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Chapter 10 of 14
themistresssnapeIX
Severus watched their exchange with a hollow feeling in his chest. He fought to keep the snarl from rippling through him as Hermione molded her cold, hard body to Cedric's. The warmth of the younger wizard must have been blistering against her skin, the draw of his pulsing blood nearly unbearable. Severus could feel the desire for his blood as it coursed through her. He cursed the connection he had with his darling newborn mate. He didn't want Hermione's desperation for Diggory's blood filling his mind.
If it were possible for a vampire to cry, Severus Snape would have been. He was so closely linked with his creation that he felt everything as she did. It worried him that she was so strongly drawn to the boy, that her infinite brain was so entirely consumed with the intoxicating scent of his blood. Never in his long existence had Severus experienced such a desire for a human's blood. Perhaps it was because she was so young that her bloodlust was so strong. But perhaps it was much worse.
Cedric was the first scent she had latched onto. She seemed to be losing herself in the warm heat of his blood. It was unusual, rare in a newborn, but Severus had heard of it happening before. His Hermione had made a Blood Claim on Cedric Diggory. The temptation of his blood would continue to torment her, burning fire through her throat and consuming her thoughts. There was nothing she could do about it. She could not control it. A Blood Claim was something that happened regardless of whether the vampire already had a mate or not. It would drive her to the edge of sanity until she had partaken of his blood...enough to either kill him or change him.
The smell of Cedric's blood seemed to sear from her mouth to the pit of her stomach. Her body clenched as his heat sank through her skin into her bones, simmering in her dry veins, as he stroked her icy skin with deft fingers.
"Cedric," she mumbled her voice low and pleading. Her fingers contracted around his brown locks as a heady spasm of desire pulsed through her. She was clutched against him, matching him in a way that was impossible with her maker. "Cedric, my Cedric."
"Yes," the young wizard replied in a husky, lust-filled voice. He groaned and ran his fingers through her silken hair. He repressed a shiver as the scent around her permeated his thoughts. Images of Hermione whispered through his mind, of her face flushed with pleasure, a wide smile gracing her soft lips, her white teeth glistening. An unexplainable urge welled up in him to sacrifice himself to those beautiful lips and those shining teeth. "My perfect Hermione."
A bolt like electricity shot through her, scorching every inch it touched and forcing her gaze up to Severus. His eyes were a dark, angry black that reflected her form in their infinite depths. She saw the red bloodlust that pulsed in her eyes, the way the air around her seemed to pop and crackle like shattering ice. Her self-control crashed around her feet, and she darted away from Cedric toward the dungeon stairs, skirting away from the light filtering through the windows above the front doors.
She fought back a guttural snarl as she edged away from the light. Her eyes flicked to Snape, who had stalked his way through the Great Hall and was crossing the entrance hall. His black eyes were fixed on her face, and Cedric was gaping at them with wide, curious eyes as she fled from them both. She moved with nimble grace as she retreated down the stairs, her maker following close behind her.
"You're not to do that again," Severus grunted through clenched teeth. His temper was flaring, and his eyes tinted orange and red. "Stay away from the boy."
Hermione glared at him, fighting the urge to snarl and bare her teeth. She felt the rumble rising in her chest war with the feeling of calm he was trying to pass to her. "Stop it!" she screamed, lashing out her arms. Blood splattered onto the floor from the bowl in her hands. "Stop forcing me to feel things, Severus! I want to be angry. I want to feel human!"
He was across the room in a fraction of a fraction of a second. His fingers clenched around her arms in a vice-like grip. "You. Are. Not. Human. Anymore." He shook her hard. Fire blazed in his eyes as he bared his teeth at her. "You are like me, Hermione, and you will be forever. There is no going back. Only forward...to walk the earth forever or to eternity in the pits of hell!"
She wanted to cry, but knew no tears would come. This form would not know how to cry. Her only comfort was the tightness in her throat and the burning behind her eyes. "Please, Severus," she sobbed dryly. "Please, stop. You must try to understand! I can't help it! I smell his blood and hear his heart and I cannot stop what I do. I didn't know what I was doing to him!"
"It is a pheromone, Hermione," he said, his voice still tight, but his eyes and grip softening. "It is within your very skin, your breath. From the venom that changed you, so comes this. We are nearly irresistible to our prey, dearest. We are beautiful; we draw them to us, promising the fulfillment of their deepest urges. And when they have surrendered to us, we take what we want from them."
He released her, and his eyes faded to a pale gray. Her thoughts were so open to him that he could sense what she wanted from Cedric Diggory. But he needed to hear her say it aloud. "Tell me, my love, what it is you want with the boy."
She looked up, her eyes burning the deepest black. She knew her words would break his heart, but neither could she refuse him. "I want him. To change him as you have changed me."
Cedric sat at the back of the Herbology classroom, his head spinning. One moment, Hermione had been in his arms in the most obscene way. The next, she was a blur disappearing down the dungeon stairs in fear as Snape stormed behind her. He stared after her, his head still filled with the fog induced by the scent that surrounded her. Rage blazed through his veins at the sight of the way she ran in fear from the bastard.
"Best go on to class, Mr. Diggory," Dumbledore said, placing a gentle hand on his shoulder. "Miss Granger will be just fine. Professor Snape is simply making sure she takes her treatment on time."
Cedric did as he was told, but with growing dread. He feared he would not see Hermione again, not like today. He couldn't explain what happened, why he had said and done such things. All he could remember was that he had felt the overwhelming desire to do anything Hermione Granger asked of him.
Professor Sprout was asking him a question, but he could not make his brain form words. He understood her when she asked him to remain behind after class, but his mind ceased to function afterward.
"Is there something the matter, Cedric?" Professor Sprout asked as she took the seat next to him. "You look dreadfully pale. Do you need to go to the hospital wing?"
He shook his head, glad some of the fog lifted as he did. "No, ma'am," he replied softly. "I've just been worried about Hermione Granger. She was attacked by a vampyr mosp in the dungeons this weekend."
"Nonsense, Cedric! A vampyr mosp could not survive in the Hogwarts dungeons. It is far too cold for them. No, they prefer the warmth of the tropics and the humidity of the jungles." Professor Sprout looked at him quizzically. "Who told you Miss Granger was attacked by a vampyr mosp?"
"Harry Potter," he replied. "But it was the headmaster that told him. Professor Snape's the one that found her." His brows drew together and his forehead scrunched in confusion.
"The headmaster told you boys this?" Professor Sprout said, her voice filled with disbelief. Cedric nodded, confusion on his handsome face. "Perhaps there is a good reason for that then. Why don't you go on to the Common Room and rest? I'll let your other teachers know that you aren't feeling well."
Cedric thanked her and walked out of the classroom in a daze. He was trying to understand why Professor Dumbledore would make up such a lie. A dull, throbbing ache was beginning over his eyes as he tried to sort through everything that had happened in the past several days. He could not make the pieces fit together, Dumbledore's lie, the drastic change in Hermione's demeanor and appearance, the blind rage that coursed through Snape. Something isn't right, Cedric thought as he fell onto his bed in the Hufflepuff dormitory. Something's going on with Hermione, and I'm going to find out what.
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I have enjoyed this story immensely! i have always found Snape as a vampire stories incredibly fascinating and the addition of a sincere and bashful Cedric is extremely enticing. i like the way you play with your characters and hope to the heavens that you will complete the second part soon... there is nothing more depressing than a well written but abandoned story... keep it up!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm working on the second part now! I lost my muse in the middle of having kids and working, but it's back! I'll be adding a new chapter soon! Thanks for reading! ~ The Mistress
OK, a cliffhanger ending, I'm a bit saddened by that but it is quite understandable. What is the name of the next story in the series so I can follow it?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress
Interesting story so far, quite enjoyable.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you very much!~The Mistress
Interesting, if Cedric is figuring things out will he still be accepting of Hermione?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!
I can't find my magical beasts book. What is a vampyr mosp? It looks as though Snape found a way to say MINE and really mean it. I'm enjoying this flic and I'm glad you're considering a series.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm not sure they appear in the books, but they are in the GoF video game. They're these flying creatures that sting and paralyze someone. Annoying little buggers. I've actually started part 2 of the series, it's under Vampire Hunting. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
You ended "Beautiful Terror" with a real cliffhanger, evil you. I think you have a built-in audience for "Vampire Hunting." I know I looked for this as soon as I finished "Terror." If Sev isn't meant to be with Hermione, I'll be glad to offer my neck.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm not sure they appear in the books, but they are in the GoF video game. They're these flying creatures that sting and paralyze someone. Annoying little buggers. I've actually started part 2 of the series, it's under Vampire Hunting. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
You ended "Beautiful Terror" with a real cliffhanger, evil you. I think you have a built-in audience for "Vampire Hunting." I know I looked for this as soon as I finished "Terror." If Sev isn't meant to be with Hermione, I'll be glad to offer my neck.
Go Cedric. Dumbledore has some repenting to do. It seems that Cedric won't let him off easily, and that's good. The old man's a menace.I'm looking forward to the next installment, as you can't just leave us all hanging here.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of Course Dumbledore isn't getting off easily! Cedric is pissed! Anyway, I've actually started on the prologue to part 2: Vampire Hunting and hope to have it out soon. University is a little crazy right now, and I'm down with the flu, so bear with me. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of Course Dumbledore isn't getting off easily! Cedric is pissed! Anyway, I've actually started on the prologue to part 2: Vampire Hunting and hope to have it out soon. University is a little crazy right now, and I'm down with the flu, so bear with me. ~The Mistress
*Sniff* That was so sad! How could she just up and leave like that? And what she did to Severus... he was just trying to save her.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress
Ugh! Cold fish sex. Eww. How old is Hermione in this story? If she's at school with Cedric that would make her like 14, wouldn't it? Little young for Snape, unless Cedric failed 7th year a few times.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's only their bodies that are cold, honey! Anyway, as it is alternate universe, i bumped Hermione and the boys up a few years, so they are just a year below Cedric. But remember, Hermione was born in September, which makes her a year older than the rest of her class. So, she's 17. Sorry for the confusion. ~The Mistress
Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)
I understand its AU but its Herm's 4th year when Diggory kicked it. so even with the time turner the MoM only added 1 year to her age so at most in 4th year, she'd be 16 and Cedric was 17. But Snape is a Teacher (not that I care, if I was there) just saying it should be a tad bit clearer on Cedric still being alive and that they are all older so it doesn't look like sex with a minor. That's all I was concened about."After all, there ARE rules to follow, don't you know?"Signed,Percy Stick-up-my-arse WeasleyJunior Undersecretary to the Garden Gnomes!!!!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's only their bodies that are cold, honey! Anyway, as it is alternate universe, i bumped Hermione and the boys up a few years, so they are just a year below Cedric. But remember, Hermione was born in September, which makes her a year older than the rest of her class. So, she's 17. Sorry for the confusion. ~The Mistress
Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)
I understand its AU but its Herm's 4th year when Diggory kicked it. so even with the time turner the MoM only added 1 year to her age so at most in 4th year, she'd be 16 and Cedric was 17. But Snape is a Teacher (not that I care, if I was there) just saying it should be a tad bit clearer on Cedric still being alive and that they are all older so it doesn't look like sex with a minor. That's all I was concened about."After all, there ARE rules to follow, don't you know?"Signed,Percy Stick-up-my-arse WeasleyJunior Undersecretary to the Garden Gnomes!!!!
i didn't know there was an epilogue. dumbledore has a lot to answer for now and always. thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, I hadn't planned on one, but that last bit just didn't feel like it fit at the end of chapter 12. I'm not sure yet what will happen to Dumbledore just yet, but trust me it will be drastic. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, I hadn't planned on one, but that last bit just didn't feel like it fit at the end of chapter 12. I'm not sure yet what will happen to Dumbledore just yet, but trust me it will be drastic. ~The Mistress
oh my. what a sad situation. i can't imagin how you are going to resolve this. i'm looking forward to the next part of this saga! thanks so much.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress
Does a small part of humanity still exist in Hermione? How sweet that she warned him of when she would be dangerous and allowed him to leave.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress
So, did he figure it out? But I like that he trusts her. Severus is not going to be happy at all.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress
The most horrid of all tortures: to be in the bed of the perfect man, and unable to appreciate your circumstance!! Really interesting turns here. I'm sure we'll get to here more from Severus soon. I do miss him! =]
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress
beautiful and haunting. lovely update. thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress
That was frightening. Severus is not a happy vampire.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress
wow...what an update! thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress
Oops, Professor Sprout let Albus's lie be found out. Interesting chapter, I wonder what Hermione will do about Cedric, and how Severus feels about it.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress
Haunting text my dear. I think it's really well written and dramatic. I think that it will take several chapters before we can really get into the beefy triangle I'm hoping for. =) I know! I know! I'm so bad...lol. What can I say? I think it would be verrrry hot if Ced was bitten too by Hermione and then there were three vampires, two of whom love Hermione like crazy. Sigh...Anyway, keep up the fantastic work Mistress. It's a really good fic.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress
I must say I'm really liking how this story is developing. I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
I don't know where this is going but I'm loving the ride there!This is such a different story that I can not help but be drawn in to it! Excellent job!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress
This chapter really made me feel sorry for Albus. You can feel the tension even though this was a fairly short chaper.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress
Interesting chapter, Albus certainly has his work cut out for him. Cedric's dreams caught my attention. Is he having some kind of 'dream true'?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress
No, it won't ever be OK. And why doesn't Hermione want to leave? She can't stay.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress
poor ced. i don't think this is going to have a happy ending. i always root for the vampires and except for love at first bite they almost never win. thanks so much for this facinating update to an enthralling story.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Couldn't Hermione have both? 
~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
oohhh yeah! even better!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Couldn't Hermione have both? ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
oohhh yeah! even better!
Albus's temper tantrum got him no where. That was not very smart of the old man.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I'm afraid it was a bad idea to cross Severus. I was tempted to leave bruises on the headmaster's neck, but I thought that might be a bit obvious. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I'm afraid it was a bad idea to cross Severus. I was tempted to leave bruises on the headmaster's neck, but I thought that might be a bit obvious. ~The Mistress