Chapter 3 – N.E.W.T.s
Chapter 3 of 23
Sirius Girl 08Disclaimer: Once again, not mine, just playing in the Harry Potter World for a little while.
Author's Notes: Again, a huge thank you to DracoGurlForever and to Madison who have helped me whip this chapter into shape. Also thank you to everyone who has read this story, and a bigger thank you if you have left a review. It's lovely to know that people are enjoying reading a story I first started writing over a year ago. I hope you enjoy this chapter, and I would love it if you would like to leave a review. :-)
Sirius woke on the first day of classes with a smile. For so many years now, Hogwarts had been Sirius's favourite place in the world to be, and today it still felt just as good to be here. Since his first year, Hogwarts had been his safe haven from his draconian family and their pure-blood mania. Hogwarts remained his second home even now that he had left his parents' house for good and had moved in with the Potters. The Potters had become fond of him over the years that he and James had been friends. When he had turned up on their doorstep during the summer holidays after an atrocious argument with his parents, they had welcomed him into their home as a second son. As Sirius got dressed for school, he allowed his thoughts to wonder back to that fateful fight which had caused him to leave the Black house for the last time.
'Sirius Black! Get down here ... now!'
Sirius gritted his teeth and let out a low growl as his mother's shrieks drifted up the stairs to his room, where he lay on the bed talking to James through a rather unique two-way mirror.
'Was that your mum again?' James asked.
'Unfortunately, yes it was. I'd swear I was adopted if I didn't look so much like the bloody lot of them,' Sirius grumbled bitterly.
'Listen, Pads, if you need to get out of there for a while, you know you can come here.' James's voice sounded upbeat, but he couldn't quite mask his concern.
'Cheers, Prongs,' Sirius replied in a similar tone, trying to repress the anger and hopelessness that was stirring inside him. 'I suppose I should go and see what the snakes want with me now,' he sneered. Sirius saw James nod his head slowly as he slipped the mirror into the pocket of his jeans before pulling himself reluctantly off the bed.
He slowly left the bedroom, locking the door as he did, before trudging down the dark hallway towards the sound of the raised voices downstairs.
As Sirius approached the stairs, he saw the small, hunched form of the Blacks' house-elf, Kreacher, walking in his direction.
'Master Sirius - lover of Mudblood, cause of so much of Mistress' pain. Kreacher hates to see Mistress so upset.'
Sirius looked down his nose at the house-elf with contempt. How he wanted to give the thing a swift kick that would, with any luck, send it sailing down the stairs, breaking its neck in the process. 'Move, Kreacher, and stay away from me, you loathsome creature,' Sirius commanded coldly.
The house-elf sunk into a low bow as he delivered his patronising response. 'Of course, Master. Kreacher lives to serve the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black.'
Sirius swept past the elf and continued his walk downstairs. He tended to avoid his family as much as possible, but there was only so long that he could keep his mother waiting when she was in a mood like this. Of course, he always endeavoured to push that limit as far as he could.
The voices were getting louder as he neared the sitting room. However, now that he had actually started listening to the noise, he realised that he could only hear his mother's ramblings, but there was no doubt that she was talking to or rather at his father.
'Wouldn't surprise me if the kiss-arse was in there, too,' he muttered to himself angrily, clenching his fists. He'd reached the sitting room and slowly walked through the door, holding his head high.
He quickly took stock of the room. His father, Orion, was dressed in black robes that were expertly tailored and only served to confirm the aristocratic air that surrounded him. Sirius hated the fact that he was almost the spitting image of his father.
His mother, Walburga, paced the room furiously, her beautiful face contorted in concentration. That was disturbing - anger he knew how to deal with, but he had a feeling from the look on her face that this confrontation was going to be different from the usual. Sirius was sure that this was not going to be a good day. Regulus stood behind a chair at the back of the room.
Perhaps he thinks it will offer him some protection if things start getting thrown, Sirius snickered mentally to himself. It wouldn't be the first time objects had been thrown or hexes uttered in an argument. Sirius thought about the small scar that he had on his left forearm. He had received it during an argument two years ago when his mother had launched a cup and saucer in his direction. It had hit the wall, but one of the shattered china shards had lodged in his arm.
Walburga's head snapped up when Sirius entered, and now all three occupants were aware he'd joined them. She surveyed her son with cold eyes as she spoke. 'Finally decided to grace us with your presence, have you?' If her eyes were cold, her tone was positively arctic.
Sirius steeled himself before he replied with an air of nonchalance. 'Well, Mother, perhaps you should ensure that your house-elf doesn't insist on wittering on at me. I would have made it down here a lot sooner if it wasn't for him. Perhaps you ought to take his head off and do us all a favour.'
'Enough.' Orion Black took a step toward Sirius and held him in a stern gaze. 'Sirius, the time has come for you to start towing the line. This ...' Orion paused to look over Sirius's choice of clothes, his lip curling in distaste, 'behaviour has gone on long enough. You have an opportunity here to repair the damage you have inflicted on this family over the past five years. As you know, keeping the family line pure is highly important, and as the oldest, you are expected to provide an heir. To this end, your mother and I have been in talks with Theodor and Belinda Rosier. We've reached an agreement among us, and you are to be engaged and married to Dahlia Rosier.'
Sirius was flabbergasted. He stared open-mouthed at his parents, but their faces were emotionless. He turned to Regulus, who looked like he was enjoying every minute of what he was witnessing. He was dimly aware that his father was still speaking, detailing the exact arrangements of when this marriage was supposed to take place and what behaviour was expected of him until that time. Sirius, however, heard none of his father's speech.
They want me to get married? To a Rosier, no less! Sirius was having a hard time processing all that had happened, but slowly the shock began to subside and anger bubbled up to the surface in its stead.
'What?' he shouted. 'You have got to be kidding me! Have you completely lost your minds, or has the inbreeding in this family finally come to the surface through this absurd idea? You must be deranged if you think that I'm going to go anywhere near that girl!'
'You ungrateful little brat!' his mother spat at him. 'You have no idea how hard your father and I have had to work to secure this marriage for you. After your disgraceful behaviour, it was nearly impossible for us to secure such a match.'
'Well, no one asked you to go to such trouble, did they, Mother?' Sirius's voice had lowered, but it still held the same fiercely angry tone as he spoke through a clenched jaw.
'Sirius, you will do this or face the consequences.' Orion had drawn himself to full height in an attempt to assert dominance over his son.
Sirius's mind, however, was made up consequences be damned. 'That's where you're wrong, Father,' he sneered. 'I'm a few months away from turning seventeen - and when I do, you'll have no control over me. If I marry, it will be to a woman whom I choose and not who you decide is suitable.'
'If you do not marry Dahlia, then that's it. You will no longer be part of this family. Do you understand?' Orion had closed the distance between them and bore down over Sirius, his voice devoid of any emotion.
'Yes it's crystal clear. But I suggest that you see if this deal can be transferred to Regulus, because I will not touch her!' Sirius turned on his heel to leave the room, but noted with grim satisfaction that Regulus was now standing frozen, with wide eyes, at the idea of being forced to marry Dahila.
'You are no son of mine do you hear me?' Walburga screeched.
Sirius turned as he reached the door to answer his mother. 'Yes, I do; but, sadly, it is only in my wildest dreams that we are not related.' With that, he left the room and the house, hearing his mother's shouts all the way to the end of the street.
'Hey, Pads! You ready yet? I want to get to breakfast.' James's voice broke Sirius's reverie, and he gave James an answering grin.
'Sorry. Yeah, I'm ready. Let's get this show on the road.'
The Great Hall was filled with students, and the Marauders were greeted by the cacophony of morning chatter as they made their way to the Gryffindor table. Sirius took up a seat next to Remus, and James and Peter sat down opposite them. The boys all began to pile food onto their plates, and Sirius and James ended up fighting for the last sausage on the platter closest to them. James managed to claim victory over the sausage, spearing it with his fork and whipping it quickly out of Sirius's reach, and he then proceeded to take great joy in making a show of eating the sausage very slowly and very loudly. In fact, James was so vocal while eating the sausage that the third year who had been sitting next to him shuffled down the bench slightly, all the while giving James a funny look.
'You are a right git,' Sirius grumbled.
James smiled sweetly and took another bite of the sausage. 'You need to work on your reflexes, mate,' James replied smugly. 'I can't help it if I'm just better than you.'
Sirius pulled a face before settling into eating his own breakfast. He waited until James wasn't looking before he cast a quick charm on the jug containing the pumpkin juice. Slipping his wand back up his sleeve, he saw Remus looking at him with an enquiring eyebrow raised. Sirius held a finger up to his lips and gave Remus a wink. Remus replied with a small smile before continuing with his breakfast.
'Say, James, could you pass me the pumpkin juice please?' Sirius asked.
'Sure,' James replied as he reached out to lift the full jug. Just as the jug came clean off the table, the handle snapped where Sirius had weakened it with his spell. The jug tumbled back to the table, and the contents spilled all over James's lap and his plate. Sirius, Remus, and Peter all fell about laughing as James's cheeks flushed red.
'You git!' James shouted, causing everyone near them to look round to see what had happened. James quickly pulled out his wand and muttered, 'Evanesco!' causing the pumpkin juice to vanish, but the remnants of his breakfast were a lost cause. 'My robes are going to be sticky all day now!' James grumbled.
Sirius wiped the tears from his eyes. 'Next time, don't steal my sausage.'
After breakfast, all the sixth years met with Professor McGonagall briefly to finalise their N.E.W.T. course choices before being issued with their timetables. Sirius didn't have any classes scheduled for the first period of the day, so he spent it relaxing in the common room with the rest of the Marauders before leaving for Arithmancy with Peter. When they got to the classroom, there were already a handful of students there, including, Sirius noted with glee, Severus Snape. Sirius gave Peter a nudge and walked over to the free seat behind Severus.
'So, Snivellus, have a good holiday?' Sirius swung back lazily on his chair as he spoke in a falsely sweet tone.
'Shove off, Black.'
'Now that's not very nice, is it? Here I am, just trying to be friendly.'
'I agree; that was very rude,' Peter picked up. 'Must be something about the way he was brought up; obviously, he wasn't taught manners in the pig sty.' Peter winked at Sirius, who was grinning evilly. Even from the back, Sirius could tell that his remarks were having the desired effect on Snape. Just then, though, Professor Kearney came through the door, and the class came to attention.
The class, and in fact most of the day, passed relatively quickly. All the teachers seemed to give the same speech about how important N.E.W.T exams were and how much they were expected to work. Soon, Sirius found himself packing up his things at the end of their first Defence Against the Dark Arts class of the term.
'Well, I'm off to History of Magic,' Remus said. 'Where are you all off to now?'
'Wormtail and I have Astronomy. What do you have, Padfoot?' James replied.
'I've got a free period now I think I might go up to the common room and see who is about,' Sirius finished as he looked around the classroom.
'Think you might get a head start on this homework?' Remus asked innocently.
'Yeah, Moony, that's what I'm going to do homework,' Sirius drawled with heavy sarcasm before adding, 'Oh, and look, pigs really can fly!' The two boys laughed as they picked up their bags and made their way out of the classroom, pausing by Sophia and Lily as they did.
'Hey, Lily, you are carrying on with History of Magic this year, aren't you?' Remus asked.
'Yes, I am. Are you?'
'Yep. Fancy making a move, then? Can't wait to hear the 'N.E.W.T.s are important' speech from Binns ... I'm sure it will be riveting,' he said sarcastically. 'What do you have next, Sophia?'
'Oh, I've got a free period, so I think I'll go to the library and start on McGonagall's essay,' she replied, swinging her bag over her shoulder as she did.
Sirius perked up and started to pay attention to the conversation. He didn't know who would be in the common room, and he wasn't keen on the idea of spending the period by himself, twiddling his thumbs. If Sophia was definitely free, then she was a much better option, even if he did have to do some work at the same time. Hopefully he could distract her with conversation and escape that fate too.
'Mind if I join you?' Sirius asked with a smile. 'I'll be all on my own, otherwise,' he finished with his best puppy-dog-eyed look.
'Sure, why not,' Sophia answered with some trepidation.
'Great, but can we go to the common room instead? I can't stand the silence in the library,' Sirius asked.
'Yeah, that and the fact that the last time you were in there, Madam Pince chased you out while beating your head with a book because she caught you writing in the margins,' James chuckled as they all filed out of the classroom.
It didn't escape Sirius's attention that Sophia seemed unsure about spending this free time in his company alone. As he thought about it, he realised that, despite having been friends with her for the past year and a half, he'd never had a conversation with her without the other Marauders being present. They meandered back through the castle to Gryffindor Tower where they found the common room to be nearly empty. They settled at a table by the window where Sirius could see out across the grounds to the Forbidden Forest.
'So, what did you make of the new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher?' he asked in an attempt to get Sophia talking. He'd noticed that she had been quite quiet on the way up to the common room.
'Professor Ward? He seems nice enough. I guess I'll reserve judgement for when we actually start being taught spells and not just a lesson on the importance of N.E.W.T.s,' Sophia replied, rolling her eyes.
'Oh, so you've had those speeches all day too, have you?' he replied with a chuckle.
'Yeah couldn't the teachers just all get together at the beginning of the day and get it over and done with in one go?'
'I know what you mean. James and I played hangman during them,' he informed her cheerfully, causing her to chuckle lightly. 'You know, I don't think we've ever had a conversation between just you and me, have we?'
'I did wonder if you would realise that,' she replied sheepishly.
'You're quite shy, aren't you?' he inquired gently.
'Compared to you, Sirius, I think anyone seems shy,' she chuckled, 'but yeah, I do tend to clam up around people that I don't know well.'
'Why is that? I mean, what's made you shy?'
'I don't know ... maybe it's a self-preservation thing. I guess I just like to keep to myself.' Sophia shrugged her shoulders and turned her attention to her textbooks, which were laid out on the desk.
'Sorry, I've made you uncomfortable, haven't I? How about a change of topic?' He leaned back on his chair while he tried to think of a topic that would help her relax around him. 'Will you be trying out for the Quidditch team this year?'
He noticed the strange look that she gave him before answering. 'Are you trying to be funny?' Sirius wasn't sure if she was joking with him or if she was slightly ticked off. When her stare didn't ease, he suspected it might be the latter.
What did I say that was so bad? he thought worriedly.
'Do you not remember flying lessons in first year?' Sophia raised an irritated eyebrow as she continued to glare at Sirius.
Yep, she's definitely got her broom in a knot about something! He was relieved to note, however, that it didn't seem like she was too angry; she looked more like she couldn't believe that he didn't know what she was talking about.
He thought quickly for a moment. All he remembered about those lessons was larking around with James and trying to knock others off their brooms ... 'Oh Merlin. Yeah, I remember now. James and I managed to knock you off your broom, didn't we?'
'No, you managed to knock me off my broom when I was ten feet in the air. I had to go to Madam Pomfrey with a broken ankle. I've tried to avoid brooms as much as possible ever since.' Her voice showed that she still hadn't quite forgiven him for that, even though it happened five years ago.
'I'm sorry. I never meant for you to get hurt. I actually didn't mean to make you fall off. It was stupid.' He gave her a sincere look as he spoke before giving her a sexy smile that he hoped would convince her to forgive him ... It would be a long free period otherwise.
'Well, that's noble of you.' She still sounded slightly cross, but after a moment of silence, she gave a big sigh, and he knew he would be in the clear. 'I know you didn't really mean to hurt me I could tell that by your face as I was carted off to the hospital wing.'
'Still it's given you a good dinner party story, hasn't it?' he joked, trying to lighten the mood.
'Yeah, I suppose it has,' she chuckled.
They spent the rest of the free period chatting about previous Hogwarts experiences before heading off to Charms class for the last period of the day. As neither Lily nor any of the Marauders were taking this class, they sat together near the back. Once again, they suffered the N.E.W.T.s speech, and Sirius found himself studying the girl whom, for the past five years, he'd barely noticed.
He'd never quite understood what Remus had seen in her she was nice enough, but she'd always seemed quiet and, to be honest, a bit boring whenever he'd been around her. However, after talking to her by herself, he realised that while she was shy, she had a wicked sense of humour not too dissimilar to his own. He guessed she must have been slightly intimidated by being around all the Marauders at once Well, we can be a bit rowdy, I suppose, he thought.
Suddenly, Sophia looked up from her notes and caught him staring at her. 'What?' she mouthed at him, obviously confused at what he was doing. He shook his head and turned his attention to the parchment in front of him.
As he doodled, his mind continued to process his changing perspective of Sophia. He thought back to the previous year his memories showed him a plain looking girl who didn't seem that interesting; yet, now when he looked at her, he no longer saw a timid girl. She'd proved on more than one occasion this afternoon that she could hold her own against him. He'd liked seeing that side of her as it allowed him to tease and have fun with her in much the same way as he did with the other Marauders, but he also saw that there was still a softness and kindness about her. Yes, now he could quite understand how Remus and Sophia had become friends. He also wondered how he'd never noticed the vibrancy of her blue eyes and the way they seemed to twinkle when she laughed. They seemed so familiar to him, but he couldn't place why he recognised them. His musings were cut short when he heard the bell ring and everyone started moving.
Sirius spent that evening lounging in the common room with the other Marauders. He tried to apply himself to his homework, but that lasted all of an hour, and after that the four boys spent a disproportionate amount of time trying to come up with some new prank ideas. It wasn't until later that night, just as he was on the cusp of sleep in his warm bed, that his thoughts turned back to the enigma that was Sophia before his mind finally slipped into a dreamless state.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Amidst the Darkness
34 Reviews | 7.65/10 Average
Sorry I got behind. I'm still enjoying your story. It keeps me going amidst random highs and lows of RL. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
That's okay - RL is disrupting my ability to write the story! I'm glad you are still enjoying it, and your reviews bring a smile to my face so thank for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter - it should be going to the beta in the next day or so xXx
That "L" word is coming more easily to them. So cute.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Aww, I know. They do say, 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach,' and I think Sophia found out that is definitely the case. Thanks for the review xXx
Pink. That was perfect. One of my other favorite fanfics has Sirius's love interest nickname him Sirius Pink instead of Black. Somehow just works with his ego. You know? Funny.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe. I loved the pink marshmallows mocking his manliness, too. I'm glad it gave you a giggle and thanks for the review, xXx
Poor Lily. Poor Severus. It's such a sucky situation. One that even fanfic can't erase. Nicely done.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*sigh* I know. Nothing is ever easy and straight forward, is it? I'm glad you liked it though, even if it was sad. Thanks xXx
You go, Sophia! It's nice to see her strong and standing up for herself.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Indeed! Starting to see a little bit of the Auror she hopes to become. Thanks for the review xXx
There's nothing like a misunderstanding to make everything more interesting. Why is it that we always over think everything? Lovely, lovely.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
I have no idea why we over think - paralysis of anlysis as they say. I know I've been a victim of that more times than I care to remember! I'm glad you like it though - I was very happy to finally get them together after all this time! xXx
*dies laughing*Best. Chapter. EVAR!!!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*Takes a bow* Thank you, my dear! If I were James, I'd be feeling a little worried right about now... xXx
Nawww!!! :D
*melts from the mushy*
Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, very busy. It was great, regardless :)Another great chapter here, I love the introduction of Hector, just to spice things up between Sophia and Sirius. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Thank you for the review - I'm glad you liked it, and the introduction of Hector. He's certainly ruffled Sirius' feather *smirk* Chapter 16 will be up very soon, I promise! :-) Thanks again, xXx
LOL I really love marauder stories, and this one is shaping up to be really good.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe! Glad you are liking it :-) Hope it lives up to your expectations!! Thanks for the review xXx
Sofie seems like a great girl. I really liked the bit with the cat and on the platform. You even added in the bleakness of the war well.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi! Thanks so much for the lovely review and the shiney stars *strokes the stars* lol. Glad you liked the chapter, and especially Hamish (who's one of my favs even if his is just a cat!) and I hope you enjoy the rest of whats up so far :) xXx
I do love a good shopping scene ;) And you pulled off the Marauders in kilts very well, I didn't think it would seem realistic but, there you go.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi, glad you liked the shopping scene and that Marauders being in kilts worked better than you thought it would :-) Thanks for the review and I hope you Chapter 14 :-) xXx
Can't wait . . . I love seeing characters outside of the Hogwarts setting! And Sophie dealing with her parents will be especially interesting.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Ah, you have to wait one more chapter and then we get to meet the Douglas family in their Highland estate ;-) Thanks for the review :-) Hope you like the next chapter too! xXx
Sounds like there is some fun coming up. And whom is this Hector? Will there be some dueling for Sophia's affections?
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Well, it's about time there was some fun, don't you think? ;-) Sophia needs some R&R. And you saw how Sirius' feathers were ruffled when she was paying attention to Remus...I guess you'll just need to wait and see ;-) Thank you for the review :-) xXx
Sirius, Sirius, Sirius. Perhaps he should expand on the whole arranged marriage thing. Like, besides all the obvious reasons, I like you and don't want to marry anyone else. As Hermione says, "Boys."
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hehe, true, very true, but then when he ran away he didn't have those feelings for Sophia so technicaly he's not hiding anything. But still, Hermione is right, 'Boys'! Thank you for the review! xXx
Love the evolution of Sirius' and Sophia relationship! So close . . .
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Yep, getting closer... still a little way to go though... ('cos I'm evil that way *mwhahahaha!* ;-) ) Glad you like how it's been building so far though; I hope you like how I carry on with it. Thanks for the review! xXx
Loved it! I like the different stage of Sophia's emotions, more angry and dramatic than before. Brilliant continuation.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Glad you liked it! Yes, because Sophia is an introvert type, she likes to internalise her emotions. With something like this though, the emotions are just too much for her to hold in anymore and the results can be pretty impressive. Luckily, as Sirius said, he's used to his mother ;-) Thanks for the review! xXx
I just found this story, and it's brilliant! It's hard to find good Marauder-era stories that have a range of themes, not just sticking to either very light-hearted or very dark. As well, you've written an extremely believable OC, managing to avoid all the common Mary-Sue mistakes. And the way you portray Sirius is definitly more realistic than most fanfics, as he doesn't seem one dimensional. I love the way you've dealt with such a terrible ordeal - keeping it life-like without being distasteful is difficult - and I can't wait to see how the Sophia-Sirius relationship plays out.All in all, my new story of the moment! Looking forward to reading more!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello. Thank you so much for this truly lovely review - you've made me blush! I'm so glad you like Sophia and that you feel I've avoided the dreaded Mary-Sue effect, and that you find Sirius believable too. Thank you for your comments about the events with Rosier - as I think I said in my Author Notes, that whole scene made me feel physically sick while writing it and I was extremely nervous about showing it to people. I've just made changes to chapter 9 as requested by the PP admins (they really are stars!) so that should hopefully be up very soon, and I'll be putting chapter 10 in the queue today too. Hope you continue to enjoy it! do let me know what you think xXx
Awwww... I knew Sirius had it in him. So cute. Nice and calm, too, after the thrilling events of the previous chapter. I love how Sirius thinks of Remus as almost a father figure. I can imagine that talk about "intentions" and the like. Lovely, as always. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Yeah, I think Sirius has a depth of feeling that he's not often given credit for. Yes, he's rash and prone to reacting on impluse, but he's also incredibly loyal to the point where he would lay down his life for his friends. That's also why he's worried about Remus' reaction after the last time! Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you are still enjoying the story! xXx
I am surprised that you have only one reviewer. It is a good story and I for one enjoy reading it. Looking forward to the next update. It is nice to meet a mature Sirius
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello - well, now I have two reviewers. Hehe! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of it. xXx
Stamina and the thrill of the chase. Too funny. I like that they are finally progressing in their "relationship." Lovely work. Thanks for the shout out. I'm blushing. Don't lose heart! They'll come around.
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hello - you are most welcome for the shout out. I love reading your reviews That bit about beetroot juice is actually true - sometimes fact is stranger than fiction! Glad it made you laugh. Yes, it's nice to see Sophia and Sirius growing closer, isn't it? (I can't help but write slow building romances, I'm afraid) Next chapter should be in the queue in the next day or so.
I have to say that I love Hamish. So cute. I see all the angstiness between the Gryffindors and Slytherins coming to a head soon. Lovely chapter. Keep it up!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi - I'm glad you liked the chapter, and yes, Hamish is very cute. He's based on a cat we adopted (or, actually, he adopted us) but we had to give him away because he fought with our two cats. The Gryffindor vs Slytherin situation will certainly get worse before it gets better. Thank you for your review, hope you continue to enjoy the story xXx
Yeah! I am in full support of all stories that take place in the Marauder era. I'm excited about the Sirius/OC tension already. :D Keep up the good work!
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi! Thanks for your support - you've made me a very happy writer for giving me my first review And I agree - Yay for the Marauders! lolI hope you continue to enjoy the story - Chapter 3 should be up in the next week or so (just waiting on it getting back from my beta).Thanks again for the review! xXx
That was a nice, fun chapter. I especially like the cheeky wink and the equal rights comments. : )
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
Hi :-) Glad you liked it. The equal rights comment was a favourite of mine too :-) Thank you for the review and I hope you like the next chapter. Things will remain fun and light-heart for a little while at least. xXx
Yeah for Sirius getting her to open up a bit. Lots of emotions in this chapter. Very tense. It seems the two of them are getting closer...
Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Author of Amidst the Darkness)
*Cheers for Sirius too* Sophia is just a scared little introvert and she needs extrovert Sirius to help her to stop hiding...and he's only too happy to oblige ;-) Thanks for the review! :-)