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King of Swords
shefa440 Reviews | 6.8/10 (440 Ratings, 0 Likes, 125 Favorites )
It was only after Snape followed her into the neglected shop, moving furtively between the shafts of sunlight that pierced the gloom, that it occurred to him to wonder why, ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Hermione Granger was running. And why, in a world with magic, real magic, she should be seeking the counsel of a Muggle Tarot reader.
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Relatively longtime reader of this OTP, fervent SSHG shipper.
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All right, I have to review this fic but I don't know where to start. It's beautiful, it's wonderful. You made me think deeply about human emotion, about defensiveness and angriness and how I want to live my life. You wrote an incredible, touching story that had so much deeper meaning than just a silly fan fic.
You're wonderful. Thank you so much for this! You seem like you'd give amazing readings, by the way.
I'd also like to mention I loved Severus' response to Hermione's guilt over not checking on him and leaving him to die. It made perfect sense and was the best way I've seen that dealt with in fan fiction.
Congratulations on writing such a unique fan fic.
How wonderful! a grove of wand trees, not just any Oak, Ashor cherry but a special tree ,just for wands. Neville has found his souls home in nature. I must get on to the next chapter I can't wait.
So sad to see this amazing story end, but looking forward to seeing everyone healed and happy.
A brilliant bright ending, to a long and sometimes dark tale. thank you.
At last they are moving forward, can't wait for the next chapter.
The most frightening monsters of all inhabit the mind, no wonder they are all in such a state.
Going home after a long absence,is quite difficult under any cercumstances, but with "the shadow" making it's presence felt,it's twice as bad. A very interesting chapter, full of questions and a few answers.
Sometimes understanding the depth of someones pain, is enough to start the healing.
Just finished reading this story. I liked it a lot, thank you!
Damn that was the most amazing story, no of fence JK, but it's better than the series! Write more! Please!
Absolutely superb! Well paced, great story/plot and spot-on characterisation all around. Thank you.
I think they gained some serious ground here. The trio finally coming together physically and emotionally on the floor of the room of requirement was very symbolic and probably empowering to the others present. I think they are all finally starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. I am quite anxious to see how this all ends. Lucky for me, I don't have to wait.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
There is powerful healing in relationships... psychologically, symbolically, literally... :)
I think the cconfrontation at the Burrow went as well as could be expected. I am so glad that Severus was able to make them see - each in their own way- how this was affecting them all and that they needed to admit it and work together if they ever hope to overcome the darkness.I could have used a tissue warning for the end. How sad to think that just when Hermione has started to put the pieces of her life back together, the one thing keeping her going was all a lie. I was so glad that Severus made it plain to her that magic dosen't matter. He loves her and that is more powerful than anything else between them could be.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
It was stressful, but I agree... it went as well as it possibly could have, all things considered. Severus does have a way of helping the others see. It's part of what brought Hermione to her conclusion. I should add a tissue warning for this chapter... *grins. Though the author in me is pleased that it moved you. :)
Every chapter is such a mix of hopefulness and hopelessness. It's strange how they coexist so well here. I really liked this:There, under cover of darkness and feather blankets, with every whisper of skin on skin, with each sigh and murmured endearment, they wove the armour behind which they would keep one another safe tomorrow.In the end, they needn't have worried. It was such a relief that Molly was clearheaded and willing to embrace and help them if possible. She doesn't seem to be as affected by the darkness, but certainly the loss of her family as she once knew it is bringing her down. What a difficult situation for everyone. I hope that the appearance of the others doesn't go badly.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
That balance of hopeful and hopeless characterizes the struggle between light and dark. I'm really pleased to hear that the dichotomy and struggle for balance comes through so potently. Molly wasn't exposed to Horcruxes, so she's not subject to the same Darkness that the others are... she is wiser than others tend to give her credit for...
I was reading this when you were posting, but it felt like one of those stories that was best saved to be read all at once. So I stopped until you finished, but then got side tracked so am just now getting back. I had forgotten how complex this story is and how beautifully written the emotions are. I really like Severus and Neville as frineds. It wouldn't work for me in just any story, but this one is so full of desperation that anything is possible. This is all about new discoveries for each of them and discovering that they can be friends and that Neville's relationship with her enhances his rather than take away from it is great. I am looking very forward to getting back into this and seeing what fate has in store for them.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
I was so excited to see that you'd come back to finish the story! I'm delighted that it still works for you. :) Thank you for taking time to review as you go along. :D
Wow. Just ... wow. I love this story of redemption and healing, so complex and rich in its detail but so elemental in its truth. A tour de force, my friend.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
*beams I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you!! *hugs
*bounces* Guess what I've finally got the time to settled down and enjoy!!!!!! *bounces some more* This is quite the intriguing beginning, and I'm on the edge of my seat as to what on earth is going on with Hermione.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
Woo hoo! I'm so glad you're reading and that the first chapter has intrigued you... *grins Thanks for reviewing! *hugs
What was the time span between the time you wrote the first chapter and this one? Just curious.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
About four months. Tell me what you see, Mysterious T. Then read the next chapter and tell me what you see there... That was a 9 month gap and I wrote "Tree of Life" in the meantime. *grins
Skips off to read next chapter (pretending not to see it's after midnight).
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
Keep reading! *beams I hope you're enjoying it so far! :)
Mm. I am truly exhausted but this was just a glorious story, and I will chat you up soon to gush over it some more. Thank you for a ~wonderful~ reading experience. And such a unique one, too! What a marvelous plot - and romance - you've contributed to the fandom. Love.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
*bounces I'm THRILLED that you enjoyed it so much! Hooray! Thank you for your marvelous reviews and analysis. I do love hearing what worked, what touched you, and what you thought. *hugs you
Love. Love. Love this chapter. He is... marvelous. And I am curious, because it does seem like there's something about Severus that gets through... can't wait to see what you do with it, because everything about this story has been surprising. Also, the reunion scene was exceptionally well done, and I wanted to glomp Molly Weasley for being amazing, and the HOME detail for Hermione? Holy goodness, 'shefa, just make me bawl.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
*hands you tissues... There *is* something about Severus, but it's subtle. :) I'm thrilled you're enjoying all the nuances here. *beams
I love the staff. I love Minerva. I love the Room. This story is perfection.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
*beams with delight Thank you! It was the first time I'd written an 'ensemble' and it was really interesting to do...
I am still speechless. This story is amazing. I am falling in love with it. Neville is perfect. The delightful humor is a nice counter to the emotional depths of this story.
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
*beams... Neville was lovely to write. Poor fellow. There's finally the tiniest glimmer of relief... hang on!
Fantastic chapter. And mm. Severus would deny the latent longing. While I've never been overly keen on Tarot, the concept you're using here is just brilliant - and so believable within the context of the story. I have so much respect for writers like yourself who can use strong magical conceits to weave a story together. Seriously. Tree of Life. This story. Incredible, lady. My hat is off to you. And now... ~sprints to read next chapter!~
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
Thank you! It seems to be the way of it for me in writing... the magical conceit drives the story. I'm delighted it's working for you. *grins
Look what I'm *finally* starting to read! I'm SQUEEFUL!
Response from shefa (Author of King of Swords)
Oh, hooray!! *bounces and squees :):)