The Third Suspect
Chapter 5 of 9
ancientgirlSeverus has yet another close call. This one however is almost too much to handle.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR.
Thank you once again to June for all of her wonderful suggestions and all of her help.
The Third Suspect
Two more days passed for Severus. He’d kept the ring that he duped Neville into giving him, and found himself playing with it absentmindedly. Sometimes, he stared at the onyx nestled inside the white gold setting. The fire in the hearth could be seen reflecting on the small stone, and he wondered if the ring’s owner was feeling its absence.
As he readied himself to pour a second glass of brandy, he heard a knock on his door. Cursing whomever it was for interrupting his relaxing evening; he strode towards the door, ready to hex his unwelcome guest. He opened the door and saw Albus’ outlined body standing in the low lit doorway.
“Severus, my boy. How are you?” Albus’ words were clearly slurred, and as he walked past, the smell of what seemed to be tequila permeated the Potions master’s nostrils. Severus rolled his eyes and shook his head.
‘Wonderful,’ he thought. ‘Just what I need. A drunk lemon drop junkie.’ Severus closed the door and turned to look at the Headmaster of Hogwarts leaning against his sideboard. He knew that Albus was either fighting with Minerva, or — as it was nearly time for the yearly Victory over Voldemort celebration — he was feeling nostalgic.
“Albus,” Severus said as he walked towards the swaying Albus. “To what do I owe this visit?”
“Do I need a reason to visit?” Albus leaned forward and put his hand on Severus’ shoulder.
Thinking it may be a good idea to steer the old man away from the fireplace, just in case the fumes coming from his mouth caught his beard on fire, Severus took him by the arm as they moved to the couch.
Albus fell in a heap on the far side of the couch and began to laugh.
“Ah, Severus. You always know how to make a person feel welcome. You know, I’ve been wanting to say something to you, my boy. Something…something I have felt for so many years.” Albus moved himself to a sitting position and faced Severus. “It is difficult for me sometimes to discuss my feelings openly.”
At that last sentence, Severus began to feel uneasy. ‘Feelings? What the bloody hell is he on about?’
“Albus, perhaps I can get you some coffee, or tea?” asked Severus, hoping to steer the older wizard’s thoughts from talk about feelings.
Albus waved him off and patted the cushion next to him. “Come over here, Severus, closer to me.”
“Nnnnoooo, I ah…I’m rather comfortable over here, thank you.” Severus moved farther back against the armrest where he’d been sitting on the other end of the couch.
“Severusssss, as the Headmaster of this school, I order you to sit here next to me.” Albus pat the cushion harder, and Severus thought he had also seen him pout.
Severus rolled his eyes and moved slowly next to Albus. He instantly placed his hands on his lap just in case. He wanted to make sure the only hands on his crotch that evening would be his own.
Albus immediately put his arm around Severus’ shoulder.
“I remember when you were a young boy, Severus.” Albus pat Severus’ knee with his free hand. “So shy, yet I could see in your eyes, you wanted so much to be liked. I was glad that a few of your fellow housemates befriended you.” Albus smiled as he remembered the thin, pale young man who had grown into the imposing figure of a Death Eater. “Not much different than the scared young man that came to me the night the Potters died.”
“I know,” whispered Severus as he remembered that evening. It was as though it happened yesterday. He’d heard about Voldemort’s plan to raid the Potters’ home. He desperately tried to get to the Potters with enough time to get them out of the home, but no sooner had Severus arrived than he heard the front door being blasted open. Lily pushed him into a closet, telling him to hide, yet she unknowingly tripped him and he hit his head against the back of the closet. When he woke up, all he heard was baby Harry crying in terror. He picked up the crying child and immediately Apparated him to Hagrid. He then made his way to Hogwarts, to give himself to the Order and help them anyway he could.
“I love you, Severus.”
Severus would later realize that it was whiplash he felt when he turned so fast towards Albus.
“What?” Severus felt his body stiffen. His mind was reeling. ‘Maybe I can tell the Ministry I had Albus under the Imperius Curse when he defended me. I can still get the Dementor’s Kiss.’ He backed away slowly, only to be held by Albus’s strong grip.
“All I wish for is to make you happy, Severus,” said Albus.
“Albus, I can assure you, I am quite happy.” Severus wondered if it would be against his contract to Obliviate the Headmaster.
“No, no no. You need companionship, and I want to give it to you.”
‘Kill, me. Someone please kill me now.’ Thought Severus.
“Severus, I never had children of my own. You are like a son to me. I want to see you happy. I have heard of a place called Club Med. It’s in the Bahamas.” Albus again patted Severus’ knee. “I know, I know you don’t much like the sun, but I have heard that many beautiful women go to this place. Take a holiday, have some fun, my boy. Meet some lovely women.”
“Oh, thank the gods!” moaned Severus in relief.
“There! You see, I knew you would be willing to go. And here Minerva said you would sooner kiss Hagrids hairy bottom. She owes me five galleons.” Albus stood. He swayed a bit, but once he got his bearings he walked towards the door. “Tomorrow I will bring you the brochures I received yesterday. You can leave after the yearly celebration.” Albus let out a belch that would have made Ron Weasley proud, then opened the door and walked out, leaving a still shocked Severus sitting on the couch.
“I need a drink,” Severus said as he stood and grabbed the firewhisky from the sideboard. Not bothering with a glass, he took one long swig straight from the bottle, vowing to put an identity charm on his door. Next time a drunken Albus came down to his rooms, he’d know better than to answer his door.
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Well, I'd say Severus deserves more than just a drink after that.
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter. I'll have more up soon.
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Very entertaining. Very funny as well .
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you.
OMG! I rolled at this chapter. The Ron incident where Severus kept catching Ron staring at him was funny, but this was unreal....
I laughed so hard. Thank you!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
that poor man, what tortureyou're putting him through!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, it was fun though. :)
this chapter gave me the giggles! Cant wait to continue!
I absolutely loved this story. Great job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I am quickly running out of things to say in my reviews without sounding like they are all cut and dried. This was a very cute little story. The varying secret romances going on were very entertaining.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you as always. It makes me happy to know others are enjoying my stories. It's very nice of you to go through them all.
I've read this before but needed a quick "pick me up" and this filled the bill perfectly. I just adore everything about this story - the humor, the "secrets", the wonderful characterizations of everyone, and the sweetness of it all. A true favorite. Don't know why it wasn't marked as such before now, but I'm correcting that oversight right now! ^.~Thanks so much for sharing the fun.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you. I always love hearing people read my stories to pick them up from a bad day. I wrote many of these stories to give people a smile, and something to laugh with
loved ron's insecurities! thanks
Haa Haa = Loved how Minerva took care of Albus and the part about Ron fainting was funny - good chapter.
Love it - Love it ... what a way to have them get together - so creative and so romantic.
Oh crap - hold my side - this was funny. I loved the part where he said that he was going to his room to oblivate himself - now he is off to the rose garden.
Oh man - this chapter was hysterical - I loved the whole thinking it was Albus part and the internal chant of just kill me - poor man - HAAAAAAA HAAAA.. sorry.
LOL - Ron must be terrified thinking that everyone must think he is a tosser. Poor guy - now he is going to have a complex.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
It's fun messing with Ron's mind. He's such an easy target.
Extremely sneaky - poor Severus thinking it is Ron and Ron dreading every minute of Hermione's assignment. Too funny.
Fantastic chapter - I read one of your stories - I had to come and read some others so I started with this one. What a neat way to enclose a spell with a kiss - fantastic and I can say that I have never read this one in fanfiction.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I hope you enjoy this story. I love adding comedy in my stories and I wanted to make something unique here.
Fantastic ending... I can see Lucius freaking out over his son's arrangement. I loved the story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks for reading the entire thing and leaving such wonderful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it all.
A very sweet story. I cheated--I started reading Your Secret Love at Owl and I wondered if you posted at Petulant. Of course I found the completed story here. Yeah! Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, yay then! I'm glad you liked it. I've got all of my stories here and they are all completed. I thought about posting this on the OWL site, but I read their faq's and I got the impression that they might frown upon that. Since I'm new there, I didn't want to press my luck.
If you read anything else, I'd love to know what you think.
Thanks for taking the time to come over here and read the entire story.
haha very funny
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I'm happy it gave you a laugh. I put Severus through a bit of abuse, but it was fun.
Hahaha I love the idea of secret love. I also like the idea of whispering wings, quite charming. Having Albus convince everyone to go to club med is bloody brillant. I also lurve the idea of all of Severus' close calls, or brushes with love (instead of death).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you for leaving such a lovely review. I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
I wrote this because I'd been reading so many stories that were just so dramatic. I felt the need to laugh and put Severus through some funny situations.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
I couldn't remember if i finished this. It was great to read again.
Happy New Year.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Happy New Year to you too!
I had fun writing this one. I felt bad putting Severus through all of that, but it really was enjoyable.
Aw, that was a cute ending. Very nice; the chapters were a bit short, but that was the style in which you were writing. It worked well for you. Good job.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwLovelyCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Hey, you read it on one shot. Thank you.I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Yeah Ron, everybody does. I like your characterisationCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, poor Ron.Thanks, I know I tend to veer slightly way from completely canon in my fics, but that's what fanfiction is for.
Hermione is rather Slytherin here. Manipulating poor Ron. Ha ha I like it stupid Ron bitten by Hagrid's pests erm pets. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Yeah, I think Hermione certainly has some Slytherin qualities in JKR's stories. I think she's pretty much a good mix of all of the houses actually.
Apart from the slight slashiness of the story I liked it and found it mostly funny!Especially Dumbledore becoming a travel agents for Wizards! That's hysterical!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I had to add the little bit of slashiness, just to be different.