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Caramel
corianderpie765 Reviews | 6.74/10 (765 Ratings, 0 Likes, 384 Favorites )
Is there such a thing as a harmless crush? Over the course of a year, two people experience the perils of wanting what they just can’t have.
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Prof. Snape is so down on himself. He keeps misinterpreting Hermione's body language. Arg! Your teaser for Chapter 4 is very intriguing.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
He is! He does! Makes for good tension, though. Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoy chapter 4, which is queued up and should post in a few days.
Poor Hermione, revelations can really kick you hard. I'm enjoying your story and can't hardly wait another week for an update. ~sigh~ and it sounds like a winner, too.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
very good, looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thank you maam!
wow. plenty to like in this chappie!! mmg & ss 's reg duelling sessions are bad-ass. teh ronvender (LMAO!) show is nauseating as always (eyeroll). hermiones gift is exactly what one would expect of 'the brightest witch of her generation'.
i will never understand the cache of club slug. dont particularly care for the character. and mclaggen sounds like something youd scrape off ones shoes. bah!
a few days of liberty for snape! what a rare gift. voldy actually did him a favor.
i hardly consider hermiones gift to snape as mischief. and though the next remark is better suited for the previous chapter, at least YOUR dumbles has enough humanity to think that snape is as deserving of a future w/freedom, happiness and even love as his other fav. pawn, harry.
grading papers? anything for the cause!
DAMN Tom and Dumbles!!! and whaf if anything, does snape get out of it. this injection of angst and torture cut cleanly into hermiones x-rated fantasy life that was getting a tad too fluffy for my taste. and i agree with your determination that her and snapes actual relationship will be a slow burn. as tittilating as teacher-student relations can be, theyre still unethical while shes still his student.
cheeky! and i love the accompanying art.
lavender sure is a nosy boitch. but hermione needs a female confidante more convenient than jill.
ugh. whether its bellatrix or the sainted lily evans, both leave this reader utterly repulsed and cold, esp. for snapes sake.
brava! i salute your hermione, for having an awesome bff in jill AND for experimental canoodling with viktor instead of canon ronniekins for the WIN. shes gotta keep a foothold in her birth-world w/someone else besides her lovely parents.
heh heh. hermiones thoughts would literally blow his mind if he performed legilimens right now, *smirk*.
youve got their characterizations spot-on. and i love jogger!hermione and her magical mp3 player. the stage is set....awesome start.
yreka! shes got it!! she must maintain her focus and control when shes in his classroom, tho.
Severus won't need to kill Dumbledore.... because I'm gonna hunt him down and AK him myself. I deceived myself that this would end happily. Even halfway through this last chapter... even when she started to forget, I believed it would end happy. I thought maybe it would just fade and jump to when he brings her back... I am so sad, but don't get me wrong I loved this story, and think you did a wonderful job, but my chest aches and I'm super depressed now. PLEASE tell me you'll be posting the sequel soon?!? :(
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
(hugs you)*commiserates * It makes me sad when this story hurts people. Will it help if I tell you that the sequel will have a happy ending?I am working on the sequel, but I'm not going to start posting until i get a lot more written. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I'm so sorry to kick you in the guts like that. I will try to make it better as soon as I can.
Lavender is such a bitch... I really hope she is Obliviated lol
Ahhh!! I need sleep... but there are only six chapters left.... what a dilemma. Wonderfully written, as always :)
'where did my bra go?' LMAO smooth Severus
I am very happy with this slow build-up! So many other fics seem to rush right into Severus declaring himself which is so very much un-Snapelike. Again, great job :)
Wonderful flow and intensity! You've truly captured Severus' personality. Great job :)
Oh my, someone needs to banish this perma-grin from my face! I'm drooling on my keyboard here lol
Hmmm... I don't quite agree with the 'something went wrong' view of hers. magically, oh yeah.... physically not so much lol
This was a very funny chapter, and i really enjoyed it :)