Chapter 32 - Shot in the Dark
Chapter 32 of 36
MelenkaThe explosions had come too soon. Gage had thought he would have to take out the man threatening Deira, which had distracted him from the targets at the other end of the lot. It also meant he was looking in the right direction when the second man began firing. Emptying his mind, he set his sight for the shooter. He took a breath and checked the sight again, then fired. The man dropped to the pavement.
Workers raced across the parking lot and jumped into their cars. Tires squealed as they raced for the exit. More people poured out through the loading dock. Their fear and confusion added to the chaos.
He had no time to look for Deira. She was on her own. He calmly located Butch, re-sighted, and fired. The shot was not perfect, but Butch went down. That was all that mattered.
Getting a clear shot at the remaining targets proved difficult. One of them had grabbed a worker and was using him as a shield. Gage waited, ticking off the seconds without thinking about it. He needed to finish soon. The target turned to yell at someone, opening a gap between him and his hostage. Gage had no time for a second look. He fired. The hostage fell to the ground screaming, but not because he had been hit. People rarely responded well when covered with brains.
Two down. The first two did not count. He scanned the parking lot for Cavuto but could not locate him. He was there somewhere or ought to be. The guard had confirmed his arrival. Time was running out. He would have to take out the other targets and hope Cavuto surfaced.
It was easy to find the remaining thugs. They were the ones shooting back. They didn't have his range, but were still too close. Deira had been heading for the trees. If the first shooter had not taken her out, the others might. He did not want to think about it. Could not. There was a job to do.
He picked up the rifle and collapsed the tripod. He moved further up the hill at an angle to the loading dock until he found the right spot. He searched for Cavuto's bodyguards. They would not be far from their boss.
They shouldn't have worn suits. It made them easier to find. He looked through the scope, picking out the one further away. He hadn't needed Deira to identify Jamie Kittredge. The little bastard was well known for his rage and his sadistic treatment of women.
He took the time to sight again, then pulled the trigger. Kittredge moved at the last second. The shot missed. True to form, Kittredge began firing wildly, hitting one of the workers. Those who had not made it to their cars dove for cover or hit the ground. Most of them would be used to gunfire.
The second shot was cleaner and hit as intended. Kittredge crumpled, his hands clutching his stomach. He might live, though with that much damage it was doubtful. He would suffer either way.
Another bomb went off. He was sure he had heard all ten detonate. This time, the ground shook. What did she do? The next explosion was bigger and took off part of the roof on the other side of the building. Some of the workers who had gotten to their feet were now covering their faces and stumbling around blindly. Others were ripping off jackets or shirts. Those who had not apparently gone insane were once again running for their cars.
Sranje. The chemical vats had blown. He stood far enough away that burns would be unlikely. It gave him little comfort. The air sparkled. The wind shifted, or maybe the explosion had pushed the air. It did not matter which. He knew what was coming next. One more and it is done.
He could finally see Cavuto, running for his truck. He would have done better to carjack one of his employees. Gage looked through the scope, following Cavuto's movements. He had no qualms about shooting the man in the back. He took a deep breath, then another. One of the blinded workers got in the way of the shot. Gage waited and a few seconds later took aim. His hands began to shake, just slightly. Trying to still them made it worse. If he fired, he would miss or hit the wrong person. He had run out of time.
It was too dark to see the sparkling particles settle into his skin. He breathed deeply, taking in the poison. The sickness sang in his blood. It was good to be alive.
He lowered the rifle, grabbed the tripod, and ran for the truck. He put the equipment in the back and covered it with a blanket. Then he looked around for Deira.
She should have been waiting for him. He raced towards the trees, heart pounding. His vision was sharper than it had been for years, but he could not see her. She was smart enough to not make any noise. He slowed down once he got to the trees, scanning the ground, not wanting to think about what he might find yet unable to stop. Light glinted off of something metal on the ground. He crept forward.
They were lying still, two bodies in the darkness. The reflection came from the end of Sticks' cane. He stepped over it. Screams echoed from the parking lot. Sirens joined them, getting closer. He leaned over. Sticks wheezed through clenched teeth. Deira's hand rested on his hip. Her eyes were closed.
Animal rage rose up, demanding. He growled, then shoved it down. She was breathing. Blood seeped through her fingers. He bent down and placed his hand over hers. She opened her eyes and pointed her gun at him. He froze. She lowered the gun.
"I need to see."
"He'll die."
"We will all die if we do not leave right now." He pushed her hand away.
The wound looked bad, maybe fatal. He had seen men survive worse, but not without immediate attention. He stripped off his shirt and pressed it on the wound. Deira got to her feet, strangely graceful.
"Keep pressure on that. We have to get him back to my truck." He lifted Sticks.
The walk back to the truck took an eternity. The sirens got closer, overpowering the cries of the injured workers. Deira opened the door, climbing in as Gage laid Sticks on the back seat. He used a bungee cord to secure the shirt. Sticks tried to scream but it came out a choked cry. A moment later, he passed out.
"We need his keys."
"They'll be in the ignition. He says no one would bother stealing his truck."
"You will have to drive it." He stepped aside so she could get out of the truck, balling his hands into fists so he did not reach out for her.
"I'll follow you to the hospital."
"No hospital."
"Well, you can't patch this up on your kitchen table."
"No. We are going to your place. A doctor will be waiting."
She panicked. "My place is even worse!"
"Not your apartment, the storefront. There's no time to argue. Get in the damned truck!" he yelled. No one would hear him over the sirens. Cavuto would be long gone, and all other threats had been neutralized.
She turned and ran into the trees. He ground his teeth and got into the truck, looking over his shoulder to check on Sticks. She would be heartbroken if the old man died. It was a distinct possibility. When he turned back, she skirted the edge of the woods. Under her arm, she carried Sticks' cane. A gallon jug was in her hand. Details. He started the truck and pulled up as she angled the battered pickup out of the trees.
They passed through the gate, headlights still off. The moon gave enough light to see the road. The sirens were very close. He eased onto the access road and turned on his headlights. She did the same.
They were half-way to the exit when the first police cars turned onto the road. He did not stop, but pulled to the edge of the lane and coasted. They blew by without slowing. Fire trucks followed, ambulances close behind.
He kept his speed down, knowing that each minute wasted brought Sticks closer to death. The flashing lights disappeared down the road. He sped up. As they approached the exit, two more police cars turned onto the road and slowed. He tried to control his breathing, to no avail. He fought the urge to stomp down on the accelerator. It would not help. There was no way they would make it out.
The flashing lights went dark. Inside the cars, the officers stared forward, not one turning to look at the trucks. They sped up, passing the abandoned road. It was almost enough to make him believe in miracles. If God was looking out for him tonight, he would not waste the blessing. Sticks coughed, then whimpered. Gage turned onto the main road and slammed the gas pedal to the floor, hoping for another miracle.
He had to slow once they were on the highway. If he got pulled over for speeding with a car full of guns and a dying man, not even God would be able to save him. He pushed the button on his headset and called Nicky.
"Is it done?"
"No time. Get The Medic and meet me at Deira's apartment. Security is six, seven, zero, five, three, five, one. First floor door is unlocked. Open the gate to the back yard."
"Deira?" Nicky's voice cracked.
"Sticks."
"What the fuck?!"
"No. Time!" He hung up. Let there be time.
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Deira caught up to him on the highway. Her body trembled, screaming for movement. Cars raced up behind her, the headlights too bright. She blinked away tears. All she could think about was the blood on the pavement, her hands, Sticks. The bullets had been meant for her. He had been hit because of her, was dying in place of her. This was not how it was supposed to be.
She gripped the steering wheel harder to stop her hands from shaking. The other cars blurred into streaks of light and color. She focused on the taillights of Gage's truck, silent screams in her head urging him to go faster. She opened the window, flooding the car with cold air. She took a deep breath, the first since the cloud of pump had surrounded her. They had forgotten the masks.
Details. She could hear his voice as if he were sitting right next to her. She laughed hysterically. By the time they pulled off the highway, the laughter had dissolved into choking sobs.
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The tension in his shoulders dissolved as he made the turn onto Deira's street. Ragged breathing from the back seat told him Sticks yet lived. For now.
He pulled into the back yard. The motion detector flooded it with light. The door flew open. Nicky and The Medic ran to the truck, carrying a stretcher. Gage helped load Sticks, tilting his head towards the pickup as it pulled in behind them. Nicky nodded and stepped away. She was a very good soldier.
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122 Reviews | 5.82/10 Average
This has been marvelous! Dramatic, exciting- I love your characters, and it's very film noir. All the twists and double-crossing, and speaking in code, it's a really classic story you've told here, and I love it. I would have left gushing reviews at every chapter, but I've been so wrapped up that I couldn't stop to say anything at all! I like the Serbian guy. Or, I like that he's Serbian. It's neat how you included drips and drabs of other languages, and giving him a war-torn background made him so much more believable. I would gladly read an entire story just about Katya, though I think a story about Nicky would make my head explode. She's too wily for me to want to get invested in emotionally.Your secondary characters seem as well fleshed-out as your antiheroes, and it really makes this a joy to read. As a reader you can tell that an incredible amount of research and knowledge went into this. I don't know the first thing about the criminal underworld, but if it were exactly like this, I wouldn't be surprised.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Wow! Thank you! I'd been wondering who was reading. I am very glad you enjoyed it. You are right about a lot of research going into this story, both on the history of Serbia and the various aspects of weaponry/gadgets/etc. I also think Katya could support her own book, and it would be a lot of fun to write her.I really appreciate you reading and giving me feedback. This was my first novel, so it holds a special place in my heart. I can still "hear" Gage muttering in my head sometimes. Maybe someday I'll revise it heavily enough to submit it for publishing. Right now, it's like a good pet rather than a show dog. LOL
Brilliant, Melenka. I really enjoyed that!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I am really glad you liked it. :)
She left... Hope he decides to go after her.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She said she would leave, and she knows better than to lie to him. But he's not one to let people go if he has a use for them.
I imagine a little labetalol would block the effect of the adrenaline cocktail quite nicely. Do I get a prize too.. pretty please? Love the last chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Heh. No idea what that is, but you should get a prize just for knowing! Thanks for all your great reviews.
So, if you use up the adrenaline, does the drug wear off faster?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep, pretty much. The rest of the cocktail remains, so you don't sleep and you still feel like hell, but you don't have the resulting nausea, muscle lock or ravenous hunger that can follow even a normal adrenaline spike.
Very intense, pity Cavuto got away. But you have plans for him, I am sure!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I couldn't let him run free for long.
Dammit, someone got Sticks. Hopefully he is just down temporarily!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He's a tough old bird, but that was close.
He is sexy, he can cook, he cleans, he is protective... ok so there are a few issues such as his ability to kill with his bare hands and barely blink an eyelid, but we can gloss over those, right?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think that's pretty much her way of thinking - except she has no idea how he feels about her so she's convinced she's the only one falling in love.
She knew about the camera! Smart girl not to move it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think if she'd found it at the beginning, she would have moved it. It's probably a good thing she didn't.
Nicky may be complicating matters even more.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She does that. Of course, she's never had two parties pay for the same contract before, so it could gert dicey.
Oh, lovely chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you! I thought it was time she got a little back.
What does "sranje" mean?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It's Serbian for "shit" (or "bullshit" but I don't use it that way)
She certainly has them pegged there.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yeah, she does. Considering they helped make her who she is, you'd think they'd be a little more clued in.
One down...Their relationship is very twisted, distorted by the situation, much like their personalities have been shaped by their experiences.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Yep. They have some very serious baggage, but they keep trying to find ways to connect.
Hmm. Hope they have another chance to have sex "properly" without the interrogation! Well done, you!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! That was probably the most difficult scene for me to write. I'm glad you liked it.
I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter whether Deira would turn out to be a crack shot.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She's decent enough, but not an expert. Sticks wouldn't have ignored that part of her training. He likes guns.
Reality bites.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Somtimes, it bites pretty hard...
Very hot, albeit unrequited!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Glad you like that. It was requited. Just not consummated. ;)
A little intimacy, helping with each other's hair. Nice!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! I struggled to get that scene right. My husband let me shave his head (he often goes bald), though strangely, he vetoed the straight razor, too....
Those girls wouldn't be ganging up on poor old Gage, would they?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I think they're both glad to have someone to talk to who talks back. :) And knowing them, they're both fishing for information.
Great stuff!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thanks! Glad you approve. :)
So, is his first name really Charlie? And , if not, why does his niece use it?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Charles Randall is his legal name, given to him by his adoptive parents, with his full agreement. He wanted a different life, and a new name helped. Gage is the nickname he got in the war. He never uses his real name, and very few people know what it is.
Katya seems well skilled at first aid. What sort of college does she attend?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She just attends a normal liberal arts college. But she went to summer school in the jungles of Central America.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I realise now we are on different wave-lengths. College here refers to high school, so I was thinking she was awfully level-headed and knowledgeable for a teenager! I did figure it out after I asked this question, eventually!
LOL. "Saved by the Lord." Hallelujah!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I hear he works in mysterious ways...
So the plan is to make the hit, then burn up the lab? Is pump a fictional drug or another name for something real?
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Pump is a fictional drug - an artificial adrenaline cocktail. And he would be very happy if it was removed from the face of the earth.