New Chapter for Beautiful Terror

OK, a cliffhanger ending, I'm a bit saddened by that but it is quite understandable. What is the name of the next story in the series so I can follow it?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress

9/10

Interesting story so far, quite enjoyable.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you very much!~The Mistress

9/10

Interesting, if Cedric is figuring things out will he still be accepting of Hermione?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!

0/10

FruGal

I can't find my magical beasts book. What is a vampyr mosp? It looks as though Snape found a way to say MINE and really mean it. I'm enjoying this flic and I'm glad you're considering a series.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I'm not sure they appear in the books, but they are in the GoF video game. They're these flying creatures that sting and paralyze someone. Annoying little buggers. I've actually started part 2 of the series, it's under Vampire Hunting. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress

Response from FruGal (Reviewer)

You ended "Beautiful Terror" with a real cliffhanger, evil you. I think you have a built-in audience for "Vampire Hunting." I know I looked for this as soon as I finished "Terror." If Sev isn't meant to be with Hermione, I'll be glad to offer my neck.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Response from FruGal (Reviewer)

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debjunk

Go Cedric. Dumbledore has some repenting to do. It seems that Cedric won't let him off easily, and that's good. The old man's a menace.I'm looking forward to the next installment, as you can't just leave us all hanging here.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Of Course Dumbledore isn't getting off easily! Cedric is pissed! Anyway, I've actually started on the prologue to part 2: Vampire Hunting and hope to have it out soon. University is a little crazy right now, and I'm down with the flu, so bear with me. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

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debjunk

*Sniff* That was so sad! How could she just up and leave like that? And what she did to Severus... he was just trying to save her.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress

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Morsmordre

Ugh! Cold fish sex. Eww. How old is Hermione in this story? If she's at school with Cedric that would make her like 14, wouldn't it? Little young for Snape, unless Cedric failed 7th year a few times.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

It's only their bodies that are cold, honey! Anyway, as it is alternate universe, i bumped Hermione and the boys up a few years, so they are just a year below Cedric. But remember, Hermione was born in September, which makes her a year older than the rest of her class. So, she's 17. Sorry for the confusion. ~The Mistress

Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)

I understand its AU but its Herm's 4th year when Diggory kicked it. so even with the time turner the MoM only added 1 year to her age so at most in 4th year, she'd be 16 and Cedric was 17. But Snape is a Teacher (not that I care, if I was there) just saying it should be a tad bit clearer on Cedric still being alive and that they are all older so it doesn't look like sex with a minor. That's all I was concened about."After all, there ARE rules to follow, don't you know?"Signed,Percy Stick-up-my-arse WeasleyJunior Undersecretary to the Garden Gnomes!!!!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)

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i didn't know there was an epilogue. dumbledore has a lot to answer for now and always. thanks so much

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Yes, well, I hadn't planned on one, but that last bit just didn't feel like it fit at the end of chapter 12. I'm not sure yet what will happen to Dumbledore just yet, but trust me it will be drastic. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

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oh my. what a sad situation. i can't imagin how you are going to resolve this. i'm looking forward to the next part of this saga! thanks so much.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress

10/10

Does a small part of humanity still exist in Hermione? How sweet that she warned him of when she would be dangerous and allowed him to leave.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress

10/10

So, did he figure it out? But I like that he trusts her. Severus is not going to be happy at all.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress

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rhiannon113

The most horrid of all tortures: to be in the bed of the perfect man, and unable to appreciate your circumstance!! Really interesting turns here. I'm sure we'll get to here more from Severus soon. I do miss him! =]

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress

0/10

beautiful and haunting. lovely update. thanks so much

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress

10/10

That was frightening. Severus is not a happy vampire.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress

0/10

wow...what an update! thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress

9/10

Oops, Professor Sprout let Albus's lie be found out. Interesting chapter, I wonder what Hermione will do about Cedric, and how Severus feels about it.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress

10/10

Marble Meadow

Haunting text my dear. I think it's really well written and dramatic. I think that it will take several chapters before we can really get into the beefy triangle I'm hoping for. =) I know! I know! I'm so bad...lol. What can I say? I think it would be verrrry hot if Ced was bitten too by Hermione and then there were three vampires, two of whom love Hermione like crazy. Sigh...Anyway, keep up the fantastic work Mistress. It's a really good fic.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress

10/10

Marty21

I must say I'm really liking how this story is developing. I look forward to the next chapter.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you!~The Mistress

10/10

OnlyMoonLight

I don't know where this is going but I'm loving the ride there!This is such a different story that I can not help but be drawn in to it! Excellent job!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress

10/10

This chapter really made me feel sorry for Albus. You can feel the tension even though this was a fairly short chaper.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress

10/10

Interesting chapter, Albus certainly has his work cut out for him. Cedric's dreams caught my attention. Is he having some kind of 'dream true'?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress

10/10

No, it won't ever be OK. And why doesn't Hermione want to leave? She can't stay.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress

0/10

poor ced. i don't think this is going to have a happy ending. i always root for the vampires and except for love at first bite they almost never win. thanks so much for this facinating update to an enthralling story.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Couldn't Hermione have both? ~The Mistress

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

oohhh yeah! even better!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)

Couldn't Hermione have both? ~The Mistress

Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)

oohhh yeah! even better!

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