Chapter 11 - Under the Gun
Chapter 11 of 36
MelenkaGage sat against a wall, watching the two women fight below him. The view would have been better from the catwalk, but he did not want to risk exposure. Nicky had done good work over the past few weeks. Deira was much faster than she had been the first day, more confident, stronger. There might be a chance she would live through her vendetta. And then what? He would have to convince her to return to a normal life or as much of one as she was likely to have preferably far away from him.
First, he would have to make sure she made it out alive. And not too broken. He waited until they stopped sparring. Nicky said she was going to the bathroom, but he knew she would go out for a smoke. He had a few minutes.
He moved along the wall quietly, keeping an eye on Deira. She had no perimeter awareness. He would have to mention that to Nicky. He made his way down a staircase, one silent step at a time. Deira gripped the vault, stretching out her back, eyes closed. He moved up behind her, grabbed her around the hips and pulled her off the vault, dropping to the ground on top of her.
She struggled. Too late. She was pinned under him. He forced her legs apart.
"Hello, princess," he whispered in her ear. "Did you miss me?"
"Get the fuck off me," she growled.
"Now why would I do that?"
"Get the fuck off me," she said again, "please."
He let her up. She whirled on him, swinging wildly. He caught her arm, pulled her into him, and twisted it behind her back as he wrapped a leg around one of hers and dropped her again, landing on top of her. She winced with pain. Good.
"What the fuck is your problem?" she screamed.
"I don't have a problem. You do. I am perfectly comfortable." His lips were almost touching hers.
He rolled over and threw her off of him. She landed against the legs of the vault. When she got up this time, she was wary. Better.
She kept Gage in her sights, but she was looking for an escape. She circled him. He turned to face her with a lazy insolence.
"Where are you going to go?" he asked.
He didn't really expect an answer. She didn't have one.
Out of the corner of her eye, she saw her bag. There were weapons in there. But how to get to them? She kept moving, increasing the distance between them. He was letting her, she knew. Three more steps and she thought she could make a play for the bag. If nothing else, she could throw it at him and slow him down enough to get away. She had a better chance of outrunning him than she did in a fight.
She made a dash for her bag. He was faster than she had thought. He grabbed her shoulder and spun her around, pushing her away from the bag.
"Not fair going for weapons." He was enjoying this.
"Like fair has anything to do with this," she spat, regaining her balance. She turned to run.
He slammed her against the wall, pressing against her as he had that first night in the alley.
"For a guy who doesn't like rape, you have the moves down," she snarled.
"This is what they do, princess, small-minded men with no imagination," he growled back.
She slammed her heel down on his instep, dropped her hips and pushed back, hard, causing him to stumble.
"And large men with no sense of balance," she said as she took off running.
He followed her. She got to the stairs and took them two at a time. He was gaining on her easily. He made a grab for her ankle when she was halfway up the stairs. Time to end this. She evaded the grab, leapt up another two steps, grabbed the railing and swung her body under it and out, rolling as she hit the floor. She came out of the roll on her feet and sprinted for the door. He hadn't seen that move coming. He vaulted over the railing and landed, not nearly as gracefully.
He closed the gap as she neared the exit. She veered away from the door, heading for the corner instead. He was disappointed. She is going to be trapped. This was exactly what he was worried about. She did not think.
She was not slowing down. He did not think she would slam her head into the wall just to be rid of him, but stranger things had happened. She leapt. He slowed down, surprised for the second time. She used the balls of her feet to propel her diagonally up the wall, grabbed a pipe and hauled herself up to the second level. She did not pause to be admired.
He could see her through the metal floor, moving away from him. He smiled and walked slowly towards the stairs that led down to the loading dock. It was her most likely option. If he was wrong, she had won. He was fine with that.
She had not explored the second floor so she kept moving, looking for an exit. She couldn't hear him. Maybe he gave up. She didn't believe it. He was not the kind who gave up. Neither were the men she planned to kill. She should have scouted out the entire building. Shit. She slowed down, keeping eyes and ears open for his next attack while trying to plot an escape route.
There were stairs leading down to the loading bay. She hesitated. He would expect that. She looked up. A series of pipes ran up the wall and across the building. She had no doubt she could run them. The question was whether or not they would hold her weight. She cursed herself again for not checking out the upper levels. If she tried the run and the pipes gave, she stood a good chance of being killed in the fall. She decided to chance it anyway. This was an industrial building, after all. The pipes should hold her.
She grabbed a pipe, hauled herself up and pushed off against the one next to it until she had a balance point. The upper body work was paying off. Repeating the move brought her to the parallel pipes that ran over the open space. She looked down but couldn't see him. Maybe he had gone onto the dock to look for her. The door was propped open; she caught a whiff of Nicky's cigarette smoke. She tested the pipes before standing up on them. They were solid enough. She quickly moved to the other side of the building, not looking down. There were stairs on that side, too. She didn't know where they led, but staying on the pipes wasn't a good idea. There could be one or two sections that were in bad shape.
She slid down a pipe, scraping her hands. She ignored the pain. Landing quietly was important. She moved carefully along the wall, scanning the open area below her as well as the walkway. There was a solid wall on either side of the other staircase. She would be hidden. She crept down the stairs, listening. No sound of him. She didn't relax. He was a quiet bastard.
There was a hallway at the bottom of the stairs. The only light came from a window set high at the end of the hall. The doors on either side were all closed. She assumed they led to storage or office space. There should be some sort of exit. Weren't there codes for that sort of thing? She relaxed a little. Gage was nowhere to be seen. She could find a way out.
She was looking over her shoulder when he wrapped her up, one arm over her neck, the other around her waist.
"Nicely done, princess," he whispered, pulling her through the open door to an office. He gently wrapped his leg around hers and lowered her to the ground, face down. "But I win."
She struggled, but there was really no point to it. He was on top of her, his arm still around her neck. She stopped fighting.
"Fine, you win," she growled.
He suddenly stiffened. She braced herself for whatever lesson came next.
"Wrong," Nicky said. "I win. Now get up off the bitch before I decide to cap both of you with one shot."
Gage released Deira and slowly moved his hands to where they could be seen. Nicky took the gun off the back of his neck and stepped to the side, but did not lower it.
He pushed himself up, then offered Deira his hand.
"Fuck you," she said, rolling over and standing up on her own. She moved to Nicky's side.
"Your hands look like shit," Nicky said. "You should clean up as best you can. Gage and I have to have a little talk."
"Is he going to be breathing at the end of it?" Deira asked.
"Yes."
"Too bad." She glared at him, turned her back, and walked into the warehouse, trying to reassemble her pride.
"What the hell do you think you're doing?" Nicky still hadn't lowered the gun.
"Helping," Gage said.
"Uh huh. That's not what it looks like you're doing."
"Meaning?"
"Meaning you coming in here to play games and tease the girl is not helping me, and it sure as hell isn't helping her. The stupid bitch is already half in love with you, like you're some kind of fucking hero." Nicky shook her head.
"You are wrong."
"And you're blind. You never did get it, did you? You think everyone can see the monster inside you, but they can't," Nicky spat.
"You do," Gage said.
"I knew what you were before we ever met. It was my job to know. Maybe my inner monster would have recognized it anyway."
"Your instincts would be better than mine, then. I never saw it coming from you." He hated admitting that.
"I'd have been dead a long time before that if I let muscle-bound dicks read me like a book." Nicky smiled.
"But this girl, she's easily read," Nicky continued. "She may see the monster, but she thinks that can be fixed, that you're a good person underneath. Maybe she's right, but it would take more digging into your past than I did before she found it, and I was pretty thorough."
You did not know where to look. "Deira knows what I am. She also had heard of me before we met."
"Oh, honey. She was raised on the idea of the romantic criminal. It's everywhere. You rescue her from death, take care of her, offer to help. Hell, you even rose from the dead to do it. What the fuck else is she supposed to think of you but that you're her own personal savior?"
"I am no one's savior." He grimaced.
"I'm not the one you need to convince."
"You think I should have left her to die." Gage leaned against the wall, fairly sure she wouldn't shoot him.
"Probably. Too late for that now. You have to finish this, one way or another." Nicky sighed. "But it isn't too late to stop trying to get her into your bed."
"She has already been there. Nothing happened."
"Nothing? Or just no sex?"
He said nothing. Nicky shook her head and sighed.
"Yeah, that's what I thought. You're getting too close to this. That's the kind of thing that gets you killed."
"Concern, Nicky? I would be touched if I thought it was genuine." He knew it was. "Trust me, seducing the girl is not my intention. I plan to get the job done and send her away."
"Who was it that said that plans have a way of changing, just when you thought you had it all figured out?" She engaged the safety and walked away.
Gage leaned his head against the cool concrete wall. How could she think she was in love with me? It took him a moment to realize he did not know which she he meant. He walked out onto the warehouse floor. Both women were gone.
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122 Reviews | 5.82/10 Average
This has been marvelous! Dramatic, exciting- I love your characters, and it's very film noir. All the twists and double-crossing, and speaking in code, it's a really classic story you've told here, and I love it. I would have left gushing reviews at every chapter, but I've been so wrapped up that I couldn't stop to say anything at all! I like the Serbian guy. Or, I like that he's Serbian. It's neat how you included drips and drabs of other languages, and giving him a war-torn background made him so much more believable. I would gladly read an entire story just about Katya, though I think a story about Nicky would make my head explode. She's too wily for me to want to get invested in emotionally.Your secondary characters seem as well fleshed-out as your antiheroes, and it really makes this a joy to read. As a reader you can tell that an incredible amount of research and knowledge went into this. I don't know the first thing about the criminal underworld, but if it were exactly like this, I wouldn't be surprised.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Wow! Thank you! I'd been wondering who was reading. I am very glad you enjoyed it. You are right about a lot of research going into this story, both on the history of Serbia and the various aspects of weaponry/gadgets/etc. I also think Katya could support her own book, and it would be a lot of fun to write her.I really appreciate you reading and giving me feedback. This was my first novel, so it holds a special place in my heart. I can still "hear" Gage muttering in my head sometimes. Maybe someday I'll revise it heavily enough to submit it for publishing. Right now, it's like a good pet rather than a show dog. LOL
Brilliant, Melenka. I really enjoyed that!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
She left... Hope he decides to go after her.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
I imagine a little labetalol would block the effect of the adrenaline cocktail quite nicely. Do I get a prize too.. pretty please? Love the last chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
So, if you use up the adrenaline, does the drug wear off faster?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Very intense, pity Cavuto got away. But you have plans for him, I am sure!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Dammit, someone got Sticks. Hopefully he is just down temporarily!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
He is sexy, he can cook, he cleans, he is protective... ok so there are a few issues such as his ability to kill with his bare hands and barely blink an eyelid, but we can gloss over those, right?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
She knew about the camera! Smart girl not to move it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Nicky may be complicating matters even more.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Oh, lovely chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
What does "sranje" mean?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
She certainly has them pegged there.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
One down...Their relationship is very twisted, distorted by the situation, much like their personalities have been shaped by their experiences.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Hmm. Hope they have another chance to have sex "properly" without the interrogation! Well done, you!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter whether Deira would turn out to be a crack shot.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Reality bites.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Very hot, albeit unrequited!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
A little intimacy, helping with each other's hair. Nice!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Those girls wouldn't be ganging up on poor old Gage, would they?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Great stuff!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
So, is his first name really Charlie? And , if not, why does his niece use it?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Katya seems well skilled at first aid. What sort of college does she attend?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
LOL. "Saved by the Lord." Hallelujah!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
So the plan is to make the hit, then burn up the lab? Is pump a fictional drug or another name for something real?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.