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Potions Under Duress Your Secret Love
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Your Secret Love

1: The Beginning

2: The First Suspect

3: Ron's Assignment

4: The Second Suspect

5: The Third Suspect

6: When Obsessions Collide

7: The Rose Garden

8: Not So Secret Anymore

9: Can You Love Me

Your Secret Love

ancientgirl

116 Reviews   |   116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 89 Favorites )

Humor Romance Potions Under Duress 11,569 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

*COMPLETE* Professor Snape has a secret admirer. The only problem is, everyone seems to be a suspect.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: The Beginning

Chapter 2: The First Suspect

Chapter 3: Ron's Assignment

Chapter 4: The Second Suspect

Chapter 5: The Third Suspect

Chapter 6: When Obsessions Collide

Chapter 7: The Rose Garden

Chapter 8: Not So Secret Anymore

Chapter 9: Can You Love Me


About ancientgirl

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ancientgirl

Member Since 2005  |  28 Stories  |  Favorited by 403  |  269 Reviews Written  |  1,741 Review Responses

Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

Author Website
http://wickedcats.wordpress.com/

Reviews for Your Secret Love

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8/10

Maddy Riddle

Awww the story is so sweet. I was in need of a fluffy story, there's too much angst going around with this pairing. I like it.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I totally agree with you on the angst.  I was in need of fluff too, so I figured I should write it since there was so little to be found.  I just don't get why people feel the need to write so much angst with them.Thank you for taking the time to read this and review it.I appreciate your comments.

10/10

Trins

Ok, so i am absolutley fascinated with your Fan Fics, i have never laughed so hard in my life, this was yet again another briliant story.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thank you.  I'm glad you have been enjoying them.I appreciate you taking the time to read them and review them.

10/10

indigo_nightowl

Ah! Too funny! I've read a lot of fanfic and this has to be one of the funniest ever. I think even my neighbours heard me laughing. My favourite bit was the scene with Dumbledore. You write very believable 'misunderstandings'. Keep on writing comedy!!!Veronica

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thank you.  I love writing comedy and I'm very happy I made you laugh.  I appreciate you taking the time to read this and review.

10/10

KarenDetroit

Very charming, sweet and just what the doctor ordered.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for taking the time to read it and review.

0/10

aturia

Very funny and cute story! It made me smile.Smile

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad it made you smile.  That was my reason for writing it, to bring some laughter and fluffiness to this time of year.Thank you for taking the time to read this and review.

0/10

GinnyW

Hehehehe. I'm a couple of days late. Sorry, had to catch-up. This was a very sweet story, I enjoyed it. Perfect for the holidays! Thanks for posting! ~Gin

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you were able to finish it and that you enjoyed it.  Hopefully I can think of something a bit more Christmas like soon.

0/10

Satai Delenn

Very cute!Thank you AncientGirl!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

You are welcome.  I'm very happy you enjoyed this.

10/10

Satai Delenn

Argh! I never got an update for this chapter! Nor for the next one! What happened?!Cute chapter. I like that Ron fainted. That was funny!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

You know, I don't get updates either for chapters.  It must be a small glitch.  LOL, I've got one more little tidbit for Ron.

0/10

KiraAlexia

What a warm & fluffy good story. I enjoyed it  much

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I wanted to give the warm and fuzzies. 

10/10

pickles

wonderful story... by any chance are you working for club med and giving out winter blues discounts??? lol

 Happy Holidays.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I wish!  I think I could make some killer bucks on some of you snowbirds.I'm glad you liked this.  You have a wonderful holiday yourself.Laughing

10/10

DarkLove

LOL!!! OMG! I can't stop laughing. This whole story was GREAT! I love what happened to Harry, Draco and Giny. And I love the story for Snape and Hermione. Thank you for filling my past day's with laughter.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm so happy I could bring some laughter to you.  I had hoped to do this when writing this story.We need some funny stories around, especially for these holidays.I appreciate you taking the time to read this and review it.

10/10

Arachnae

I loved it!!!! More humorous stories! More I say!! lol

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm very happy you enjoyed this.  I love writing funny stories, as I have little taste for too angsty stories.Thank you for taking the time to read this.

0/10

Arachnae

ROFLMAO!!!!!

0/10

Arachnae

*squeaks* OMG!!! I felt my heart racing there for a minute!!lol

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yep, he almost got caught.

0/10

Arachnae

OMG!!! This is just too rich!! ROFLMAO!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Hey, I'm glad you like it so far.  I'd written this to give us all a nice laugh.

10/10

Alexa Potion

Luckily you didn't make Severus answers to Hermione's question right a way, it's more Severus character to think thoroughly his decosions.

It was nice to know what happened the other pairs. Ron was a great person, I specially liked much about his consern's that maybe he's a little attracted to Severus even he's a married man with children. Its so hilarious!!

Hermione's and Severus' affair ended pretty well too!

Do you tell how Albus ended up to offer these holidays? Does he get a provision from it? Do you write a sequel about that or a different story? 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I didn't want him to be in love with her right away either.  He's never really thought about her that way, so saying he loved her immediately just didn't make sense to me.  I see Ron as a worry wart.  Somebody who might always be thinking what people think, or just thinking something he does means something else.  LOL, I can really see him wondering all those years in the future if his rummaging through Severus' drawers meant anything.I hadn't planned on doing anything further with Albus.  I figured I'd just leave him trying to sell those vacations.

10/10

Alexa Potion

Oh, Severus! Will you give a detention for plotting to get your personal stuff? Embarassed *looking innocently*

Laughing Ron tried to so hard to convince to Severus that he isn't a tosser!

I simply love Albus when he's drunk a little bit!

Oh, you had a one more chapter! I must to see it now!!  

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I loved writing Albus drunk, almost as much as I loved writing Ron wondering about his sexual orientation.

10/10

Alexa Potion

Laughing A bat out of hell! Laughing

I almost believed that she left from the garden! But she saw him!!

This was a good ending for this chapter. I can't wait to read the rest of them!

You're a damn good writer!! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.Thank you for the wonderful compliment.

10/10

MagicAlly

Wonderful, all's well that ends well.  I really enjoyed the light and humerous style.  Brilliant writing as always.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you enjoyed this.  I had fun writing it.  I needed to write something light.  I was writing sad for a while, the this and the story before were light and funny.  It's the holidays, we need to laugh a bit.Thanks for taking the time to read this.Who knows, maybe I'll come up with something for Christmas.

Response from MagicAlly (Reviewer)

I really hope you get inspiration for Christmas.  All the best.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Well, I'm actually thinking out an idea for a more Christmas themed story.  Hopefully I can work it out soon and have something to post.Laughing

10/10

Alexa Potion

Aha! So Neville didn't tell Hermione that he had to give the ring to Severus, he's a wise man because I believe that Hermione would have hexed him!

Laughing  Hihihihihi! Severus got Harry's letter! OMG! He thinks that Harry fell in love his sarcastic humour!!

Wow! Harry had fun with Ginny and DRACO!

How long has Hermione waited Severus? It's terrible to wait to someone and then it seems that he wouldn't arrive. Hurry Severus!! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Well I figure she must have been in that garden over half an hour, maybe an hour.Yeah, he really didn't like the fact Harry was in love with him.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

Club Med!  Club Med!  Club Med!  (hastily hides brochures, also bag of lemon sherbert bribes for a certain bearded underling)  Um, did I say 'Club Med'?  I meant to say...erm...Not Bad!  Not Bad!  Not Bad!  (Or was that, 'Not Bed'?);-DLol, this was delightful!  More stories, please!~Lotm

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

LOL, I'm thinking no one was safe from Albus.I'm glad you liked this.  I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

What a great ending! Hahaha. I'm still giggling about Ron. And you know, the trio bit,  I do like that. naughty!Southern, eh? hehe Thanks for posting, dear!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

I'm glad you liked the ending.  I couldn't resist the bit about Ron.  I appreciate you having taken the time to read this.

10/10

MagicAlly

Just lovely, I wonder whether the other 3 will make it down for the ball? he he.  Looking forward to the last one.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yep, they do and Severus of course takes the opportunity to make them blush.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yep, they do and Severus of course takes the opportunity to make them blush.

10/10

pickles

Fantastic!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.Laughing

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

hahaha! Too funny! Pyramid schemes even in the Wizarding world, eh? haha! I'm glad they are getting on well.Laughing

Response from ancientgirl (Author of Your Secret Love)

Yes, and leave it to Dumbledore to try to get in on it.

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