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Beautiful Terror
themistresssnape93 Reviews | 6.27/10 (93 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
THE HOGWARTS VAMPIRE CHRONICLES: Part I. There's a vampire creeping around the grounds at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. And it has claimed its next victim.
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After many years away, and many forays into other fandoms, I'm back to my roots. The Granger-Snapes!
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You've kept me up late into the night. Now I'm a creature of the night too, I guess. Intriguing story. I'm a bit sad for Severus, though. He loves Hermione without reservation and she is torn between two men. How hurtful is that? At least she realizes it.Loved Severus' treatment of Dumbledore a few chapters back. It was nice to see him not being pushed around by Albus for once. It's too bad he didn't snap the old fogey's neck.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm so sorry to have kept you up! But I am glad that you enjoyed it! The triangle will be answered by the end of the series, but I may have to leave you hanging for this one. I've got chapter 12 in the works now, then an epilogue before the end of this part of the series. I hope you enjoy!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm so sorry to have kept you up! But I am glad that you enjoyed it! The triangle will be answered by the end of the series, but I may have to leave you hanging for this one. I've got chapter 12 in the works now, then an epilogue before the end of this part of the series. I hope you enjoy!~The Mistress
I still think Severus is getting the shaft here. Will Hermione die if she just drains Cedric? Let her taste his blood, all of it, then she and Severus can continue on together.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
No, she won't die, but she would definitely be unhappy after she realized that she killed him. I promise this will be resolved by the end of the series. I'm thinking chapter 12 will be the last one for this part (and an epilogue). A second part of the series will be on its way as soon as possible.~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
No, she won't die, but she would definitely be unhappy after she realized that she killed him. I promise this will be resolved by the end of the series. I'm thinking chapter 12 will be the last one for this part (and an epilogue). A second part of the series will be on its way as soon as possible.~The Mistress
She just gave away what happened to her! Poor Severus... all he ever wanted was a mate, and now she is turning from him.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Subtlely, yes. But it will take Cedric a while before he really starts putting things together.~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Subtlely, yes. But it will take Cedric a while before he really starts putting things together.~The Mistress
Brilliant job, DUmbledore. You forgot to spread the word.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Oh course he didn't. He wouldn't be Dumbledore if he told everyone what he knew!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Oh course he didn't. He wouldn't be Dumbledore if he told everyone what he knew!~The Mistress
Oh no! Severus is going to SHRED Cedric!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not for now, but who knows? It may come to that in the end. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not for now, but who knows? It may come to that in the end. ~The Mistress
I do wonder why Hermione was so desparate for Cedric's blood. She is obviously bonded with Snape, but would she have formed a true bond with Cedric had she lived as a mortal?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You are going to hate this explanation, but it will be resolved later in the series. I promise!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You are going to hate this explanation, but it will be resolved later in the series. I promise!~The Mistress
*rolls eyes* Of course Albus blames himself. It can't be because of anything else... no, no, it is up to him alone.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, this time he's got no one but himself to blame. Idiot didn't tell anyone! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, this time he's got no one but himself to blame. Idiot didn't tell anyone! ~The Mistress
Dumbledore had just the excuse, didn't he? It makes me wonder if he wasn't always prepared for this eventuality.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You should have known he would be. He'll plan for the worst, but he'll do nothing to prevent it. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You should have known he would be. He'll plan for the worst, but he'll do nothing to prevent it. ~The Mistress
Whew... at least Severus stopped Dumbledore before he got to the room!Brilliant backstory on Severus. I just love vampire tales.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I'm quite fond of them myself just now. The Twilight saga and the House of Night series are my favorites right now, but I've always been fond of Stoker and Anne Rice. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! I'm quite fond of them myself just now. The Twilight saga and the House of Night series are my favorites right now, but I've always been fond of Stoker and Anne Rice. ~The Mistress
Oh dear... Hermione is sitting naked in that chair and Dumbledore is on his way down. LOL
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Can't help getting into trouble, can she?~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Can't help getting into trouble, can she?~The Mistress
Oh, I had to read it a few times before I thought of the Marauder's Map.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I had forgotten about it myself until one of my friends mentioned it. I thought it would be useful!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I had forgotten about it myself until one of my friends mentioned it. I thought it would be useful!~The Mistress
Uh-oh... don't tell Cedric anythign that would have him going to the dungeons!(Though I would laugh, since Robert Pattinson played Cedric in the movies and also Edward in Twilight... Edward the vampire.)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, I've already seen a bunch of your other reviews (Thanks by the way!!!!). RPatzz really was an inspiration for this story, and that I've been reading a lot of vampire novels lately. I hope you enjoy! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Well, I've already seen a bunch of your other reviews (Thanks by the way!!!!). RPatzz really was an inspiration for this story, and that I've been reading a lot of vampire novels lately. I hope you enjoy! ~The Mistress
yeow...poor cedric may be in deep doo-doo. love the interaction between her and the headmaster and esp her and severus. thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yeah, I'd hate to see Severus when he get's Hermione alone after that one! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yeah, I'd hate to see Severus when he get's Hermione alone after that one! ~The Mistress
I found it amazing that Hermione threatened the Headmaster like that. I think that one area of the story clearly illustrated just how much she had changed. I'm a bit worried for Cedric, he is probably in danger from her.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You'd be surprised what else Hermione is about to get into! Trust, me Cedric is in no more danger than he wants to be. ~ The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You'd be surprised what else Hermione is about to get into! Trust, me Cedric is in no more danger than he wants to be. ~ The Mistress
Snape is not going to like her interaction with Cedric, is he?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course not. You know how possessive Severus can be. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course not. You know how possessive Severus can be. ~The Mistress
oh boy, and now we know how "edward" was made heehee
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I wish! If Stephenie Meyer hadn't already laid the ground work for that one, I would so totally do a cross-over! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I wish! If Stephenie Meyer hadn't already laid the ground work for that one, I would so totally do a cross-over! ~The Mistress
Uh-oh! Can't wait to see how classes will be on Monday!Livvy
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, let's just see if she can avoid tearing the headmaster apart when he visits! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, let's just see if she can avoid tearing the headmaster apart when he visits! ~The Mistress
Albus was being an idiot, as always. No, I'm not a fan of his, and became less so after DH. Such calculated disregard for the individual.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
He becomes even moreso in the next chapter, even though he has been warned time and again. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
He becomes even moreso in the next chapter, even though he has been warned time and again. ~The Mistress