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Chapter 2 of 14
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"Tell us again, Cedric," whined the girls who were crowding around the Hufflepuff table. "Tell us about the catch you made on Saturday. Please?"
Cedric Diggory smiled, flashing his perfect teeth and pushed his caramel hair away from his forehead. His blue eyes sparkled as he leaned forward on the table. "Oh, okay. Ravenclaw was playing great and Cho was circling high over the pitch watching for the snitch. I was tailing her, knowing that I could get to the snitch in a dive quicker than she could. I mean," he chuckled, "she's good and all, but my broom is much better than hers."
The girls swooned around him, chins in their hands, their eyes sparkling with admiration for their Quidditch hero. "Then what happened, Cedric," breathed a blonde haired girl who sat across the table from him.
He grinned roguishly and continued with his play-by-play retelling of the latest match against Ravenclaw. With each daring twist and dive, the girls gasped and cheered. They watched him with dreamy expressions on their faces, committing his pale blue eyes and tousled locks to memory for use in a thousand daydreams. Seemingly oblivious to his ability to entrance the females of Hogwarts, Cedric reveled in his status as the hero of the pitch.
Besides, the only female he wanted to entrance wasn't even in the room.
Harry was beginning to worry. No one had seen Hermione in hours, not since she had left the common room after dinner the night before. She had said she was going to the library to do some research for an essay for Professor Henxley, the new Defense Against the Dark Arts professor. It wasn't unlike Hermione to disappear into the library for hours on end, but Harry was going to check on her anyway. Knowing Hermione, she had fallen asleep at her study table with half of the contents of the library around her.
He left the Great Hall and turned up the stairs to the upper floors. Something didn't feel right to him. He could tell when Voldemort was nearby... or any kind of trouble for that matter... and he was getting that feeling now. The feeling made his skin crawl and his stomach tie in knots. Hermione was usually always in the common room before curfew. Harry knew that because he and Ron were accustomed to waiting up for her until she got back.
Madam Pince was just opening the wide doors of the library when Harry turned the corner into the corridor. The vulture-like woman glared at him as he slipped past her into the room. His emerald eyes searched the tables, looking desperately for the familiar form of Hermione's bushy hair splayed out over a pile of books. But Hermione wasn't there.
Harry returned to the front of the library, where Madam Pince was perched behind the desk. Her eyes watched him like those of a hawk as it stalked its prey. "Can I help you, Mr. Potter?" she said, her voice as old and crackling as the worn pages of her many books.
"Yes, ma'am. I'm looking for Hermione Granger. Have you seen her this morning?"
The librarian seemed to soften for an imperceptible moment at the mention of Hermione's name. "Good girl, that one," she mumbled. "Takes care of the books, respects them, she does." She turned her sharp eyes on him again. "No, Mr. Potter. I haven't seen Miss Granger since she left here last night. She was on her way to see Professor Snape about an assignment."
Several floors below, Hermione was lying on the bed, tremors racking through her. She was curled into a tight ball with her forehead pressed against her knees and her arms wrapped around her legs. Tears were sliding like crystals down her cheeks. The moment Severus broke contact with her, the pain and hunger spilled over her once again. The craving that overcame her mind was more than she thought she could manage. The smell of Cedric Diggory's blood filled her nostrils as the sound of it pulsing through his veins thundered in her ears.
She groaned and pulled her legs closer to her body. "Please," she moaned, her voice feeling raw in her throat. It sounded foreign to her own ears, deeper and more mystical. "Please, give me something. Make it stop!"
Severus Snape stood against the wall, watching her beneath long, dark lashes. He was troubled by her quick identification of a victim, especially of a male victim. It was more than troubling, it was devastating. Severus Snape had only bitten one person in his multitude of years as a vampire, and she was lying on the bed in agony. He had chosen her as his mate.
His eyes softened as he crossed over to her. "I will, Hermione. I will, but you must promise not to leave this spot until I get back."
"Where are you going?" she screeched, unwilling to be left alone with her pain and hunger.
"Into the next room. To get you some food. It will help with the pain, too, I promise." He pressed his palm to the back of her head and felt the tremors lessen at the touch. "You must trust me, Hermione."
She laughed painfully. "You said to never trust a vampire like you."
He smiled grimly as he left the bed and retreated to the next room to bring her something to eat. A small, Muggle-style cooler sat beneath a table in a shadowy corner and was hidden by a stack of books and parchment. Gingerly, Severus swept the piles to the side and retrieved the cooler, which was filled with packets of human blood. He removed several packets, knowing that Hermione would be thirsty. Pouring them in a bowl, he pushed the books back in place with his foot.
Hermione sat up with a jolt as she heard the blood sloshing in the bowl in the next room. For a brief moment, the sound and smell of it overpowered the strong essence of Cedric Diggory. She leapt up from the bed with a speed she was unaware that she possessed and sprinted through the open door. She was behind him before Severus had the chance to turn around.
Greedily, she grasped the bowl from his hands and drew the bowl to her lips. She drank deeply, tiny rivulets of blood sliding down her chin. Hermione sighed and licked her lips, an action that drew Snape's eyes. He grinned at the serene look on her face and traced the line of her jaw with the tips of his fingers. She leaned into the touch as he lifted her face toward his own.
He watched her closely, saw her eyes momentarily glow red before growing dark and smoky once more. The thirst had been sated for the moment and it would ease the pains that still racked her body. He knew how painful the transformation was, but also how much the touch of her maker would relax that suffering. The blood still dripped from her chin, an aroma that was stale to him but was enough for him to survive. He leaned forward and, closing his eyes, licked at the blood on her chin.
Hermione sank against him, feeling better than she had in hours. His body was cool and hard against her, but the touch was comforting and welcome. His breath was cold against her skin even though she was only a few degrees warmer than he. An herbal scent flowed around him from the hours he spent with potions ingredients.
"Thank you," she murmured, raising her hand to place it against his cold cheek. "I feel much better now."
He smiled and placed his hand over hers. "You're welcome." He took her hand in his own and led her back to the bedroom. "Sit on the bed, Hermione. I believe we need to talk."
Hermione did what she was told, slightly unnerved by the loss of his touch. He retreated to the other side of the room, folding his arms over his chest. "I want you to know that you are the first person I have bitten since I became what I am now. I have been tempted many times, but you are the first to have caused me to succumb. There is no excuse for what I have done, only the reason that, in my mind, was perfectly rational."
"And what was that reason?" she asked, drawing her knees back up and wrapping her arms around herself. She felt an overwhelming connection with him, a connection that warred with the desire for Cedric Diggory.
"I have lived alone for two hundred years, Hermione. I have known many brilliant, interesting people in my lifetime. But you are entirely unique. If I must live into eternity, I do not want to live it alone." He looked at her sheepishly, trying to hide his eyes beneath his dark lashes. "I wanted you as my mate."
Suddenly he jerked his eyes away from her and turned his face upward, looking at the ceiling. His dark eyes dilated and his nostrils flared. "Potter's coming," he growled. He threw a quick glance at Hermione before sweeping from the room. "Don't leave this room," his voice murmured in her head. "You're not ready to be around them yet."
The anxiety returned as soon as Severus left the room. The hunger had lessened after the food he had given her. She could hear the beating of Harry's heart as he drew closer, smell the blood that pumped through him. Hermione licked her lips absently, yearning to go after him, but she kept her promise to her maker. She stayed put.
Harry could hear footsteps coming down the corridor toward him. They were heavy and yet still lithe. The hair on the back of his neck stood up as Severus Snape turned the corner. For a moment they stared at each other, the dead look in Snape's matching the hate-filled one in Harry's.
"What on earth are you doing down here on a Saturday morning, Mr. Potter?" said Snape smoothly. "An answer, Potter, and quickly."
Harry felt the skin on his arms rise with goose flesh at the unusually biting glare in the Potion master's eyes. "I'm looking for Hermione, Professor. Madam Pince said she came to see you last night about an assignment."
"She did," he replied tersely. "But she left my office before curfew. I have not seen her since."
"Are you sure about that, Professor? Because, you see, no one else has seen her since she left the library last night."
The air around Snape seemed to crackle with the anger emanating off him as he stood, glaring at Harry. "I have told you that I have not seen Miss Granger since she left my office at nine thirty last night. I am sure she has simply slipped into her room without your knowing. Now, please get back up to the main school before I have you pickling frog's eyes for the rest of the day!" With that, Snape turned on his heel and stomped back off down the corridor.
He watched the older man's retreating back for a moment before turning and climbing the stairs back up to the entrance hall. He was lost in his own thoughts, following the instinctual, well-worn path from the dungeons to the Great Hall.
"Easy there, Harry," came Cedric's voice as he put out his hands to keep them from crashing into each other. "You okay?"
Harry seemed to emerge from a daze as his eyes focused on the form of Cedric Diggory in front of him. "Oh, hey, Ced. No, I'm okay. It's just that nobody's seen Hermione since last night."
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I have enjoyed this story immensely! i have always found Snape as a vampire stories incredibly fascinating and the addition of a sincere and bashful Cedric is extremely enticing. i like the way you play with your characters and hope to the heavens that you will complete the second part soon... there is nothing more depressing than a well written but abandoned story... keep it up!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm working on the second part now! I lost my muse in the middle of having kids and working, but it's back! I'll be adding a new chapter soon! Thanks for reading! ~ The Mistress
OK, a cliffhanger ending, I'm a bit saddened by that but it is quite understandable. What is the name of the next story in the series so I can follow it?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I couldn't help that. It just seemed right. The second story is called Vampire Hunting and the prologue and first chapter are already up. ~The Mistress
Interesting story so far, quite enjoyable.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you very much!~The Mistress
Interesting, if Cedric is figuring things out will he still be accepting of Hermione?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
What do you think?~The MistressP.S. Thanks for reading!
I can't find my magical beasts book. What is a vampyr mosp? It looks as though Snape found a way to say MINE and really mean it. I'm enjoying this flic and I'm glad you're considering a series.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm not sure they appear in the books, but they are in the GoF video game. They're these flying creatures that sting and paralyze someone. Annoying little buggers. I've actually started part 2 of the series, it's under Vampire Hunting. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
You ended "Beautiful Terror" with a real cliffhanger, evil you. I think you have a built-in audience for "Vampire Hunting." I know I looked for this as soon as I finished "Terror." If Sev isn't meant to be with Hermione, I'll be glad to offer my neck.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I'm not sure they appear in the books, but they are in the GoF video game. They're these flying creatures that sting and paralyze someone. Annoying little buggers. I've actually started part 2 of the series, it's under Vampire Hunting. Thanks for reading!~The Mistress
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
You ended "Beautiful Terror" with a real cliffhanger, evil you. I think you have a built-in audience for "Vampire Hunting." I know I looked for this as soon as I finished "Terror." If Sev isn't meant to be with Hermione, I'll be glad to offer my neck.
Go Cedric. Dumbledore has some repenting to do. It seems that Cedric won't let him off easily, and that's good. The old man's a menace.I'm looking forward to the next installment, as you can't just leave us all hanging here.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of Course Dumbledore isn't getting off easily! Cedric is pissed! Anyway, I've actually started on the prologue to part 2: Vampire Hunting and hope to have it out soon. University is a little crazy right now, and I'm down with the flu, so bear with me. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of Course Dumbledore isn't getting off easily! Cedric is pissed! Anyway, I've actually started on the prologue to part 2: Vampire Hunting and hope to have it out soon. University is a little crazy right now, and I'm down with the flu, so bear with me. ~The Mistress
*Sniff* That was so sad! How could she just up and leave like that? And what she did to Severus... he was just trying to save her.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
She's conflicted. She loves him, but she loves Cedric, too. She wants Cedric, but she didn't want to take his blood. And Severus forced it on her. She doesn't kow how to dealw ith that. ~The Mistress
Ugh! Cold fish sex. Eww. How old is Hermione in this story? If she's at school with Cedric that would make her like 14, wouldn't it? Little young for Snape, unless Cedric failed 7th year a few times.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's only their bodies that are cold, honey! Anyway, as it is alternate universe, i bumped Hermione and the boys up a few years, so they are just a year below Cedric. But remember, Hermione was born in September, which makes her a year older than the rest of her class. So, she's 17. Sorry for the confusion. ~The Mistress
Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)
I understand its AU but its Herm's 4th year when Diggory kicked it. so even with the time turner the MoM only added 1 year to her age so at most in 4th year, she'd be 16 and Cedric was 17. But Snape is a Teacher (not that I care, if I was there) just saying it should be a tad bit clearer on Cedric still being alive and that they are all older so it doesn't look like sex with a minor. That's all I was concened about."After all, there ARE rules to follow, don't you know?"Signed,Percy Stick-up-my-arse WeasleyJunior Undersecretary to the Garden Gnomes!!!!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It's only their bodies that are cold, honey! Anyway, as it is alternate universe, i bumped Hermione and the boys up a few years, so they are just a year below Cedric. But remember, Hermione was born in September, which makes her a year older than the rest of her class. So, she's 17. Sorry for the confusion. ~The Mistress
Response from Morsmordre (Reviewer)
I understand its AU but its Herm's 4th year when Diggory kicked it. so even with the time turner the MoM only added 1 year to her age so at most in 4th year, she'd be 16 and Cedric was 17. But Snape is a Teacher (not that I care, if I was there) just saying it should be a tad bit clearer on Cedric still being alive and that they are all older so it doesn't look like sex with a minor. That's all I was concened about."After all, there ARE rules to follow, don't you know?"Signed,Percy Stick-up-my-arse WeasleyJunior Undersecretary to the Garden Gnomes!!!!
i didn't know there was an epilogue. dumbledore has a lot to answer for now and always. thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, I hadn't planned on one, but that last bit just didn't feel like it fit at the end of chapter 12. I'm not sure yet what will happen to Dumbledore just yet, but trust me it will be drastic. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, well, I hadn't planned on one, but that last bit just didn't feel like it fit at the end of chapter 12. I'm not sure yet what will happen to Dumbledore just yet, but trust me it will be drastic. ~The Mistress
oh my. what a sad situation. i can't imagin how you are going to resolve this. i'm looking forward to the next part of this saga! thanks so much.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I know. The situation is far more than just sad. I hope to begin working on part two soon, but university is getting a tad hectic right now. Thank's for reading!~The Mistress
Does a small part of humanity still exist in Hermione? How sweet that she warned him of when she would be dangerous and allowed him to leave.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, it does. And she's fighting to bring it back. ~The Mistress
So, did he figure it out? But I like that he trusts her. Severus is not going to be happy at all.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Now, I could't tell you that! It would be far too easy! ~The Mistress
The most horrid of all tortures: to be in the bed of the perfect man, and unable to appreciate your circumstance!! Really interesting turns here. I'm sure we'll get to here more from Severus soon. I do miss him! =]
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't I know it! Hopefully, 'Mione will get another chance. And as for Severus: yes, we will be hearing more from him very soon! ~The Mistress
beautiful and haunting. lovely update. thanks so much
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you so much! I was off from university and the muse just wouldn't stop! ~The Mistress
That was frightening. Severus is not a happy vampire.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Of course he isn't. And, unfortunately, it gets much worse. ~The Mistress
wow...what an update! thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thanks! I've got chapter 10 in the works now. It's just been a long couple of weeks. Thanks for sticking with me! ~The Mistress
Oops, Professor Sprout let Albus's lie be found out. Interesting chapter, I wonder what Hermione will do about Cedric, and how Severus feels about it.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Let's just say, he won't be a happy camper. ~The Mistress
Haunting text my dear. I think it's really well written and dramatic. I think that it will take several chapters before we can really get into the beefy triangle I'm hoping for. =) I know! I know! I'm so bad...lol. What can I say? I think it would be verrrry hot if Ced was bitten too by Hermione and then there were three vampires, two of whom love Hermione like crazy. Sigh...Anyway, keep up the fantastic work Mistress. It's a really good fic.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
You aren't the only one who's hoping for a good vampire triangle... Let's hope the muse keeps going that direction! ~The Mistress
I must say I'm really liking how this story is developing. I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you!~The Mistress
I don't know where this is going but I'm loving the ride there!This is such a different story that I can not help but be drawn in to it! Excellent job!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Thank you! Half the time when I write something, I don't know where it's going either! ~The Mistress
This chapter really made me feel sorry for Albus. You can feel the tension even though this was a fairly short chaper.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
I think you're the only one. I kind of get disgusted with him, he's so manipulative. ~The Mistress
Interesting chapter, Albus certainly has his work cut out for him. Cedric's dreams caught my attention. Is he having some kind of 'dream true'?
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Not really, it's just that he has Hermione on his mind all the time and so he's really "attuned" to her. ~The Mistress
No, it won't ever be OK. And why doesn't Hermione want to leave? She can't stay.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
It was the first place she ever felt truly at home. It's hard to leave that. But you're right, she can't stay. ~The Mistress
poor ced. i don't think this is going to have a happy ending. i always root for the vampires and except for love at first bite they almost never win. thanks so much for this facinating update to an enthralling story.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Couldn't Hermione have both? ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
oohhh yeah! even better!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Don't give up yet! This is only the first part of the series. I've got a plan for at least one sequel, maybe two. You never know, Ced may just get his girl! ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
actually, i'm hoping for vampire!snape to get the girl, but i look forward to a series!
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Couldn't Hermione have both? ~The Mistress
Response from kimjo2 (Reviewer)
oohhh yeah! even better!
Albus's temper tantrum got him no where. That was not very smart of the old man.
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I'm afraid it was a bad idea to cross Severus. I was tempted to leave bruises on the headmaster's neck, but I thought that might be a bit obvious. ~The Mistress
Response from themistresssnape (Author of Beautiful Terror)
Yes, I'm afraid it was a bad idea to cross Severus. I was tempted to leave bruises on the headmaster's neck, but I thought that might be a bit obvious. ~The Mistress