Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road
devsgma418 Reviews | 6.11/10 (418 Ratings, 0 Likes, 173 Favorites )
Darned Child and Devsgma have combined their talents to tell you the story of what has happened to our favorite pair. It starts with a few letters from one extremely grouchy Potions maker to the manager of a used book store. Canon through Deathly Hallows to the point of Severus Snape's supposed death at which point it becomes AU.
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Oh, they're definitely improving...
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, they are and thank you for leaving us a comment. We really enjoying knowing people are reading.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Yes, they are and thank you for leaving us a comment. We really enjoying knowing people are reading.
.....OMG... *thud* (gets up) *thud* *THUD*I never ensivioned Snape being so flirty and wanton himself! But it's making me practically gnaw on the keyboard. Can't wait for what's next!!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
:) You made me smile - a lot! Thank you for that and the review.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
:) You made me smile - a lot! Thank you for that and the review.
Such exciting letters between them! I love it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We're very glad you're enjoying it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! We're very glad you're enjoying it.
i love it! I can't wait to read more! this chapter rocked! SQUEE! they're flirting!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Shhhh! Don't tell Simon that! He might quit! Thank you.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Shhhh! Don't tell Simon that! He might quit! Thank you.
Things are heating up, how will things be accomplished in a letter.Hmmmm.Love the story!!!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and we'll find out won't we?
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and we'll find out won't we?
wonderful...
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
We're glad you liked it. ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
We're glad you liked it. ;)
That sounds really much like an invitation for a date. I hope she'll accept it. Flying aorund in Snape's arms. Mmmm *dreamy sigh*
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
That kinda depends I guess. I personally don't have a good head for heights, so I'd probably decline. Kick myself later, maybe. ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
That kinda depends I guess. I personally don't have a good head for heights, so I'd probably decline. Kick myself later, maybe. ;)
*oh sigh...pant pant pant* that was beyond wonderfully erotic. hotter than any thing mentioning pink and dangling bits. thank you sooooo much. after i write this, i'm going back and read it again! 
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and you made me giggle. LOL
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you and you made me giggle. LOL
Whew the tension rises. Wow. *deep breath* This is my favorite chapter yet!!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
;) It was one of mine too!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
;) It was one of mine too!
aha! she's figured it out. again, i love their correspondence, wry, poinient, sad and even tragic. they both describe albus right on! thanks so much and i look forward to the next chapter.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! They (and we) have no great love for him at all!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you! They (and we) have no great love for him at all!
I do like this format of "courtship by correspondence" bypassing the superficial prejudices and pre-existing opinions. Ok, he knows who she is, but he is more in need of anonymity. Very good!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
We're quite pleased you like it. We were hesitant about posting it in the beginning because of the letter format. It's been quite well received, and we couldn't be happier.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
We're quite pleased you like it. We were hesitant about posting it in the beginning because of the letter format. It's been quite well received, and we couldn't be happier.
She is doing "Simon" a great service by not coming out and calling him "Severus". I think that at this point, she is well aware of who he is, or at least of who she wants him to be.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hermione is a very wise witch for one so young.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Hermione is a very wise witch for one so young.
I can totally picture Hermione sitting at the table and just pushing the biscuit across to this huge hawk perched on the back of a chair. An excellent visual you commanded!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
I bow and give full credit for that to the wonderful Darned Child. She makes me smile all the time.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
I bow and give full credit for that to the wonderful Darned Child. She makes me smile all the time.
Severus appears to getting a bit attached to his bookseller.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
:) Yes, he does, doesn't he.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
:) Yes, he does, doesn't he.
It seems the two have made some sort of peace... hopefully it continues.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Perhaps. ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Perhaps. ;)
Oh dear, what sort of question is Severus is asking? I hope he isn't trying to "forget" Lily completely. That would be tragic as it would change so much of him.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Welcome! We always enjoy having a new reader join us. More will be revealed as the story progresses, we promise. Thank you for leaving us a review.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Welcome! We always enjoy having a new reader join us. More will be revealed as the story progresses, we promise. Thank you for leaving us a review.
Nice deflection from the truth. He never denies having known her previously; he simply doesn't mention it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
He wasn't sorted into Slytherin for nothing, but then we all know that. ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
He wasn't sorted into Slytherin for nothing, but then we all know that. ;)
This is an outstanding achivement bringing these two together in this manner. You both have managed to explore the emotional nuances of both characters so completely and truthfully through the letters. None of it seems contrived or forced, this is good reading at its best. I am curious did you split the writing the letters between you, one taking Hermione's perspective and the other taking Severus's?
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so very much for such a wonderful review. We both try very hard to place ourselves in the character's shoes, so that the reactions are "real" and not those through rose colored glasses.We did. I try to see things from Simon's (Severus') perspective and I think Darned Child does an excellent job of portraying Hermione. And I think it's a very good compliment that you couldn't tell that. Thank you again.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so very much for such a wonderful review. We both try very hard to place ourselves in the character's shoes, so that the reactions are "real" and not those through rose colored glasses.We did. I try to see things from Simon's (Severus') perspective and I think Darned Child does an excellent job of portraying Hermione. And I think it's a very good compliment that you couldn't tell that. Thank you again.
This is so well written (often co-written fanfics suffer from inconsistancies in writing style and other things) that I willing to bet two things: you are both amazing authors and you have an awesome beta. Anyway, back to the story. I loved this chapter and how the plot moved forward a little (but not too much). It was perfectly paced. I can't wait for the next part--it's getting quite good.I saw that the next chapter is in the queue, so hooray!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Our beta, Lariope, is indeed awesome. My writing partner, Darned Child, is a dream and I think we compliment each other fairly well. We're been "writing" together for at least four years now in a couple of RPs, but this is the first time we've tried a fic together. We're glad you're enjoying it.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Our beta, Lariope, is indeed awesome. My writing partner, Darned Child, is a dream and I think we compliment each other fairly well. We're been "writing" together for at least four years now in a couple of RPs, but this is the first time we've tried a fic together. We're glad you're enjoying it.
I actually let out a squeek with glee when I saw a new chapter was up. I have waited for this! Let me say that I don't remember the last time I sat down and hungrily devoured EVERY word in a piece of fan fiction. In fact, I can recount only 2 or 3 ever that I have! But this is one. I want to pour through this as slowly as I can to savour every exchange. But I also want to tear through and find out what happens next! So I usually must read it twice. I don't know how else to say that I am enjoying this so so much.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You said it very well, indeed! It pleases us greatly when someone expresses how much they're enjoying our story. It's rather ironic in a way, because we were quite hesitant about posting it in the beginning. We started writing this about ten months ago and we weren't sure how the letter format would be received. Happily, it's been very well received and we're thrilled. Thank you.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You said it very well, indeed! It pleases us greatly when someone expresses how much they're enjoying our story. It's rather ironic in a way, because we were quite hesitant about posting it in the beginning. We started writing this about ten months ago and we weren't sure how the letter format would be received. Happily, it's been very well received and we're thrilled. Thank you.
Too good, very poignant at the end. I hope he doesn't freak out that he's revealed himself. Love this chapter!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so very much for leaving us a review. We'll see won't we? ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Thank you so very much for leaving us a review. We'll see won't we? ;)
Oh, so she's figured it out then... Can't wait to know;-)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Uhm – maybe? 
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Uhm – maybe?
It was time she finds out who he really is. I'm more surprised however that he let slipped out so much in his letters. He is softening which is probably a good point considering his burgeoning feelings towards her...
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
He's not used to writing long term letters and doesn't realize how easily you start to confide in that blank sheet of paper. Thank you for leaving us a review. We really appreciate them.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
He's not used to writing long term letters and doesn't realize how easily you start to confide in that blank sheet of paper. Thank you for leaving us a review. We really appreciate them.
ooooh... do i sense a reveal coming up soon? I can't wait to read more!
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
If I told you, that would spoil the story now wouldn't it? We are quite glad that you're enjoying it and VERY glad you're letting us know. Thank you.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
If I told you, that would spoil the story now wouldn't it? We are quite glad that you're enjoying it and VERY glad you're letting us know. Thank you.
Great story! The build up of their friendship (and possibly more later) is great. I started laughing at "Grandpa Simon". I wonder when she'll find out who he really is. I love the names of the owls, very clever. I can totally picture Hermione naming her owl Leontes. And Yorick--can we call him an owl? Chicken? Alas, Poor Yorick! (I've been waiting the last five chapters to use that quote in a review, and this seems to be the most opportune time). 
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You made me laugh and I thank you for that. I don't know how Darned Child came up with Leontes, but as far as the name Yorick – it was just there when I was trying to find a name for Simon's falcon.
Response from Electryone (Reviewer)
Leontes is a character in The Winter's Tale, husband to the character, Hermione! So, I really liked the naming of her owl.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Ah! I see! Finally, I see! ;)
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
You made me laugh and I thank you for that. I don't know how Darned Child came up with Leontes, but as far as the name Yorick – it was just there when I was trying to find a name for Simon's falcon.
Response from Electryone (Reviewer)
Leontes is a character in The Winter's Tale, husband to the character, Hermione! So, I really liked the naming of her owl.
Response from devsgma (Author of Beyond 84 Charing Cross Road)
Ah! I see! Finally, I see! ;)