Beautiful Terror
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THE HOGWARTS VAMPIRE CHRONICLES: Part I. There's a vampire creeping around the grounds at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. And it has claimed its next victim.
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After many years away, and many forays into other fandoms, I'm back to my roots. The Granger-Snapes!
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Interesting chapter. I wonder when the cat will get out of the bag.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hopefully not until they are well away from the school, but who knows? ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hopefully not until they are well away from the school, but who knows? ~The Mistress
Ohhhh, two chapters to read!! I enjoyed the history you gave Severus. This chapter had a nice flow.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I thought he deserved some little bit of happiness before he was changed. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I thought he deserved some little bit of happiness before he was changed. ~The Mistress
Now that's what I call penance. Whoa! Snape is one scary guy! Good work, Can't wait to see what the diary entry meant!Livvy
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know! I would rather be on the receiving end of his passion rather than his anger! He will explain that little exchange soon enough! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know! I would rather be on the receiving end of his passion rather than his anger! He will explain that little exchange soon enough! ~The Mistress
(heavy sigh) that was phemoninal end to this chapter. (fans self vigorously) thank you so much and i hope this has a happy ending (sshg forever!) 
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I suppose it will, at least for the time being. I'm tempted to break the story into pieces and turn it into a series. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I suppose it will, at least for the time being. I'm tempted to break the story into pieces and turn it into a series. ~The Mistress
Cool way to make it so that he was young again. Gypsies. Hehe. Snape is almost like a caveman in this chapter. Grunt. Mine. You. Dead. Leave. NOW. Sex. Mate. Lol. But it was entertaining to see him so unleashed. Righteous story Mistress. I'm enjoying it a lot.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
A caveman, hmm? I suppose he has to let that anger out somehow. And I'm glad you liked the gypsy trick. I knew you'd rip me to shreds (he he) if I didn't come up with a good way to make him a child again. I'm so glad you enjoyed! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
A caveman, hmm? I suppose he has to let that anger out somehow. And I'm glad you liked the gypsy trick. I knew you'd rip me to shreds (he he) if I didn't come up with a good way to make him a child again. I'm so glad you enjoyed! ~The Mistress
I'm enjoying this dark tale a lot.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I'm hoping it goes on for a good bit, as I have so much I want to do with it! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I'm hoping it goes on for a good bit, as I have so much I want to do with it! ~The Mistress
wow! great backstory. i'm dying to find out how the confrontation with dumbledore is going to pay out! thanks so much for this neat-o story!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I had a bit of inspiration from another reviewer, and I'm so glad everyone likes it! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I had a bit of inspiration from another reviewer, and I'm so glad everyone likes it! ~The Mistress
I can't wait for more!!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hopefully, chapter five will be up soon. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hopefully, chapter five will be up soon. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Nice background, it reminded me a bit of Interview with a vampire- and for a girl that doesn't do vampire stories, i LOVE that movie!!Well, Severus is going to answer to Dumbledore, but Cedric seems to have his own little obsession with Hermione.Good work.Livvy
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! There's still a bit more to Snape's history to come. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! There's still a bit more to Snape's history to come. ~The Mistress
Albus is an idiot, and I can't believe he thought he could keep people safe.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I believe that is why we love him so much. It is his fatal flaw, that he trusts so unconditionally. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I believe that is why we love him so much. It is his fatal flaw, that he trusts so unconditionally. ~The Mistress
Whoa. I was really wowed by his ability to do magic coming from his maker. Very cool. I really like that you did that. It was original. I too am wondering why Cedric is suddenly allowed in the Gryffindor common room. What is going on with that?I'm surprised Snape lied to DD. But I don't think the pretense will last very long. Well done so far. Intriguing.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I can't keep you waiting can I? (ha ha) It will all be explained, but for now let's just say Dumbledore isn't too keen on Cedric being by himself. Thank you so much for reading! And reviewing. You have no idea how the reviews feed my muse! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I can't keep you waiting can I? (ha ha) It will all be explained, but for now let's just say Dumbledore isn't too keen on Cedric being by himself. Thank you so much for reading! And reviewing. You have no idea how the reviews feed my muse! ~The Mistress
love it! more vampire love, please! great update! thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I promise I'm working on the next chapter right now! Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I promise I'm working on the next chapter right now! Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
I suspect Albus will be quite annoyed when he confirms what happened to Hermione. Good chapter I enjoyed how you manuvered a Huffelpuff into Grifindor's Tower.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course! And I thought it might be a new twist to get the houses into each other's territory. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course! And I thought it might be a new twist to get the houses into each other's territory. ~The Mistress
Ooh, does Albus survive this little encounter?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course, but not without losing his temper first! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course, but not without losing his temper first! ~The Mistress
Uh oh. Wow. Cedric's really really head over heels, isn't he? The poor bloke. I wonder if Hermione will bite him and make him a vampire too? Hehe. Well written chapter my dear. Can't wait for more!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I shant answer that. I will make you wait and see. And I hope that may have answered your question about Ced's intensity when he found out she was missing? ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I shant answer that. I will make you wait and see. And I hope that may have answered your question about Ced's intensity when he found out she was missing? ~The Mistress
Does Dumbledore know all? Very beautifully spooking and seductively written!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
He's got a pretty good idea! Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
He's got a pretty good idea! Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress
hmm, interesting-- very Phantom-ie very Raoul (Cedric) vs Phantom(Snape) though I wonder if vampires could do threesoms lol, very beautifully begun here. Looking forward to more.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I actually hadn't thought of that connection. Hmm... Anyway, thank you so much! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I actually hadn't thought of that connection. Hmm... Anyway, thank you so much! ~The Mistress
Technically this is all Dumbledore's fault, so I'd love to see how he covers it up.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You think so? Hmmm, we shall see. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You think so? Hmmm, we shall see. ~The Mistress
whooeeee!! love this story! vampire!snape and vampire!hermione...yay! thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I hope I keep you interested! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I hope I keep you interested! ~The Mistress
Hmm. Ok. I have a few issues with this chapter. First, Cedric is not a Gryffindor so the line "he hated Snape as much as the next Gryffindor" threw me a bit. Also...how is it that Snape has remained unchanged for two hundred years when we know he was eleven years old when he entered Hogwarts? Um- the scene with Dumbledore seemed a little strange, and a little rushed. Cedric's character is really intense but I'm not sure there's enough backstory for us readers to understand where the intensity is coming from. The scene with Snape was verry hot but seemed really rushed. Has Hermione's whole personality been lost? She seems like she's on auto pilot or something. I hope I'm being helpful rather than hurtful here. I think the premise is fantastic and the first few chapters were brilliant. I think this one just threw me for a bit of a loop.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
That's cool. With the Gryffindor line, I had it in my head that the Gryffindor's hate Severus the most so I figured that would be a good comparison. I didn't mean that he was in Gryffindor. As far as Snape being 11 when he came to Hogwarts, I'm going to explain that in the next few chapters as well as Cedric's intensity.Hermione's change right now is just temporary, the result of being in such intimate, calming contact with her maker. I promise I'll explain this later.I wrote this chapter a bit fast paced because of the desperation I was feeling the characters were experiencing. Cedric and Harry are desperate to find Hermione. Hermione is desperate to feel some relief from the pain of her transformation, and Dumbledore is desperate to figure out what the hell is going on in his school!I hope that helped make it a little easier to swallow.Oh, BTW, I started your Twilight story and I'm already in love with it! It flows so well with Meyer's style that I almost forgot who was writing it!~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
Ok. Fair enough. I look forward to reading the rest of this fic and getting into the meat of it. =) Thanks for the comment on my Twilight story. =) It is my first attempt at something other than poetry. I know that my writing gets progressively better the further in the story you go and I try to do the following: 1. stay in one tense2. concentrate only on the main characters3. leave lots of cliffys =P4. write better dialogue5. be mindful of my punctuationAnyway, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
That's cool. With the Gryffindor line, I had it in my head that the Gryffindor's hate Severus the most so I figured that would be a good comparison. I didn't mean that he was in Gryffindor. As far as Snape being 11 when he came to Hogwarts, I'm going to explain that in the next few chapters as well as Cedric's intensity.Hermione's change right now is just temporary, the result of being in such intimate, calming contact with her maker. I promise I'll explain this later.I wrote this chapter a bit fast paced because of the desperation I was feeling the characters were experiencing. Cedric and Harry are desperate to find Hermione. Hermione is desperate to feel some relief from the pain of her transformation, and Dumbledore is desperate to figure out what the hell is going on in his school!I hope that helped make it a little easier to swallow.Oh, BTW, I started your Twilight story and I'm already in love with it! It flows so well with Meyer's style that I almost forgot who was writing it!~The Mistress
Response from Marble Meadow (Reviewer)
Ok. Fair enough. I look forward to reading the rest of this fic and getting into the meat of it. =) Thanks for the comment on my Twilight story. =) It is my first attempt at something other than poetry. I know that my writing gets progressively better the further in the story you go and I try to do the following: 1. stay in one tense2. concentrate only on the main characters3. leave lots of cliffys =P4. write better dialogue5. be mindful of my punctuationAnyway, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Oh finally, another vampire story It has been sooo long since I read a good one and this one sounds promising.Keep it up!I wonder what Dumbledore is going to do when he finds out? (If he doesn't know already) O and Harry's reaction must be worth a million!!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I hope I live up to your expectations! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I hope I live up to your expectations! ~The Mistress
Loving the story so far!! Any chance that "Cedric" is going to show up in another place and time as "Edward"? I love the Twilight series too, even though I am 30. I don't write, but have wondered if there would be any HP/Twilight crossover fics featuring Cedric/Edward! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to the next chapter!!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! No, this isn't a crossover, but don't think I havent' thought about writing one. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! No, this isn't a crossover, but don't think I havent' thought about writing one. ~The Mistress
Interesting that Harry was sent to do busy wory and Cedric stayed to talk to the Headmaster. I expected the opposit.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Dumbledore expects more is going on with Cedric that Harry does. They need some time to talk. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Dumbledore expects more is going on with Cedric that Harry does. They need some time to talk. ~The Mistress
Nice, I think Severus is acting in character but I'm wondering how he's 200 yrs old.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
That will be explained in a few chapters. Along with the answer to a few other questions. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
That will be explained in a few chapters. Along with the answer to a few other questions. ~The Mistress
Wonder who'll remember the Map first Harry or Hermione?Because he really doesn't need to see her in Snape's quarters...Looking forward to the next!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hmm, I wonder indeed. But will the deepest, forbidden dungeons even show up on the Map??? Were the M
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
ders brave enough to traverse the most dangerous parts of Hogwarts? ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Hmm, I wonder indeed. But will the deepest, forbidden dungeons even show up on the Map??? Were the M
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
ders brave enough to traverse the most dangerous parts of Hogwarts? ~The Mistress