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Darkness Within
neelix326 Reviews | 5.89/10 (326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )
Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for Darkness Within
phew *fans self* excellent chapter as always hun.loving this fic so much xx
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
glad you liked it!
Demands to hear about the wedding, more sex, sex,... more sex and children LOL!Great chappie!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lmao... well children I can do, definately.... the wedding and more sex, sadly not in this chapter, but I am working on a 'wedding' chapter...
You wouldnt dare end the story here would you? I demand a wedding! I would make an adorable flower girl! Bring it on!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
oh... lol. Well there is one more chapter... I hope you aren't too disappointed. There is a seperate 'wedding' chapter in the works.
Yay!! More hot sex AND they are getting married!! I can't wait for the wedding!!!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I knew this would happen .... there is no 'wedding' as such....and the epilogue is next... hope you don't hate me. I might write the wedding as a sub-chapter.
Response from sapphireduck (Reviewer)
Aw, no wedding. I don't hate you though. I still can't wait for the last chapter.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol.. I have actually remembered that I did start to write a wedding for this... so once I have it done, I'll post it. Keep your eyes peeled!!
Yay!! Hot sex scene!!!! This is wonderful. :D
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol... thank you so much, I aim to please...
awesome chapter, i can't wait to read the next one!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
ahhh thank you so much...
‘Make me feel something, Severus,’ she whispered. But no pressure really! Naturally he came through with flying colors. I cant wait to see what happens next with the new couple
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Severus is a sex god, I knew he'd cope.
I liked the letters! I feel badly for Severus wasting away whilst she is off in Paris.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
His own fault however...
Parting is such sweet sorrow ((sniffle))
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
It was sorrow... not so sweet though!
Its always a treat to see Severus bonding with baby Al. Damn that Ginny for her rotten timing!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Goodness I know, I was a bit cross with her for doing that myself!
Well that went over like a lead balloon, no surprises!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
uhuh... sigh, he's so stubborn and she can be so hot headed... it's a perfect mix!
Severus is being so damn NOBLE insisting she continue with her education. I want them to stay together and continue to play house. I sense angst ahead! ahoy!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol... you're good at this stuff...
I am tickled that married guy Harry was flustered when Hermione and Ginny started crying and it was Severus who gave him the advice ! HAHAHHA
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I know...*rolls eyes*... Harry's a bit of a drip.
I am glad Ginny is not going to let Hermione off the hook. Spill it sister!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Damn right... we all need a best mate who doesn't beat about the bush.
I can see how it would be too much to hope for that she stays in the master bedroom. Still a slutty fangirl likes to dream.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
bwhahaha.... goodness I hope you have patience!
Oh poor Hermione she is so very lost. I hope Snape doesnt let his stiffy scare him away. She needs him
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
There's a fan fic title if ever I saw one! 'Severus and the Stiffy'... it's bound to be full or angst, terror and blood replenishing potion...!
I wonder is it theraputic to see the images again through legilimancy as it is to tell someone what happened? Pooor H has a long road to walk
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
We'll see I imagine...
standing beside Potter, wand in hand, looking every inch the warrior witch I have a great mental picture in my mind with thoes words
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Goodness, me too... I wrote that, too! lol
Someone has let his survival skills get a bit soft since the end of the war. I am not naming any names of course...I am just saying.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol.. it's HERMIONE... he trusts her doesn't he!
I would think that drinking herself blind would lead to many times where she wouldnt remember what had happened. She must have some sort of 6th sense about this particular incident. Have I said lately how glad i am Snape was there? Yes indeedy.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Don't forget it's been a few days since she has had a drink, plus it was so intense. How could she possibly forget?
They are on first names and its only what chapter 4? Excellent progress. I hope she doesnt pull a runner.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Yes... life moves fast chez Severus!
I wonder why Hermione didnt object when he refused to give her booze? maybe she doesnt plan on staying long enough for that to become an issue. I wish I had calming draught. Wouldnt it be handy?
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I think she didn't object because he was her Professor. She is programmed not to argue with him!
For a second there I wasnt sure who cast teh stuipfy spell, I thought maybe Mr. Scruffy was a wizard. I must read more slowly!! Thank the fuck for Severus shadowing her!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
mmm... I just wanted him to be a creepy, smelly bloke!