Secrets Revealed
Chapter 14 of 17
tesharaThe morning after. An Amazonian secret.
Chapter Fourteen: Secrets Revealed
When Hermione woke in the morning, she snuggled deeper under the covers.
It didn't take her long to remember she was in Severus' quarters. She quickly noticed she was alone.
'Well, it wasn't a dream then,' Hermione thought groggily to herself. 'Wonder if he's off somewhere trying to forget.'
Her question was answered when the door to the room opened and Severus tip-toed in. He was wearing his yellow bathrobe and carrying a small bottle made of blue glass.
"What's that?" Hermione asked curiously.
Severus jumped. Hermione tried not to chuckle.
"A healing potion," he said, clearing his throat. "I thought I would be able to return before you stirred."
"Almost," said Hermione. "I just woke up. What is it for?"
"I assumed you might desire it," said Severus, looking a bit embarrassed. Hermione shifted her weight as she propped herself up on one elbow and winced slightly.
"I think you may be right," said Hermione, blushing.
Severus took his robe off, he had put his under things back on, and slipped in bed with her.
Hermione tightened the sheets around herself possessively.
He looked taken aback, but handed her the bottle.
Hermione took it from him slowly and felt a little guilty of sending him the wrong message, but she wasn't used to being nude in front of anyone.
She downed the contents of the small bottle and put it on the bedside table before reaching for his hand under the covers.
Her hand brushed his thigh in her search, and she felt him get more comfortable under the sheets. She lay down beside him, and she felt his hand encircle her bare waist.
'Merlin's Beard, she looked beautiful when she blushed.'
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Hermione woke for the second time that day and noticed two trays of breakfast on the low table near the couch.
She also noticed Crookshanks purring at the foot of the bed.
"How did you get in here?" Hermione asked.
Crookshanks raised his head and yawned widely.
She turned to look at Severus sleeping on his side of the bed and reached out tentatively for her under things. She prayed he wouldn't wake while she was looking for her undershirt and bloomers.
Thankfully, he didn't wake until she was reaching for one of the trays. He groaned loudly and sunk deeper under the covers.
Severus suddenly wished he had thought to make himself a healing potion.
She certainly was bewitching, but to think he could perform like a twenty year old with no consequences was insane. He hadn't been this sore in years.
"What's wrong?" Hermione asked as she approached the bed with a tray for him.
"I think I may have over done it," said Severus, wincing as he sat up.
"Would you like a potion?" Hermione asked, a worried look passing over her face.
"I only made one spare," said Severus as he shook his head. "The rest are for Anna."
"I did take healing classes my seventh year," Hermione said in an annoyed tone. "I can brew a simple healing potion."
"Third basement down. Take a right at the wine cellar," said Severus with a chuckle.
"Excuse me?" asked Hermione, somewhat taken aback.
"My laboratory," said Severus.
"Why is it all the way down there?" Hermione asked curiously.
"I was a sullen teenager," Severus said dryly. "I liked to be left alone."
"Who would have ever thought?" Hermione remarked sarcastically.
Hermione wolfed her breakfast down quickly and then looked down at herself. "I should put normal clothing on."
"I'm sure the elves wouldn't comment, if you happen to see one," Severus said suggestively.
"It will be cold in the basement," reasoned Hermione.
"Take my robe," said Severus, motioning to the pale yellow robe that was now draped over the back of his couch.
"You just don't want me to put clothing on!" Hermione accused, her cheeks flushing.
She would have to do something about that. She imagined she looked like a tomato.
"Your under things do cover quite a lot," remarked Severus. "But I would like you to walk around half-naked, yes."
He tried to cover his smirk by sipping his tea, but Hermione saw it and scowled at him.
"I was talking about poor Charlie," said Hermione exasperatedly.
"Good point," said Severus. "You should handle that as you see fit."
"What does that mean?" said Hermione, suddenly feeling nervous.
"If you want Mr. Weasley to know our union has been consummated, then let him know," said Severus in a voice that almost sounded unsure.
"Oh." Hermione swallowed.
Honestly, she assumed he would want to handle it professionally until the war was over. She knew very well that sometimes people said things they don't mean in the heat of the moment, and she assumed it had been the talk of a lonely man that had a bit to drink. The second round this morning had been nice, but unexpected.
She had planned to be logical about this, but it looked like she wasn't the only one that wanted more. She felt lighter, like a weight was lifted off her.
Severus set his tea cup down and placed the tray of unfinished breakfast on his night stand.
"Hermione," Severus began, reaching out and taking one of her hands in his. "Our marriage has been consummated. Several times over."
Hermione stared at the back of his hand. Small black hairs dotted the back of his knuckles. She stroked them absentmindedly. She was tremendously relieved.
"If you want to tell people, you may," said Severus, sounding nervous. He was afraid she was going to ask for a divorce immediately.
"I don't know," said Hermione. She scooted next to him and kissed him on the neck. "If it suits me."
"I think you'd better get that potion," said Severus, feeling his body respond enthusiastically. She did fancy him!
"I'll be back," said Hermione, kissing his cheek and hopping off the bed.
Severus lay his head back on the pillow and allowed his eyes to rest. He was married to a competent young witch that seemed to like him. It all seemed too good to be true.
Hermione returned about an hour later and handed Severus a glass tumbler with a gold liquid at the bottom. He downed it and smiled at her.
"Very good," he said. "I would not have thought of using lemon to cut the aftertaste. What are you wearing?"
Hermione looked down at herself. She had changed into Muggle jeans, a blue cardigan and a white t-shirt. Her low sneakers were poking out of the bottoms of her jeans.
"I didn't know I was required to look like a cover girl," Hermione said haughtily. "This was sensible for potions brewing."
"Indeed," said Severus, swinging his feet out of bed and stretching. He stood and leaned over to kiss her forehead. "Well, it's lovely."
While certain pure-blood wizards and witches would sneer at her clothing as being unfeminine, Severus couldn't help but appreciate the view from behind.
Especially when she bent over to scratch Crookshanks behind his ears.
"Your supplies need to be restocked," said Hermione over her shoulder. Severus shook his head as he pressed on a panel on his wall. It swung open and Hermione saw a sparse bathroom.
"Figures," said Severus, standing in front of the toilet.
Her eyes widened in shock.
Apparently this married thing came with some unexpected surprises as well. Well, he certainly wasn't shy.
When Severus was done, he started the shower that was tucked into one corner.
"Mother has a habit of using up everything and never replacing anything. It was the only way she could get me to go out as a teenager." He sounded irritated. "She probably wanted to make sure I showed you around the city."
Hermione laughed.
"I'll go to the library and wait for you," said Hermione.
"And what are we doing today?" Severus asked, a frown creasing his brow.
"Restocking your supplies," said Hermione, leaving the room with a wave.
Severus shook his head and smiled to himself as he stepped into the warm steaming water. At least he had been saddled with a sensible girl.
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"Maybe we should have brought an interpreter," remarked Hermione as they stepped out of a fireplace and she brushed a few stray ashes from her jacket. They had appeared in what looked like a pub.
"Severus!" a jolly voice called out. "Vodka?"
Hermione spied a short, stocky wizard behind the bar cleaning mugs with a clean red cloth.
"On you?" asked Severus, a corner of his mouth quirking.
"Of course," said the barkeep, slamming a shot glass on the counter and pouring clear liquid into it. "Is this your new bride?"
"Yes," said Severus, pulling Hermione closer. "Hermione, this is my cousin, Yuri."
The barkeep had dark blue eyes, thick, brown curly hair, and a wide toothy smile that reminded Hermione of Pieter.
"I'm beginning to think you're related to everyone," remarked Hermione.
"Sometimes it seems like that to us as well," said Yuri, pouring Hermione a little vodka in a glass and covering it with cranberry juice.
Hermione drank it and thanked Yuri when he handed her a piroshki in a paper pouch.
"Replenishing supplies?" Yuri asked.
"However did you guess?" Severus asked dryly.
"It's the only time you come into town," said Yuri, smiling. "Svetlana would like to see you while you're in the area."
"We'll try to stop by, then," said Severus, his smile looking slightly pained.
"Well," said Yuri. "I have drinks to serve and you have things to get. Send me an owl later."
"I'll do that," said Severus, seemingly relieved the conversation was over.
Hermione and Severus waved good-bye and walked out into Mageeya Topeek. The small, magical shopping area was crowded and bustling with Russian-speaking wizards.
"What was that about?" Hermione asked.
"Svetlana's mother was killed by the Dark Lord," said Severus uncomfortably. "She got in the way when he first appeared in the area and was terminated."
"So, Yuri's a widower?" asked Hermione abruptly, stopping before she banged into Severus in front of a store with an incomprehensible sign.
Severus nodded. He opened the door for her as she finished her piroshki, and she hastily shoved the greasy paper in her pocket.
"Yuri's mother has never quite forgiven me for becoming involved in the Dark Lord's plan," Severus said. "She thinks the killing of Svetlana's mother is God's punishment for evil in the bloodline. I think she petitioned to have me burned the last time I came to visit."
"I'm sorry," said Hermione, truly meaning it, wondering if they were in danger.
"Master Snape!" A high reedy voice called out.
To Hermione's surprise, it had an Irish lilt mixed in with the thick Russian.
"How good to see you've decided to visit us instead of going to France this year!"
Severus chuckled.
Hermione was surprised at his response. Although she was getting used to the likable Severus behind closed doors, she was surprised to see it in a public arena.
A tiny man hopped off the stool he was standing on behind the counter and ran over to shake Severus' hand. He barely came to Severus' waist, and his coarse, stiff amber hair stood out in all directions, although he had tried to force a green cap on top of it to keep in out of his face. He wore a tan shirt, blue vest, and brown pants in a fashion that reminded Hermione of the Renaissance.
However, he was also wearing Muggle basketball shoes in obviously a child's size, and a belt with silver studs on it.
Severus laughed out loud.
"You don't like them?" the small man asked, flashing his shoes at Hermione and smiling. "They're very comfortable."
"I bet they are," said Hermione, happy to see logic applied anywhere in the world of magic.
"Where did you get those?" Severus asked.
"Traded for a silver cauldron," said the tiny man.
"You let a cauldron go for a pair of shoes?" Severus asked, aghast.
When Hermione told him how much money those shoes would go for in the Muggle world, he looked shocked.
"For a pair of shoes!"
"They're very comfortable," smiled the little man. "I'm Brian," he said, holding out his hand to Hermione.
"Hello," said Hermione. "Hermione."
"Now, what are you looking for today?" the little man asked Severus, rubbing his hands together.
Hermione and Severus arrived back home with mounds of packages heaped in their arms.
Severus convinced Hermione to leave them in the ballroom for the elves to put away.
"They're really bored," Severus insisted. "It will give them something to do."
Hermione reluctantly agreed, and they went to say good-bye to Charlie. He would be returning to England to make a report to the Order.
Not to mention Molly was expecting him for dinner.
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"But Madam, most elves are happy here. They do not want to be paid." Sloozhanka sighed as she braided Hermione's hair.
"Wouldn't you like a bit of money for your own?" Hermione asked insistently.
"We have no need for money," said Sloozhanka. "Our masters provide for us, and whatever we don't have we can conjure."
"Not all masters are as kind as yours are," Hermione pointed out.
"I agree," said Sloozhanka. "Cherv has a cousin that had a terrible family."
"I know his cousin," said Hermione. "And I agree, the Malfoys are horrible."
"Since Cherv's cousin has been freed and works for a wage, does that mean he can take time off as well?" asked Sloozhanka slyly.
"I suppose," said Hermione slowly. "The summer holidays are in full swing. I can't imagine he has a lot to do."
"Perhaps he could come for a holiday," said Sloozhanka firmly.
"That's kind of you, for never having met him," said Hermione suspiciously.
Sloozhanka tried to look nonchalant, but blushed slightly.
"Spill."
"What has spilled?" Sloozhanka, looking on the ground.
"I'm sorry," said Hermione, embarrassed. "It's a term for telling me what is on your mind." She had to get used to the idea that not everyone knew words that she found common place. She felt rather stupid.
"I hear Dobby comes from very good breeding stock," said Sloozhanka, trying to look innocent.
"Ah," said Hermione. She began to wonder what house-elf courtships involved. "He is a very good person. I know nothing of his parentage."
She wasn't sure she agreed with the joining of anyone for purposes of creating more efficient slaves at all, although if both parents were freed, the child would be born free, wouldn't they?
Suddenly, there was a scratching at Hermione's bedroom window. She looked up to see a small white beast waiting for her on her windowsill.
"What on earth is that?" Hermione exclaimed as Sloozhanka hopped off her stool to open the window.
"Snow dragon," said Sloozhanka. "Very rare. Someone interesting wants to communicate with you."
The elf struggled with the latch on the window for a moment before she pointed her wand at it and it opened easily.
"Could Dobby have a wand if he came to visit?" Hermione asked, suddenly getting an idea.
"Of course he could," said Sloozhanka as the little dragon leapt into the room and padded across the floor to Hermione on four feet.
He was the size of a bread box, and to Hermione's shock, covered in white downy feathers. His feet looked similar to large dog paws, and he walked like a canine although his face looked serpentine.
"You are a strange looking little guy," she said, reaching for the tube bound around his neck.
"Looked in the mirror lately?" said the dragon in a high, reedy voice as he looked at her half-braided hair critically. His large amber eyes blinked at her.
Hermione froze in shock. Not only did she encounter a creature she had never seen before, it was intelligent and she had perhaps offended it.
The dragon made a strange clicking sound, and by the way Hermione assessed his movements, she suspected he was laughing at her.
"I'm sorry," said Hermione. "I need to learn manners, it appears." She flushed a deep red.
"I suspect you have never seen one of my kind," said the dragon. "Your apology is accepted if you manage to fix my ear tuft." He swiped at his head with one of his legs, much like a cat trying to clean one of its ears.
"What happened?" Hermione asked, sliding to the floor and sitting near the small creature.
"It started itching somewhere near Stockholm," complained the dragon.
Sloozhanka frowned at the dragon and marched across the floor to it. She pointed her wand and said something in a mixture of Latin and Russian that Hermione didn't understand.
Hermione scooted back suddenly as a long, slender, electric blue worm was magically pulled from the dragon's ear tuft.
"What is that?" she squeaked, horrified.
"Parasite," said Sloozhanka. "Perhaps the master can make use of it in his laboratory."
The small elf left the room, and Hermione was left with the dragon that was shaking his head as if to rid itself of the feeling the parasite had given him.
"What a first impression," the dragon said. Hermione thought he sounded embarrassed.
"We're even now," said Hermione, reaching out to scratch the head of the dragon. She gently unbuckled the tube bound around his neck.
She wasn't surprised to see a sparkling blue envelope fall out.
Hermione,
Your home has been added to our transport network, so you can just use your fireplace to transport yourself to the Bibliotheque oo Amazon.
We realize it is short notice, but we would like you to join us this afternoon around three, your time.
Alexandra
"Only slightly short notice," said Hermione sighing. "That's only a few hours away."
Severus walked into Hermione's bedroom and looked slightly taken aback at the dragon's presence.
"Hello, fellow," said Severus.
The dragon sniffed the air in the direction of Severus and padded over to him.
Severus sank to his knees and scratched the dragon's head gently.
"Which tuft did it come from?" said Severus.
"The right one," said the dragon. Severus carefully parted the fine, downy feathers and looked at the small puncture wound left by the parasite. He frowned.
"Do you need to return immediately?" Severus asked.
"Why?" The dragon looked suspicious.
"It looks as if it has laid a small cache of eggs," said Severus, sounding sorry for him. "They need to be removed carefully. If you need to return immediately, I suggest you go by Floo."
"I don't think I will be reprimanded if I do not return immediately, as long as the sisters know where I am," said the dragon.
"What was that thing?" Hermione asked.
"Parasites that leech magic," Severus said. "Very dangerous. I can remove them, but it will take some time."
"Well, I think that's a very good reason to stay put," said Hermione, a little repulsed. "Sounds frightening."
"They aren't deadly if you catch them early," said Severus. "I shall write a letter to the Amazons telling them where he is, unless you just want to tell them," he said, looking at the opened envelope.
"I'm sure that would be fine," said Hermione. She watched as Sloozhanka returned and led the little dragon out of the room, patting him supportively on his back. "I'm supposed to see them this afternoon."
"Excellent," said Severus. "I'm going to meet with Pieter. We can catch up at dinner."
"Perfect," said Hermione, relieved last minute plans were going smoothly.
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Sophia looked at Hermione, her face full of concern.
"I wonder where he picked it up," Alexandra said nervously.
"He said somewhere near Stockholm," said Hermione.
Alexandra and Sophia exchanged quick glances as a soft knock sounded at the door.
They were once again sitting in Sophia's office, although it was much cleaner than the last time she had visited. A young witch that appeared to be Hermione's age brought in their tea. Her face looked similar to Alexandra's, although her hair was thick and golden blonde, cascading almost to the back of her knees. She smiled shyly at Hermione as she served them.
"This is my youngest daughter, Kari," said Sophia. "Her training will be completed at the end of the summer." Sophia beamed proudly.
"Congratulations," said Hermione. She began to wonder exactly how long training was or what it was comprised of. Kari seemed to be a bit older than Hermione.
"She's half a decade early," explained Alexandra proudly. "Our little prodigy."
"How long is training?" asked Hermione, surprised.
"Usually two decades," Sophia said. "Incredible, considering her parentage."
Hermione looked at the witches, not knowing what to say.
"We're not sure who my father is," said Kari. "Mother was assaulted."
"I'm sorry," said Hermione to both Sophia and Kari. She didn't quite know what to say.
"It was years ago, a few moments of time, and I daresay we all recovered," said Sophia, patting Kari on the arm as she poured Sophia's tea. "And I got a beautiful, brilliant daughter out of it."
Hermione got the impression Sophia had been repeating that to Kari since she was a child.
"How are Amazons usually born?" Hermione blurted out before she could stop herself.
"Well, a witch and wizard get together and do a kind of special hugging--," began Alexandra, her eyes twinkling as she reached for her tea. Kari burst out laughing.
"Naughty girls," Sophia admonished, half-heartedly. "You know precisely what she means."
"I kind of set myself up for that one," said Hermione, looking chagrined while she reached for her tea and a biscuit.
"Usually we get a volunteer from the Brotherhood that is willing to create a child," said Sophia. "We keep the girls and they keep the boys."
"Wow," said Hermione, a little shocked. She couldn't imagine being raised in an enclave of only one sex and brought up to see men as only sperm donors. She glanced at Alexandra.
"That's not how Lexi was born," said Kari, practically swooning. "Mother was in love with her father."
"That was a long time ago," said Sophia gently. "And I made my choice to stay here."
Hermione could see that this seemed commonplace for the girls, but saw the flash of pain across Sophia's face when Alexandra's father was mentioned.
"You would have been miserable in England," said Alexandra.
Sophia shrugged and sipped at her tea, but she seemed to be shooting warning glances at her daughter, who didn't seem to notice.
"Have you gone to England to see him?" asked Hermione conversationally.
"No, but I've heard of him," said Alexandra. "He's a great wizard, and I'm proud to be part of his bloodline."
"Maybe I know your father," said Hermione, thinking of all the Ministry Wizards she knew.
"I know you do," said Alexandra before her mother stopped her. "He's Albus Dumbledore."
Hermione left her tea cup pressed to her lips, but she stopped drinking, frozen in shock. No wonder she had instantly trusted Alexandra. No wonder the twinkle in her eye looked familiar.
Alexandra continued chattering about Dumbledore's accomplishments and how proud she was to be his daughter.
There was one thing Hermione knew for certain: Dumbledore had no idea.
Hermione nodded politely while the wheels turned in her head. She would have to talk to Severus. He was older, her partner in the Order, and he knew Dumbledore better than she did. He would know what to do. She glanced at Sophia, but she seemed to be totally absorbed in her biscuit and said nothing.
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"How did your meeting go?" asked Severus as they sat at the small table in the kitchen in the Snape mansion.
"It was very... informative," said Hermione, reaching for a piece of steak and kidney pie. She was relieved the elves had prepared a British meal. All this foreign food was good, but not nearly as satisfying as food she was familiar with.
The elves had gone back to their den for the night, and a small fire was crackling merrily in the hearth. They had no other light, but the small fire was enough to lend a golden glow to the kitchen.
"That was the idea," said Severus, annoyed. "Feel like sharing any of it with me."
Hermione hesitated and reached for her glass of water.
Severus looked at her, and she felt his beetle black eyes piercing her skin and looking directly into her brain.
"Do you ever use Legilimency on me?" asked Hermione suddenly.
"No. Not unless you think I need to," said Severus, frowning. "What do you know?"
"Does Dumbledore know he has a daughter?" Hermione blurted out.
"I beg your pardon?" said Severus, completely taken aback.
"I think you heard me," Hermione snapped. She didn't mean to and felt instantly ashamed but she felt jittery at this information. "I'm sorry," she said. "I didn't mean for it to come out like that."
Severus felt the corner of his mouth quirk unwillingly. It was slightly amusing to see his temper wrapped up in such a cute package. No wonder his mother thought he was adorable.
"No wonder you've been acting strange," said Severus, dryly. "You've dropped your fork twice, and I'll be amazed if your glass of water makes it through the meal. Tell me what happened."
Hermione relayed the events during tea.
"So this girl claims to be Dumbledore's daughter," said Severus, folding his arms across his chest and leaning back in his chair. "It can be proven with testing, of course, but it might be a trap to lure him here."
"Why would the Amazons want to lure him here?" asked Hermione. "And it seemed like Sophia never had the intention of telling him."
"Good question," said Severus, frowning. "How old does the girl look?"
"Mid-thirties?" Hermione guessed, pushing her now empty plate away.
"We need to tell Dumbledore," said Severus after a long pause. "I know how messy this might make things, but it's very important."
"Why?" asked Hermione. Severus frowned.
"I thought you would see it as your moral duty to tell Dumbledore," said Severus stiffly.
"Initially, yes," said Hermione. "But he has a lot on his plate, and I don't see this as a help to his state of mind. Sophia has already raised Alexandra, and although she has kept up with her fathers exploits, she didn't seem all that motivated to seek him out."
"It's a bit more complicated than that," said Severus slowly. "Hermione, if I give you access to my library, will you promise me you won't become a power-hungry dark wizard?"
"What?!" Hermione exclaimed.
"I have some books that are better off lost forever," Severus muttered.
"I solemnly swear," said Hermione, holding her hand up.
"That you are up to no good?" Severus said, smirking. "I already knew that."
"No, I won't turn you into a toad in your sleep," said Hermione. "Get to the point."
"If a powerful dark wizard got a hold of this girl, he could use her blood to magically track and kill Dumbledore," said Severus.
"What!?" Hermione gasped. "How?"
"Hermione," Severus said patiently. "Why do you think bloodlines are so important to wizards?"
"I assumed it was left over from long ago," said Hermione weakly. "Like some of the noble families still see it in England."
"It's not just societal," said Severus. "There is a science to everything we do, although it does seem backwards at times. I'm sorry, Hermione, we're going to have to tell him."
Hermione sighed deeply. "Well, they didn't tell me to keep it a secret."
Severus rose from his chair and kissed Hermione on the forehead.
"I'll take care of it," said Severus. "Have Cherv show you where my special books are."
"Will do," said Hermione.
It was only after he left to write his letter, Hermione realized they hadn't really talked about their important meetings at all.
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216 Reviews | 5.9/10 Average
You have no idea how upset I felt when I realised this story had been abandoned -- and then how relieved I was that I'd been able to read it at all. Yes, sometimes they were OOC, but I love how you SHOWED so much instead of TELLING (especially between Hermione's feelings & Severus'), and how you set up a fantastic prophecy w/ the foreshadowing.Thank you for keeping this story up so I could still enjoy it (even if unfinished). :D
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
This is the updated rewrite! The original is up and still in progress on fan fiction dot net. I will warn you, they're old chapters and still need to be polished. Thanks for liking it!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
This is the updated rewrite! The original is up and still in progress on fan fiction dot net. I will warn you, they're old chapters and still need to be polished. Thanks for liking it!
Although this story had already been abandoned I read it anyway as its a marriage contract prompt. Yes SS is quite OOC but the story line has interesting ideas - shame its been abandoned I would have kept going with this one
I'm so glad they all are safe except Neville but I'm confident in his awakening. I do hope that Harry will chose the right path or they all will be in deep trouble, again. Thank you for this most awaited and appreciated update. I saw by perusing the reviews that RL has not been kind thesepast months and I hope that it gets better with time. *hugs*
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks :)
I hope this means you'll be updating frequently again?? love this story
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
I'm rewriting and revising up to chapter 31 and then more chapters will be coming soon :)
gosh, i would think putting her into the sun would have made her greener! what an amazing update. i do hope neville pulls out of his coma. thanks and mucho smoochies
LOve it hope you aren'y done yet!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
OMG not anywhere near done!!
Kudos to you, tesh! This chapter is a whale of a way to get back into the story. I was giddy when I saw that you had updated. I have missed this story so, and I just need to say thank you for continuing with it.In the aftermath, the battle seemed to leave its mark on everyone, but Harry's injuries are especially egregious. Hermione knows that the prophesy must have been talking about Harry, but I wonder if she realizes that she will be key to helping Harry heal from this mind meld with Tom's memories. Are the Jotun the "givers of life" mentioned in the prophesy? Is Hermione a "giver of life?" The "answer" must be in the box the "onyx-skinned warrior with hair of slithering adders" gave to Alexandra for Hermione. I can't wait to find out what her birthright is. Is she an Atlantean? So many questions!!!This story has moved to a whole new level, and I am so looking forward to seeing where you will take it!Beth
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Thanks! Originally when MLC came out this was going to be a 5 chapter weekend write. (You see how well that worked out :D) Then I was going to kill it after the battle, but the Jotun and the next storyline is pretty cool so I kept going with it.
I like the idea of Harry's new look. I doubt Ginny will be able to handle it (does Harry have Horcrux Tom's memories of 11yr old Ginny as well?) even if she does want his fame and money. Someone like Luna would be able to handle it though - hmm.
I like the idea of Hermione being photosynthetic, but if she was, why didnt the doctors move her into the light earlier? Were they afraid she'd start sprouting leaves? :)
Wonder what the medusa gave Hermione.
Loved the length of the chapter.
Too much Ron time.
Really wierd stuff going on with Harry. Hopefully he doesn't turn into the next Dark Lord.
OK, you have made my mental image of Harry really creepy. i'm glad that most of them are awake, though.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
As if Harry didn't have enough to deal with ;)
Girl, I totally love your Hufflepuff-in-a-mirror! Helga don' get no respect.
Oh dear dear dear. What will they do.I am intrigued. I love these marriage law stories. I like it that Snape is not indignant and trying to refuse for Hermione's own good at this point. It was his idea. It isn't often his idea in these things.I will keep reading. Please finish the story or I shall run mad.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
hee hee! yes ma'am!
that was an absolutely terrifying battle, altho i did like the pinkish eggs. superb update. thanks so much
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
thanks!
No No not there! But ahh cliffies make it brilliant.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
hee hee! Thanks!
AAAAHHHH you're evil. Pure evil.. but i still love your story anyway.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
haha >:DThanks!
oh it's getting good - keep up the lovely story!!!
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
thanks!
I thought the way you wrote Albus' reunion with Sophia and Alexandra was just right. An illustration of a vivisected Muggle? Gross! No wonder Hermione lost her interest in reading. Severus was kind to suggest they go to the lake.The carpet ride and the enchanted trees are wonderful. Wouldn't it be great if we could have things like that? Very useful. But the most extraordinary application of magic was the Bubble-Head Charm that Severus used to protect his pelvis. Wonderful use of magic, I'd say!!!But the time for honeymooning is fast coming to a close. The Dark Lord has called his minions and the Ministry is under attack... and Dumbledore is visiting the Amazons... but that's better than being TDY somewhere else because he is with the Amazons and is much closer to Severus and Hermione than he would be were he in Britain.O yeah, and there's that little matter about Severus and Hermione consummating their marriage... by now EVERYBODY in the Order has heard the news.A lot has happened in this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next.Beth
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
thanks! this chapter was kind of the turning point from fluff into something more meaty :D
wow...interesting mental picture. what a unique use for the bubble head charm! but what now? thanks so much
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
now things get interesting
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Whew, what a chapter! Funny ideas, cool inventions, suspense... but the application of the bubble head charm is absolutely brilliant! :o))))
Author's Response: hee hee! Thanks!
Oh man, it sounds like it's all hitting the fan. I liked the meeting between AD and Alexandra. The feelings they felt were well written.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
thanks. I don't know who my bio dad is either... I was feeling a bit vunerable when I wrote this part.
WHAT !!! Just a tiny little attack is ruining an absolutely wonderful afternoon of delightful pleasures. Really, Voldithing and his Death Eater have no sense of good manners. *smirk*
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
I know! How rude!
Ha Ha wait until Molly finds out! Look forward to more.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
:D Something telle me Molly's going to have a lot more on her mind...
Ruh roh. That's not good, especially with Dumbledore away and reaquainting with his daughter. Glad he took it so well, by the way.
Response from teshara (Author of The Marriage Law)
Sophia's lucky he knows her so well...