Oh dear God that was so cliche and...wow...you've outdone yourself SW69. ;)  It was fantastically funny and very, very "bad" but in a good way. That sex scene has me thinking of bad-70s sex-theme music....boom-chica-wow-wow.  heheheheheh

I loved it! It was fabulous! I love Out of Character Snape and your writing style is Brilliant!

this was an adorable story and i loved the way you wrapped it up twins on down the line for the snapes lmaoto funny but well done and thank you

His totaly evil dark mark? I can just see Snape being described as her fiesty boyfriend!

His totally evil Dark Mark. Ewww :DHermione and her feisty boyfriendRon dressed up in muggle army uniformMy three favourites this chapter :D Not to mention the amount of cheese (soon it will be so sweet that we will have to move to some sort of sweet cheese cakes :D)I probably repeated some of the earlier comments for this chapter, but, oh well... :)Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for the last one!E.

I love you so much (in a friendly way of course). And poor Ron. The last to know as ever.

I giggled far too much at that. Great as always. Can't wait to see what wonderful cliches you come up with next!

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr way to leave us hanging i mean comeon o well i will wait patiently for the last chapter liek everyone else and love it as much as i have come to love this story thank you 

his totaly evil dark mark. haha that's great

awww so sweet *snickers*Hermione and her "fiesty boyfriend" LMAO!!!

That was an awesome chapter!!!! I can't wait for the last one!

My... Draco is sure accepting. Even friendly I wouldn't expect him to be SO friendly :) It's the fact that he's a bit of a little shite that makes me like him LOL. And the relationship between Snape and Hermione seems to be accepted by everyone. I thought sure someone would object. Maybe Ron? Guess I'll see soon.

aah the eyes that can see into the soul...now where have I heard that before?....

Oh boy the kiss and the even better kiss!  Confessing in the Great Hall as every gathers for war! LOL Loved it!

i'm not sure what to comment on, either, but i enjoyed this chapter very much and laughed many times and very loudly.

Now, that chapter had just about every battle cliche in the book, but it was still well written and I enjoyed it. 

"Hubba hubba"?  You slay me.

Bulgarian Bon Bon? *lol* Hey, and I wish Sevvie and Mione were sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g.  I guess I'll have to read more to get to that part.!

Here I was enjoying this little story immensely, and then like a rogue bludger the image of Severus Snape thinking "hubba hubba" hit and I burst out laughing. Even now I am chuckling thinking about it.  Ohhh you are evil...but nice. He he.

He was just so cute in a brooding, older man sort of way.Yip, I can just see Hermione describing Snape as cute!

Oh, the pain!!!  The cliches were flying a mile a minute in this chapter!  "It burns us...!"  I have to go lay down now. 

Bwa ha ha!  I just loved Dumbledore's blase "Look into her mind" comment!  "Yeah, sure, it's all right, not a violation of privacy or anything--go for it!  Nobody will know!"   What else will Albus encourage him to do???

Loved your scene breaks!  "kIssIng"...  This has been so much fun to read so far, I'm having a blast!  And just how DO you "accidentally" snog someone, anyway?

Hubba hubba?  Bwah ha ha ha ha.  As I have said before, I'm enjoying the parody, but you write better than a whole lot of people. 

I could't help but laughed all along the chapter. Hubba hubba indeed. I hope there will be an apearance of Sex God Snape later.