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Novelette Gauntlet
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Gauntlet

1: Chapter 1 - Flying Blind

2: Chapter 2 - Holding Steady

3: Chapter 3 - Still of Night

4: Chapter 4 - Give and Take

5: Chapter 5 - Truth or Dare

6: Chapter 6 - Show and Tell

7: Chapter 7 - Balancing Act

8: Chapter 8 - Rattling the Cage

9: Chapter 9 - Vested Interest

10: Chapter 10 - Fits and Starts

11: Chapter 11 - Under the Gun

12: Chapter 12 - Smoke and Mirrors

13: Chapter 13 - Basic Principles

14: Chapter 14 - Saving Grace

15: Chapter 15 - Black and Blue

16: Chapter 16 - Beyond the Pale

17: Chapter 17 - Plenty of Rope

18: Chapter 18 - Grave Concerns

19: Chapter 19 - Straight Lines

20: Chapter 20 - Playing with Fire

21: Chapter 21 - Shadow of a Doubt

22: Chapter 22 - Target Practice

23: Chapter 23 - Kiss and Tell

24: Chapter 24 - Devil to Pay

25: Chapter 25 - No Place Like Home

26: Chapter 26 - Chain Reaction

27: Chapter 27 - Double or Nothing

28: Chapter 28 - Fast and Loose

29: Chapter 29 - Clock Watching

30: Chapter 30 - Willing and Able

31: Chapter 31 - Slash and Burn

32: Chapter 32 - Shot in the Dark

33: Chapter 33 - Disorderly Conduct

34: Chapter 34 - Tender Mercies

35: Chapter 35 - Nothing to Lose

36: Epilogue

Gauntlet

Melenka

122 Reviews   |   122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

Drama General Novelette 85,094 Words 36 Chapters Complete

A woman seeking revenge finds more than she bargains for. A man seeking redemption finds more than he had expected.

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Chapters (36)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Flying Blind

Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Holding Steady

Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Still of Night

Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Give and Take

Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Truth or Dare

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Show and Tell

Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Balancing Act

Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Rattling the Cage

Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Vested Interest

Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Fits and Starts

Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under the Gun

Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Smoke and Mirrors

Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Basic Principles

Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Saving Grace

Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Black and Blue

Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Beyond the Pale

Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Plenty of Rope

Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Grave Concerns

Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Straight Lines

Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Playing with Fire

Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Shadow of a Doubt

Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Target Practice

Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Kiss and Tell

Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Devil to Pay

Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - No Place Like Home

Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Chain Reaction

Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Double or Nothing

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Fast and Loose

Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Clock Watching

Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Willing and Able

Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Slash and Burn

Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Shot in the Dark

Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Disorderly Conduct

Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Tender Mercies

Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Nothing to Lose

Chapter 36: Epilogue


About Melenka

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Melenka

Member Since 2008  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 82  |  104 Reviews Written  |  967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

Author Website
http://pushcomestoshove.blogspot.com/

Reviews for Gauntlet

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sunny33

Wonder what other skills she has that she is not letting on about?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She's a great accountant, but I don't think that was the sort of skills she meant. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She's a great accountant, but I don't think that was the sort of skills she meant. ;)

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sunny33

In some ways he is just as naive as she is.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He isn't terribly wise about women, is he?  Poor Nicky, left with the job of trying to bring him up to speed when he failed so badly at it the last time she made the attempt.  Of course, her motivations that time might not have been the best...

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He isn't terribly wise about women, is he?  Poor Nicky, left with the job of trying to bring him up to speed when he failed so badly at it the last time she made the attempt.  Of course, her motivations that time might not have been the best...

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sunny33

So many negotiations. So many secrets.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Secrecy and deals define their world, which makes it a very tricky place to live.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Secrecy and deals define their world, which makes it a very tricky place to live.

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sunny33

Nothing like a bit of UST!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

It's kind of fun to watch them get under each other's skin, isn't it?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

It's kind of fun to watch them get under each other's skin, isn't it?

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sunny33

well she has to sleep with him if she stays there, or those that are watching may get suspicious, and they have their ways of finding out.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh. She has to because he says so, too.  Luckily, he's a better guy than he appears to be.  In some areas, anyway.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh. She has to because he says so, too.  Luckily, he's a better guy than he appears to be.  In some areas, anyway.

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sunny33

She definitely needs to learn to fight dirty with the people she is after.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

You're right about that.  They're rather nasty pieces of work.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

You're right about that.  They're rather nasty pieces of work.

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sunny33

She really is ambivalent towards him.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Wouldn't you be?  He pretty much has her life in his hands.  That can't be comfortable.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Wouldn't you be?  He pretty much has her life in his hands.  That can't be comfortable.

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sunny33

Now she doesn't really want to leave!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Well, he feeds her, teaches her and she's attracted to him.  The fact that he's very smart and very dangerous makes him interesting.  Yeah, she's a little twisted herself.  Freud would have a holiday.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Well, he feeds her, teaches her and she's attracted to him.  The fact that he's very smart and very dangerous makes him interesting.  Yeah, she's a little twisted herself.  Freud would have a holiday.

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sunny33

So, the hard man has a heart, deep inside.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He does.  He just keeps it locked down most of the time.  Katya is the exception to almost eveyr rule he has.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

He does.  He just keeps it locked down most of the time.  Katya is the exception to almost eveyr rule he has.

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sunny33

That was clever. I thought he was ringing a man about Deira's training until the last minute. Then I thought, oh no, he is gay! because I didn't read the sentence properly where it referred to "her voice." LOL

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  That was what I was going for, so it's good to know it worked. :)  He is definitely not gay....

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thanks!  That was what I was going for, so it's good to know it worked. :)  He is definitely not gay....

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sunny33

This is fascinating, Melenka. Who is this guy?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Glad it intrigues you.  Keep reading and you learn all sorts of stuff about him.  But not everything.  He won't ever give up all the goods.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Glad it intrigues you.  Keep reading and you learn all sorts of stuff about him.  But not everything.  He won't ever give up all the goods.

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Just now getting around to reading this and I have to say the first chapter is excellent.  You've given just enough to make me care about the character and anxiously anticipate what happens next.  I feel like you've provided a great deal of information in a very minimalist style (not bogging down the chapter with backstory) while still dropping enough clues to create plenty of questions in my mind.  Excellent work... I'm very impressed!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I really appreciate you reading.  It was started as a challenge to myself, mostly to see if I could write a book-length story.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I really appreciate you reading.  It was started as a challenge to myself, mostly to see if I could write a book-length story.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.

10/10

oohdear

this is the first time i am reading your work, and i think the day i can start to write like this i will be a very happy person.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Oh, my!  What a lovely compliment.  Thank you very much.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

0/10

ethereality

beautiful story i rarely read original fiction, but this story has caught my attention right away.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

10/10

kittylefish

geez. please tell me the next chapter is already in queue! poor deira, feeling all the guilt for what happened to sticks. even though it was his choice to be there, of course, that wouldn't make a person feel any better about it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She loves the old coot, not least because he agreed to help her when no one else would.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

She loves the old coot, not least because he agreed to help her when no one else would.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

i don't want Sticks to die Gage didn't get his mark  i wonder how Nicky is going to take that i probably wrong but here is what i think:the mark is actually the one who set all of this up to have his people around him taken out because he didn't trust them anymore  he also has something not sure yet over Nicky and he knew she could get the right people to do his dirty work  I'm wrong right?

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yes, you're wrong.  Nicky wouldn't have anything to do with Jack Cavuto.  No civilized person would.  Don't worry.  The story is finished.  The only wait is for validation. I'll upload the next chapter today. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yes, you're wrong.  Nicky wouldn't have anything to do with Jack Cavuto.  No civilized person would.  Don't worry.  The story is finished.  The only wait is for validation. I'll upload the next chapter today. :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

lol I can't believe I was holding my breathe   ok you got me.  lolSticks is like a father to her he thinks of her as a daughter

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yeah, he does.  So it would be a shame if he died at her "graduation."

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yeah, he does.  So it would be a shame if he died at her "graduation."

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love how they get along now but I'm afraid for them because I don't know if you like happy endings well as happy as these type of story can be anyway  I mean they could be good together or apart they are both strong individuals.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I suppose if you look at it like a romance from hell, then a happy(ish) ending is in the cards, but that could be anything from deciding to stay together to simply agreeing to not kill each other. 

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I suppose if you look at it like a romance from hell, then a happy(ish) ending is in the cards, but that could be anything from deciding to stay together to simply agreeing to not kill each other. 

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

called him on that one lol I have a bad feeling all the sudden  not sure why yet

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I don't know.  Maybe it's because they're about to blow up a building and shoot people who will probably shoot back?  LOL

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

I don't know.  Maybe it's because they're about to blow up a building and shoot people who will probably shoot back?  LOL

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Nicky is in something deep, that is really bad,  that guy on the phone with her is up to no good for Gage and Deira and probably, no most definitely Nicky.   I love a fic that keeps me guessing

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Nicky is always into something, though this goes deeper than her usual information trafficking. Glad the plot twists are working for you!

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Nicky is always into something, though this goes deeper than her usual information trafficking. Glad the plot twists are working for you!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

yes he finally admits it  good  oh yeah she's good and has his number mentioning his neice had him going hehe 

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep, and telling him something he didn't know about Katya was her way of leveling the field a bit. He's known for awhile that he would keep some string attached to her.  The trick is to not let her know that.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Yep, and telling him something he didn't know about Katya was her way of leveling the field a bit. He's known for awhile that he would keep some string attached to her.  The trick is to not let her know that.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You are a genius but what I want to know is where did you get the ideal for this fic  was it research or personal  or would you have to kill me if you answered lol  maybe I don't want to know after all 

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Honestly, it started as a way to direct anger about things over which I had no control. There was a lot of research involved once I realized that I needed to understand the technology. My husband is responsible for the accuracy of hand to hand combat. The explosives details come courtesy of the Internet, which might scare me if I thought about it a bit more.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Honestly, it started as a way to direct anger about things over which I had no control. There was a lot of research involved once I realized that I needed to understand the technology. My husband is responsible for the accuracy of hand to hand combat. The explosives details come courtesy of the Internet, which might scare me if I thought about it a bit more.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Thata girl  show em what you are made of

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Oh, she does.  Once she remembered where her spine was, she became a match for any man.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Oh, she does.  Once she remembered where her spine was, she became a match for any man.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

he should have probably checked his neice's place for bugs himself  the bug guy finishing early sounded fishy to meand as for Viktor he had the story wrong she isn't dead and she only killed one so the rest could be a little tweetcked too.  I think  I could be wrong Awesome work Melenka

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

As long as no one knows who he really is, Katya is safe.  Besides, I rather think she could take care of herself, if it came to it. Viktor is often wrong, though he has the basic facts right in this case, just the wrong interpretation of them.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

As long as no one knows who he really is, Katya is safe.  Besides, I rather think she could take care of herself, if it came to it. Viktor is often wrong, though he has the basic facts right in this case, just the wrong interpretation of them.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

like hell she will sleep good goodgoddess now i'm frustrated lol

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh.  That was the intent.

Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)

Heh.  That was the intent.

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