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Anthem
emmeline33211 Reviews | 6.79/10 (211 Ratings, 0 Likes, 206 Favorites )
After rescuing Severus from what should have been a fatal snakebite, Hermione throws herself headlong into managing his care and finishing her schooling. As she discovers, however, helping another person heal is infinitely easier than healing herself. As the Golden Trio—and Severus—move toward the one-year mark of post-Voldemort life, it becomes painfully obvious that there is no way to go back to normal. New feelings are confusing to all involved, and lives careen from carefully planned paths.
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I came to the Potterverse late, devouring all 7 books over the summer when DH came out. I came to fanfic even later, and have been gluttonously consuming HG/SS love stories since December. I really enjoy the slow-building, tension-ridden love stories that the pairing seems to inspire. The quality of writing I come across in the fanfic world never ceases to astound me, and I am well and truly addicted!
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Fascinating -- I love the dreams and his struggle to make sense of who he is and what has happened. And somebody should slap Calliope. *waves arms to volunteer
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thank you so much! I am thrilled that you are appreciating the dreams and Severus' attempts to make sense of it all. That is mostly what this story is about, and dreams will be an important part throughout. I am equally thrilled that you are volunteering to slap Calliope. She's oh-so-begging for it!
Was the scene of them coming together a dream or real - whichever - It was moving. Good chapter.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Alas and alack, it was but a dream. I had a very hard time waking him up. I am gratified that you found it moving. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Nicely done... you are illustrating the dynamics of Hermione and Ron's relationship (and inklings of Harry and Ginny's) so well... must have more story *click*
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Hey, Mach
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! So glad you're still reading! Glad you like the illustrations of Hermione's and Ron's relationship, and that you caught the hints about Harry and Ginny, as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!mach
Response from shefa (Reviewer)
Oh, I am most *definitely* reading! I'm just horribly slow and constantly behind. I've done precious little reading, lately, unfortunately But this story is up on my desktop and I'm enjoying each chapter as I get to savour it!
Yup. Reading with interest.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lipa!
Love the story and the realistic way your are dealing with the post war trauma. Did you really mean to have Harry introduce them as the future "Mr. and Mrs. Hermione Granger!"? Kat
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi, Kat, thanks for reviewing! I am delighted that you love the story and find it realistic. I was waiting for someone to catch the "Mr. and Mrs. Hermione Granger" bit... I did, in fact, mean for him to say it that way, just to juxtapose the view that Hermione's friends have of her with the uncertainty she feels herself. So, whereas she's feeling unbalanced and vulnerable, her friends still see her as the know-it-all with the answers and the controlling nature. Wow, that was a long explanation, hope it shed light on your question! Thanks again for reviewing!
Beautiful update. You're really capturing the fragmented memories and how Snape tries to piece together things from what clues he can glean from others and from his own dim memories. I did somehting similar in "Lost Boys" with Snape as a ghost, only he very much doesn't want to know what he was. But i know how hard it is to make it work, and you're doing a fantastic job here. Look forward to more soon. The last scene was so vivid, I'm not entirely sure it was a dream-- certainly it reflects Hermione's own unconscious yearnings as much as Snape's. I'll be interested to see where you take this next. Great work.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks, Hobgoblinn! I am so very happy that you are reading and enjoying the story. I definitely have "Lost Boys" and "In Loco Parentis" on my to-read list. I felt kind of bad about waking Snape up at the end. Unfortunately, Hermione doesn't even realize enough subconciously yet for it to work out the way it did in the dream. I appreciate your review; it means the world!
This continues to be a tightly-written and emotionally wrenching story. Wow. Keep up the good work!
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Gee, Amsev, thanks! I am absolutely overjoyed that you find the story "tightly written" and "emotionally wrenching." Finding your review has definitely made my evening better!
so he thinks she can make him whole. I wish them all the best. But it is so sad. does she really have to break first? Why does he think/dream that? good it was just a dream. Hope they will heal in a softer way. well, yes, there is that unhappy engagement. fist of all, he has to get back on his feet again, i would say. there is a time for everything. But I'm so curious how he takes in the bits of informations and pieces of memory that come back to him. Always very thrilling. Thank you so much!!Salva
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Salva, I am always excited to find your reviews. They have certainly been a bright spot. I definitely understand wanting them to have a softer way of healing. There will be an ongoing theme in this story about wholeness vs. brokenness, and what it means to be both. Keep reading; your encouragement has meant a lot to me!
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I meant to say thank you, too. I've really appreciated your reviews.
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
stop, i'm blushing :)you do the work, don't you think?! I'm just an enthusiastic reader who enjoys your work.
That dream was very poignant.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
I had a very hard time making him wake up from that dream! I am glad you thought it poignant. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Ooh. Lovely chapter! Poor Severus... just when he's started to figure out he's rather wanting more of Hermione, she's gone and promised herself to another.
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Thanks so much,
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! I am glad you liked the chapter. Poor Severus, indeed! Oh, well, I won't say much, except that some promises can be broken...
Emmeline, I can't say enough about this story; I adore it. You have a deft hand with characterizing Snape and his inner thoughts, and an almost lyric way of telling the story. How I wish that last section had not been a dream. I know it isn't time, but you wrote it so beautifully that you made me wish for it anyway.I also want to pop in a quick word about your chapter titles, which I love. I don't think a day goes by that I don't think the words "King of Infinite Space."Thank you so much for sharing this.
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, I just, wow, I'm almost speechless. Your writing awes me every time, so I am just so honoured by your appreciation of mine. My beta and I went back and forth about ending the chapter with the dream and letting him wake up next chapter, but Snape (and I) had to wake up here, it seems. I really wish it could have happened that way!Glad you like the titles, esp. "King of Infinite Space!" I so love that line from Hamlet! Thanks so much,
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, you've brightened my day enormously.
wonderful chapter as usual my dear thank you
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thank you, Faula Tara, for reading and reviewing! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Very good chapter! Interesting, now Hermione has a ring. I wonder how long she's goign to keep it?;)
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
As always, Livvy, I am very grateful that you have continued to read and review! About that ring... well, I'll leave you to guess a little bit, but I'll let you know soon what's going to come of that. ;)Thanks again, Livvy!
Exquisite.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Wow, thanks! I am so happy that you've continued to read.
Hm... it seems Snape is more and more confused about himself as he remembers things.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Indeed. Remember, too, that he has given Harry Potter vital memories, and that there wil be holes in his memories that he cannot account for. This will be very important as the story progresses.
we see more of her life outside st. mungos.that was very interesting. and embedded in what could follow DH. very well done!!He loves her like a boy, we feel it with her. she loves him like a friend but not as a lover. that is hard to face.but they will have to.you manage to make it a reasonable story which could happen, and then add the magic. the magical touch. you are wonderful to read!!always like to read your chapters. please no more 4 week brakes??salva
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hi, Salva! I am touched beyond measure by your thoughtful words. I am so glad you have stuck with me, despite the 4-week break. I'm working hard to keep the chapters coming, so hopefully, there will be no more big lapses. Thanks, thanks, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Well Ron sure did pick up on the fact that she did not want him - she may love him but it is not the love to make a marriage. She is already falling for someone else (Severus) but she was trying to force herself to go with Ron and it is not working.
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Thank you,
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, for continuing to read! Hermione and Ron are not particularly well-suited, are they? I have really appreciated your reviews, and I hope you will like the rest. The next chapters are chock full o'Severus.
and I am now caught up, and very bummed there's not more to read just yet. I'll have to break down and work on some of my stuff, if I'm not careful. You're capturing the confusion and PTSD and depression very realistically here. Can't wait to see where you take this.
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Thanks so much for reading,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! I am glad you found the story. It's gratifying to know that you find the mental anguish of PTSD and depression realistic. When I finished reading DH, I couldn't shake the idea that there were some very deep wounds that would plague the characters for a long time. I am very happy that you have taken the time to review, and I hope you wil enjoy the rest of the story.
wow-- this is really nicely done. You've got a few typos here and there-- the "ever" in the below quote should be "every so often." But I copied it to paste here because the rest of it was so well phrased. There's a lot of this kind of writing in this so far, and I'm really enjoying it. Glad I saw it on hg_ss digest and decided to give it a try."...waist ever so often. To the outside world, they appeared to be two young couples celebrating a night off. To Hermione, however, they looked like four nervous actors who had over-rehearsed their parts."Well done. Off to read the rest, or at least get caught up.
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks so much,
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! I'm so glad you are enjoying the writing. That line was one I really worked on, and I am so glad it resonated with you. There is more to come, and I hope you will like it as well. I am thrilled that you took the time to review!
Sorry I haven't reviewed til now. Poor Hermione and Ron, I see tough times ahead for them both. And how will Snape feel when he sees his 'angel' wearing the ring? Love that it's the most unexpected characters who are able to see through Hermione's charade a bit. Loving your fic, the writing is beautiful and the plot flows well. Hoping for some Snape in the next chapter.Elle
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks so much for taking time to review, Elle! I am glad you are reading, and your review means so much to me. Snape is coming up next chapter, and we shall see his reaction to the ring. I have no words to express my gratitude for your encouraging words. Thanks!
Ahh thank you for the reassurance. I was a little surprised after the bar blow up to see Ron propose and Hermione accept. Bring on my Potion master. Irish
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Hermione was a little surprised, too! :) More Potions master is on the way, though, have no fear! I am delighted that you have continued to read and review. It means so much. Thanks a bunch, Irish!
Well, obviously it's all Snape-y. Otherwise Hermione would be all, "Hurrah, I'm getting married to a boy who doesn't really appreciate the things I care about, even though he tries really hard and is very sweet."
But she's not. And, frankly, no matter what JKR might say, Severus is infinitely better suited to our Hermsy.
And it makes me very happy that a good half of her relationship with Ron got out of the way in this chapter.
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Hi,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! (Love that name! :)) Oh, yes, it's going to get Snape-y. The next chapters will feature much more Snape. Yeah, I was surprised when Ron and Hermione hooked up in canon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It makes my day!
Oh dear, that engagement didn't last long! Still, it clears the way for SS/HG! :) Poor Hermione is having a very rough time of it
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
The engagement is still on--for now. (Don't worry, as I've said before, it's Potions Under Duress for a reason). But yes, Hermione is having a very rough time, and rougher times are ahead. I promise, thought, I will sweeten things for all involved. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I am very, very grateful.
Eugh. Poor Hermione. I must say though that I do feel a bit sorry for Ron too (which I don't usually do!) - while his timing has been anything but good, and while he hadn't realised Hermione has been moving away from him, not closer, his fault here is just being a clueless boy.I'm really looking forward to more. It's such a well-written story!
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*beams humbly* Thanks,
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
! I am glad you feel a bit sorry for Ron. They really were never meant for each other, but you're right, he's a clueless and (here's a clue) insecure boy. I am very grateful that you've continued to read and respond--your thoughtful words have really meant the world to me.
Thanks for the reassurance! Let's get to the HG/SS! Good chapter.Livvy
Response from emmeline33 (Author of Anthem)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Livvy! Don't worry, the HG/SS action will happen, even if they lead a merry dance to get there.