wants me to get into his rooms and steal one of his handkerchiefs,” complained Ron. “Why can’t Draco do it? He’s his intern after all; he’s already been in his rooms anyway.”
“I’ve done my part; I gave Hermione the combination of wards. You’ve got the easy part,” said Draco.
“Easy? Do you know what he’ll do to me if he catches me in there?” Ron’s voice was getting higher and higher.
“Hush, Ron,” said Harry.
“And a handkerchief. Now I’ve got to go through the man’s bloody drawers.”
“Ron, I just want something personal of his. Is it so much to ask?” Hermione begged. She knew that once Ron saw the unshed tears in her eyes, he would easily say yes. And she was right.
Ron sighed and agreed to what she asked him to do, wondering which hex the former potions professor would use on him when he discovered a Gryffindor rummaging through his drawers.
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I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for reading.
I feel the need to comment on something I have not addressed in this story. Yes, Draco and a few of our favorite Gryffindors are friends. I think by now we have all heard the several hundred different ways they may have become friends so I didn't want to spend time writing about something that could easily have happened. In my opinion, after the war and during their association in a place of higher learning, coupled with their maturity, there is a good possibility that at some point Draco and the others befriended each other.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Your Secret Love
116 Reviews | 6.39/10 Average
Very entertaining. Very funny as well .
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you.
OMG! I rolled at this chapter. The Ron incident where Severus kept catching Ron staring at him was funny, but this was unreal....
I laughed so hard. Thank you!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
that poor man, what tortureyou're putting him through!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, it was fun though. :)
this chapter gave me the giggles! Cant wait to continue!
I absolutely loved this story. Great job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I am quickly running out of things to say in my reviews without sounding like they are all cut and dried. This was a very cute little story. The varying secret romances going on were very entertaining.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you as always. It makes me happy to know others are enjoying my stories. It's very nice of you to go through them all.
I've read this before but needed a quick "pick me up" and this filled the bill perfectly. I just adore everything about this story - the humor, the "secrets", the wonderful characterizations of everyone, and the sweetness of it all. A true favorite. Don't know why it wasn't marked as such before now, but I'm correcting that oversight right now! ^.~Thanks so much for sharing the fun.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you. I always love hearing people read my stories to pick them up from a bad day. I wrote many of these stories to give people a smile, and something to laugh with
loved ron's insecurities! thanks
Haa Haa = Loved how Minerva took care of Albus and the part about Ron fainting was funny - good chapter.
Love it - Love it ... what a way to have them get together - so creative and so romantic.
Oh crap - hold my side - this was funny. I loved the part where he said that he was going to his room to oblivate himself - now he is off to the rose garden.
Oh man - this chapter was hysterical - I loved the whole thinking it was Albus part and the internal chant of just kill me - poor man - HAAAAAAA HAAAA.. sorry.
LOL - Ron must be terrified thinking that everyone must think he is a tosser. Poor guy - now he is going to have a complex.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
It's fun messing with Ron's mind. He's such an easy target.
Extremely sneaky - poor Severus thinking it is Ron and Ron dreading every minute of Hermione's assignment. Too funny.
Fantastic chapter - I read one of your stories - I had to come and read some others so I started with this one. What a neat way to enclose a spell with a kiss - fantastic and I can say that I have never read this one in fanfiction.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I hope you enjoy this story. I love adding comedy in my stories and I wanted to make something unique here.
Fantastic ending... I can see Lucius freaking out over his son's arrangement. I loved the story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks for reading the entire thing and leaving such wonderful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it all.
A very sweet story. I cheated--I started reading Your Secret Love at Owl and I wondered if you posted at Petulant. Of course I found the completed story here. Yeah! Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, yay then! I'm glad you liked it. I've got all of my stories here and they are all completed. I thought about posting this on the OWL site, but I read their faq's and I got the impression that they might frown upon that. Since I'm new there, I didn't want to press my luck.
If you read anything else, I'd love to know what you think.
Thanks for taking the time to come over here and read the entire story.
haha very funny
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I'm happy it gave you a laugh. I put Severus through a bit of abuse, but it was fun.
Hahaha I love the idea of secret love. I also like the idea of whispering wings, quite charming. Having Albus convince everyone to go to club med is bloody brillant. I also lurve the idea of all of Severus' close calls, or brushes with love (instead of death).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you for leaving such a lovely review. I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
I wrote this because I'd been reading so many stories that were just so dramatic. I felt the need to laugh and put Severus through some funny situations.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
I couldn't remember if i finished this. It was great to read again.
Happy New Year.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Happy New Year to you too!
I had fun writing this one. I felt bad putting Severus through all of that, but it really was enjoyable.
Aw, that was a cute ending. Very nice; the chapters were a bit short, but that was the style in which you were writing. It worked well for you. Good job.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwLovelyCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Hey, you read it on one shot. Thank you.I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Yeah Ron, everybody does. I like your characterisationCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, poor Ron.Thanks, I know I tend to veer slightly way from completely canon in my fics, but that's what fanfiction is for.
Hermione is rather Slytherin here. Manipulating poor Ron. Ha ha I like it stupid Ron bitten by Hagrid's pests erm pets. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Yeah, I think Hermione certainly has some Slytherin qualities in JKR's stories. I think she's pretty much a good mix of all of the houses actually.
Apart from the slight slashiness of the story I liked it and found it mostly funny!Especially Dumbledore becoming a travel agents for Wizards! That's hysterical!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I had to add the little bit of slashiness, just to be different.