Chapter 22 - Target Practice
Chapter 22 of 36
MelenkaGage took the next exit, merging onto a two lane road. Deira stared out the window, though there was little to see, just fields on either side, the occasional farm house providing the only variety. He could not tell if he had hit a nerve or just insulted her. The end result was the same. She was angry, but at least she had learned to hold it in check.
He turned down a country road. She looked at him sharply.
"Assuming you aren't going to shoot me and bury me in a field, where are we going?"
"You will see."
They were nearing a long, low building at the end of the road. They passed a sign with multiple warnings against trespassing. Gage ignored it and parked between a rusty, black pickup truck and a pristine, grey Saturn convertible. The latter made him smile. He got out of his truck, taking the metal case from the back seat and motioning for Deira to follow him.
"What is this place?" she asked.
"A private shooting range. I want to see how well you handle a gun."
"You could have said so."
"It was more entertaining to annoy you."
"Sometimes I hate you," she said with surprisingly little malice.
"Most people do."
They walked into a small office. A young man was sitting behind a low counter, the back of his chair tilted to rest against the wall. He looked up from his magazine. Gage nodded to him and signed the register.
"Good to see you, Chuck. It's been awhile." The chair legs hit the floor. The man ran his hand through already tousled brown hair.
"Good to see you, too, Jake," Gage said. His accent was gone again. "I've been wanting to come, but you know how it is."
"Yeah. Who's your friend?" He dropped the magazine and regarded Deira, stopping just short of ogling. She had expected that the bruises would shield her from that sort of attention but apparently not.
"Gina, this is Jake."
Jake got up to shake her hand, a lopsided grin on his face as he looked from Gage to her.
"You licensed?"
"Of course," Deira said. She showed him her firearms ID card.
"Gotta ask." He held up his hands and backed away. Gage put the guest fee on the counter.
"Rifle range is all yours. Kelli is trying out her new Glock on the pistol range. I have no idea where Frank is. Probably on the patio drinking. His wife doesn't let him do that at home anymore."
Gage looked at him sharply.
"I have his gun and his keys. You got nothing to worry about. Have fun shooting." Jake sat down and picked up his magazine.
"Chuck?" Deira whispered as soon as the office door closed.
"Let it go, princess," Gage murmured. She laughed quietly as she followed him down the hall, towards the sound of gunfire.
A petite brunette stood in the middle bay, firing steadily. Her brown hair fell to her shoulders, bangs just brushing the protective glasses. She finished up the clip with a huge smile on her face. Gage watched her for a moment, amused. When she pushed the button to retrieve her target, he moved past her, then turned to regard the target. The chest area was sprinkled with bullet holes, and there was a perfect head shot. Just one. He whistled his approval when she removed her earmuffs.
"I think I missed my calling as a hit man," the woman laughed, removing the glasses. Deira flinched. Gage did not react at all.
"You'd be a better cop, Kelli. You like order," he said.
"True. My Viking heritage is inclined to raids on the unsuspecting anyway. Come to think of it, the Irish side favors that, too. But the Irish cop thing is so overdone." Kelli took down the target and turned to face him, her brown eyes bright. "My talent will just have to be wasted, I guess."
"The Irish explains the short," Gage said.
"You do realize that I already have a gun out and loaded, and you don't, right?" She tucked her hair behind her ear and stepped back towards the gun, smiling. He didn't move. She didn't reach for it.
"Gina, meet Kelli, the woman who keeps every man here from feeling smug."
"Not likely. Most of them don't know how to feel any other way." Kelli stepped past him to shake Deira's hand. "It's a pleasure to meet you."
"Nice shooting," Deira said.
"Thanks." Kelli looked down at the target and then at her gun. There was something akin to lust in her gaze. "I waited years for this gun. Now all I want to do is shoot it. Good thing I can come here or I'd be tempted to shoot every squirrel in sight, and I'm pretty sure the condo association would frown on that. Still, it'd be wicked fun."
"You have my card if you need someone to bail you out," Gage said, moving to the last bay.
Deira began to follow him, but Kelli touched her arm lightly.
"Don't worry about being nervous. He knows what he's doing, and rumor has it that he's pretty good. But don't treat him like a god or anything. He's just another yahoo with a gun." Kelli kept her voice low.
"Thanks for the advice," Deira answered, trying very hard to suppress nervous laughter.
Kelli loaded another target and replaced her earmuffs and goggles. Within seconds, she was back in her trance.
Gage had the case open and was checking the guns. He suspected the Glock would work for Deira. Her hands were big enough for it. There was no science to it; some guns just fit and others didn't. In the end, it would be her choice. He hoped she chose that one. He didn't want to let go of the other two. They were much harder to trace. He had never brought them out here. He was glad Kelli had her new toy to keep her occupied. She was less likely to be watching. He closed the case.
Deira waited patiently while Gage put the gun together. He handed her a pair of glasses.
"I assume you were taught to shoot," he said.
"Fine time to ask, but yes. That was part of my training." Neither of them would mention Sticks by name, even if there was no one around to hear.
He loaded a target, handed her earmuffs and put on his own. Then he handed her the gun. It was the single most trusting thing he could do. She took it from him and checked it. Smart girl. He could see her checking her grip, testing the weight of the gun and the sight. When the target was in place, she glanced over her shoulder at him. He nodded, and she began firing.
Her smile didn't match Kelli's for intensity, but he was glad to see it. Her stance was acceptable, despite obvious tension. He watched her shoulders drop as she laid the gun down and waited for the target to come forward. There was a line of holes from the lower chest to the shoulders. A quick count told him that several rounds had missed.
"I shifted up," she muttered, shaking her head.
"Not unusual," he said. "Compensate on the next round."
He put a hand on her shoulder when she reached for the gun.
"Let me help." He stood behind her and positioned her arms, then stepped back, letting her make her own adjustments.
The second target was much cleaner. Any one of them would be enough to stop an assailant, if not kill him.
"Is your injured hand giving you any trouble?" he asked.
"It hurts a little, but it's not affecting my shooting. I'm just not that good."
"Good enough, if it comes down to it. With planning and luck, it should not be an issue. Go again."
He switched out guns. She didn't care for the Magnum at all, saying it was too heavy. He was glad. That had come from Israel, via various channels, and would be hard to replace. The HK USP was better, but she still preferred the Glock.
"Your turn," she said, stepping back.
He picked up the Magnum and set up a target. The world fell away. There was nothing but him, the gun, and the target. He knew Deira was behind him. He was aware of Kelli's target as it slid towards her, but he was not with them. When his target came forward, there was little left of the center. Of course, there wasn't a lot of distance between him and the paper target, and it was neither shooting at him nor running away. It was much harder in the field.
As he switched pistols and set up for another round, he wondered why firing a gun did not trigger war memories the way low-flying airplanes or backfiring cars did. Maybe it was familiarity. He had spent years shooting at people and being shot at in return, though never with weapons of any quality. Gun battles made sense to him. Watching villages explode as the attackers flew away did not. It was amazing that he had lived through his early years. Target in place, he began to fire. The results were the same no matter which gun he used.
He finished with the Glock. It was a very good weapon but not his favorite. The others were already in the case when Kelli approached to see how he had done. He glanced at the case to make sure it was closed. She wasn't looking at it. Her eyes were fixed on the target.
"Damn. You really are as good as they say." Kelli looked up at him.
"I didn't know they talked about me." Gage said.
"You know this place, it's a cross between pissing contest and gossip with most of these guys. Not many of them have seen you shoot, but the rumors are out there anyway."
"Oh? What do they say?"
"They figure you for ex-military. Best story is that you were a sniper. "
"Is that so? I'm flattered. The truth isn't that exciting. I just grew up around guns and like them. I was never in the army. You can tell them that if you want."
"What, and burst the bubble? Not me. Let them think what they want. It gives them something to do instead of razzing me about shooting like a girl." She rolled her eyes. "They haven't seen me with the pistol yet."
"That ought to shut them up."
She grinned at him, nodding. "I'm really looking forward to the shoot on Saturday. You should come."
"Unfortunately, I have plans this weekend. But the next time I run into you, I want to hear all about it." Gage returned her smile.
"Deal." Kelli walked away, humming.
Gage put away the Glock and locked the case. Deira followed him out, thanking Jake on the way. There were more cars and trucks on the lot now, and the sound of gunfire could be heard from the outdoor range, punctuated by the occasional whoop. The grey convertible was gone.
"So where do we go from here?" Deira asked.
"Back to the house. I need to clean the guns and make a call."
"I could use a bath and a nap, if that's okay."
He nodded. "If the security system has not been triggered, I will take you home tonight."
"You can check that remotely?"
"Yes."
"You didn't tell me that," she said sharply.
"You never asked. I did not think it was important. The alarm will send me a coded alert if it is triggered or shut off. I configured it that way for situations such as the one you are currently in."
"Where's the code to tell me you're keeping an eye on me?"
"I should have thought that my wanting to know what is going on would be a given, princess."
"You're a control freak."
"Of course I am. That also should have been clear to you from the beginning. Were you not paying attention?" He could not suppress his amusement.
"Not well enough, apparently."
"You should work on that."
"Next time I hook up with a hit man, I'll keep that in mind," she said.
"If it is anyone but me, I would suggest you be particularly wary." His amusement was gone.
"Even if I live through this, there won't be a next time. I need to do this for my sister, but when it's over, I'm done."
"I am glad to hear that." He glanced at her. "You could leave the job to me and be done with it now."
"Nice try, but no. I'm going to finish what I started, one way or another."
"So will I."
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122 Reviews | 5.82/10 Average
This has been marvelous! Dramatic, exciting- I love your characters, and it's very film noir. All the twists and double-crossing, and speaking in code, it's a really classic story you've told here, and I love it. I would have left gushing reviews at every chapter, but I've been so wrapped up that I couldn't stop to say anything at all! I like the Serbian guy. Or, I like that he's Serbian. It's neat how you included drips and drabs of other languages, and giving him a war-torn background made him so much more believable. I would gladly read an entire story just about Katya, though I think a story about Nicky would make my head explode. She's too wily for me to want to get invested in emotionally.Your secondary characters seem as well fleshed-out as your antiheroes, and it really makes this a joy to read. As a reader you can tell that an incredible amount of research and knowledge went into this. I don't know the first thing about the criminal underworld, but if it were exactly like this, I wouldn't be surprised.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Wow! Thank you! I'd been wondering who was reading. I am very glad you enjoyed it. You are right about a lot of research going into this story, both on the history of Serbia and the various aspects of weaponry/gadgets/etc. I also think Katya could support her own book, and it would be a lot of fun to write her.I really appreciate you reading and giving me feedback. This was my first novel, so it holds a special place in my heart. I can still "hear" Gage muttering in my head sometimes. Maybe someday I'll revise it heavily enough to submit it for publishing. Right now, it's like a good pet rather than a show dog. LOL
Brilliant, Melenka. I really enjoyed that!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
She left... Hope he decides to go after her.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
I imagine a little labetalol would block the effect of the adrenaline cocktail quite nicely. Do I get a prize too.. pretty please? Love the last chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
So, if you use up the adrenaline, does the drug wear off faster?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Very intense, pity Cavuto got away. But you have plans for him, I am sure!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Dammit, someone got Sticks. Hopefully he is just down temporarily!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
He is sexy, he can cook, he cleans, he is protective... ok so there are a few issues such as his ability to kill with his bare hands and barely blink an eyelid, but we can gloss over those, right?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
She knew about the camera! Smart girl not to move it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Nicky may be complicating matters even more.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Oh, lovely chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
What does "sranje" mean?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
She certainly has them pegged there.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
One down...Their relationship is very twisted, distorted by the situation, much like their personalities have been shaped by their experiences.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Hmm. Hope they have another chance to have sex "properly" without the interrogation! Well done, you!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter whether Deira would turn out to be a crack shot.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Reality bites.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Very hot, albeit unrequited!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
A little intimacy, helping with each other's hair. Nice!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Those girls wouldn't be ganging up on poor old Gage, would they?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Great stuff!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
So, is his first name really Charlie? And , if not, why does his niece use it?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Katya seems well skilled at first aid. What sort of college does she attend?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
LOL. "Saved by the Lord." Hallelujah!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
So the plan is to make the hit, then burn up the lab? Is pump a fictional drug or another name for something real?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.