Not So Secret Anymore
Chapter 8 of 9
ancientgirlSeverus and Hermione make an appearance.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Not So Secret Anymore
Severus and Hermione sat in the Hogwarts rose garden for several minutes. They kissed a bit and talked a bit, and finally decided they should make an appearance as an official couple. They stood, and he offered her his arm, which she gladly took, and they walked out of the garden arm-in-arm. Being out in the chilly air, Hermione began to sneeze. She took out a light green handkerchief to wipe her nose, and Severus noticed it looked very familiar.
“Where did you get that?” he asked suspiciously. Realizing she had taken out his own handkerchief, she decided to tell him just how she came about getting it.
“Well,” she said as she bowed her head and looked at the piece of raw silk material, then looked into his dark eyes. “I asked Ron to get it for me from your rooms.”
Severus’ eyes grew wide at the thought of having the redhead in his personal space without his knowledge.
“Weasley was in my rooms?” he asked in disbelief. “And how did he manage that?” He stood in front of Hermione with his arms crossed imposingly.
Hermione sighed, hoping that things weren’t over with them before they had even begun.
“Draco gave me the combination of your wards.”
Instead of being angry and blowing up at her, Severus decided to take it as a compliment that she would want something of his that bad enough.
“I should be angry,” he said in his low waspish tone, “but the fact that you wanted something of mine with you — oddly enough, it makes me feel quite nice. My handkerchiefs were on my bed the day I caught him outside my rooms. At least I can feel relieved that Weasley didn’t go through my drawers.”
Hermione had to bite her tongue, as they continued to walk towards the Great Hall for the annual Victory over Voldemort ball. She didn’t dare tell Severus that after Ron came back from his assignment, it had taken her all afternoon to convince her friend that he was neither thought of as being a tosser, as he so eloquently put it, nor did his rummaging through Severus’ underwear drawer mean he had any deep seated infatuation with the Potions master.
Before they stepped through the doors of the Great Hall, Severus stopped them once again. He reached into the pocket on his frock coat, and took out the onyx ring he had taken from Neville and held it in front of her face. She smiled up at him, excited that her great-grandmother’s ring was not lost to her.
“My ring!” she cried, as she snatched it from his fingers. “How did you get this?” she asked, warily.
“I saw Mr. Longbottom with it. He said he found it on the ground. Since your Whispering Wings note said that you often looked at an onyx ring you had and often thought of my eyes, I thought I might perform a locator spell on this and find just who my secret love really was.” He looked into her own lovely brown eyes and smiled. “I wasn’t sure if I wanted to know who had been writing me all of those notes. I am glad it was you that took the first step and revealed yourself to me.”
“Are you saying you were afraid?” asked Hermione teasingly.
“Not afraid, just wary,” he chuckled. “I have to admit, there were times when I thought almost anyone could have been writing those notes.”
Hermione laughed. “Oh, no!” She pictured Severus looking at everyone with suspicion, thinking that a look from just about anybody was a declaration of love and lust. They walked though the Great Hall doors, both laughing and smiling.
As they walked towards the far end of the hall and towards the food and drinks tables, all eyes were on them. Hermione smiled as Severus scowled at the attention. Ron, who was standing next to Luna, immediately put his arm around her as his friend and former Potions professor walked by. He made sure to kiss Luna soundly as Severus passed in front of them. Severus rolled his eyes and suggested they get a room, then made sure to point out to Ron that he had reset the wards to his own rooms. Ron promptly fainted.
Neville, who had been dancing with Rosmerta, tried to blend in with the rest of the guests. However, Rosmerta and Severus had been friends for years, so she made it a point to say hello to both Severus and Hermione.
“Severus, wonderful to see you.” Rosmerta smiled as Severus took her hand and bowed. “Miss Granger, I haven’t seen you in some time. It’s lovely to see you as well.”
Hermione smiled.
“Rosmerta, you are looking lovely as always,” said Severus, and then he looked towards Neville. He’d always thought the young man was totally inept at many things. But he had to admit, any man who could capture the attention of a pretty woman like Rosmerta deserved a bit of respect. “Neville.”
“Hello, sir.” Neville smiled, and seemed to stand up a little straighter.
Rosmerta squeezed her date’s hand, and they walked away towards the dance floor once again.
“I’m so happy Neville finally got the courage to ask her out,” said Hermione.
“You know, for Gryffindors, you two seemed a bit lacking in courage, wouldn’t you say?” Severus decided he’d do a bit of teasing. After all, she deserved it because of the many close calls he’d had during the last few weeks.
She pursed her lips and lightly swatted him on the arm.
Out of the corner of his eye, he noticed the Headmaster approaching them. He groaned inwardly, not knowing if the old man was sober or halfway to happy town by now.
“Severussss, there you both are.” Albus swayed towards the couple. “Ah, and Hermione is here as well.”
Severus sighed and drank down his cup of spiked pumpkin juice in one gulp. Happy town it is.
“Good evening, Headmaster,” said Hermione.
“You know, I’m glad I found you and my boys, Severussss, here. There is something I would like to discuss with you all.” Albus reached into his robes and took out several pamphlets.
“ALBUS!” shrieked Minerva from behind. The older witch walked quickly toward the old man and immediately grabbed the items from his hands. “Will you stop trying to get people to take those damnable holidays.” She threw the pamphlets in the air, and with a flick of her wand they burst into flames. She then looked to Severus and Hermione, who had been standing with shocked expressions. “When I find out who talked him into this idiotic pyramid scheme, I’ll turn the fool into a roll of toilet paper and put them in Hagrid’s hut.” With that, Minerva grabbed Albus and shoved him towards the back of the Great Hall.
Severus and Hermione looked at each other and burst out laughing. They wondered how many poor souls Albus had cornered that evening before Minerva finally found him.
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I'll have the last one up tomorrow.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Your Secret Love
116 Reviews | 6.39/10 Average
Very entertaining. Very funny as well .
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you.
OMG! I rolled at this chapter. The Ron incident where Severus kept catching Ron staring at him was funny, but this was unreal....
I laughed so hard. Thank you!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank YOU, for reading it! I'm happy it made you laugh!
that poor man, what tortureyou're putting him through!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, it was fun though. :)
this chapter gave me the giggles! Cant wait to continue!
I absolutely loved this story. Great job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I am quickly running out of things to say in my reviews without sounding like they are all cut and dried. This was a very cute little story. The varying secret romances going on were very entertaining.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you as always. It makes me happy to know others are enjoying my stories. It's very nice of you to go through them all.
I've read this before but needed a quick "pick me up" and this filled the bill perfectly. I just adore everything about this story - the humor, the "secrets", the wonderful characterizations of everyone, and the sweetness of it all. A true favorite. Don't know why it wasn't marked as such before now, but I'm correcting that oversight right now! ^.~Thanks so much for sharing the fun.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you. I always love hearing people read my stories to pick them up from a bad day. I wrote many of these stories to give people a smile, and something to laugh with
loved ron's insecurities! thanks
Haa Haa = Loved how Minerva took care of Albus and the part about Ron fainting was funny - good chapter.
Love it - Love it ... what a way to have them get together - so creative and so romantic.
Oh crap - hold my side - this was funny. I loved the part where he said that he was going to his room to oblivate himself - now he is off to the rose garden.
Oh man - this chapter was hysterical - I loved the whole thinking it was Albus part and the internal chant of just kill me - poor man - HAAAAAAA HAAAA.. sorry.
LOL - Ron must be terrified thinking that everyone must think he is a tosser. Poor guy - now he is going to have a complex.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
It's fun messing with Ron's mind. He's such an easy target.
Extremely sneaky - poor Severus thinking it is Ron and Ron dreading every minute of Hermione's assignment. Too funny.
Fantastic chapter - I read one of your stories - I had to come and read some others so I started with this one. What a neat way to enclose a spell with a kiss - fantastic and I can say that I have never read this one in fanfiction.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I hope you enjoy this story. I love adding comedy in my stories and I wanted to make something unique here.
Fantastic ending... I can see Lucius freaking out over his son's arrangement. I loved the story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks for reading the entire thing and leaving such wonderful reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed it all.
A very sweet story. I cheated--I started reading Your Secret Love at Owl and I wondered if you posted at Petulant. Of course I found the completed story here. Yeah! Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, yay then! I'm glad you liked it. I've got all of my stories here and they are all completed. I thought about posting this on the OWL site, but I read their faq's and I got the impression that they might frown upon that. Since I'm new there, I didn't want to press my luck.
If you read anything else, I'd love to know what you think.
Thanks for taking the time to come over here and read the entire story.
haha very funny
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
I'm happy it gave you a laugh. I put Severus through a bit of abuse, but it was fun.
Hahaha I love the idea of secret love. I also like the idea of whispering wings, quite charming. Having Albus convince everyone to go to club med is bloody brillant. I also lurve the idea of all of Severus' close calls, or brushes with love (instead of death).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thank you for leaving such a lovely review. I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
I wrote this because I'd been reading so many stories that were just so dramatic. I felt the need to laugh and put Severus through some funny situations.
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
I couldn't remember if i finished this. It was great to read again.
Happy New Year.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Happy New Year to you too!
I had fun writing this one. I felt bad putting Severus through all of that, but it really was enjoyable.
Aw, that was a cute ending. Very nice; the chapters were a bit short, but that was the style in which you were writing. It worked well for you. Good job.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwLovelyCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Hey, you read it on one shot. Thank you.I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Yeah Ron, everybody does. I like your characterisationCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
LOL, poor Ron.Thanks, I know I tend to veer slightly way from completely canon in my fics, but that's what fanfiction is for.
Hermione is rather Slytherin here. Manipulating poor Ron. Ha ha I like it stupid Ron bitten by Hagrid's pests erm pets. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Yeah, I think Hermione certainly has some Slytherin qualities in JKR's stories. I think she's pretty much a good mix of all of the houses actually.
Apart from the slight slashiness of the story I liked it and found it mostly funny!Especially Dumbledore becoming a travel agents for Wizards! That's hysterical!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I had to add the little bit of slashiness, just to be different.