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Gauntlet
Melenka122 Reviews | 5.82/10 (122 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )
A woman seeking revenge finds more than she bargains for. A man seeking redemption finds more than he had expected.
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Melenka
Member Since 2008 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 82 | 104 Reviews Written | 967 Review Responses
Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.
Reviews for Gauntlet
it is so refreshing to read something other than Harry Potter fics every once in a while don't get me wrong I looovvvvee HPFF stories it just a nice change of pace
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I wish more people would take the chance on original work - and not just mine, though a good friend points out that they can get original work at a bookstore, whilst HPFF is only found on line.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I wish more people would take the chance on original work - and not just mine, though a good friend points out that they can get original work at a bookstore, whilst HPFF is only found on line.
women are funny creatures I know I'm one lol
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
And he seems to surround himself with strong, snarky ones. Poor man. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
And he seems to surround himself with strong, snarky ones. Poor man. ;)
this story is so fascinating thank you for writing it
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you for reading it! I'm glad it's holding your interest.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you for reading it! I'm glad it's holding your interest.
His neice is a clever girl I like her she will keep him even more on his toes than Deira
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I sometimes wonder if she shouldn't have a book all her own. :)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh pretty please maybe after you finish this gem she could be a spinoff
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I sometimes wonder if she shouldn't have a book all her own. :)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh pretty please maybe after you finish this gem she could be a spinoff
oh this was brilliant
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Why, thank you! Katya sort of insisted on being more than a voice on the phone, and you see how she gets when she's being insistent...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Why, thank you! Katya sort of insisted on being more than a voice on the phone, and you see how she gets when she's being insistent...
I now remember what this story reminds me of: Burn Notice sorta I also like that show too
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
With a snap of his fingers, I would totally be Michael Weston's bitch. LOL
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
With a snap of his fingers, I would totally be Michael Weston's bitch. LOL
I bet Deira listen to Gage now huh and you using Jehovah's Witnesses was awesome. You have a great imagination.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She might listen to him about that, but I wouldn't bet on her meekly following orders. About 4 months after I wrote this scene, I saw a JW bus in a parking lot, but I didn't have my camera. I would so have loved to use that for the chapter art.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
ah that would have been perfect I don't think the local chapter has a bus at least i have never seen one
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She might listen to him about that, but I wouldn't bet on her meekly following orders. About 4 months after I wrote this scene, I saw a JW bus in a parking lot, but I didn't have my camera. I would so have loved to use that for the chapter art.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
ah that would have been perfect I don't think the local chapter has a bus at least i have never seen one
I could never do his line of work. I couldn't keep up with all the alias which name i would be using with which person I would give myself away
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He really only has two. For criminal enterprises, it's just Gage, and in his head, that's who he is. For legitimate business, his name is Charles Randall, which is actually his legal name. No one alive knows his given name.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He really only has two. For criminal enterprises, it's just Gage, and in his head, that's who he is. For legitimate business, his name is Charles Randall, which is actually his legal name. No one alive knows his given name.
these two are made for each other there are things in life you might not want to do but you have to
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He has done many things he did not want to do. That's why he makes sure he's never in a situation where he has no choice. And yes, they are well suited, though hardly what one would consider an ideal couple.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He has done many things he did not want to do. That's why he makes sure he's never in a situation where he has no choice. And yes, they are well suited, though hardly what one would consider an ideal couple.
This story is magnificent.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
You are a brilliant author
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you!
I'm glad they have come to a somewhat of an understanding.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He doesn't give her much choice in that regard...
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
He doesn't give her much choice in that regard...
Some times I'm not sure how to take Gage. He is a very complex character. I like that.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Oh, this is just scratching the surface. Read on! ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Oh, this is just scratching the surface. Read on! ;)
Oh man this story rocks.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. It sort of possessed me for a year, so I'm glad you like it. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. It sort of possessed me for a year, so I'm glad you like it. :)
Wow to have friends like that.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Which ones? The sort that give you their identity or the kind that teaches you how to kill?
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
both are good to have in some cases
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Which ones? The sort that give you their identity or the kind that teaches you how to kill?
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
both are good to have in some cases
I love it. Its interesting and not about HP. I really like it so far.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm glad. I know a lot of people don't read the original stuff, so I appreciate you giving it a chance.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm glad. I know a lot of people don't read the original stuff, so I appreciate you giving it a chance.
She has every right to be pissed. Man, this story has me hooked.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She is in a rather difficult situation, considering that everyone he's dealt with so far is in debt to him and not one of them is trying to kill him to get out of it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
She is in a rather difficult situation, considering that everyone he's dealt with so far is in debt to him and not one of them is trying to kill him to get out of it.
I love the tension between them. It gives a nice vibe.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm a big fan of tension, and those two were made for it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I'm a big fan of tension, and those two were made for it.
Where do you get your pixs at the beginning of your chapters? They are brilliant. Not just on this story either.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I find photos that interest me and modify them with photoshop. And I know a few body builders. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
I find photos that interest me and modify them with photoshop. And I know a few body builders. :)
Intense chapter talk about an adrenaline rush I think I have one right now
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Watch out, I hear they're addicting.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Watch out, I hear they're addicting.
Wow I'm speechless just that was amazing
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. That was a very hard chapter to write, so I'm glad it worked for you.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. That was a very hard chapter to write, so I'm glad it worked for you.
the whole tone of this story is unique. I love it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. I am glad you're enjoying it!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
Thank you. I am glad you're enjoying it!
Great stuff. Leaves one wondering if Gage is good, bad, or somewhere between.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
All three. :) I do my best to flesh out that answer as the story progresses. I hope you continue to read it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
All three. :) I do my best to flesh out that answer as the story progresses. I hope you continue to read it.
Nice chapter. I like this little hint: '“I would never ask you to do anything you are not willing to do.” 'That doesn’t narrow the field much. She wisely kept quiet. Some things he didn’t need to know.'Does this mean there will be a sequel where Gage commandeers Diera around in uber secret ninja warfare because she won't refuse him? Ummm, because that would be fun too. ;)I like the little hints you drop about your characters like this one. It makes me curious and curious makes me read. Good job! And thanks for sharing your writing!
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
LOL No fair throwing out plot bunnies and running! It's hard enough knowling I have to let go of them at the end.Thank you for your kind critique - and for continuing to read.
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
LOL No fair throwing out plot bunnies and running! It's hard enough knowling I have to let go of them at the end.Thank you for your kind critique - and for continuing to read.
okay, what is that nicky up to? i want to know. i liked that the tables seem to have turned a bit with gage and deira as far as their personal relationship goes. and that she was having the thought that he didn't need to know about. (i hope that makes sense!)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It makes perfect sense. She's learning to be more like him. As for Nicky, well, we know that she's running a second contract, which is trouble enough. Stick around and your question will be answered. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Gauntlet)
It makes perfect sense. She's learning to be more like him. As for Nicky, well, we know that she's running a second contract, which is trouble enough. Stick around and your question will be answered. ;)