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Potions Under Duress Caramel
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Caramel

1: The Way These Things Begin

2: Pastoral

3: Detention in the Dungeon

4: Riches Strange and New

5: Ships in the Night

6: Girl Talk

7: Magic for Modern Lovers

8: Iecur Fortis

9: Realisation

10: Rationalisations

11: Mischief Managed

12: Recuperation

13: Triangulation

14: Dark Corners

15: Conversations among Friends

16: Many Meetings

17: Stormy Weather

18: Visitations

19: Reconciliation

20: Hidden Fire

21: Percipio Corium

22: Reciprocation

23: Temptation

24: Understanding

25: Research

26: Exploration

27: Satisfaction

28: Preparations

29: Becoming

30: Caramel

31: Concealment

32: Scarred

33: Sweet Appetite

34: Discontent

35: Oblivion

36: Reckoning

41: Mr.

42: Mr.

Caramel

corianderpie

765 Reviews   |   765 Ratings, 0 Likes, 384 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 117,093 Words 42 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Severus Snape Ronald Weasley Dean Thomas Bellatrix Lestrange Susan Bones Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Lavender Brown Poppy Pomfrey Rubeus Hagrid Horace Slughorn Cormac McLaggen Neville Longbottom Seamus Finnigan Cho Chang Draco Malfoy Moaning Myrtle Winky Sibyll Trelawney Irma Pince Remus Lupin Fawkes Nagini Padma Patil Parvati Patil

Is there such a thing as a harmless crush? Over the course of a year, two people experience the perils of wanting what they just can’t have.

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Chapters (38)

Chapter 1: The Way These Things Begin

Chapter 2: Pastoral

Chapter 3: Detention in the Dungeon

Chapter 4: Riches Strange and New

Chapter 5: Ships in the Night

Chapter 6: Girl Talk

Chapter 7: Magic for Modern Lovers

Chapter 8: Iecur Fortis

Chapter 9: Realisation

Chapter 10: Rationalisations

Chapter 11: Mischief Managed

Chapter 12: Recuperation

Chapter 13: Triangulation

Chapter 14: Dark Corners

Chapter 15: Conversations among Friends

Chapter 16: Many Meetings

Chapter 17: Stormy Weather

Chapter 18: Visitations

Chapter 19: Reconciliation

Chapter 20: Hidden Fire

Chapter 21: Percipio Corium

Chapter 22: Reciprocation

Chapter 23: Temptation

Chapter 24: Understanding

Chapter 25: Research

Chapter 26: Exploration

Chapter 27: Satisfaction

Chapter 28: Preparations

Chapter 29: Becoming

Chapter 30: Caramel

Chapter 31: Concealment

Chapter 32: Scarred

Chapter 33: Sweet Appetite

Chapter 34: Discontent

Chapter 35: Oblivion

Chapter 36: Reckoning

Chapter 41: Mr.

Chapter 42: Mr.


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Reviews for Caramel

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10/10

Maddie

Prof. Snape is so down on himself. He keeps misinterpreting Hermione's body language. Arg! Your teaser for Chapter 4 is very intriguing.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

He is! He does! Makes for good tension, though. Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy chapter 4, which is queued up and should post in a few days.

10/10

FlittterKat

Poor Hermione, revelations can really kick you hard. I'm enjoying your story and can't hardly wait another week for an update. ~sigh~ and it sounds like a winner, too.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

10/10

mimmom

very good, looking forward to the next chapter!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Thank you maam!

10/10

ylang_two

wow. plenty to like in this chappie!! mmg & ss 's reg duelling sessions are bad-ass. teh ronvender (LMAO!) show is nauseating as always (eyeroll). hermiones gift is exactly what one would expect of 'the brightest witch of her generation'.

10/10

ylang_two

i will never understand the cache of club slug. dont particularly care for the character. and mclaggen sounds like something youd scrape off ones shoes. bah!

10/10

ylang_two

a few days of liberty for snape! what a rare gift. voldy actually did him a favor.

10/10

ylang_two

i hardly consider hermiones gift to snape as mischief. and though the next remark is better suited for the previous chapter, at least YOUR dumbles has enough humanity to think that snape is as deserving of a future w/freedom, happiness and even love as his other fav. pawn, harry.

10/10

ylang_two

grading papers? anything for the cause!

10/10

ylang_two

DAMN Tom and Dumbles!!! and whaf if anything, does snape get out of it. this injection of angst and torture cut cleanly into hermiones x-rated fantasy life that was getting a tad too fluffy for my taste. and i agree with your determination that her and snapes actual relationship will be a slow burn. as tittilating as teacher-student relations can be, theyre still unethical while shes still his student.

10/10

ylang_two

cheeky! and i love the accompanying art.

10/10

ylang_two

lavender sure is a nosy boitch. but hermione needs a female confidante more convenient than jill.

10/10

ylang_two

ugh. whether its bellatrix or the sainted lily evans, both leave this reader utterly repulsed and cold, esp. for snapes sake.

10/10

ylang_two

brava! i salute your hermione, for having an awesome bff in jill AND for experimental canoodling with viktor instead of canon ronniekins for the WIN. shes gotta keep a foothold in her birth-world w/someone else besides her lovely parents.

10/10

ylang_two

heh heh. hermiones thoughts would literally blow his mind if he performed legilimens right now, *smirk*.

10/10

ylang_two

youve got their characterizations spot-on. and i love jogger!hermione and her magical mp3 player. the stage is set....awesome start.

10/10

ylang_two

yreka! shes got it!! she must maintain her focus and control when shes in his classroom, tho.

10/10

BellatrixLives

Severus won't need to kill Dumbledore.... because I'm gonna hunt him down and AK him myself.  I deceived myself that this would end happily.  Even halfway through this last chapter... even when she started to forget, I believed it would end happy.  I thought maybe it would just fade and jump to when he brings her back... I am so sad, but don't get me wrong I loved this story, and think you did a wonderful job, but my chest aches and I'm super depressed now.  PLEASE tell me you'll be posting the sequel soon?!?  :(

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

(hugs you)*commiserates * It makes me sad when this story hurts people. Will it help if I tell you that the sequel will have a happy ending?I am working on the sequel, but I'm not going to start posting until i get a lot more written. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I'm so sorry to kick you in the guts like that. I will try to make it better as soon as I can.

10/10

BellatrixLives

Lavender is such a bitch... I really hope she is Obliviated lol

10/10

BellatrixLives

Ahhh!! I need sleep... but there are only six chapters left.... what a dilemma.  Wonderfully written, as always :)

10/10

BellatrixLives

'where did my bra go?' LMAO smooth Severus

10/10

BellatrixLives

I am very happy with this slow build-up!  So many other fics seem to rush right into Severus declaring himself which is so very much un-Snapelike.  Again, great job :)

10/10

BellatrixLives

Wonderful flow and intensity!  You've truly captured Severus' personality.  Great job :)

10/10

BellatrixLives

Oh my, someone needs to banish this perma-grin from my face!  I'm drooling on my keyboard here lol

10/10

BellatrixLives

Hmmm... I don't quite agree with the 'something went wrong' view of hers.  magically, oh yeah.... physically not so much lol

10/10

BellatrixLives

This was a very funny chapter, and i really enjoyed it :)

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