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Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road
devsgma418 Reviews | 6.11/10 (418 Ratings, 0 Likes, 173 Favorites )
Darned Child and Devsgma have combined their talents to tell you the story of what has happened to our favorite pair. It starts with a few letters from one extremely grouchy Potions maker to the manager of a used book store. Canon through Deathly Hallows to the point of Severus Snape's supposed death at which point it becomes AU.
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OH.MY.GOD !!! I knew phone sex but THIS is so much better. SQUEEEEEEEE. I couldn't help but read this between patients during my consultation this afternoon. Some of them must be wondering why I had this big grin on my face ...
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hee! They just thought you were very happy to see them and now they think they're your favorite patient!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hee! They just thought you were very happy to see them and now they think they're your favorite patient!
I LOVE the sexual tension!! That is the best part; will they, won't they??And I have been entirely too greedy and found this story at Ashwinder and am slowly plowing through the rest of the chapters there. But I'll post my reviews here. God, it's like Christmas!!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You can review over there if you like. To be honest, I love the initial reactions from readers. Example: "God, it's like Christmas!!" ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You can review over there if you like. To be honest, I love the initial reactions from readers. Example: "God, it's like Christmas!!" ;)
hot chapter, it is a wonder the letters didn't burn the birds before they were delivered
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Maybe that's why Yorick wouldn't sit still on his perch the other day! ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Maybe that's why Yorick wouldn't sit still on his perch the other day! ;)
As I was reading I was thinking about what I wanted to write in the review. Should I expound on the erotic nature of the letters or about the flawless writting yet again, that is until I got to the lines, Simon swallowed hard and cleared his throat while casting an almost shameful look towards Yorick as he adjusted-the way he was sitting in the chair. It seemed wrong to be reading it in front of the bird.I laughed out loud. The relationship between Severus and his "chicken" brings just the right amount of levity to this story. It also shows the anxiety he is feeling (as we all do,) about being accepted, loved and desired. Isn't that one of biggest fears for all of us, wittnessing his weakness makes him all the more human, and in turn all the more endearing.Thanks again for a fabulous update.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're very welcome. Never, ever feel you can't expound as much as you like using phrases like "flawless writing." We won't object – honest! ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're very welcome. Never, ever feel you can't expound as much as you like using phrases like "flawless writing." We won't object – honest! ;)
Is this the wizarding equivalent of cybersex. Owlsex? Quillsex? Whatever, it works!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You made me laugh and we're quite glad it works for you. (It works rather well for them, too!) ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You made me laugh and we're quite glad it works for you. (It works rather well for them, too!) ;)
I am having so much fun reading this!!!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Cool! That's part of the reason we're writing! The other part is - we have to! LOL
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Cool! That's part of the reason we're writing! The other part is - we have to! LOL
They are both entirely too wanton, they have got to get together soon. I cracked up at Simon's sheepish retreat into his bedroom, embarrased that Yorick must be mocking him in some birdie fashion. Great chapter, quite steamy. I love this story you guys. :)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Too wanton, huh? (Should we cut the scenes later? Nah! She'll adjust.)We love you for taking the time to leave us a review! ;)
Response from faeriebell (Reviewer)
No! No scene cutting! I couldn't stand it. ;) Hahaha
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
LOL OK. ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Too wanton, huh? (Should we cut the scenes later? Nah! She'll adjust.)We love you for taking the time to leave us a review! ;)
Response from faeriebell (Reviewer)
No! No scene cutting! I couldn't stand it. ;) Hahaha
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
LOL OK. ;)
Oh I just love this kind of intelligent banter between those two...
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We love writing it, so it works out well for all of us!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We love writing it, so it works out well for all of us!
Wee now I get to read and enjoy all over again.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hee! Thank you.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hee! Thank you.
yeay! I am so glad to see posting has started on TPP. Congratulations! Irish
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and thank you again for pointing me in Lariope's direction. She is a wonder and a joy.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and thank you again for pointing me in Lariope's direction. She is a wonder and a joy.
great chapter... I think that the book came in... but that's just me... I can't wait to find out!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Patience, my friend. Patience. Thank you for your kind words. We really appreciate them.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Patience, my friend. Patience. Thank you for your kind words. We really appreciate them.
Ah, the flirting of wizarding nerds. Great story, keep it up!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, they are a bit nerdy aren't they? Thank you. Darned Child and I appreciate the time you've taken to leave a review.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, they are a bit nerdy aren't they? Thank you. Darned Child and I appreciate the time you've taken to leave a review.
That set of exchanges was really amusing.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We try.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We try.
their correspondence is so amusing. i am loving this story and you, too! thanks so much
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
I need to send half of that love in Darned Child's direction. We love you for reviewing! Thank you.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
I need to send half of that love in Darned Child's direction. We love you for reviewing! Thank you.
It's so great you updated so soon. Please do keep the wonderful job.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so much and we'll certainly try! ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so much and we'll certainly try! ;)
Very nice and quite witty, the stuff that intriguing fiction is made of. ;) I am looking forward to more, and will bookmark so I don't lose track. (And thank you thank you thank you for saying after the events of DH it becomes AU. As it should be as far as I'm concerned.)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
;) Thank you so very much and I hope we continue to intrigue you. As far as the AU, I am first and foremost a canon whore. It took a while to find a realistic way around JKR's end for Severus. I think we managed.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
;) Thank you so very much and I hope we continue to intrigue you. As far as the AU, I am first and foremost a canon whore. It took a while to find a realistic way around JKR's end for Severus. I think we managed.
Ahh. He is seeking something specific, apart from some entertainment by baiting Hermione.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, he is. That will become clearer later. Thank you for leaving a review, Darned Child and I appreciate it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, he is. That will become clearer later. Thank you for leaving a review, Darned Child and I appreciate it.
Wow, I love this story already and this was only the first chapter! I can't wait to read more!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you, especially for the smile residing on my face at the moment. Darned Child and I appreciate it very much.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you, especially for the smile residing on my face at the moment. Darned Child and I appreciate it very much.
First of all: Sopohorous ? Where did you find that name? Or maybe you were just coming home after a dental care or eating something very hot?
Second I JUST LOVE epistolary relationship. Particularly when one doesn't know who the other is. It's so much fun. I hope you'll be able to update regularly this fic. And I promise to be a faithful reader and reviewer.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Sopohorous was found in the Lexicon under Potions. I wanted something that went well with Simon and started with an S."sopohorous
L. sopor, deep sleep or sleeping potion Used in Draught of Living Death."
Thank you so much for the kind review. Darned Child and I really appreciate it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Sopohorous was found in the Lexicon under Potions. I wanted something that went well with Simon and started with an S."sopohorous
L. sopor, deep sleep or sleeping potion Used in Draught of Living Death."
Thank you so much for the kind review. Darned Child and I really appreciate it.
The letters are quite amusing and I like this as a beginning.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and I hope you enjoy the rest of it just as much.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and I hope you enjoy the rest of it just as much.
interesting concept. i look forward to its unfolding. thanks so much
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're welcome and thank you for leaving a review!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're welcome and thank you for leaving a review!
very intriguing – thanks for a promising start!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're very welcome and thank you for reviewing!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You're very welcome and thank you for reviewing!
This story has lead me on a wonderful journey - thank you! I very much enjoyed seeing the relationship progress through the letter format - what a creative idea! But my favorite parts of the story by far were the rants of Severus directed towards his chicken. So funny!! You both have a great talent for writing and I definately look forward to reading more!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so very much, ElecticLimeGreen! We both enjoyed writing the story a great deal. I have to confess it took much longer than anticipated, but we think it was worth it. ;)Yorick - was a lucky happenstance really. I wanted some sort of pet for Snape to "talk" to, instead of the walls, and couldn't quite see him with a "Fido" or "Spot", so Yorick the noble falcon (chicken) was born.
I want to thank you for this brilliant story that had me laughing and crying, wringing my hands in despair and pumping my fist in the air, and shouting "Yes!" at the top of my lungs... In other words, this is everything a great story should be!I apologize for not leaving reviews after each chapter because that's what I usually do, but I was enjoying myself so much that I just read straight through. I will be looking for more stories from the Shattered Wands Universe. You both are exceptional writers, and five stars are not nearly enough. A Thousands Points to Your House!Thank you, Beth
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
In other words, this is everything a great story should be!Your words of praise are quite wonderful to hear. We labored long and hard over this tale and weren't quite sure at first how it would be received due to the initial letter format. Fortunately, it was well received and we've been quite pleased. Thank you so very much, Beth. ;)
OH my! now how will they cure Simon? I've truly enjoyed this story from the very first and have done nothing but read it for the past day and a half. Now I find it is not finished and I could have sworn it was LOL. I will be on tender hooks till the next chapter is posted. Great job and please show mercy on us who await continuation.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hello and I do apologize for the long delay. My mother, who was 94, was in and out of the hospital for most of the spring/summer months and I and my daughter were there with her most of the time. She left us in September and to be honest it's taken me a little time to get back in the writing mode. Darned Child and I are working on the story and it has not been forgotten. ;)