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The Marriage Law
teshara216 Reviews | 5.9/10 (216 Ratings, 0 Likes, 160 Favorites )
After a new law reduces witches to chattel, Hermione Granger finds herself married to Severus Snape in order to keep her from the Death Eaters.
Hermione begins to shadow Severus in his work with the Order. They begin to form a mutual respect and love for each other after Hermione works as negotiator to a matriarchal secret society, the Amazons.
Severus stations them in Russia, where his family has a home, and his cousin is active in patriarchal secret society, the Mystic Brotherhood, who has been at odds with the Amazons for years.
After the Final Battle is fought, one would think the Order would be done with its work, but after Harry is scarred forever, Hermione is given a holy artifact, and a mysterious string of Muggle murders catches the attention of the Ministry, it seems as if their work is just beginning...
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It will be interesting to see what the document says. Charlie is certainly getting a different view of Severus. His reaction is funny every time someone tells him how kind Severus is! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks!
Now aren't they cosy...
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
:D They're about to get cozier...
I want that spell for the potatoes! :)
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
:D Molly uses it somewhere in the middle of the series and I got obsessed...
Very interested to see where your story goes. Keep up the good work!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks!
great chapter. the choking bit was classic... i can't wait to read more!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Poor Charlie! No one warned him!
Congratulations to the new (well fourth time new) proud parents. I'm sure uncle Severus will spoil him with books and potions supplies ;o)
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Sev's a good guy to have around, sometimes :D
The letter from Dobby to Cherv was wonderful. Cousins! Who knew! I laughed out loud when Cherv told Hermione the Legend of Felix the Kind – uniforms... LOL!And let's not forget to mention the arrival of little Boris. I hope Severus gets some inspiration from Pieter and Anna. The expensive potion Severus made for Anna was a thoughtful thing to do. Severus is a good man!I'm dying to know the translation of the documents Albus found, and I'm glad Charlie is able to help with them. I wonder what it is about the last part that makes it so difficult to decipher?I'm looking forward to your next update!Beth
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! I like little Cherv too! Russian house-elves are a bit more outspoken, which I though was kind of nice. The Snape house-elves aren't afraid of their masters beating them. The documents are in the next chapter :D Thanks for reading!
A boy, how sweet. I just love house elves, and I'm glad you've included them. I hope they finish translating soon, wish I could help! LOL
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! Thinks are about to get really interresting for our pair...
Am quite enjoying this. Like your original chracters. Their mutual obliviousness to eachother's attraction to is still entertaining. Am eager to see what happens next.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! The new chapter should be up soon!
A witch? Helga herself, perhaps? I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Looking forward to the next.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks!
I love reading all the neat little things in Hermione's new quarters!! This is a lovely story and I'm enjoying it very much - looking forward to more!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks!
Ah, now this is sounding familiar. Have you posted this story before on another site with more chapters?
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
yes. It's a very long running fic on ff dot net that I'm revising and posting here. I was rereading it an found many discrepencies and it was... well, bad.
ooh, awesome story so far, i can't wait to read more!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
thanks!
*grin* it seems that Helga was quite a cheeky woman...
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
She still is!
Very fun chapter -- when does Severus find out about the secrets of Hermione's bedroom?
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Little by little :D
talk about fresh sushi! love her rooms. i wonder what severus noticed in particular about the mirror. this was a delightful update. thanks so much
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! My BF hates that Sev fishes, but it's so isolated and peaceful I think it would be one of the few times wher he's able to be at peace. :D
his is a sweet (now AU) tale with gentle pacing. I am enjoying it very much. Love the interesting bathroom!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! I used to be embarassed about the AU-ness of it all, but I think I'm getting more OK with it.
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Even if a writer sticks perfectly to canon, he is still embracing AU by writing beyond what JKR has set on paper. So let us all Embrace AU, close to canon or far away. AU is what we are all here for!
cute chapter! This is a fun story. I especially liked Hermione shoving a bite of muffin into Severus's mouth to keep him quiet.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks!
Poor Ron! But he's not making it easier for Hermione or himself. an interesting twist, Snape the elder. and an animagus. Most likely an unregisterd animagus since Hermione has looked up the registered animagi already and would probably have mentioned it to the boys that one of them had the same name as thier Potions professor. An original take on the Marriage Law! Thank you. I read this before, when i was jsut starting to read fan fiction. I have forgotten the details and cannot spot the changes you have made, but i am glad you are working on this!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! Actually, since the Snape family, except for Severus, live out of the country they would not be registered with the British Ministry. :D
Response from pookah (Reviewer)
Ah! They live abroad. I didn't think of that; silly me!
Wonderful! Funny and clever, and I really truly had coffee in my mouth when I read '“Who asked your opinion?” he snarled at his erection.' I didn't spit coffee on my laptop, I just choked...
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Ha ha! Sorry! :D
Hermione is my heroe. To stand against Severus and in front of an audiance, even if it were her closest friends, WOW. Clearly she is the one perfect for him. And if the sight of her anger made him, em sensitive, the fun is only beginning. I will look greatly forward to the next chapters. Thank you so much for such a quick update.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! I thought it was better to get her fear of him over and done with. And lets face it, after seeing how much he likes Crooks and vice versa, she's on to his game.
LOL he missed the bed!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
It was the distraction Hermione had been praying for...
What a treasure trove of secrets in that one little room (with an exquisite bathroom)Loved Severus' reactions throughout this. Especially him getting so hot about mentally sparring with Hermione. Heh, heh.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Poor Sev wasn't expecting that one...
Hmmm. Is that Helga Hufflepuff?
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
:D Sev better get used to bossy women.
Her bathroom is utterly brill! Is there a waiting list to get in there? LOL I like the sort of friendship that's building between them. And his reaction to her over-zealous studying, Geeks in heat! Wonderful.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks :D