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Novelette Gauntlet
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Gauntlet

1: Chapter 1 - Flying Blind

2: Chapter 2 - Holding Steady

3: Chapter 3 - Still of Night

4: Chapter 4 - Give and Take

5: Chapter 5 - Truth or Dare

6: Chapter 6 - Show and Tell

7: Chapter 7 - Balancing Act

8: Chapter 8 - Rattling the Cage

9: Chapter 9 - Vested Interest

10: Chapter 10 - Fits and Starts

11: Chapter 11 - Under the Gun

12: Chapter 12 - Smoke and Mirrors

13: Chapter 13 - Basic Principles

14: Chapter 14 - Saving Grace

15: Chapter 15 - Black and Blue

16: Chapter 16 - Beyond the Pale

17: Chapter 17 - Plenty of Rope

18: Chapter 18 - Grave Concerns

19: Chapter 19 - Straight Lines

20: Chapter 20 - Playing with Fire

21: Chapter 21 - Shadow of a Doubt

22: Chapter 22 - Target Practice

23: Chapter 23 - Kiss and Tell

24: Chapter 24 - Devil to Pay

25: Chapter 25 - No Place Like Home

26: Chapter 26 - Chain Reaction

27: Chapter 27 - Double or Nothing

28: Chapter 28 - Fast and Loose

29: Chapter 29 - Clock Watching

30: Chapter 30 - Willing and Able

31: Chapter 31 - Slash and Burn

32: Chapter 32 - Shot in the Dark

33: Chapter 33 - Disorderly Conduct

34: Chapter 34 - Tender Mercies

35: Chapter 35 - Nothing to Lose

36: Epilogue

Gauntlet

Melenka

122 Reviews   |   122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

Drama General Novelette 85,094 Words 36 Chapters Complete

A woman seeking revenge finds more than she bargains for. A man seeking redemption finds more than he had expected.

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Chapters (36)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Flying Blind

Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Holding Steady

Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Still of Night

Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Give and Take

Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Truth or Dare

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Show and Tell

Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Balancing Act

Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Rattling the Cage

Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Vested Interest

Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Fits and Starts

Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under the Gun

Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Smoke and Mirrors

Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Basic Principles

Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Saving Grace

Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Black and Blue

Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Beyond the Pale

Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Plenty of Rope

Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Grave Concerns

Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Straight Lines

Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Playing with Fire

Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Shadow of a Doubt

Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Target Practice

Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Kiss and Tell

Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Devil to Pay

Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - No Place Like Home

Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Chain Reaction

Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Double or Nothing

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Fast and Loose

Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Clock Watching

Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Willing and Able

Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Slash and Burn

Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Shot in the Dark

Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Disorderly Conduct

Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Tender Mercies

Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Nothing to Lose

Chapter 36: Epilogue


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Melenka

Member Since 2008  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 82  |  104 Reviews Written  |  967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

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liviconnor

This has been marvelous!  Dramatic, exciting- I love your characters, and it's very film noir.  All the twists and double-crossing, and speaking in code, it's a really classic story you've told here, and I love it.  I would have left gushing reviews at every chapter, but I've been so wrapped up that I couldn't stop to say anything at all!  I like the Serbian guy.  Or, I like that he's Serbian.  It's neat how you included drips and drabs of other languages, and giving him a war-torn background made him so much more believable.  I would gladly read an entire story just about Katya, though I think a story about Nicky would make my head explode.  She's too wily for me to want to get invested in emotionally.Your secondary characters seem as well fleshed-out as your antiheroes, and it really makes this a joy to read.  As a reader you can tell that an incredible amount of research and knowledge went into this.  I don't know the first thing about the criminal underworld, but if it were exactly like this, I wouldn't be surprised.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Wow!  Thank you!  I'd been wondering who was reading.  I am very glad you enjoyed it.  You are right about a lot of research going into this story, both on the history of Serbia and the various aspects of weaponry/gadgets/etc.  I also think Katya could support her own book, and it would be a lot of fun to write her.I really appreciate you reading and giving me feedback.  This was my first novel, so it holds a special place in my heart.  I can still "hear" Gage muttering in my head sometimes.  Maybe someday I'll revise it heavily enough to submit it for publishing.  Right now, it's like a good pet rather than a show dog.  LOL

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sunny33

Brilliant, Melenka.  I really enjoyed that!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I am really glad you liked it. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I am really glad you liked it. :)

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sunny33

She left... Hope he decides to go after her.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him.  But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him.  But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.

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sunny33

I imagine a little labetalol would block the effect of the adrenaline cocktail quite nicely. Do I get a prize too.. pretty please?  Love the last chapter!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh.  No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing!  Thanks for all your great reviews.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh.  No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing!  Thanks for all your great reviews.

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sunny33

So, if you use up the adrenaline, does the drug wear off faster?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep, pretty much.  The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep, pretty much.  The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.

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sunny33

Very intense, pity Cavuto got away.  But you have plans for him, I am sure!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I couldn't let him run free for long.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I couldn't let him run free for long.

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sunny33

Dammit, someone got Sticks.  Hopefully he is just down temporarily!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He's a tough old bird, but that was close.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He's a tough old bird, but that was close.

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sunny33

He is sexy, he can cook, he cleans, he is protective... ok so there are a few issues such as his ability to kill with his bare hands and barely blink an eyelid, but we can gloss over those, right?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.

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sunny33

She knew about the camera! Smart girl not to move it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it.  It's probably a good thing she didn't.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it.  It's probably a good thing she didn't.

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sunny33

Nicky may be complicating matters even more.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She does that.  Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She does that.  Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.

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sunny33

Oh, lovely chapter!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I thought it was time she got a little back.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I thought it was time she got a little back.

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sunny33

What does "sranje" mean?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)

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sunny33

She certainly has them pegged there.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yeah, she does.  Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yeah, she does.  Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.

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sunny33

One down...Their relationship is very twisted, distorted by the situation, much like their personalities have been shaped by their experiences.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep.  They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect. 

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep.  They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect. 

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sunny33

Hmm. Hope they have another chance to have sex "properly" without the interrogation! Well done, you!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write.  I'm glad you liked it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write.  I'm glad you liked it.

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sunny33

I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter whether Deira would turn out to be a crack shot.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She's decent enough, but not an expert.  Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training.  He likes guns.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She's decent enough, but not an expert.  Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training.  He likes guns.

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sunny33

Reality bites.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...

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sunny33

Very hot, albeit unrequited!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Glad you like that.  It was requited.  Just not consummated. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Glad you like that.  It was requited.  Just not consummated. ;)

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sunny33

A little intimacy, helping with each other's hair. Nice!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  I struggled to get that scene right.  My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  I struggled to get that scene right.  My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....

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sunny33

Those girls wouldn't be ganging up on poor old Gage, would they?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :)  And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :)  And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.

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sunny33

Great stuff!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  Glad you approve. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  Glad you approve. :)

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sunny33

So, is his first name really Charlie? And , if not, why does his niece use it?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement.  He wanted a different life, and a new name helped.  Gage is the nickname he got in the war.  He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement.  He wanted a different life, and a new name helped.  Gage is the nickname he got in the war.  He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.

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sunny33

Katya seems well skilled at first aid.  What sort of college does she attend?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She just attends a normal liberal arts college.  But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

I realise now we are on different wave-lengths.  College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She just attends a normal liberal arts college.  But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

I realise now we are on different wave-lengths.  College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!

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sunny33

LOL. "Saved by the Lord."  Hallelujah!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I hear he works in mysterious ways...

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I hear he works in mysterious ways...

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sunny33

So the plan is to make the hit, then burn up the lab?  Is pump a fictional drug or another name for something real?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail.  And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail.  And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.

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