Chapter 28 - Fast and Loose
Chapter 28 of 36
MelenkaThe phone was ringing when Nicky got out of the shower. She dried her hands and face as she reached for it. The number displayed as 'unknown.' She hoped it had been jammed by her relays. The other possibility would not be good.
"Speak," she said.
"Very professional." The voice on the other end was masked, but she recognized it.
The chill on her spine had nothing to do with the water dripping off her. He was not supposed to call her directly, and this was the second time he'd done so. She was slipping.
"You call me to check on my phone manners or do we have business?"
"We do. You've been contracted to do a very specific job." He talked down to her out of habit, something she had never tolerated.
"Which I'm in the middle of doing, so what's your problem?" she snapped.
"The time table doesn't work for me."
"Come again?"
"The weekend isn't a suitable time for this operation. It needs to happen during the week." He was worried about the news cycle. She should have seen that coming.
"I can't tell the people involved that they have to wait until next week some time to do this. They'll want to know why, and I've got no good reason."
"You have a very good reason. Because I asked." He thought that was enough. For the circles he moved in, it would be.
"You want me to tell them that? I'm sure they'd be interested. And then they'd shoot me in the fucking head and come after you. You don't want the kinds of presents disclosure would buy you."
"Threats are unnecessary. And unwise." He tried to intimidate her with words. Without his particular connections, he wouldn't scare her at all.
"It wasn't a threat. Just a reminder that you really don't want to meet these people."
She wondered who would get to her first. It didn't matter; details of both contracts would spill out all over news wires if she died. After the news cooled, her trade secrets would hit the internet, starting the fire all over again. Not much in the way of insurance, but post-mortem revenge was a commendable legacy. At least the journalists would remember her fondly.
"Change the timing. This week." He thought he was being forceful, but she could hear the whine underneath.
"I don't think you understand. There is no way I can do that."
"I don't need to understand. Our agreement is that you'd do this to my advantage. It isn't to my advantage to have this happen on the weekend. So see that it happens sooner or I won't provide the assistance you need afterwards."
"Fine. I'll do what I can to move it up. But you do need to understand a couple of things. First, if we move early, it's going to be a lot messier than we'd discussed. Second, if you don't hold up your end of the bargain, you will spend the rest of your life looking over your shoulder because these motherfuckers don't give up."
"Such language," he said, amused.
"Take my advice, and do what you've said you'll do. I'll let you know what the arrangements are." She knew he had no idea of what was really involved. That was probably a good thing.
"Fine."
"And don't bother to call. This number is about to be out of service."
"I can find you." He sounded amused.
"Not as fast as I can find you. And every newsroom in this city. You don't want to fuck with me. You can't afford it." It had been a long time since she'd had to remind a client that she was dangerous. At least he finally got it.
"Then I suggest we each play our part and leave it at that." He disconnected.
Nicky reached for a towel, shivering. This job was turning into a nightmare, and it was her own fault. The first contract had been straight up take out Cavuto and don't worry about the aftermath. The new boss would take over with most people none the wiser. Deira would have her revenge, and Gage would be able to cut the girl loose. It was clean and simple, the way things were done in this business.
She never did things the way they were supposed to be done, and that usually worked out just fine. This time, the complexities were multiplying faster than she could sort them out, all because she had decided she could do two jobs at once.
She considered ways to convince Gage to change the schedule, rejecting each one as too obvious. He would be suspicious. He was always suspicious, especially when it came to her. You earned that. The truth irritated her. She would have to lie to him. Again. The fact that it would save his life was little comfort.
She got dressed and found the phone she'd purchased for this operation. It, too, would go dead soon. She began to dial Gage's number and stopped. She could learn something here. She called Deira instead.
"Nicky?"
"You sound out of breath, girl."
"Phone was in my gym bag. What's up?"
"I haven't been able to reach Gage. Either his phone is off or his battery is dead. You know where he is?" She struggled to keep her voice neutral.
"He's here. Hold on. I'll get him."
So much for cutting her loose. Nicky shook her head. He was an idiot, but there was nothing she could do about it.
"Duchess." The caution in his voice would have set her off if it hadn't been a constant.
"Check your phone. I haven't been able to get through."
"I turned it off."
"That's a really bad idea," she chided. She clutched the counter for balance, overwhelmed by relief.
"I had my reasons."
"And I'll bet they had something to do with a naked blonde." Shit. She should have let it go.
"Is that why you called, to save me from my baser instincts? Or to save her from them?"
"No. I don't give a damn what you do in your spare time."
"You used to be a better liar," he said, obviously amused.
She swallowed her fear. Let him think that's the only lie.
"Time, spare or otherwise, is the problem. Things are moving fast on Cavuto's end. I don't know if he has anything solid, but the hit on the whorehouse has made him very nervous."
"Good."
"No, not good. He's moving money around fast. That's never good. I'm probably not the only one who's noticed. At some point, banks will have to report it."
"How is this my concern?" he asked.
"Because, you thick bastard, if he's shifting funds openly, he's trying to draw attention to himself. It keeps people interested in his finances, so they won't notice when he closes or relocates the lab. The window of opportunity just shrank. We need to move the job up."
"To when?" Schedule changes had always aggravated him.
"Best guess? Two days, three at the outside." She held her breath. If he didn't go for this, the whole thing would fall apart. And sometime shortly thereafter, she would be killed. It hardly mattered by which party.
"That will be difficult."
"No, it won't. You told me yesterday everything was set." She hoped he missed the panic in her voice.
"We still need to arrange for delivery of the devices," he said.
"Which you can do with a phone call. My part of this is ready to go, too."
"And if I am not ready to move yet?"
"Why are you being like this? You can get a call in the middle of the night, be on a plane, do what needs to be done and be home before anyone knows you're gone. With weeks to plan, I know you're ready." She hated appealing to his ego.
"I don't like this," he said. She could almost see him pacing.
"I'm sorry the big, bad drug dealer is messing up your plans, but we don't really have a lot of options here." Her desperation bled through.
"I will make the necessary arrangements and call you back." His accent was in full force, so he was truly pissed off.
"I'll be waiting." She disconnected.
Gage paced. Deira kept quiet even after he got off the phone. Nothing good came of talking to him when he was like this. She wanted to get up, pour them some coffee, find out what was happening. When he began muttering in another language, she decided it was safer to remain where she was, perfectly still.
When he grew quiet, she went to the kitchen, filling his cup and handing it to him without a word. He closed his eyes for a moment, took a deep breath and let it out softly.
"There has been a change of plans." He almost hid his ire.
"I figured. So tell me what I need to do according to the new plan, and I'll do that."
"The details are essentially the same, but we have to move faster."
"Okay. We're ready, right?"
"I am ready. I had hoped to give you a few more days to recover, during which we could have timed the placement of the bombs."
"This isn't the first time I've set explosives," she said.
"It is the first time you might be doing it under fire. It is different when you know you are surrounded by people with guns."
"Does it change what has to be done?"
"No, only how much your hands shake while you try to do it. Seconds count."
"Were you planning to shoot at me while I practiced?"
He glanced sideways at her and shook his head, exasperated.
"Then it would have been academic anyway. Unless you think we should call the whole deal, we're going to have to accept a less than perfect plan"
"Those tend to have unfortunate results. Like dying." He regarded her carefully. "You would accept it if I canceled the job?"
"As long as I walk away with no obligation to you, yes." It startled her to realize she meant it. "But you aren't going to."
"What makes you say that?"
"Because you keep your promises."
"I did not promise to do this job for you," he said softly.
"No, but you did contract out, and I'm pretty sure that counts as a promise in your book. You have a reputation for finishing what you start."
"This job is anonymous. Nicky is the one holding the contract," he said.
"Right. And you told her you would do the job. You might find a way to get out of doing something I want, but you aren't going to break a promise to her." She was sure of it.
"You think I would deceive you but not her? Why?"
"She obviously knows more about you, and knowledge in Nicky's hands is extremely dangerous."
"As am I."
"Yes, but that doesn't change how dangerous she is to you."
"And you are not?"
"Not really. Nicky can erase people, screw with their finances, set them up and take them down in all sorts of ways. I'm not nearly that caliber of dangerous. Hell, I can't even get you off me when you knock me down."
"I have not noticed you trying lately." He smiled for the first time since the phone call.
"Cute, but not what I was talking about. You expended a fair amount of energy trying to get me to let you handle this on your own. If I hadn't been clear on what you thought of my skills before, that would have told me all I need to know."
"So you see my attempts to keep you out of harm's way as an insult?"
"No, just an indication you think I'm not up to this. Don't get me wrong. It was sweet of you to try to protect me if I can even use that word about you but the impetus behind it was your uncertainty about whether I could hold up my end."
"If I thought you were not capable, I would not have bothered setting you up with Nicky in the first place. I certainly would not have suggested you make the explosives." The slight amusement in his eyes belied the serious tone.
Deira looked at him. "What would you have done?"
"Let you go off on your own and get killed." He shrugged.
"Huh."
"That was not the answer you expected."
"No." She tilted her head and looked at him. "Why didn't you?"
"Because dead you would be no good to me."
"I'm not going to be any good to you when this is over, either," she pointed out.
"We shall see."
"Oh, no, you don't. You told me that doing my part cancels my debt to you."
"It does. I was referring to mutually beneficial endeavors." He did not elaborate.
"As long as we're clear. I won't end up owing you like Nicky did."
"The circumstances are different. Nicky burned me. Clearing her debt by having her train you was a gift, as she knows. I could easily have killed her and did not. That was also a gift. If I decided to walk away from this job, I would feel no obligation to her and she would not try to harm me."
"So what's stopping you?"
"You are."
"I said I would accept you backing out."
"You did not say you would abandon the job because I did. You have access to a truck full of explosives, blueprints, and a reasonable plan. You know how to use your gun well enough to take out at least a few targets. And there is a great deal of money to be made in seeing it through."
"So you think I'd go ahead without you."
"I know you would."
"Shit. Am I that easy to read?"
"No, Deira. You are that dangerous." He paused. "Which is why you may be of use to me in the future."
"I told you this was it for me," she said.
"I would never ask you to do anything you are not willing to do."
That doesn't narrow the field much. She wisely kept quiet. Some things he didn't need to know.
He got up and looked for his keys. She got the gun case from the bedroom and packed her gym bag. By the time she had finished, he had done the dishes and was waiting by the door.
"You scare me sometimes," she said lightly.
"Good." He carried a bag downstairs, leaving her to lock up.
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This has been marvelous! Dramatic, exciting- I love your characters, and it's very film noir. All the twists and double-crossing, and speaking in code, it's a really classic story you've told here, and I love it. I would have left gushing reviews at every chapter, but I've been so wrapped up that I couldn't stop to say anything at all! I like the Serbian guy. Or, I like that he's Serbian. It's neat how you included drips and drabs of other languages, and giving him a war-torn background made him so much more believable. I would gladly read an entire story just about Katya, though I think a story about Nicky would make my head explode. She's too wily for me to want to get invested in emotionally.Your secondary characters seem as well fleshed-out as your antiheroes, and it really makes this a joy to read. As a reader you can tell that an incredible amount of research and knowledge went into this. I don't know the first thing about the criminal underworld, but if it were exactly like this, I wouldn't be surprised.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Wow! Thank you! I'd been wondering who was reading. I am very glad you enjoyed it. You are right about a lot of research going into this story, both on the history of Serbia and the various aspects of weaponry/gadgets/etc. I also think Katya could support her own book, and it would be a lot of fun to write her.I really appreciate you reading and giving me feedback. This was my first novel, so it holds a special place in my heart. I can still "hear" Gage muttering in my head sometimes. Maybe someday I'll revise it heavily enough to submit it for publishing. Right now, it's like a good pet rather than a show dog. LOL
Brilliant, Melenka. I really enjoyed that!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
She left... Hope he decides to go after her.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
I imagine a little labetalol would block the effect of the adrenaline cocktail quite nicely. Do I get a prize too.. pretty please? Love the last chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
So, if you use up the adrenaline, does the drug wear off faster?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Very intense, pity Cavuto got away. But you have plans for him, I am sure!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Dammit, someone got Sticks. Hopefully he is just down temporarily!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
He is sexy, he can cook, he cleans, he is protective... ok so there are a few issues such as his ability to kill with his bare hands and barely blink an eyelid, but we can gloss over those, right?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
She knew about the camera! Smart girl not to move it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Nicky may be complicating matters even more.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Oh, lovely chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
What does "sranje" mean?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
She certainly has them pegged there.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
One down...Their relationship is very twisted, distorted by the situation, much like their personalities have been shaped by their experiences.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Hmm. Hope they have another chance to have sex "properly" without the interrogation! Well done, you!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter whether Deira would turn out to be a crack shot.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Reality bites.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Very hot, albeit unrequited!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
A little intimacy, helping with each other's hair. Nice!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Those girls wouldn't be ganging up on poor old Gage, would they?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Great stuff!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
So, is his first name really Charlie? And , if not, why does his niece use it?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Katya seems well skilled at first aid. What sort of college does she attend?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
LOL. "Saved by the Lord." Hallelujah!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
So the plan is to make the hit, then burn up the lab? Is pump a fictional drug or another name for something real?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.