Beautiful Terror
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THE HOGWARTS VAMPIRE CHRONICLES: Part I. There's a vampire creeping around the grounds at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. And it has claimed its next victim.
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After many years away, and many forays into other fandoms, I'm back to my roots. The Granger-Snapes!
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That was really quite interesting. Leave it to Sev to be jealous.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You're telling me! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You're telling me! ~The Mistress
Hmm. The plot thickens. I liked that you hinted that Cedric has a love interest. Could it be Hermione? Will Snape end up the tragic figure in this triangle? Hm. It could get Verrrry interesting, depending on where you take this tale. I'm really happy you decided to write another chapter and of course I'm hoping for more whenever you feel inspired. You know "Cedric" will be playing a verry hot vampire in a movie called Twilight coming out in December. Might give you some ideas... =)Perhaps you are already a Twilight fan? If not, I suggest you read that book and the ones following it. They are nearly as delicious as the Harry Potter series.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I am already adicted to the Twilight series. Stephanie Meyer is as wonderful as Jo! And I already have the release date for the movie on my calendar and the poster as my computer wallpaper!Those are some very interesting questions, but if I answered those it would give away so much! ~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
Hehe. Fair enough. I'm actually writing a fanfic for Twilight that should be completed within the next two weeks if you're interested. It takes place after New Moon. Guess you'd call it my version of Eclipse and Breaking Dawn combined. =) Anyway, I can give you a link if you're interested.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Absolutely! ~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
It's called Family Tree and it's on FF dot net. Here's the link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3548661/1/Family_TreeLove to know what you think.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I am already adicted to the Twilight series. Stephanie Meyer is as wonderful as Jo! And I already have the release date for the movie on my calendar and the poster as my computer wallpaper!Those are some very interesting questions, but if I answered those it would give away so much! ~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
Hehe. Fair enough. I'm actually writing a fanfic for Twilight that should be completed within the next two weeks if you're interested. It takes place after New Moon. Guess you'd call it my version of Eclipse and Breaking Dawn combined. =) Anyway, I can give you a link if you're interested.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Absolutely! ~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
It's called Family Tree and it's on FF dot net. Here's the link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3548661/1/Family_TreeLove to know what you think.
whoa!! wow! wonderful! thanks! more, please?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! The second chapter is actually up now! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! The second chapter is actually up now! ~The Mistress
A vampire story, yeah!Will you explain what Hermione was doing wandless in the forbidden dungeons of Hogwarts? And what's Severus's food?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course, but those things will come in the next few chapters. I promise to answer them, but it might take a little while. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course, but those things will come in the next few chapters. I promise to answer them, but it might take a little while. ~The Mistress
i want more
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm working on the next installment right now! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm working on the next installment right now! ~The Mistress
I don't "do" vampire stories, but I couldn't resist the call of the Mistress! lol!I am going to go for the ride and see where you take this. And Diggory? Don't tell me we are harvesting the dead or the fresh dead? What year is this anyway?Excellant Cliffie!Livvy
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's AU, so Cedric never died. Look into my eyes... you know that you want to listen to my voice... you know you want to read this story over and over again... look into my eyes.Okay, there's my little vampire mind trick from the old Dracula movies. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's AU, so Cedric never died. Look into my eyes... you know that you want to listen to my voice... you know you want to read this story over and over again... look into my eyes.Okay, there's my little vampire mind trick from the old Dracula movies. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Well, Hermione never did know when to stay out of trouble.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course she didn't! And now, she's about to cause some! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course she didn't! And now, she's about to cause some! ~The Mistress
Whoa! Totally unexpected. I love this story so far! Vamp Hermione and Vamp Snape. Very twisted. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I thought about leaving it just like that, but then I thought that you'd all hate me and call me an evil author if I did, so more is on the way! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I thought about leaving it just like that, but then I thought that you'd all hate me and call me an evil author if I did, so more is on the way! ~The Mistress
Oh, fabulous start. I can't wait to see how this develops.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! ~The Mistress
Interesting start. I love vampire stories so I'm expecting to really enjoy this.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks. This is a bit of a departure for me, so I'm hoping that it turns out okay. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks. This is a bit of a departure for me, so I'm hoping that it turns out okay. ~The Mistress
I'm sorry, I haven't actually read your story, but I feel the need to tell you that you misspelled "creeping" in your summary and it's really bothering me. I don't read stories which have badly spelled summaries; it's just a rule I make for myself. I thought I'd let you know.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Sorry about that. It seemed to have just been on the main page. I hope you'll read the story now that the summary has been changed. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Sorry about that. It seemed to have just been on the main page. I hope you'll read the story now that the summary has been changed. ~The Mistress
delicious update. thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
Hermione came very close to making Cedric one of her kind.... It will kill Severus for her to make Cedric hers.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Merlin, don't we know it. Hermione loves Severus, but she's also drawn irresistably to Cedric. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Merlin, don't we know it. Hermione loves Severus, but she's also drawn irresistably to Cedric. ~The Mistress
This. Not. Good. Cedric is in grave danger from either Hermione or Professor Snape. And now Professor Sprout is keen to find out why the Headmaster told Cedric a lie.Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Albus just can't help but get himself into trouble! Chapter 12 is on the way and then an epilogue, but then this part of the series is over. I hope to start the second part soon. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Albus just can't help but get himself into trouble! Chapter 12 is on the way and then an epilogue, but then this part of the series is over. I hope to start the second part soon. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Holy S**t! Snape is going to tear Cedric's heart out!I gotta get to the next chapter. This is great!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Who knows? Perhaps it will eventually come down to that. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Who knows? Perhaps it will eventually come down to that. ~The Mistress
Where does this conntection that Cedric has for Hermione's thoughts/experiences come from? And just how will Hermione feel when she finds out that Cedric is in love with her?How will Severus react when he realizes that Cedric is in love with his mate?This is going to have a sad ending, isn't it? No matter... I'm hooked! 8^)Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
As for the connection, Hermione is learning new powers and she is really attuned to Cedric. The more she thinks about him, the easier it is for her to break into his mind. The answers to your other questions? They are coming soon. ~The Mistres
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
As for the connection, Hermione is learning new powers and she is really attuned to Cedric. The more she thinks about him, the easier it is for her to break into his mind. The answers to your other questions? They are coming soon. ~The Mistres
As far as my very little brain can see into the very near future, very little good can come of this very sad situation. I wish there were some way for the vampires to be returned to their human forms.What do you have in store for us? Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
For now, you're right. Nothing good can come of what's happened. But who knows what will happen in the long run? ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
For now, you're right. Nothing good can come of what's happened. But who knows what will happen in the long run? ~The Mistress
Vampire!Snape can be a mean fellow when he is threatened. I have a bad feeling about how things will proceed. Harry, Ron, and Cedric will not give up their search for information about what is going on between the professor and their friend.A+++Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, thank you!!! We haven't even seen the worst of vampire!snape's temper!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, thank you!!! We haven't even seen the worst of vampire!snape's temper!~The Mistress
Dumbledore did know about the Potion Master's secret, after all! What will happen to Severus (and Hermione) when the Headmaster finds her?Good chapter!!!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course Dumbledore knew! He knows everything that goes on in the castle, even if he doesn't tell anyone else!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course Dumbledore knew! He knows everything that goes on in the castle, even if he doesn't tell anyone else!~The Mistress
Apparently Dumbledore doesn't know that the Potions Master is a vampire. But I'm sure that missing piece of information will soon be evident.This gets better and better!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You'll find out!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You'll find out!~The Mistress
Well, Harry has gone to get either his Invisibility Cloak or the Marauders' Map... or something I've forgotten about. 8^)Why is Cedric so interested in Hermione? Have they both had a "thing" for each other before now?Oh well, too bad, so sad... she is Snape's now... right?
Great chapter!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
The Marauders' Map. And Hermione didn't have a thing for Cedric before, but the same can't be said about Cedric.~The Mistres
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
The Marauders' Map. And Hermione didn't have a thing for Cedric before, but the same can't be said about Cedric.~The Mistres
Drinking all that blood was kinda squiky, but the story is very good! I have to wonder what will happen next... and I gotta go read all about it. 8^)Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Sorry, I knew there was a warning I was forgetting about! Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Sorry, I knew there was a warning I was forgetting about! Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Snape and Granger are vampires? This is so totally different from anything I've read before, and the beginning is so enticing, that I have to check out the following chapters!Beth
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
I really like Snape hte vampire.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks!~The Mistress
I think the triangle effect works well here, but what about Dumblybutt and McKitty? And this blood claim. . . I'm intrigued. And lookinh forward to more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I've got the last chapter in the works now, then an epilogue before the end of this part of the series. I'm hoping to start the second part soon. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I've got the last chapter in the works now, then an epilogue before the end of this part of the series. I'm hoping to start the second part soon. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress