The Second Suspect
Chapter 4 of 9
ancientgirlSeverus is on his way back from a bit of shopping and get?s another note.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR.
Thank you as always to June for all of her help and suggestions.
The Second Suspect
Two days after his incident with Ron, Severus found himself with yet another love note in his hands. This one had come to him in the form of Whispering Wings, a magical letter that was the opposite in volume of a Howler. He had been walking back from Hogsmeade, his arms full of potions supplies for his private lab, when he was suddenly accosted by a pair of reddish orange and golden wings that stopped in front of him. As they fluttered, he heard the sweetest voice whispering the most wonderful words.
Severus, my love,
Again I find myself lacking in courage. I had so wanted to say these words to you in person, but I cannot bring myself to look into your fathomless eyes. I have an onyx ring given to me by my great-grandmother; I find myself thinking of your beautiful dark eyes every time I see my ring. I gaze at the roses in the gardens at Hogwarts, and wonder if your lips are as soft as their petals. I long to kiss you, to hold you. I only hope that you will one day feel the same way about me. Yes, my love, we have met before. And I fear that I have not left a very good impression of myself. But I hope to change all of that. I ask only that you give me the opportunity to show you how much I love you.
As I cannot kiss you with my own lips, or hold you in my own arms, I once again give you my love in this small note.
I love you, Severus.
Your Secret Love
As with the previous note, he felt the soft caress of invisible lips upon his own; and this time a pair of invisible arms also wrapped themselves around him. The note disappeared on its own after its message and actions were received. Severus looked around him to make sure there was no one watching. He noticed he'd dropped a few packages on the ground, no doubt when he was being hugged. As he picked up his packages, Severus tried to figure out if he had ever heard the voice used in the Whispering Wings. But, he then remembered that one of the reasons they were used was for the sender to disguise his or her identity from the receiver. The voice was charmed to be non-recognizable. That made this particular way of communication easily used by secret lovers and often spies.
Severus sighed deeply as he made his way back to Hogwarts. After receiving the first note, he thought that it was perhaps just a joke. Now, he knew that whomever was sending these notes to him was serious, because a Whispering Wings note could only hide the sender's voice not their emotions.
Love was something he never thought would come into his life. As a youth, he did love a woman once, but she was in love with another man. While his love for Narcissa Black soon waned, he wondered what his life would have been like if she had chosen him instead of Lucius. Severus couldn't blame her for falling for his friend; Lucius was an attractive and outgoing young man, much the same as the man he grew into. Severus wondered if he would have had children, or if he would still have become a Death Eater. Then again, Lucius became one, so that argument didn't hold much water. He laughed to himself, thinking that no doubt his secret love was most probably some lovesick teenage girl. Deciding to put all thoughts of love out of his head, he continued his walk, wanting to get back to Hogwarts so that he would have enough time to put his ingredients away and read for a few hours before dinner.
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Back at the school, Neville was putting the finishing touches on a small bouquet of roses he was taking to his own secret love. He'd mustered enough courage to ask Madam Rosmerta to have tea with him that coming Saturday. Yes, she was older than him, but age didn't matter when one was in love. He also wanted to give her a present other than the roses he had grown, just for her. He decided the other day that a ring would be a wonderful gift for Rosmerta. Over the years, he'd noticed Hermione wearing an onyx ring on special occasions, although lately she'd been wearing it regularly; Neville thought the design of the ring was delicate, and he knew it would look lovely on Rosmerta's hand. He wanted to take it to Seamus Finnegan, who now had a small jewelry shop in Hogsmeade. Seamus could reproduce the ring with a different stone, as Neville remembered Rosmerta saying something about goldstone being her favorite; he thought it would be the perfect way to show her how much he cared for her.
Not wanting to lose Hermione's ring, Neville placed it on his pinky and took the small bouquet, then made his way out to the gates of the school. As he walked towards the gates, he noticed Professor Snape coming towards him with several packages. Neville steadied himself and tried not to be nervous. He wondered if he would ever be able to approach the man without looking like a bowl of jelly during an earthquake.
Severus drew nearer to the school and saw Neville coming towards him. His eyes grew wide as he noticed that Neville was holding what looked like a small bouquet of roses. As Neville got closer, Severus noticed a large onyx ring on the intern's finger, and he froze.
'Merlin's hairy arsehole, not Longbottom,' he thought, hoping to be struck down dead before he could hear Neville's words of devotion.
Both men stopped and eyed each other. Neither spoke for several very long moments.
"G...good afternoon, sir," Neville said nervously. He noticed Severus looking at his bouquet and quickly ducked it behind him.
"Mr. Longbottom," Severus said sharply. He looked at the ring on the intern's pinky finger and arched his brow. "That's an attractive ring. Is that an onyx?"
Neville's eyes became round as saucers. He slowly looked down at his own hand, and then looked up at Severus.
"Uh...I...I think it's, ah...yes. Onyx, sir."
"Interesting. I do not believe I ever noticed you wearing it when you were here at Hogwarts," stated Severus, hoping to get some kind of information from the young quivering man in front of him.
"Well, it's not mine." Neville stopped. 'Oh, no. I can't tell him it belongs to Hermione. She'll kill me,' he thought.
Severus breathed a sigh of relief. If the ring wasn't his, then that meant the roses weren't for him either; thus, Neville wasn't his secret love. It was all Severus could do to keep himself from jumping for joy.
"And whose. . . " Severus was stopped short by Neville's sudden outburst.
"I found it!" shouted Neville. "I'm sorry, I...I found it, sir. I was walking out of the castle and um...I found it on the ground."
Severus wondered if that was the same ring that belonged to his "secret love." It was too much of a coincidence.
"Mr. Longbottom, since you seem to be on your way out of the grounds, perhaps I can do you the favor of taking it to the Headmaster. I'm sure that whomever lost it will be looking for it. And since lost items usually find their way to the Headmaster's office, the ring's true owner will surely go there."
Neville felt the blood drain from his face. Snape was asking for the ring, for Hermione's ring. She would have a fit if she knew Snape had it. But there was no way he could refuse to hand the ring over to his ex-professor without good reason. Neville silently weighed the scales of his dilemma. Would he rather face an angry Hermione, or an angry Professor Snape? Well, that was easy. He pulled off the ring and handed it to Snape, and decided to make a hasty retreat.
"There you are, Professor; I'll just be going. Good luck finding the owner." Neville practically ran towards the gates, with the roses still in his hands. He would just ask Seamus to design something else for Madam Rosmerta.
Severus smiled as he held the ring in his hands. He would keep it in his pocket until he decided what he wanted to do about his situation. He wasn't sure if he wanted to know who this secret love of his was, especially since he apparently already knew the person and ... from what the Whispering Wings said ... he wasn't overly fond of them either.
"Great," he rolled his eyes and shook his head, "someone I can't stand is in love with me. Oh, how the gods do smile down at me." He mumbled and shook his head, "Piss on me is more like it." He then continued on his way back to the castle.
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And so Severus has yet another close call. I hope you ejoyed this chapter. Thank you all for reading this story so far.
Whispering Wings is something I came up with. I figured, there would have to be something in the wizarding world that was like a Howler, but not as loud.
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116 Reviews | 6.39/10 Average
Very entertaining. Very funny as well .
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you.
OMG! I rolled at this chapter. The Ron incident where Severus kept catching Ron staring at him was funny, but this was unreal....
I laughed so hard. Thank you!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
that poor man, what tortureyou're putting him through!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, it was fun though. :)
this chapter gave me the giggles! Cant wait to continue!
I absolutely loved this story. Great job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I am quickly running out of things to say in my reviews without sounding like they are all cut and dried. This was a very cute little story. The varying secret romances going on were very entertaining.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you as always. It makes me happy to know others are enjoying my stories. It's very nice of you to go through them all.
I've read this before but needed a quick "pick me up" and this filled the bill perfectly. I just adore everything about this story - the humor, the "secrets", the wonderful characterizations of everyone, and the sweetness of it all. A true favorite. Don't know why it wasn't marked as such before now, but I'm correcting that oversight right now! ^.~Thanks so much for sharing the fun.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you. I always love hearing people read my stories to pick them up from a bad day. I wrote many of these stories to give people a smile, and something to laugh with
loved ron's insecurities! thanks
Haa Haa = Loved how Minerva took care of Albus and the part about Ron fainting was funny - good chapter.
Love it - Love it ... what a way to have them get together - so creative and so romantic.
Oh crap - hold my side - this was funny. I loved the part where he said that he was going to his room to oblivate himself - now he is off to the rose garden.
Oh man - this chapter was hysterical - I loved the whole thinking it was Albus part and the internal chant of just kill me - poor man - HAAAAAAA HAAAA.. sorry.
LOL - Ron must be terrified thinking that everyone must think he is a tosser. Poor guy - now he is going to have a complex.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
It's fun messing with Ron's mind. He's such an easy target.
Extremely sneaky - poor Severus thinking it is Ron and Ron dreading every minute of Hermione's assignment. Too funny.
Fantastic chapter - I read one of your stories - I had to come and read some others so I started with this one. What a neat way to enclose a spell with a kiss - fantastic and I can say that I have never read this one in fanfiction.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I hope you enjoy this story. I love adding comedy in my stories and I wanted to make something unique here.
Fantastic ending... I can see Lucius freaking out over his son's arrangement. I loved the story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks for reading the entire thing and leaving such wonderful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it all.
A very sweet story. I cheated--I started reading Your Secret Love at Owl and I wondered if you posted at Petulant. Of course I found the completed story here. Yeah! Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, yay then! I'm glad you liked it. I've got all of my stories here and they are all completed. I thought about posting this on the OWL site, but I read their faq's and I got the impression that they might frown upon that. Since I'm new there, I didn't want to press my luck.
If you read anything else, I'd love to know what you think.
Thanks for taking the time to come over here and read the entire story.
haha very funny
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I'm happy it gave you a laugh. I put Severus through a bit of abuse, but it was fun.
Hahaha I love the idea of secret love. I also like the idea of whispering wings, quite charming. Having Albus convince everyone to go to club med is bloody brillant. I also lurve the idea of all of Severus' close calls, or brushes with love (instead of death).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you for leaving such a lovely review. I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
I wrote this because I'd been reading so many stories that were just so dramatic. I felt the need to laugh and put Severus through some funny situations.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
I couldn't remember if i finished this. It was great to read again.
Happy New Year.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Happy New Year to you too!
I had fun writing this one. I felt bad putting Severus through all of that, but it really was enjoyable.
Aw, that was a cute ending. Very nice; the chapters were a bit short, but that was the style in which you were writing. It worked well for you. Good job.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwLovelyCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Hey, you read it on one shot. Thank you.I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Yeah Ron, everybody does. I like your characterisationCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, poor Ron.Thanks, I know I tend to veer slightly way from completely canon in my fics, but that's what fanfiction is for.
Hermione is rather Slytherin here. Manipulating poor Ron. Ha ha I like it stupid Ron bitten by Hagrid's pests erm pets. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Yeah, I think Hermione certainly has some Slytherin qualities in JKR's stories. I think she's pretty much a good mix of all of the houses actually.
Apart from the slight slashiness of the story I liked it and found it mostly funny!Especially Dumbledore becoming a travel agents for Wizards! That's hysterical!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I had to add the little bit of slashiness, just to be different.