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Potions Under Duress Your Secret Love
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Your Secret Love

1: The Beginning

2: The First Suspect

3: Ron's Assignment

4: The Second Suspect

5: The Third Suspect

6: When Obsessions Collide

7: The Rose Garden

8: Not So Secret Anymore

9: Can You Love Me

Your Secret Love

ancientgirl

116 Reviews   |   116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 89 Favorites )

Humor Romance Potions Under Duress 11,569 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

*COMPLETE* Professor Snape has a secret admirer. The only problem is, everyone seems to be a suspect.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Chapter 2: The First Suspect

Chapter 3: Ron's Assignment

Chapter 4: The Second Suspect

Chapter 5: The Third Suspect

Chapter 6: When Obsessions Collide

Chapter 7: The Rose Garden

Chapter 8: Not So Secret Anymore

Chapter 9: Can You Love Me


About ancientgirl

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ancientgirl

Member Since 2005  |  28 Stories  |  Favorited by 403  |  269 Reviews Written  |  1,741 Review Responses

Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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http://wickedcats.wordpress.com/

Reviews for Your Secret Love

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10/10

Satai Delenn

Ok. I must be extremely hormonal lately. I usually don't cry when I watch or read stuff and this had the tears free falling. What the hell is wrong with me?Can't wait till Friday now!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I have moments like that too.  It happened to me yesterday reading a story.I'm glad you liked it though.

0/10

KiraAlexia

Awww. How Sweet

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

After all that, I thought maybe a bit if fluffy sweetness might have been due.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

It's great! Thank you for posting. I thought they'd miss each other for a minute! lol

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

They were very close to missing each other, but her one last look back gave them both a chance.Two more chapters to go on this.

10/10

pickles

Thank you for a wonderful story..  It is wonderful..  I thought the last chapter the letters might get mixed up.  did hermione tell the owl to deliver it to snape...  i thought owls automatically new where the letter was to go...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I went with the Hermione telling the owl to take it to Snape.  I wasn't sure if owls automatically know who the letter is for.  For my purpose though it would not have worked that way, so I had a do it this way.  LOL, I couldn't figure out any other way to get the letters to them mixed up, short of having them asking someone else to do it and that person mixing them up.

0/10

GinnyW

Awwwwww, so very sweet.  :-)  ~Gin

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'd hoped it wasn't too mushy, considering how the story had been going. But a bit of mush was due.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

Yay, more chapters~  ~Lotm

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yep, just two more left.

10/10

MagicAlly

"like a bat out of hell" - priceless LOL, my favourite bit, well apart from the ending of course which is magical <sigh>.  Briiliant as always and I'm looking forward to the rest.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, when I had him running, I couldn't resist adding that bat out of hell part.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

10/10

Satai Delenn

Oh gods! lol! I know it was just incredibly obvious what was going to happen the moment you mentioned letters and then Harry, but it was still hilarious! lol. Poor Severus! lol. But at least now this means that Severus and Hermione will get together in the next chapter, right? I mean, you're not going to have her get upset that he didn't show and have her think he rejected her are you? Oh please! I hope not!!!!!

Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)

Oh, and again, not a real response. Just waving to Southern_Witch again! Hi! lol.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, you could totally tell what would happen, but it was fun.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. 

0/10

KiraAlexia

Hilarious Poor Snape... Hopefully all will turn out well

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yes, but he's had to go through quite a biit the poor guy.Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.

0/10

Hermione Snape

I hope you can update soon. I've been enjoying this so far..poor Severus! Can't wait to hear what he says to Hermione.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'll have a bit more if not tomorrow certainly by Thursday.I'm glad you have enjoyed this so far.

0/10

Anijade

oh I just love that! that and the 3 some how yummyTongue out

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Well, I like Draco/Ginny.  I've written them as being a couple in some of my own fics, and I also love Harry and Ginny, so hey why not have them all together?

10/10

GinnyW

HA HA HA! Oh, what a lovely threesome. I was shocked when Miss Ginny made her appearance. LOL! Too funny. Hmmmm...  I wonder what he'll say to Hermione. :-) 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I'd hoped that would be a nice little surprise.  I'm glad you liked that.I'll have more up soon, and you will see just what both Hermione and Severus have to say about all of this.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Hahaha! Oh but I liked this chapter. When I saw the note from Harry, I said, "What in the world?" Hell, I thought he was wanting Snape, too! Hahaha! Poor Hermione. I wonder if she's still there. And my my... Snape running for her, eh? Is it the relief that it is indeed a woman, or has our man been pining for her anyway? lol

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I think Severus running is a bit of both.  After all of these misunderstandings, he's happy it IS a woman after all that's been sending him the notes.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

P.S., I just realized why your confusioni.  I didn't mean for the note to have Severus' name on it.  Whew, thank goodness I was able to fix it early, thanks to your review.southern_witch_69's response: lol! Cool! I wondered how that happened and just figured some "magic" had occurred. I like the hp/gw/dm by the way.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I like HP/GW/DM too.  I can't figure out sometimes which I like better, Harry/Ginny or Draco/Ginny.  I like both.

10/10

MagicAlly

Hurry up Sev, run faster or is that Ancientgirl write faster - got to know what happens next.  Love the set up in this chapter.  Brilliant as always. Thanks.Surprised

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Ack!  He's getting there as fast as he can.  Poor Severus!  Its hard to run while trying to look dignified.I'll have more up soon.

0/10

KiraAlexia

Poor Snape he really does need a vacation after dealing w/Albus.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Especially after THAT scare.

10/10

Satai Delenn

“I need a drink,” Or two or three I'd say!LMFAO! This story just gets more and more hilarious! And here I was thinking that Albus was just coming to get the ring so he could give it back to Hermione! lol. Silly me!I started laughing soon after and couldn't stop until just now. Gods! My sides are hurting from laughing so hard! I am positive my neighbors could here me (and I live in a single family home, so no "common walls" and probably now think me more insane than they originally imagined! lol.I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, well I'm glad you gave you a good laugh and that your neighbors didn't call the paddy wagon for you.I'll have another chapter up soon.I'm happy you are still enjoying this.

Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)

Sorry, not a real response, just waving hand vigorously at SouthernWitch! HI!!!! *waves hand vigorously* lol. :)

0/10

Shishkeberry

Oh goodness, that was just hilarious and awful...but mostly hilarious!  Thanks for the laugh.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, imagine the prospect of having Albus in love with you.  *shivers*I'm glad I made you laugh, I had hoped this story would make people feel good.

0/10

Horserider

Oh gawd, I don't normally like the humourous stuff, but this is a hoot! :D More soon please! ~HR

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I don't normally like things that make humiliate Snape, but I do like stories in which funny things happen to him.  I like his reactions.I'm glad you are anjoying this. 

0/10

Titania Snape

LOL!  Hagrid's hairy arse!  LOL!  Live long and prosper, Titania

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Can you imagine how hairy that ass is?I'm glad you are enjoying this.

0/10

Anijade

oh that was just too funny almost as funny as the idea of Snape at Club Med

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I can't picture him havine fun in the sun, at all.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

hahaha! That was fricking funny! Thank the gods! ~snicker~ I wonder, does Hermione know where her ring is now? Teehee!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I think he was more relieved after this one than with Ron and Neville.Hermione's ring will resurface once again, soon.Thanks for reading!

0/10

GinnyW

I missed a chapter... how did I do that? LOL! They were both great, though. Hmmmm... there isn't a charm that he can cast on the onyx ring to find out who it belongs to?Is Snape really going to take a trip to the Bahamas? Maybe with a bushy-haired Gryffindor on his arm? :-)More soon, please! ~Gin

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yeah, there is a charm, but I think he's sort of wary about it at this point.  I do address that though in a chapter I haven't posted yet.Hmm...I don't think the Bahamas are Sev's style.  Maybe something a bit colder so that he can snuggle up to someone.  I'll have more up soon.Thanks for reading.

9/10

DawnEB

*snigger* The best chapter yet :)

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I had fun writing it.

9/10

Alexa Potion

Oh no, now its Albus' turn!

You make so many surprises!

But now I want to know will Severus and Hermione have their own scene soon or will be there more scary moments for Severus. I bet its Harry's turn next to scare the Potions master that he could have so feelings for him! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, you are good a guessing aren't you?I should have more up tomorrow or the next day.  I'm getting ready to write the final chapter this evening.

Response from Alexa Potion (Reviewer)

Hurray! I can't wait!!

10/10

Alexa Potion

Wow! Very clever idea indeed, that this Whispering Wings note could only hide the sender’s voice but the sender's emotions are real!

Oh, you're killing me to laugh! Severus almost thought that Neville will propose him! Sealed

How many there will be these close calls? Does Hermione reveal that its her or will Severus find out that himself?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Unfortunately, poor Severus will have to suffer a few more close ones.  I'm glad you liked the Whispering Wings.  I think it would be neat to be able to really do that.

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