Chapter 5: The Plan
Chapter 5 of 23
Sirius Girl 08Disclaimer: Nope, still not mine.
Author's Notes: Again, a huge thank you to DracoGurlFurever for beta reading this and making it presentable. Also, thank you to freeluciusnow21, who has left me a review on nearly all the chapters posted so far - I'm so glad you are enjoying the story, and your reviews really inspire me to keep going. To everyone else who is reading, thank you to you too, and if you would like to leave a review, then I would love to hear from you. And now, on with the next chapter.
Chapter 5: The Plan
The group of Gryffindors had made their way directly to Gryffindor Tower after their run-in with the Slytherins. The boys had then immediately headed up to their dormitory, leaving the group of girls in the safety of the common room. Sirius was barely managing to contain the anger that he was currently feeling after the confrontation; as soon as he reached their room, his tenuous control snapped.
'Can you believe the nerve of them?' Sirius shouted, kicking his trunk forcibly. The impact was such that it made the open top fall down and close with a loud and, Sirius felt, satisfying thud.
'I know. Where do they get off calling Lily that?' Peter agreed, his voice showing that he was just as angry as Sirius.
'Yes, but did you notice her reaction?' Remus asked, sounding calmer than the other boys. Sirius was pacing the room and flexing both his hands into fists in an effort to work off the adrenalin that was coursing through his veins. He turned his attention to James, who was sat on the end of his bed, staring into space.
'Prongs are you all right?' Sirius asked.
'Huh? Yeah, I'm fine,' James replied, trying to sound normal and waving his hand in dismissal. However, James continued to stare into space, and there were several minutes of silence before he finally spoke again. 'Please tell me that I didn't imagine her thanking me. I mean, that really happened, right?'
Sirius paused his pacing and took a minute to think. In truth, he was so enraged by what had been said that he hadn't really taken stock of everything else that had happened. He replayed the events quickly in his head.
'No, mate, you didn't. For once in your life, as far as Lily is concerned, I think you did the right thing,' Remus said warmly.
James let out a sigh and smiled as he fell backwards onto his bed.
Now, it was Sirius's turn to feel confused. After thinking about what had happened, he was confused by Sophia's actions. Well, no, that wasn't right. Her actions had been quite straightforward, but the meaning behind those actions and his response to her were what was puzzling him.
For the last few weeks, since the beginning of term, they had gotten to know each other really well during their shared free periods. In fact, Sirius would bet that he had learnt more about her in this short space of time than he had since they had come to Hogwarts five years ago. She had become more comfortable in his presence, and he felt like he was finally getting to know the real Sophia. He looked forward to his time with her, which was unusual for him he never really looked forward to spending time with anyone other than the Marauders.
Yet, it was the way she had looked at him today that had really thrown him. As he played that picture back over in his mind, he tried to work out what he had seen in her face. There had been fear, definitely, and a pleading in her eyes, but there had also been more something he couldn't put his finger on. Whatever it had been, though, he had felt compelled to respond to it. He'd never backed down from a duel in his life especially not when his brother or Snape were involved but somehow she had made him do exactly that. Okay, so, technically it had been seeing James lowering his wand after Lily's pleading that had made him lower his own wand, but Sophia had made him stop and think, and that was something of an achievement in itself. He began to wonder what had really motivated her to do what she did and, probably more importantly, why he'd listened to her.
Throwing himself on top of his bed, he stretched out and looked up at the canopy overhead. The room had grown quiet, and Sirius allowed himself to really analyse his thoughts about Sophia. He thought about the last free period they had spent together, which had been the day before. Just like every other time, they had had their books out, but they had done very little work.
He felt his lips curl up into a smile as he remembered her reading a story she had found in the Daily Prophet that had proclaimed that drinking beetroot juice increased a person's stamina. He'd initially misunderstood exactly what she had meant by 'stamina', which had resulted in Sophia turning pink and stuttering, before he realised she meant stamina whilst exercising, and they had both then collapsed into fits of laughter.
He let his mind fixate on the image of her from yesterday her smile wide as she chuckled, her blue eyes dancing with mirth. In that moment, she had been completely carefree and joyous, and it had allowed him to feel the same. 'She's pretty when she laughs,' he thought to himself.
Then, another image came unbidden into his mind; it, too, was from the day before. It had occurred shortly before they had packed up to go to lunch. Sophia had been working like a good student, doing her homework, but he had wanted her attention on himself. Thinking the logical way to get her attention was to stop her from working, he'd swiped the book she had been copying from. Sophia had been frustrated with him, but not overly so, because she hadn't been able to maintain her straight face as she tried to chastise him.
He'd waved the book backwards and forwards in front of her, always just keeping it out of her reach. That was, until she'd done the unexpected. They had been sitting side by side on this occasion, and in her desperate attempts to get her book back, she had launched herself at him, ending up almost sitting in his lap. He'd been so stunned by her movements that he'd lost focus, and she had been victorious in re-claiming her book. Thinking about those brief seconds again, he decided that there were definitely worse things in the world than having a lapful of Sophia.
He tried to think back over previous conversations with her in an attempt to pick up any sign that she was attracted to him. She would definitely blush whenever he paid her a compliment, which, he guessed, could be a good sign, but after ten minutes of thinking, that was all he could come up with. The problem, he decided, was that she was only just starting to come out of herself around him. He realised figuring Sophia out was going to be a challenge, and he wasn't about to turn one down. A true Marauders' smile graced his features as he set about devising a plan that would help him in his pursuit of Sophia.
As Thursday dawned, Sirius was prepared to put his plan into action. It was really quite simple his primary objective for today was to simply try to work out if she was attracted to him or not. He would start by being his most charming self, enquiring about how she felt after the events of the night before. Girls liked guys who showed an interest in their feelings, or so he'd been told. He figured now would be a good time to find out if there was any truth in that statement. Once he'd (hopefully) confirmed that she was attracted to him, he would take it from there.
Normally, after his Charms class with Sophia, he would meet with Peter and James for their shared free period, but today he told them that he was going to spend it with Sophia working on their Charms essay. It shouldn't be too hard to persuade her to spend that time with him; he knew Lily was in History of Magic with Remus. The actual class was quite straightforward, with Flitwick giving a lesson on the theory behind the Patronus charm. Sirius's mind, therefore, drifted to the girl who sat next to him and what he was going to say during the next three quarters of an hour. When the bell rang, his plan was put into action.
'Say, Sophia, don't suppose you want to work on this Charms essay now, do you?' he asked, giving her one of his dazzling smiles that had served him so well over the years.
'I suppose we could, yes. You're not meeting Peter and James, then?' She concentrated on packing up her bag.
'No I think they're working on their Astronomy charts or something. Shall we go to the common room?' He held out his arm for her to take and kept the smile in place. Sophia eyed him suspiciously before tentatively linking arms with him.
Once up in the common room, they took their usual seats across from one another, and both pulled out their Charms books, though Sirius hoped they wouldn't spend too much time looking at them.
'So, how are you today after what happened last night?' he asked, hoping his voice conveyed the right mix of sincerity and concern.
'Me? I'm fine, thanks.' Sophia looked up from her book, giving him a warm smile.
Sirius returned the smile, but he was a bit disappointed at her response. It hadn't left him much room to expand the topic and draw her into conversation. Then, a new idea came into his head. Perhaps he could steer her in the right direction if he brought up Lily and James.
'It was a bit weird though, wasn't it? I mean, that whole thing between Lily and James. Has she said anything about that to you?' Sirius fiddled with his quill whilst scrutinising her face.
'No, she hasn't, and I've not brought it up with her. With Lily, you have to let her bring things up when she's ready.'
'Hmm ... I see.' Sirius stroked his chin with his quill, wondering what his next move should be.
'Sirius, did James put you up to this?' Sophia asked softly, pulling him out of his thoughts.
'What? No, why do you think that?' He was now panicking slightly.
'Well, the questions about Lily, I wondered if maybe James had asked you to talk to me about her or something.' Sophia shrugged and turned her attention to her Charms book again.
'Bugger! That wasn't supposed to happen,' he thought to himself. He desperately tried to get back on track again. 'So, you sure you're okay then after yesterday?'
She looked at him, utterly confused, and paused for a moment before answering. 'Yeah ... I'm fine ... Are you okay?' She spoke slowly, as if talking to a three year old, and raised an eyebrow at him.
'No, yeah, I'm fine,' Sirius said dismissively. 'Why does she have to make this so bloody difficult?' he thought to himself. 'Right, time to change tactics.' This would be a risk, as it might anger her, but he was running out of other ideas.
'Can I ask you something?'
'You just did,' she replied with a smile, to which he rolled his eyes in exasperation. 'Of course you can what's up?' She put her quill down and leant across the desk to him.
'Well, if, as you insist, there is nothing going on between you and Remus, can I ask why not?'
She gave a sigh, and looked slightly annoyed, as she leant back against her seat and crossed her arms. 'I thought you wanted to talk about something serious.'
'This is serious. I'm genuinely puzzled, and I want to understand what is going on between you two. You sneak off together, and neither of you will tell us what you're doing.' He gave her a look which he hoped would show her that he was being serious.
She seemed to consider her answer for a moment before she spoke again. 'Well, there is nothing going on between us, and I don't think there ever will be anything between us. We are just very good friends, and that's it. When we 'sneak' off, as you put it, we really are just talking.'
'What do you talk about?'
'I don't know ... just things. I guess I can talk to Remus about stuff that I couldn't talk to Lily or the other girls about.' Sirius seemed bemused by this explanation, so she continued. 'Okay, let's see how I can explain this better. All right, let's say that I have a problem that I need a guy's perspective on it I'll talk to Remus about it. Likewise, if he needs a girl's perspective on something, he'll come to me. We can tell each other anything.'
'Hmm ... so if you are that close, why are you so sure that nothing will happen?'
'Simply because neither of us feels that way about each other,' she replied matter-of-factly, and Sirius was pretty sure that she was telling the truth.
'All right, I can accept that. So, do you have your eye on anyone else then?' He gave her a cheeky grin and waited for an answer.
'Um ... no ... not at the moment,' she replied, but Sirius noticed the slightly pink colour to her cheeks and the fact that she looked at her books as she answered. He smiled smugly to himself and settled down to work. He had all he needed for now.
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Sophia spent the majority of the rest of the morning trying to figure out what had happened between herself and Sirius. He had been acting very strangely, and she had no idea why. His inquiry about her relationship with Remus wasn't entirely out of the ordinary, even if it was a little annoying, but his later question about whether she liked anyone else had thrown her into a complete spin.
In her own thoughts, she would admit that she found Sirius highly attractive she wasn't blind, after all but she had never thought any further than that. He was flirtatious in general, so she knew not to read anything into his actions, and her mind had a tendency to get carried away, so it was just better for her not to even entertain those thoughts. Still, the fact that he had asked her such a question was highly puzzling and also made her worry. Was he asking because he liked her?
Don't be stupid, what could he possibly see in you? she asked herself. She'd seen the girls Sirius had dated in the past, and she certainly was not his 'type'. Maybe he was asking because he knows of someone who does like me. It wouldn't be Remus, though, or James, for that matter, and I would doubt it would be Peter. But who, then? It just doesn't make sense!
After letting her mind ponder the problem all through lunch and through her free period in the afternoon, she decided that the best thing she could do was talk to Remus about it during their Herbology lesson after lunch. He was one of her best friends, so she knew she could trust him, and he was close to Sirius, too. Perhaps he might be able to help her figure out what was going on.
Professor Sprout had the class working in pairs to tend to a crop of Alihotsy* plants. The plants caused hysteria if the leaves were eaten, but other than that they were fairly harmless. Remus and Sophia had paired up as usual and were progressing well, when Sophia plucked up enough courage to ask him her questions.
'Remus, is Sirius okay?' she asked tentatively, while piling dragon dung into a new pot.
'As far as I know he's all right. Why do you ask?' He took the pot from Sophia and looked at her intriguingly.
'Well, it's just that ... today he was acting really weird around me. I don't know, I just wondered if he had said anything to you guys.' Remus started planting a clipping while Sophia prepared a new pot.
'What do you mean by acting weird?'
'Well, he was just asking funny questions, like what was going on between us and if I had my eye on anyone I just didn't know what was going on with him.' She looked at Remus as she waited for a reply. His brow furrowed in thought, and his whole face seemed to grow dark.
'Hmm,' he grunted, 'leave it with me. I'll talk to him tonight.'
She could tell by his tone that something was not right, but she also knew she wasn't going to get anything else out of Remus, so she left the conversation at that.
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Sirius mused over the day's events as he took a shower that evening. He was pretty sure that Sophia's blushing stemmed from the fact that she was attracted to him which was a good thing so now all he needed to do was plan his next move. The Hogsmeade weekend, which was in a few weeks, seemed like the best course of action, and he decided that he would ask Sophia to accompany him for the day. When he headed back into the bedroom, Remus was waiting for him.
'Hey, Moony. Shower's free if you want it,' Sirius said as he towel-dried his hair.
'I'm not up here to take a shower. I want to talk to you about something,' Remus said firmly, his arms crossed over his chest.
'What's up?' Sirius couldn't work out what would cause such odd behaviour in his friend.
'Sophia is what's up. What the heck are you playing at with her?' Remus' tone had gone from firm to bordering on becoming harsh. Remus was normally so placid and gentle that this change was worrying.
'Huh? What do you mean?'
'You know full well what I mean. She told me how you were asking funny questions today and acting weird with her. What are you planning?'
'Well, if you must know, I was intending on asking her out for the next Hogsmeade weekend. Is there a problem with that?' Sirius replied snidely; there was something about Remus' tone that was really beginning to annoy him.
'Yes, there's a problem with that.'
'Why? I thought there wasn't anything going on between you two? You have always denied anything, and she told me neither of you felt that way about each other,' Sirius replied. He was starting to get angry and couldn't work out what Remus' problem was.
'There is nothing going on between us, but I don't want you asking her out either.'
'What? That makes no sense whatsoever! You're not her keeper, Moony!' Sirius glared at Remus. He could not understand why Remus was behaving this way. All he'd done was talk to her; he hadn't even asked her out yet!
Just then, they were disturbed by James and Peter. 'Hey, what's going on in here we can hear you two shouting from outside,' James said as he looked between Remus and Sirius, who were eyeing each other with their arms folded.
'Moony here doesn't want me to ask Sophia out on a date for the next Hogsmeade weekend and won't tell me why,' Sirius replied harshly, not taking his eyes off Remus. Remus, for his part, stayed still and silent, though his eyes continued to hold their harsh glint.
'What? Moony, is that true? And since when have you liked Sophia, Sirius?' Peter asked, looking baffled.
'That's not the point, Wormtail,' Sirius retorted.
'No, that's exactly the point, Pads,' Remus snapped. 'It's just a passing infatuation that you have, and I don't want to see her get hurt.'
'Are you saying that I would deliberately set out to hurt her?' Sirius shouted.
'No, not deliberately, but you would in the end. The only reason you're interested in her is because she's a challenge. I'm right, aren't I.' Remus made it a statement more than a question.
'No ... that's not the only reason. I've just ... you know, gotten to know her, and I like her. What's wrong with that?' Sirius was beginning to feel like he was being backed into a corner by Remus. He failed to understand why he had to justify himself like this.
Remus sighed, and for the first time since the conversation had begun, his features softened, his voice returning to his normal, gentler tone. 'Pads, Sophia is like a sister to me or something. I don't want to see her getting hurt. I know her better than you, and she's not the type of girl to have a fling with. Do you remember last year when she went out with Brendan Fuller?'
Sirius took a moment to think back. He vaguely remembered seeing Sophia and the Gryffindor Beater in the year above hanging round together for a short while. 'Yeah, well, what about it?'
'They went out for about three months, I think, and she was crushed when they broke up. It was a mutual break-up, but she still took a heck of a long time to get over it and she changed because of it. She became guarded you must have noticed how long it takes her to feel comfortable around someone?' Sirius had to agree with that point and gave a brief nod before Remus continued. 'Listen, if you can tell me that you are really serious about her, then I won't stand in your way. Can you do that?'
Sirius thought about what Remus had told him. Sirius was not the type of guy to have a different girlfriend each week, but to be honest, the few girlfriends he'd had hadn't lasted that long.
He was attracted to Sophia and got along well with her, and he could count her as a friend. Yet, he had had no idea that she'd been hurt so badly until now. Could he, even unwittingly, cause her more pain? Maybe Remus was right; maybe he was only interested because she was a challenge the thrill of the chase. He gave a big sigh.
'No, you're right. I can't say that. I promise, I'll forget about asking her out.' Remus relaxed, though he still looked slightly troubled.
'Thanks. I'm sorry for being so ...' Remus faltered slightly, a contrite look appearing on his face.
'Heavy-handed?' Sirius suggested, his tone light enough for Remus to know that he was joking.
'Yeah,' Remus agreed, a slight chuckle in his reply. He paused for a moment before becoming serious again. 'It's not that I don't think you would be good for her; it's just, I don't know, I guess I'm just protective of her. She's been a good friend to me, and I know how sensitive she can be.'
Sirius smiled, 'It's fine, Moony, really. I'm sorry for shouting at you I can see that you're only looking out for her.'
Remus returned the smile, and Sirius knew that the matter had been put to rest. 'That's okay; so will you go back to acting normally around her for me, please? I'll just tell her you were fishing for dirt on me, or something.'
Sirius nodded in reply before giving Remus a slap on the back to prove there were no hard feelings. 'Just one thing are you sure there's nothing going on between you two?' Remus merely glared at him. Sirius held both his hands up, saying, 'Okay, okay ... just checking!'
End Notes:
*Alihotsy Leaves - created by JK and listed in 'Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them'. According to the Harry Potter Lexicon site, the leaves produce hysteria when eaten. http://www.hplex.info/magic/herbology.html
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Latest 25 Reviews for Amidst the Darkness
34 Reviews | 7.65/10 Average
Sorry I got behind. I'm still enjoying your story. It keeps me going amidst random highs and lows of RL. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
That's okay - RL is disrupting my ability to write the story! I'm glad you are still enjoying it, and your reviews bring a smile to my face so thank for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter - it should be going to the beta in the next day or so xXx
That "L" word is coming more easily to them. So cute.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Aww, I know. They do say, 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach,' and I think Sophia found out that is definitely the case. Thanks for the review xXx
Pink. That was perfect. One of my other favorite fanfics has Sirius's love interest nickname him Sirius Pink instead of Black. Somehow just works with his ego. You know? Funny.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe. I loved the pink marshmallows mocking his manliness, too. I'm glad it gave you a giggle and thanks for the review, xXx
Poor Lily. Poor Severus. It's such a sucky situation. One that even fanfic can't erase. Nicely done.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*sigh* I know. Nothing is ever easy and straight forward, is it? I'm glad you liked it though, even if it was sad. Thanks xXx
You go, Sophia! It's nice to see her strong and standing up for herself.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Indeed! Starting to see a little bit of the Auror she hopes to become. Thanks for the review xXx
There's nothing like a misunderstanding to make everything more interesting. Why is it that we always over think everything? Lovely, lovely.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
I have no idea why we over think - paralysis of anlysis as they say. I know I've been a victim of that more times than I care to remember! I'm glad you like it though - I was very happy to finally get them together after all this time! xXx
*dies laughing*Best. Chapter. EVAR!!!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*Takes a bow* Thank you, my dear! If I were James, I'd be feeling a little worried right about now... xXx
Nawww!!! :D
*melts from the mushy*
Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, very busy. It was great, regardless :)Another great chapter here, I love the introduction of Hector, just to spice things up between Sophia and Sirius. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Thank you for the review - I'm glad you liked it, and the introduction of Hector. He's certainly ruffled Sirius' feather *smirk* Chapter 16 will be up very soon, I promise! :-) Thanks again, xXx
LOL I really love marauder stories, and this one is shaping up to be really good.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe! Glad you are liking it :-) Hope it lives up to your expectations!! Thanks for the review xXx
Sofie seems like a great girl. I really liked the bit with the cat and on the platform. You even added in the bleakness of the war well.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi! Thanks so much for the lovely review and the shiney stars *strokes the stars* lol. Glad you liked the chapter, and especially Hamish (who's one of my favs even if his is just a cat!) and I hope you enjoy the rest of whats up so far :) xXx
I do love a good shopping scene ;) And you pulled off the Marauders in kilts very well, I didn't think it would seem realistic but, there you go.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi, glad you liked the shopping scene and that Marauders being in kilts worked better than you thought it would :-) Thanks for the review and I hope you Chapter 14 :-) xXx
Can't wait . . . I love seeing characters outside of the Hogwarts setting! And Sophie dealing with her parents will be especially interesting.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Ah, you have to wait one more chapter and then we get to meet the Douglas family in their Highland estate ;-) Thanks for the review :-) Hope you like the next chapter too! xXx
Sounds like there is some fun coming up. And whom is this Hector? Will there be some dueling for Sophia's affections?
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Well, it's about time there was some fun, don't you think? ;-) Sophia needs some R&R. And you saw how Sirius' feathers were ruffled when she was paying attention to Remus...I guess you'll just need to wait and see ;-) Thank you for the review :-) xXx
Sirius, Sirius, Sirius. Perhaps he should expand on the whole arranged marriage thing. Like, besides all the obvious reasons, I like you and don't want to marry anyone else. As Hermione says, "Boys."
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe, true, very true, but then when he ran away he didn't have those feelings for Sophia so technicaly he's not hiding anything. But still, Hermione is right, 'Boys'! Thank you for the review! xXx
Love the evolution of Sirius' and Sophia relationship! So close . . .
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Yep, getting closer... still a little way to go though... ('cos I'm evil that way *mwhahahaha!* ;-) ) Glad you like how it's been building so far though; I hope you like how I carry on with it. Thanks for the review! xXx
Loved it! I like the different stage of Sophia's emotions, more angry and dramatic than before. Brilliant continuation.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Glad you liked it! Yes, because Sophia is an introvert type, she likes to internalise her emotions. With something like this though, the emotions are just too much for her to hold in anymore and the results can be pretty impressive. Luckily, as Sirius said, he's used to his mother ;-) Thanks for the review! xXx
I just found this story, and it's brilliant! It's hard to find good Marauder-era stories that have a range of themes, not just sticking to either very light-hearted or very dark. As well, you've written an extremely believable OC, managing to avoid all the common Mary-Sue mistakes. And the way you portray Sirius is definitly more realistic than most fanfics, as he doesn't seem one dimensional. I love the way you've dealt with such a terrible ordeal - keeping it life-like without being distasteful is difficult - and I can't wait to see how the Sophia-Sirius relationship plays out.All in all, my new story of the moment! Looking forward to reading more!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello. Thank you so much for this truly lovely review - you've made me blush! I'm so glad you like Sophia and that you feel I've avoided the dreaded Mary-Sue effect, and that you find Sirius believable too. Thank you for your comments about the events with Rosier - as I think I said in my Author Notes, that whole scene made me feel physically sick while writing it and I was extremely nervous about showing it to people. I've just made changes to chapter 9 as requested by the PP admins (they really are stars!) so that should hopefully be up very soon, and I'll be putting chapter 10 in the queue today too. Hope you continue to enjoy it! do let me know what you think xXx
Awwww... I knew Sirius had it in him. So cute. Nice and calm, too, after the thrilling events of the previous chapter. I love how Sirius thinks of Remus as almost a father figure. I can imagine that talk about "intentions" and the like. Lovely, as always. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Yeah, I think Sirius has a depth of feeling that he's not often given credit for. Yes, he's rash and prone to reacting on impluse, but he's also incredibly loyal to the point where he would lay down his life for his friends. That's also why he's worried about Remus' reaction after the last time! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you are still enjoying the story! xXx
I am surprised that you have only one reviewer. It is a good story and I for one enjoy reading it. Looking forward to the next update. It is nice to meet a mature Sirius
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello - well, now I have two reviewers. Hehe! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it. xXx
Stamina and the thrill of the chase. Too funny. I like that they are finally progressing in their "relationship." Lovely work. Thanks for the shout out. I'm blushing. Don't lose heart! They'll come around.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello - you are most welcome for the shout out. I love reading your reviews That bit about beetroot juice is actually true - sometimes fact is stranger than fiction! Glad it made you laugh. Yes, it's nice to see Sophia and Sirius growing closer, isn't it? (I can't help but write slow building romances, I'm afraid) Next chapter should be in the queue in the next day or so.
I have to say that I love Hamish. So cute. I see all the angstiness between the Gryffindors and Slytherins coming to a head soon. Lovely chapter. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi - I'm glad you liked the chapter, and yes, Hamish is very cute. He's based on a cat we adopted (or, actually, he adopted us) but we had to give him away because he fought with our two cats. The Gryffindor vs Slytherin situation will certainly get worse before it gets better. Thank you for your review, hope you continue to enjoy the story xXx
Yeah! I am in full support of all stories that take place in the Marauder era. I'm excited about the Sirius/OC tension already. :D Keep up the good work!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi! Thanks for your support - you've made me a very happy writer for giving me my first review And I agree - Yay for the Marauders! lolI hope you continue to enjoy the story - Chapter 3 should be up in the next week or so (just waiting on it getting back from my beta).Thanks again for the review! xXx
That was a nice, fun chapter. I especially like the cheeky wink and the equal rights comments. : )
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi :-) Glad you liked it. The equal rights comment was a favourite of mine too :-) Thank you for the review and I hope you like the next chapter. Things will remain fun and light-heart for a little while at least. xXx
Yeah for Sirius getting her to open up a bit. Lots of emotions in this chapter. Very tense. It seems the two of them are getting closer...
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*Cheers for Sirius too* Sophia is just a scared little introvert and she needs extrovert Sirius to help her to stop hiding...and he's only too happy to oblige ;-) Thanks for the review! :-)